From 75d54bf4f1f938e1a49cc886bac3ce95423eaa7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: DCoded <dcoded@live.com>
Date: Wed, 5 Dec 2018 18:59:25 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Moved commas into colored text for parity
---
devNotes/twine JS.txt | 2 +-
src/SecExp/attackReport.tw | 18 ++---
src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw | 2 +-
src/SecExp/rebellionReport.tw | 4 +-
src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw | 2 +-
src/SpecialForce/JS.js | 2 +-
src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw | 2 +-
src/events/intro/pcRumorIntro.tw | 6 +-
.../nursery/longChildDescription.tw | 40 +++++------
src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw | 72 +++++++++----------
src/npc/abort.tw | 2 +-
src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw | 2 +-
src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw | 8 +--
src/pregmod/beastFucked.tw | 4 +-
src/pregmod/csec.tw | 2 +-
src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw | 4 +-
src/pregmod/fSlaveSelfImpreg.tw | 2 +-
src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveVagConsummate.tw | 2 +-
src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw | 2 +-
src/pregmod/saClothes.tw | 8 +--
src/pregmod/saInflation.tw | 42 +++++------
src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw | 18 ++---
src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw | 12 ++--
src/pregmod/widgets/seBirthWidgets.tw | 4 +-
src/uncategorized/PESS.tw | 12 ++--
src/uncategorized/REFS.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 32 ++++-----
src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/corporationDevelopments.tw | 56 +++++++--------
src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw | 40 +++++------
src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw | 56 +++++++--------
src/uncategorized/neighborsFSAdoption.tw | 64 ++++++++---------
src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw | 16 ++---
src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw | 6 +-
src/uncategorized/reAWOL.tw | 6 +-
src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw | 4 +-
src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw | 6 +-
src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw | 4 +-
src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw | 10 +--
src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw | 2 +-
src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw | 26 +++----
src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw | 12 ++--
src/utility/extendedFamilyWidgets.tw | 2 +-
src/utility/saRulesWidgets.tw | 2 +-
src/utility/slaveCreationWidgets.tw | 2 +-
49 files changed, 316 insertions(+), 316 deletions(-)
diff --git a/devNotes/twine JS.txt b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
index 76904d4a699..d0fafec2a44 100644
--- a/devNotes/twine JS.txt
+++ b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
@@ -35139,7 +35139,7 @@ window.Interactions = function() {
else if (V.choice == 3){
choice = `$SF.Caps will be conducting corporate sabotage on rival arcologies' businesses. `;
if (V.SFTradeShow.CanAttend === -1 && (C.Talk + C.Fun !== 1)) {
- choice += `"Our interests should see a @@.yellowgreen;big boost@@, boss."`;}
+ choice += `"Our interests should see a @@.yellowgreen;big boost,@@ boss."`;}
else {
choice += `"Your @@.yellowgreen;arcology's business prospects should see an improvement@@ this week, <<= properTitle()>>.`;
}}}
diff --git a/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw b/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw
index 95c39033e8d..5782d88a8ba 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw
@@ -435,10 +435,10 @@
<</if>>
<<set $cash += _loot>>
<br>
- Damage to the infrastructure was @@.yellow;virtually non-existent@@, costing only pocket cash to bring the structure back to normal. The inhabitants as well reported little to no injuries, because of this the prosperity of the arcology did not suffer.
+ Damage to the infrastructure was @@.yellow;virtually non-existent,@@ costing only pocket cash to bring the structure back to normal. The inhabitants as well reported little to no injuries, because of this the prosperity of the arcology did not suffer.
<<set $cash -= 1000 * _majorBattleMod, $PC.engineering += .1>>
<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 3>>
- It seems your victories over the constant threats directed your way is having @@.green;a positive effect on the prosperity of the arcology@@, due to the security your leadership affords.
+ It seems your victories over the constant threats directed your way is having @@.green;a positive effect on the prosperity of the arcology,@@ due to the security your leadership affords.
