diff --git a/src/Mods/SpecialForce/SpecialForceFS.js b/src/Mods/SpecialForce/SpecialForceFS.js
index 5835b1237d253f5045b4c86b3bb113b7ecc1543b..9253971efcd9a609cadc3afaebe99d16faf00afe 100644
--- a/src/Mods/SpecialForce/SpecialForceFS.js
+++ b/src/Mods/SpecialForce/SpecialForceFS.js
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ App.Mods.SF.fsIntegration = (function() {
break;
case 'Roman_Revivalism':
dec = `Roman Revivalism: a vision of a new Rome.`;
- gift = `The Colonel has been bestowed with an unmistakable and peerless. badge of office - a mastercrafted SPATHI sword, forged from nigh-unbreakable metals, made extremely sharp with the help of a machine that she also now owns, and equipped with an inbuilt communications array, holographic display projector, recharging port, and fingerprint scanner that delivers electric shocks to anyone other than The Colonel when wielded. It comes with an immaculate sheath, and a complementary gold-wrought laurel wreath and fine linen toga, further enabling her to command the legions of the Firebase with absolute authority and authenticity within the Roman tradition.`;
+ gift = `The Colonel has been bestowed with an unmistakable and peerless badge of office - a mastercrafted SPATHI sword, forged from nigh-unbreakable metals, made extremely sharp with the help of a machine that she also now owns, and equipped with an inbuilt communications array, holographic display projector, recharging port, and fingerprint scanner that delivers electric shocks to anyone other than The Colonel when wielded. It comes with an immaculate sheath, and a complementary gold-wrought laurel wreath and fine linen toga, further enabling her to command the legions of the Firebase with absolute authority and authenticity within the Roman tradition.`;
foods = `You spare no expense to supply your troops with increasingly rare boar and deer meat, distinctive of Roman cuisine.`;
media = `Soldiers also enjoy fresh fruits while watching gladiator games, public speakings of famous orators or the history of Ancient Rome on wall-screen TV.`;
slaves = `All of the slaves serving here are from outside of your arcology, captured during the many military expeditions staged from the Firebase.`;
@@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ App.Mods.SF.fsIntegration = (function() {
r += `Finally fed up with your constant intrusions into her territory and crew, The Colonel riles up her people for a full takeover against your arcology. The promises of plunder and dominion over some of the wealthiest tenants in the entire Free City (and their world-class slaves), including you, are all that's needed to get things started.`;
r += `<br>At midnight, the lights are the first thing The Colonel's forces disable, as they still have the excellent night vision equipment you purchased for them. Some of your citizens panic almost immediately at the sudden blackout; this is very reminiscent of the Daughters of Liberty attack that still haunts many of their memories. Her army vanguard strikes fast and hard throughout, cutting through your security units and drones with an ease that stinks of months of careful planning and study. Most disturbingly, your penthouse's communications networks are all but destroyed, and your PA has been unreachable, seemingly hacked by some obscure technology you figure only The Colonel's contacts and few others could provide.`;
r += `<br>Outside, her many aircraft swarm the local airspace to patrol the arcology outskirts, conduct recon scans of the upper levels, or monitor your now-secured penthouse, while shooting down any other fleeing VTOL's. You will not be escaping by air. No one will. No escaping by land either: Swarms of her drones are tasing fleeing noncombatants by the hundreds for detainment, as the remainder of her army seizes control of vital arcology infrastructure. After just a few days, the entire arcology falls under her direct control, all dissidents, criminals, and rebels hopelessly outgunned by her lavishly equipped and experienced warriors.`;
- r += `<br>You are trapped inside your Penthouse by the detachment of infantry guarding its exits in order to keep you in, probably with the goal of starving you out until you surrender yourself. With your communications down as well. your penthouse might as well be an island. You only salvation comes in the form of your neighboring arcologies and their respective mercenary contingents. They are intervening on your behalf out of paranoia; Free Cities are extremely wary of military power buildups near their borders, and they absolutely will not tolerate a full scale military coup within its borders. Fighting men and women from all over the City are seen battling in the streets of your arcology in a brutal blitzkrieg that your own tenants and mercenaries quickly join in on, pushing The Colonel's forces back gradually with sheer numbers. Eventually they are forced back into the Firebase proper, where they are sealed inside by using explosives to collapse part of the arcology atop them, rendering the Firebase itself totally defunct. Only a few small groups manage to scatter and flee this holding action, and your intelligence networks suspects that The Colonel herself was among one of them.`;
