diff --git a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw index 7312a76a1a4330aeba4127fb0cd969981eb17084..c4d869b8e11dbbb5d136313264b7d587a0889313 100644 --- a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw +++ b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ During your morning routine you stumble upon a peculiar report: it's been several weeks now that your arcology has been victim of a series of cyber-crimes conducted by a mysterious figure. The egocentric criminal took great pride in its acts, to the point of signing his acts with his or her peculiar symbol: a stylized smiling face. Your arcology was not the only one under assault by the machinations of what the media would quickly nicknamed //the smiling man//. - <br>Despite the sheer damage this criminal was doing, you cannot help but admire the skill with which every misdeed is carried: the worst white collar crimes of the century carried out with such elegancy + <br>Despite the sheer damage this criminal was doing, you cannot help but admire the skill with which every misdeed is carried: the worst white collar crimes of the century carried out with such elegance they almost seemed the product of natural laws rather than masterful manipulation of the digital market. While you sift through the pages of the report, $assistantName remains strangely quiet. "I'm worried <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>sir<<else>>ma'am<</if>>, this individual seems to be able to penetrate whatever system gathers his attention. I... feel vulnerable" she said "It's not something I'm used to." <br>Fortunately you have not been hit directly by this criminal, not yet at least. Still the repercussions of numerous bankruptcies take their toll on your arcology, whose @@.red;prosperity suffers@@. @@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ <br>"Hello citizens of Earth! I am here in this special day to relay to you a very important message: we find ourselves in very peculiar times, times of strife and suffering! But also of change and regeneration! Indeed I say humanity is regenerating itself, turning into a new being for which the ideals of the old world no longer hold meaning. A new blank page from which humanity can start to prosper again. <br>Alas my friends not all is good, as in this rebirth a great injustice is being perpetrated. If we truly want to ascend to this new form of humanity the old must give space to the new. If we must cleanse our mind of old ideas, our world must cleanse itself of them as well. - It's to fix this unjustice that I worked so hard all this time! To cleanse the world of the old, we must get rid of our precious, precious data. At the end of this message every digital device will se its memory erased, every archived cleaned, every drive deleted. + It's to fix this injustice that I worked so hard all this time! To cleanse the world of the old, we must get rid of our precious, precious data. At the end of this message every digital device will see its memory erased, every archive cleaned, every drive deleted. <br>It will be a true rebirth! A true new beginning! No longer the chains of the past will keep humanity anchored!" <br>The voice stopped for a second. <br>"Have a good day." simply concluded, then it happened. diff --git a/src/pregmod/breederProposal.tw b/src/pregmod/breederProposal.tw index ca1d9e6a42ac24a7100abac4b66f0db3f255c199..a645871c1f668c4bf6736ad57ad481b5cbe239e9 100644 --- a/src/pregmod/breederProposal.tw +++ b/src/pregmod/breederProposal.tw @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ Within the hour, you are called before <<if $eugenicsFullControl == 1>>what's le <<if $failedElite <= 0>> <br><<link "Decline being used as a breeder and leverage your standing">> <<replace "#result">> - "Yes, you have done much to further out cuase. We respect the "balls" on you, despite your lack of them. Very well, we shall set the standards for what shall qualify as breeding stock and our standards will be delivered to you shortly." + "Yes, you have done much to further out cause. We respect the "balls" on you, despite your lack of them. Very well, we shall set the standards for what shall qualify as breeding stock and our standards will be delivered to you shortly." <<set $propOutcome = 1>> <<InitStandards>> <<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */ @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Within the hour, you are called before <<if $eugenicsFullControl == 1>>what's le <<else>> <br><<link "Decline being used as a breeder and withdraw your proposal">> <<replace "#result">> - "Then why waste our time? You dissapoint us, but don't worry; you'll be laden with child soon enough." + "Then why waste our time? You disappoint us, but don't worry; you'll be laden with child soon enough." <<set $propOutcome = -1>> <<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */ <</replace>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw b/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw index 9b2575e037d1e1416c2e789127f10b3d671d26a6..c795933a03d80a8012f6bd984dbea08171c1bc3e 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw @@ -1879,7 +1879,7 @@ Your desk flags a video message as having potential. It's a rather homely