<<set $arcologies[0].prosperity += 5 * _majorBattleMod>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $battleResult == -3>>
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@
<<set $authority -= 600 * _majorBattleMod>>
<</if>>
<br>
- In the raiding following the battle @@.red;the arcology sustained heavy damage@@, which will cost quite the amount of cash to fix. Reports of @@.red;citizens or slaves killed or missing@@ flood your office for a few days following the defeat.
+ In the raiding following the battle @@.red;the arcology sustained heavy damage,@@ which will cost quite the amount of cash to fix. Reports of @@.red;citizens or slaves killed or missing@@ flood your office for a few days following the defeat.
<<set $cash -= 5000 * _majorBattleMod, $PC.engineering += .1>>
<<if $week <= 30>>
<<set $lowerClass -= random(100) * _majorBattleMod>>
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@
<</if>>
<<set $cash += _loot>>
<br>
- Damage to the city was @@.red;limited@@, it won't take much to rebuild. Very few citizens or slaves were involved in the fight and even fewer met their end, safeguarding the prosperity of the arcology.
+ Damage to the city was @@.red;limited,@@ it won't take much to rebuild. Very few citizens or slaves were involved in the fight and even fewer met their end, safeguarding the prosperity of the arcology.
<<set $cash -= 2000 * _majorBattleMod, $PC.engineering += .1>>
<<set $lowerClass -= random(10) * _majorBattleMod>>
<<set _lostSlaves = random(20) * _majorBattleMod,
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@
<<set $authority -= 60 * _majorBattleMod>>
<</if>>
<br>
- The enemy did not have the strength to raid the arcology for long, still @@.red;the arcology sustained some damage@@, which will cost a moderate amount of cash to fix. Some citizens and slaves found themselves on the wrong end of a gun and met their demise.
+ The enemy did not have the strength to raid the arcology for long, still @@.red;the arcology sustained some damage,@@ which will cost a moderate amount of cash to fix. Some citizens and slaves found themselves on the wrong end of a gun and met their demise.
Some business sustained heavy damage, slightly impacting the arcology's prosperity.
<<set $cash -= 3000 * _majorBattleMod, $PC.engineering += .1>>
<<if $week <= 30>>
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@
<<set $authority -= 800 * _majorBattleMod>>
<</if>>
<br>
- The surrender allows the arcology to survive @@.red;mostly intact@@, however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
+ The surrender allows the arcology to survive @@.red;mostly intact,@@ however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
<<set $cash -= 1000 * _majorBattleMod, $PC.engineering += .1>>
<<if $week <= 30>>
<<set $lowerClass -= random(80) * _majorBattleMod>>
@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@
<<set $authority -= 600 * _majorBattleMod>>
<</if>>
<br>
- Fortunately the arcology survives @@.yellow;mostly intact@@, however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
+ Fortunately the arcology survives @@.yellow;mostly intact,@@ however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
<<set $cash -= 1000, $PC.engineering += .1>>
<<if $week <= 30>>
<<set $lowerClass -= random(80) * _majorBattleMod>>
@@ -1501,9 +1501,9 @@
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<if $tacticsSuccessful == 1>>
- In the end <<if $leadingTroops == "PC">>you were<<else>>your commander was<</if>> @@.green;able to successfully employ <<print $chosenTactic>> tactics@@, greatly enhancing the efficiency of your army.
+ In the end <<if $leadingTroops == "PC">>you were<<else>>your commander was<</if>> @@.green;able to successfully employ <<print $chosenTactic>> tactics,@@ greatly enhancing the efficiency of your army.
<<else>>
- In the end <<if $leadingTroops == "PC">>you were<<else>>your commander was<</if>> @@.red;not able to effectively employ <<print $chosenTactic>> tactics@@, greatly affecting the efficiency of your army.