+ r += `<br>You are trapped inside your Penthouse by the detachment of infantry guarding its exits in order to keep you in, probably with the goal of starving you out until you surrender yourself. With your communications down as well, your penthouse might as well be an island. You only salvation comes in the form of your neighboring arcologies and their respective mercenary contingents. They are intervening on your behalf out of paranoia; Free Cities are extremely wary of military power buildups near their borders, and they absolutely will not tolerate a full scale military coup within its borders. Fighting men and women from all over the City are seen battling in the streets of your arcology in a brutal blitzkrieg that your own tenants and mercenaries quickly join in on, pushing The Colonel's forces back gradually with sheer numbers. Eventually they are forced back into the Firebase proper, where they are sealed inside by using explosives to collapse part of the arcology atop them, rendering the Firebase itself totally defunct. Only a few small groups manage to scatter and flee this holding action, and your intelligence networks suspects that The Colonel herself was among one of them.`;
r += `With the help of some unlikely intervention, you've won this little war. Your arcology is once more yours, but your people will never forget the traumatic week they spent under the heel of the army that you convinced them to allow, or the fact that it took an entire coalition of outsiders to save them.`;
break;
case "jaded":
diff --git a/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js b/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js
index 252c5c85f3964836da9dc60b8e2616891a3b5d29..72cc36b7bab3fd6a871d3926fa9f600e6866e879 100644
--- a/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js
+++ b/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js
@@ -1288,7 +1288,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.relationships = function saRelationships(slave) {
r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${his} ${relativeTerm(slave, singleRelative)} ${singleRelative.slaveName} loves being your sex slave, and is <span class="devotion inc">happy</span> for ${him2}.`);
} else if (devotedRelatives.size > 0) {
const groups = relativeMapToGroupArray(devotedRelatives);
- r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${toSentence(groups)} all love being your sex slaves, and is <span class="devotion inc">happy</span> for them.`);
+ r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${toSentence(groups)} ${devotedRelatives.size === 2 ? `both` : `all`} love being your sex slaves, and is <span class="devotion inc">happy</span> for them.`);
}
if (relativeMapTotalSize(devotedRelatives) > overwhelmed) {
r.push(`${He} has so many relatives that love being your slaves that ${he} is sometimes overwhelmed with joy and <span class="devotion dec">neglects ${his} duties.</span>`);
@@ -1310,7 +1310,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.relationships = function saRelationships(slave) {
r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${his} ${relativeTerm(slave, singleRelative)} ${singleRelative.slaveName} hates being a sex slave, and is <span class="trust dec">afraid</span> for ${him2}.`);
} else if (hatefulRelatives.size > 0) {
const groups = relativeMapToGroupArray(hatefulRelatives);
- r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${toSentence(groups)} all hate being sex slaves, and is <span class="trust dec">afraid</span> for them.`);
+ r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${toSentence(groups)} ${hatefulRelatives.size === 2 ? `both` : `all`} hate being sex slaves, and is <span class="trust dec">afraid</span> for them.`);
}
if (relativeMapTotalSize(hatefulRelatives) > overwhelmed) {
r.push(`${He} has so many relatives that hate being your sex slaves that ${he} is overwhelmed with fear and <span class="trust inc">just has to trust you to take care of them.</span>`);
diff --git a/src/events/scheduled/seFCNNstation.js b/src/events/scheduled/seFCNNstation.js
index 8f87cfd72c76afcb23ee9cca054a6cac212e4b34..8a80674f28fa36779bd74b162f7ecd81236f4e8f 100644
--- a/src/events/scheduled/seFCNNstation.js
+++ b/src/events/scheduled/seFCNNstation.js
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ App.Events.SEFcnnStation = class SEFcnnStation extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
const cost = 100000;
const {girlP} = getPronouns(V.PC).appendSuffix("P");
- App.Events.addParagraph(node, [`One of the first groups to take advantage of the Free Cities' nearly nonexistent regulations for media and communications was the Free Cities News Network. As one of the few stations covering news within the Free Cities, and the only one doing so without any form of censorship, FCNN quickly became one the most popular news networks in the world. Presently, however, the network's future looks grim. Its reluctance on portraying explicitly pornographic content has lead to plummeting audience figures, especially in comparison to the upstart 8HGG Inc. media empire. In addition, governments within and outside the Free Cities have become increasingly restrictive towards the press, to the point that many FCNN branches have been effectively silenced.`]);
