diff --git a/src/endWeek/reports/incubatorReport.js b/src/endWeek/reports/incubatorReport.js
index 5e3daeca4f157ef8ccd0e9129e38e98d5779b6d9..4ac1695f3e848326db79d4d08fefc3adf1618d34 100644
--- a/src/endWeek/reports/incubatorReport.js
+++ b/src/endWeek/reports/incubatorReport.js
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@ App.EndWeek.incubatorReport = function() {
break;
case 3:
tank.lactation = 1;
- r.push(`It has <span class="orange">triggered a hormonal disorder,</span> causing ${his} breast glands begin producing milk.`);
+ r.push(`It has <span class="orange">triggered a hormonal disorder,</span> causing ${his} breast glands to begin producing milk.`);
break;
case 4:
tank.bellySag = 100;
@@ -826,7 +826,7 @@ App.EndWeek.incubatorReport = function() {
tank.weight = Math.clamp(tank.weight, -100, 200);
tank.muscles = Math.clamp(tank.muscles, -100, 100);
tank.dick = Math.clamp(tank.dick, 0, 10);
- tank.hips = Math.clamp(tank.hips, -2, 2);
+ tank.hips = Math.clamp(tank.hips, -2, 3);
tank.balls = Math.clamp(tank.balls, 0, 40);
tank.boobs = Math.clamp(tank.boobs, 25, 30000);
tank.height = Math.clamp(tank.height, 0, 274);
diff --git a/src/facilities/incubator/incubatorInteract.js b/src/facilities/incubator/incubatorInteract.js
index 7d538e3edb1da68b51eeb61caf1dedac6a11b698..d9239ecf4a80a91f54be0032d439841243c04adb 100644
--- a/src/facilities/incubator/incubatorInteract.js
+++ b/src/facilities/incubator/incubatorInteract.js
@@ -758,23 +758,23 @@ App.UI.incubator = function() {
const safeCC = (V.incubator.tanks[i].pregAdaptation - 5) * 2000;
if (safeCC > 300000) {
/* Some bigger size descriptions may be unreachable by normal game mechanics, so they are here just in case.*/
- r.push(`${His} bloated form looks more like an overinflated beachball made of the overstretched skin of ${his} belly with ${his} relative tiny body attached to its side. ${He} is completely dominated by it now. The process has gone too far, so ${his} body can't maintain its form with the belly as part of abdominal cavity. Now ${his} skin, tissues and muscles have stretched enough for ${his} belly to expand outside of any physical boundaries and appear more an attachment to ${his} body, rather than part of it.`);
+ r.push(`${His} bloated form looks more like an overinflated beachball made of the overstretched skin of ${his} belly, with ${his} relative tiny body attached to its side. ${He} is completely dominated by it now. The process has gone too far, so ${his} body can't maintain its form with the belly as part of abdominal cavity. Now ${his} skin, tissues and muscles have stretched enough for ${his} belly to expand outside of any physical boundaries and appear more an attachment to ${his} body, rather than part of it.`);
} else if (safeCC > 150000) {
- r.push(`${His} body looks almost spherical, having been grotesquely inflated with the stimulator sacs inserted into ${his} internals. The incubator constantly maintains high pressure inside ${him}, forcing the displacement of ${his} organs and stretching skin, tissues, and muscles. Even ${his} chest forced to become a part of the top of ${his} belly, having been pushed forward from the overwhelming volume inside.`);
+ r.push(`${His} body looks almost spherical, having been grotesquely inflated with the stimulator sacs inserted into ${his} internals. The incubator constantly maintains high pressure inside ${him}, forcing the displacement of ${his} organs and stretching skin, tissues, and muscles. Even ${his} chest has been forced to become a part of the top of ${his} belly, having been pushed forward from the overwhelming volume inside.`);
} else if (safeCC > 75000) {
- r.push(`${His} belly has become so huge that can be easily compared with belly of a woman ready to birth quintuplets. It pulses from the pressure applied within by the incubator probes.`);
+ r.push(`${His} belly has become so huge that it can be easily compared with belly of a woman ready to birth quintuplets. It pulses from the pressure applied within by the incubator probes.`);
} else if (safeCC > 45000) {
- r.push(`${His} belly, in the current state, would look normal on a woman who was ready to birth triplets. On ${his} still growing form, it's something completely out of the ordinary.`);
+ r.push(`${His} belly, in its current state, would look normal on a woman who was ready to birth triplets. On ${his} still growing form, it's something completely out of the ordinary.`);
} else if (safeCC > 30000) {
- r.push(`${His} belly looks like it contains full sized twins, ready to be birthed.`);
+ r.push(`${His} belly looks like it contains full-sized twins, ready to be birthed.`);