+ In the end <<if $leadingTroops == "PC">>you were<<else>>your commander was<</if>> @@.red;not able to effectively employ <<print $chosenTactic>> tactics,@@ greatly affecting the efficiency of your army.
<</if>>
<br>
<br>
diff --git a/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw b/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw
index b4dd21c9807..ceac9dd53b6 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
<br><br>Statistics:
@@.darkviolet; <br><strong>Authority</strong>:@@
<br> Representing the power the player holds over the arcology. If @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ is how well the protagonist is known, @@.darkviolet;authority@@ is how much is feared or respected.
- Authority influences many things, but it is mainly used to enact edicts, who, similarly to policies, allow to shape the sociopolitical profile of your arcology. Like @@.green;reputation@@, @@.darkviolet;authority@@ has a maximum of <<print commaNum(20000)>>.
+ Authority influences many things, but it is mainly used to enact edicts, who, similarly to policies, allow to shape the sociopolitical profile of your arcology. Like @@.green;reputation,@@ @@.darkviolet;authority@@ has a maximum of <<print commaNum(20000)>>.
@@.deepskyblue;<br> <br><strong>Security</strong>:@@
<br> Representing how safe the arcology is, how likely it is for a citizen to get stabbed, killed or simply mugged in the streets as well as wider concerns like
diff --git a/src/SecExp/rebellionReport.tw b/src/SecExp/rebellionReport.tw
index 6842d78eb55..a581e681d80 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/rebellionReport.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/rebellionReport.tw
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@
<<set $rep -= random(1000,1200)>>
<<set $authority -= random(1000,1200)>>
<br>
- The surrender allows the arcology to survive @@.yellow;mostly intact@@, however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
+ The surrender allows the arcology to survive @@.yellow;mostly intact,@@ however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
<<set $cash -= 1000>>
<<if $week <= 30>>
<<set $lowerClass -= random(100)>>
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
<<set $rep -= random(1000,1200)>>
<<set $authority -= random(1000,1200)>>
<br>
- The surrender allows the arcology to survive @@.yellow;mostly intact@@, however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
+ The surrender allows the arcology to survive @@.yellow;mostly intact,@@ however reports of @@.red;mass looting and killing of citizens@@ flood your office for a few days.
<<set $cash -= 1000>>
<<if $week <= 30>>
<<set $lowerClass -= random(100)>>
diff --git a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
index 881644c598d..83fade01523 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
The $girl asks for a few minutes to think about your offer, and after some time $he reluctantly accepts. In the following weeks $he will get acquainted with the security network of the arcology and work to protect $his new home in the new world $he has created.
The world will never find out the truth of the Smiling Man and his legend will only grow with time, outliving his creator and maybe even $his new employer.
<</if>>
- <br>The collaboration of the ex-Smiling Man permanently increases @@.green;security and the rate of prosperity growth@@. @@.limegreen;Cash will be also provided@@, but you're better off not knowing the sources.
+ <br>The collaboration of the ex-Smiling Man permanently increases @@.green;security and the rate of prosperity growth@@. @@.limegreen;Cash will be also provided,@@ but you're better off not knowing the sources.
<<elseif $smilingManFate == 1>>
For such a criminal a simple execution is not enough. You order the $girl captured and crucified outside the city, with a mask resembling $his famous symbol. Your men quickly obey. $He never once shows sign of pain or fear, remaining stoic and proud to the end.
Once $his life ends, you order a statue erected in commemoration of the death of the Smiling Man. From this day forward the statue of the crucified criminal will adorn your arcology and his legend will be forever entangled with yours.
