From 4f831d94d079cb1fd2dfd8e9dbd8d5bd810c0e48 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: wkwk <12408-wkwk@users.norepy.gitgud.io>
Date: Sun, 4 Oct 2020 00:27:14 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Fix minor typos and improve some phrases
---
src/facilities/wardrobe/wardrobeShoppingData.js | 2 +-
src/js/utilsFC.js | 6 +++---
src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/pCoupAttempt.tw | 2 +-
4 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/facilities/wardrobe/wardrobeShoppingData.js b/src/facilities/wardrobe/wardrobeShoppingData.js
index 0f13edd07e5..d4829e9cbe7 100644
--- a/src/facilities/wardrobe/wardrobeShoppingData.js
+++ b/src/facilities/wardrobe/wardrobeShoppingData.js
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ App.Data.WardrobeShopping.Accessories = {
owned: `Some of the bullet vibes are of the "smart" variety.`,
},
"toys.vaginalAttachments": {
- title: "Order a shipment of vibrating dildo attachments",
+ title: "a shipment of vibrating dildo attachments",
cost: 10000,
contains: [],
owned: "You are well stocked with attachments that allow dildos to vibrate.",
diff --git a/src/js/utilsFC.js b/src/js/utilsFC.js
index c00a1d5bbe8..0577968a447 100644
--- a/src/js/utilsFC.js
+++ b/src/js/utilsFC.js
@@ -2307,9 +2307,9 @@ globalThis.slaveSkillIncrease = function(targetSkill, slave, skillIncrease = 1)
case 'anal':
r += ` and knows how to use ${his} sphincter to please.`; break;
case 'whoring':
- r += `and can often make clients forget that $he's a prostitute they're paying for.`; break;
+ r += ` and can often make clients forget that $he's a prostitute they're paying for.`; break;
case 'entertainment':
- r += `can flirt engagingly, dance alluringly, and strip arousingly.`; break;
+ r += ` and can flirt engagingly, dance alluringly, and strip arousingly.`; break;
}
}
} else if (slave.skill[targetSkill] < 100) {
@@ -2339,7 +2339,7 @@ globalThis.slaveSkillIncrease = function(targetSkill, slave, skillIncrease = 1)
case 'whoring':
r += ` and can learn nothing more about prostitution.`; break;
case 'entertainment':
- r += ` flirting, dancing, or stripping.`; break;
+ r += ` and can learn nothing more about flirting, dancing, or stripping.`; break;
}
}
}
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index 68a80f388ec..9c3bc931d37 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -5506,7 +5506,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<= App.UI.slaveDescriptionDialog($activeSlave)>> h
<<set _didAnal = 1>>
<</if>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish == "dom")>>
- You shove $him back against a wall and seat your <<if $PC.dick != 0>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> inside $him before wrapping $his legs around you, taking a good grip on $his butt, and hauling $him off the wall again, holding $him in midair<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 600000>> (though $his _belly belly is resting on the ground)<</if>>. $He pays no attention to the @@.green;mildly appreciative@@ stares from passersby, concentrating on fucking as hard as $he possibly can.
+ You shove $him back against a wall and seat your <<if $PC.dick != 0>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> inside $him while $he wraps $his legs around you, taking a good grip on $his butt, and hauling $him off the wall again, holding $him in midair<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 600000>> (though $his _belly belly is resting on the ground)<</if>>. $He pays no attention to the @@.green;mildly appreciative@@ stares from passersby, concentrating on fucking as hard as $he possibly can.
<<run repX(250, "event", $activeSlave)>>
<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>>
<<set _didVaginal = 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pCoupAttempt.tw b/src/uncategorized/pCoupAttempt.tw
index b25d9f1cc59..fc5d43168ab 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pCoupAttempt.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pCoupAttempt.tw
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ You are awakened in the middle of the night by a jolt that shakes the entire arc
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSNeoImperialistLaw1 == 1>>
- $arcologies[0].name, however, is guarded by your fanatically loyal and expertly-trained Imperial Knights, many of whom practically chomp at the bit in their heavy battle armor for just such an oppurtunity. Before you have even shouted your first command, you can hear the sound of ferocious battle. The Knights are not one to be surprised.
+ $arcologies[0].name, however, is guarded by your fanatically loyal and expertly-trained Imperial Knights, many of whom practically chomp at the bit in their heavy battle armor for just such an opportunity. Before you have even shouted your first command, you can hear the sound of ferocious battle. The Knights are not one to be surprised.
<</if>>
<br><br>
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