} else if (safeCC > 15000) {
- r.push(`${His} belly has reached the size of full term pregnancy.`);
+ r.push(`${His} belly has reached the size of full-term pregnancy.`);
} else if (safeCC > 10000) {
- r.push(`${His} belly has inflated to the size of late term pregnancy; its skin shines from the tension.`);
+ r.push(`${His} belly has inflated to the size of late-term pregnancy; its skin shines from the tension.`);
} else if (safeCC > 5000) {
- r.push(`${His} belly resembles a mid term pregnancy; it pulses slightly from the expansion and contraction of expandable sacs tipping the incubator probes.`);
+ r.push(`${His} belly resembles a mid-term pregnancy; it pulses slightly from the expansion and contraction of expandable sacs tipping the incubator probes.`);
} else if (safeCC > 1500) {
- r.push(`${His} belly slightly bulges and rhythmically expands and contracts to the cycles of ${his} stimulation as the incubator inflates and deflates expandable sacs on its probes within ${his} body cavity. With the correct serums applied, this should allow it to stretch the skin, tissues, and muscles of ${his} belly to better to tolerate the displacement of internal organs caused by fetal growth.`);
+ r.push(`${His} belly slightly bulges and rhythmically expands and contracts to the cycles of ${his} stimulation as the incubator inflates and deflates expandable sacs on its probes within ${his} body cavity. With the correct serums applied, this should allow it to stretch the skin, tissues, and muscles of ${his} belly to better tolerate the displacement of internal organs caused by fetal growth.`);
}
}
App.Events.addNode(p, r, "div");
diff --git a/src/npc/interaction/forceFeeding.js b/src/npc/interaction/forceFeeding.js
index 525ff0b15930ad73c6a4da61c664bf38418b6ce8..873b563b9c7f2810d59d1944e7833c2fbc7568e3 100644
--- a/src/npc/interaction/forceFeeding.js
+++ b/src/npc/interaction/forceFeeding.js
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ App.Interact.forceFeeding = function(slave) {
} else if (slave.devotion < -20) {
r.push(`tormenting ${his} gurgling belly until you tire of ${his} sobbing and send ${him} on ${his} way.`);
} else if (slave.fetish === "submissive" && slave.devotion <= 20) {
- r.push(`toying with ${his} belly until you tire of moaning and send ${him} on ${his} way.`);
+ r.push(`toying with ${his} belly until you tire of ${his} moaning and send ${him} on ${his} way.`);
} else if (slave.behavioralFlaw === "gluttonous" && slave.devotion <= 20) {
r.push(`massaging ${his} stuffed belly until you tire of ${him} and send ${him} on ${his} way.`);
} else if (slave.devotion <= 20) {
@@ -593,11 +593,7 @@ App.Interact.forceFeeding = function(slave) {
}
r.push(`Once you're hilted, you bring your hands to ${his} distended belly, eager to feel it move as you fuck ${him}.`);
if (hasAnyArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`${His} own join`);
- if (hasBothArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
- r.push(`yours atop the taut dome.`);
+ r.push(`${His} own ${hasBothArms(slave) ? `join` : `joins`} yours atop the taut dome.`);
}
r.push(`Every thrust into the stuffed ${SlaveTitle(slave)} forces ${his} full middle to leap back before slamming into your stomach alongside a moaning groan. As you pick up the pace, ${he} begins to buck against you, adding even more motion to ${his} body. It doesn't take long for you to reach your peak and, after cumming, catch sight of ${his} own climax. Watching ${his} middle attempt to contract around the mass of slave food inside ${him} invigorates you for a second round.`);
if (V.PC.balls >= 30) {
@@ -607,7 +603,7 @@ App.Interact.forceFeeding = function(slave) {
if (V.PC.balls >= 30) {
r.push(`and ${he}'s forced out all your cum,`);
}
- r.push(`you settle down beside ${him} and rest your head against ${his} belly; it almost feels like a water-filled pillow, albeit a little noisy. You and ${slave.slaveName} doze off together for a much needed nap. You don't get much rest; ${his} stomach's constant groaning and burbling keeping you up, so you send ${him} on ${his} way. ${He} blows you one last kiss and eagerly looks forward to next time.`);
+ r.push(`you settle down beside ${him} and rest your head against ${his} belly; it almost feels like a water-filled pillow, albeit a little noisy. You and ${slave.slaveName} doze off together for a much needed nap. You don't get much rest; ${his} stomach's constant groaning and burbling keeps you up, so you send ${him} on ${his} way. ${He} blows you one last kiss and eagerly looks forward to next time.`);
if (_sexType === "vaginal") {
r.push(VCheck.Vaginal(slave, 2));
} else {