diff --git a/src/SpecialForce/JS.js b/src/SpecialForce/JS.js
index 687c44a45c7..420f66b1de0 100644
--- a/src/SpecialForce/JS.js
+++ b/src/SpecialForce/JS.js
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ window.Interactions = function() {
else if (V.choice == 3){
choice = `$SF.Caps will be conducting corporate sabotage on rival arcologies' businesses. `;
if (V.SFTradeShow.CanAttend === -1 && (C.Talk + C.Fun !== 1)) {
- choice += `"Our interests should see a @@.yellowgreen;big boost@@, boss."`;}
+ choice += `"Our interests should see a @@.yellowgreen;big boost,@@ boss."`;}
else {
choice += `"Your @@.yellowgreen;arcology's business prospects should see an improvement@@ this week, <<= properTitle()>>.`;
}}}
diff --git a/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw b/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw
index 80d1115abd7..c8cc456445b 100644
--- a/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw
+++ b/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
<br>[[Servant|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "servant"]]
<br> //As an ex-servant, you will find it @@.red;hard to maintain reputation@@<<if $showSecExp == 1>>, @@.red;in addition to authority@@<</if>>.
- You know how to @@.yellowgreen;lower your upkeep@@, but @@.red;not much else@@. Your starting slaves will have free @@.mediumaquamarine;trust@@ and @@.hotpink;devotion.@@//
+ You know how to @@.yellowgreen;lower your upkeep,@@ but @@.red;not much else@@. Your starting slaves will have free @@.mediumaquamarine;trust@@ and @@.hotpink;devotion.@@//
<br>[[Gang Leader|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "gang"]]
<br> //As an ex-gang leader, you know how to haggle slaves.
diff --git a/src/events/intro/pcRumorIntro.tw b/src/events/intro/pcRumorIntro.tw
index d01cad0f242..bbfbb4130bb 100644
--- a/src/events/intro/pcRumorIntro.tw
+++ b/src/events/intro/pcRumorIntro.tw
@@ -3,12 +3,12 @@
Who you are is something that you will have to define for yourself through your actions. Once you own an arcology, no one will be in a position to apply moral scorekeeping to you. In the brave new world of the Free Cities, you will be free to define yourself as the sum of your actions, rather than as the product of your past. The first decision that will define who you are as an arcology owner is your choice of method in acquiring one. @@.orange;What approach will you take?@@
[[A judicious application of funds|Takeover Target][$PC.rumor = "wealth"]]
- //Start with @@.yellowgreen;extra money@@, since you were wealthy enough to buy an arcology.//
+ //Start with @@.yellowgreen;extra money,@@ since you were wealthy enough to buy an arcology.//
[[Hard work and diligence|Takeover Target][$PC.rumor = "diligence"]]
//New slaves will @@.hotpink;hate you less,@@ since it will be known that you worked hard to earn your position.//
[[The remorseless use of force|Takeover Target][$PC.rumor = "force"]]
//New slaves @@.gold;will fear you more,@@ since rumors about your violent takeover will inevitably circulate.//
[[Clever social engineering|Takeover Target][$PC.rumor = "social engineering"]]
- //Start with the @@.green;first societal option unlocked@@, since you manipulated the arcology's citizens.//
+ //Start with the @@.green;first societal option unlocked,@@ since you manipulated the arcology's citizens.//
[[Blind luck|Takeover Target][$PC.rumor = "luck"]]
- //Start with a @@.green;good reputation@@, since the story of your unlikely accession will be famous.//
+ //Start with a @@.green;good reputation,@@ since the story of your unlikely accession will be famous.//
diff --git a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
index 8084f90a4bd..c78360913b5 100644
--- a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
+++ b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
@@ -42,13 +42,13 @@
is
-<<if $activeSlave.devotion < -95>>a @@.darkviolet;hate-filled@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -50>>a @@.darkviolet;hateful@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>a @@.mediumorchid;reluctant@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 20>>a @@.yellow;hesitant@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 50>>an @@.hotpink;accepting@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 95>>a @@.deeppink;devoted@@,
-<<else>>a @@.magenta;worshipful@@,
+<<if $activeSlave.devotion < -95>>a @@.darkviolet;hate-filled,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -50>>a @@.darkviolet;hateful,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>a @@.mediumorchid;reluctant,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 20>>a @@.yellow;hesitant,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 50>>an @@.hotpink;accepting,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 95>>a @@.deeppink;devoted,@@
+<<else>>a @@.magenta;worshipful,@@
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.trust < -95>>@@.goldenrod;abjectly terrified@@
<<elseif $activeSlave.trust < -50>>@@.goldenrod;terrified@@
@@ -498,7 +498,7 @@ $he's
but has learned to keep $his faith private.