+ App.Events.addParagraph(node, [`One of the first groups to take advantage of the Free Cities' nearly nonexistent regulations for media and communications was the Free Cities News Network. As one of the few stations covering news within the Free Cities, and the only one doing so without any form of censorship, FCNN quickly became one of the most popular news networks in the world. Presently, however, the network's future looks grim. Its reluctance on portraying explicitly pornographic content has led to plummeting audience figures, especially in comparison to the upstart 8HGG Inc. media empire. In addition, governments within and outside the Free Cities have become increasingly restrictive towards the press, to the point that many FCNN branches have been effectively silenced.`]);
App.Events.addParagraph(node, [`This is the situation when you receive a personal video call from the network's beleaguered president. The former FCNN headquarters has been outright destroyed for reporting on its host nation's human rights abuses, and they're hoping to relocate to ${V.arcologies[0].name}. "We are, of course, in dire financial straits," the president nervously explains, "So we'll need a small subsidy to establish our new headquarters. Probably, oh, let's say... <span class="yellowgreen">${cashFormat(cost)}</span> or so?" He flinches while forcing a grin.`]);
diff --git a/src/events/scheduled/seFCTVinstall.js b/src/events/scheduled/seFCTVinstall.js
index e3986a75f43f1f5342775e95bbb4247a977c43a0..e7952257769cead67ee73703f7a2d9bc6d060353 100644
--- a/src/events/scheduled/seFCTVinstall.js
+++ b/src/events/scheduled/seFCTVinstall.js
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ App.Events.SEFctvInstall = class SEFctvInstall extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
execute(node) {
V.encyclopedia = "FCTV";
V.FCTV.receiver = 0;
- App.Events.addParagraph(node, [`You've been sitting in your office into the early afternoon going over bothersome lease documents that need your approval. When you take a break to look out the window, ${V.assistant.name} speaks up. "${properTitle()}, you have received an approval welcome packet from 8HGG Inc. in regards to Free Cities TV. It seems that they've determined that ${V.arcologies[0].name} is now sufficiently developed enough to warrant a FCTV-Citizen connection. All the details and contracts necessary are included in the packet. From there, a receiver will need to be built onto ${V.arcologies[0].name} in order to access FCTV."`]);
+ App.Events.addParagraph(node, [`You've been sitting in your office into the early afternoon, going over bothersome lease documents that need your approval. When you take a break to look out the window, ${V.assistant.name} speaks up. "${properTitle()}, you have received an approval welcome packet from 8HGG Inc. in regards to Free Cities TV. It seems that they've determined that ${V.arcologies[0].name} is now sufficiently developed enough to warrant an FCTV-Citizen connection. All the details and contracts necessary are included in the packet. From there, a receiver will need to be built onto ${V.arcologies[0].name} in order to access FCTV."`]);
App.Events.addParagraph(node, [`You browse the guide: home shopping networks, random dramas, how-to shows and a myriad of other things. Of more interest are some of the programs showing glimpses into foreign arcologies and how they are using the service to help mold society.`]);
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/ears.js b/src/npc/descriptions/ears.js
index 48bfeb01cfcf6ecb4b550ab4d046ffb5a27797ed..29f4fadf1fae867e10a02ea35450c4795c54eb40 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/ears.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/ears.js
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ App.Desc.ears = function(slave) {
}
r.push(`${either(`tend to droop when ${he} is relaxed or sad`, `twitch at the slightest touch`)}.`);
} else if (slave.earT === "leopard") {
- r.push(`On top of ${his} head ${he} has a pair of cute leopard ears. the ears are`);
+ r.push(`On top of ${his} head ${he} has a pair of cute leopard ears. The ears are`);
if (slave.earTColor === "hairless") {
r.push(`hairless.`);
} else {
diff --git a/src/npc/interaction/fFeelings.js b/src/npc/interaction/fFeelings.js
index d7934e5ce6015e92be758340fd0609e24e878c88..11e922b93b07f2039e45cce75a6b6d03b6e23cbd 100644
--- a/src/npc/interaction/fFeelings.js
+++ b/src/npc/interaction/fFeelings.js
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ App.Interact.fFeelings = function(slave) {
}
text.push(`cum in my belly. Oh! I like my belly, too, and that warm, sloshy feeling as it's packed full of baby juice. It's so — I'm sorry, ${Master}. I think my mouth is watering. Please give me a moment to collect myself.`);
} else if (V.PC.dick !== 0) {
- text.push(`is my tummy${(slave.vagina > -1) ? ` — and my womb` : ``}! The sloshy feeling when I'm all packed full of cum in both ends gets me so incredibly horny. sometimes I wonder what it would be like if I were just a puffed up cum-balloon of a ${woman}, helpless and filled with cum, over, and over, and — I'm sorry, ${Master}. I'm being weird again, aren't I?`);