farmer <<else>> little girl <</if>> - has been has been recieving frequent prenatal check ups + has been has been receiving frequent prenatal check ups <<if $seeHyperPreg == 0>> for her growing pregnancy. <<else>> @@ -1919,7 +1919,7 @@ Your desk flags a video message as having potential. It's a rather homely farmer <<set $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 0>> <<set $activeSlave.boobsTat = "She has the characters 'z-23' printed across her left breast." <<set $slaveCost += 800000>> - While digging through the highest security and clearance level database of a powerful old govermenent for anything of value, you discover the existance of a ultra top secret project to develop the most powerful and effective child cyborg ever created. The entire notion is absurd, but it seems they succeeded in creating something. During field testing it was discovered that it retained far too much humanity, resulting in the death of its handler. Unsure of what to do with the project, it has been placed on ice in the bowels of a black site. With a few simple commands, you could release it and order it to your arcology. + While digging through the highest security and clearance level database of a powerful old government for anything of value, you discover the existence of a ultra top secret project to develop the most powerful and effective child cyborg ever created. The entire notion is absurd, but it seems they succeeded in creating something. During field testing it was discovered that it retained far too much humanity, resulting in the death of its handler. Unsure of what to do with the project, it has been placed on ice in the bowels of a black site. With a few simple commands, you could release it and order it to your arcology. <</switch>> /* END SLAVE GENERATION AND INTRODUCTION */ @@ -2153,8 +2153,8 @@ Your desk flags a video message as having potential. It's a rather homely farmer <<case "immigrant">> She comes immediately from the immigration center to your arcology. You patiently explain the realities of the situation to her. She isn't too bright and it takes a while for things to sink in. The scanners finally do it, though. She sobs as the biometric scanners scrupulously record her every particular as belonging not to a person but to a piece of human property. She tries to resist placing her biometric signature in testament to the truth of her debt, but when you observe that the alternative is death, she complies. You add that she's already been purchased by a brothel, and would be well advised to keep obeying. She breaks down entirely at this. <<case "overwhelmed farmgirl">> - She barely manages to waddle into your penthouse beforeasking to have a seat on your couch. You decline, since she is clearly so skilled at carrying children, she will spend the rest of her enslavement as a volume breeder. Her gaze falls to the floor, this at least means she'll be fed and get to have her children. She cooperates to having her biometric readings taken and logged, before being seated in a wheelchair and taken to her new home. - Hours later, you recieve a brief message from the facility that purchased her. "150. One hundred and fifty babies. That is how many are crammed into that girl. She was a mere sixteen weeks along. If she lives through this, we may have a record breaking breeder on our hands. Felt the need to pass that along, you might have made us quite a profit this year." + She barely manages to waddle into your penthouse before asking to have a seat on your couch. You decline, since she is clearly so skilled at carrying children, she will spend the rest of her enslavement as a volume breeder. Her gaze falls to the floor, this at least means she'll be fed and get to have her children. She cooperates to having her biometric readings taken and logged, before being seated in a wheelchair and taken to her new home. + Hours later, you receive a brief message from the facility that purchased her. "150. One hundred and fifty babies. That is how many are crammed into that girl. She was a mere sixteen weeks along. If she lives through this, we may have a record breaking breeder on our hands. Felt the need to pass that along, you might have made us quite a profit this year." <</switch>> <</replace>> <</link>> //This will bring in <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.// diff --git a/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw b/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw index a3e771c53cb751e090e35cd9973f04d53228a35d..b8195c7a495e19573f37c0be8a529ae9d9fe4282 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ You visit the slave markets off the arcology plaza. It's always preferable to ex <<elseif $seed == 2>> "I guarantee they are all alive, maybe not healthy but alive. Well, except that one, just ignore that one." <<elseif $seed == 3>> - "We ask that you don't use this merchandise for organ harvesting, we have plenty of nonfuctional ones for that." + "We ask that you don't use this merchandise for organ harvesting, we have plenty of nonfunctional ones for that." <<else>> "If you are looking for a body to do unmentionable things to, you came to the right place! Though these in particular just barely fall under slave laws." <</if>>