+ text.push(`is my tummy${(slave.vagina > -1) ? ` — and my womb` : ``}! The sloshy feeling when I'm all packed full of cum in both ends gets me so incredibly horny. Sometimes I wonder what it would be like if I were just a puffed up cum-balloon of a ${woman}, helpless and filled with cum, over, and over, and — I'm sorry, ${Master}. I'm being weird again, aren't I?`);
} else {
text.push(`is my mouth, I love how it feels to — to eat pussy, ${Master}. I love eating out your pussy. Especially when it's been filled up with some`);
if (canTaste(slave)) {
@@ -1916,13 +1916,13 @@ App.Interact.fFeelings = function(slave) {
if (sex > 0 && beauty > 0 && combat > 0) {
text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `${His2} P-Limbs do look cool and I like how strong they can make ${him2} but they scare me a little, sometimes. Though of course ${he2} disables the weapons when we're together."`)} ${He} giggles. ${Spoken(slave, `"${He2} has vibe fingers, so that's awesome.`)}`);
} else if (sex > 0 && beauty > 0) {
- text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `I really like ${his2} P-Limbs. They're very pretty, but kind of cold. That's just how ${he2} is."`)} ${He} giggles. ${Spoken(slave, `" ${He2} has vibe fingers. so that's awesome.`)}`);
+ text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `I really like ${his2} P-Limbs. They're very pretty, but kind of cold. That's just how ${he2} is."`)} ${He} giggles. ${Spoken(slave, `" ${He2} has vibe fingers. So that's awesome.`)}`);
} else if (beauty > 0 && combat > 0) {
text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `${His2} P-Limbs do look cool and I like how strong they can make ${him2} but they scare me a little, sometimes. Though of course ${he2} disables the weapons when we're together.`)}`);
} else if (sex > 0 && combat > 0) {
- text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `${His2} P-Limbs do scare me a little, sometimes. Though of course ${he2} disables the weapons when we're together."`)} ${He} giggles. ${Spoken(slave, `"${He2} has vibe fingers. so that's awesome.`)}`);
+ text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `${His2} P-Limbs do scare me a little, sometimes. Though of course ${he2} disables the weapons when we're together."`)} ${He} giggles. ${Spoken(slave, `"${He2} has vibe fingers. So that's awesome.`)}`);
} else if (sex > 0) {
- text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `And, um."`)} ${He} giggles. ${Spoken(slave, `"${He2} has vibe fingers. so that's awesome.`)}`);
+ text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `And, um."`)} ${He} giggles. ${Spoken(slave, `"${He2} has vibe fingers. So that's awesome.`)}`);
} else if (beauty > 0) {
text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `I really like ${his2} P-Limbs. They're very pretty, but kind of cold. That's just how ${he2} is.`)}`);
} else if (combat > 0) {
@@ -2022,7 +2022,7 @@ App.Interact.fFeelings = function(slave) {
} else if (slave.devotion > 20) {
text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `I'm proud to be a slave of the new Pharaoh.`)}`);
} else {
- text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `Being a slave in this new Egypt is a little reassuring. some of the other slavs say they used to use slaves for great things, anyway.`)}`);
+ text.push(`${Spoken(slave, `Being a slave in this new Egypt is a little reassuring. Some of the other slaves say they used to use slaves for great things, anyway.`)}`);
}
}
if (V.arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist >= 10) {
diff --git a/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js b/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js
index 1d3a2dfa50b511697ba43ff8fc4ba47c5c035d28..a099f8d79bc1527157f29f65325b8f4334b721a7 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js
+++ b/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js
@@ -2263,7 +2263,7 @@ App.Data.FCTV.channels = {
r.push(`<p>At this point, her stomach is so distended that the black pitch is showing around individual feathers. Annie and Dakota lock eyes and giggle, while Kate moves to where the noose is tied.</p>`);
r.push(`<p>"Ready?" They ask the girl. She can barely open her eyes and doesn't move her head. "Ok then, here we go!"</p>`);
- r.push(`<p>Kate loosens the rope just as Annie and Dakota each lift a leg. With nothing else to support her, the girl's full weight comes to bear on the plug, which finally smears its tarry way home with a "pop." The Indian girl shudders with an impossible... orgasm? and screams.</p>`);
+ r.push(`<p>Kate loosens the rope just as Annie and Dakota each lift a leg. With nothing else to support her, the girl's full weight comes to bear on the plug, which finally smears its tarry way home with a "pop." The Indian girl screams and shudders with an impossible... orgasm?</p>`);
r.push(`<p>Annie releases the noose from the scaffold and shoves her over on her back. "You LIKED that? You disgust me." She is powerless to move, and lays there groaning and drooling beneath the weight of her stomach.</p>`);
r.push(`<p>"Better finish your drink, little chicken." Dakota wrings out the skin, and the liquid has nowhere to go but in. She neatly wraps rawhide around the bag to make sure the inflation can't reverse, and then covers the whole thing with pitch. It will not be coming undone soon.</p>`);