<</if>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>>
- $He behaves @@.red;oddly@@, saying and doing random things.
+ $He behaves @@.red;oddly,@@ saying and doing random things.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "hates men")>>
$He @@.red;strongly dislikes@@ being around
<<if ($activeSlave.attrXY >= 85) && ($activeSlave.energy >= 40)>>
@@ -616,9 +616,9 @@ $he's
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "arrogant")>>
$His arrogance is really just a thin shell to protect $his true need to @@.lightcoral;submit@@.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's an extreme @@.lightcoral;submissive@@, and relishes the strictures of slavery.
+ $He's an extreme @@.lightcoral;submissive,@@ and relishes the strictures of slavery.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
- $He's a confirmed @@.lightcoral;submissive@@, and enjoys the strictures of slavery.
+ $He's a confirmed @@.lightcoral;submissive,@@ and enjoys the strictures of slavery.
<<else>>
$He has @@.lightcoral;submissive@@ tendencies, and likes the strictures of slavery.
<</if>>
@@ -626,11 +626,11 @@ $he's
<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "hates oral")>>
$He's torn between $his @@.lightcoral;love of semen@@ and $his dislike of having cocks in $his mouth.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's a @@.lightcoral;cumslut@@, and loves giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
+ $He's a @@.lightcoral;cumslut,@@ and loves giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
- $He @@.lightcoral;prefers giving oral@@, and enjoys sucking dick and receiving facials.
+ $He @@.lightcoral;prefers giving oral,@@ and enjoys sucking dick and receiving facials.
<<else>>
- $He has an @@.lightcoral;oral fixation@@, and likes giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
+ $He has an @@.lightcoral;oral fixation,@@ and likes giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
<</if>>
<<case "humiliation">>
<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>>
@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ $he's
<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>>
$His shame is genuine, and it is with real self-loathing that $he @@.lightcoral;gets off on humiliation.@@
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's a slut for @@.lightcoral;humiliation@@, and gets off on having others see $his enslavement.
+ $He's a slut for @@.lightcoral;humiliation,@@ and gets off on having others see $his enslavement.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
$He enjoys @@.lightcoral;humiliating@@ sex.
<<else>>
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ $he's
<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "hates anal")>>
$His hatred is just pretense to cover $his shame about how much $he really loves getting @@.lightcoral;fucked in the butt@@.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's a @@.lightcoral;buttslut@@, happy to have anyone put anything up $his ass.
+ $He's a @@.lightcoral;buttslut,@@ happy to have anyone put anything up $his ass.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
$He @@.lightcoral;prefers anal.@@
<<else>>
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ $he's
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
$He is a @@.lightcoral;complete dom;@@ with other slaves this is expressed as a strong preference to top, and with $his betters $he's an almost competitive lover.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
- $He likes to take an active, powerful role in sex; with other slaves this is expressed as @@.lightcoral;dominance@@, and with $his betters $he's a very energetic lover.
+ $He likes to take an active, powerful role in sex; with other slaves this is expressed as @@.lightcoral;dominance,@@ and with $his betters $he's a very energetic lover.
<<else>>
$He prefers to take a @@.lightcoral;dominant@@ sexual role.
<</if>>
@@ -1712,10 +1712,10 @@ $He is
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.voice == 0>>
- $He is @@.pink;completely silent@@, which is understandable, since $he's mute.
+ $He is @@.pink;completely silent,@@ which is understandable, since $he's mute.
<<else>>
<<if $activeSlave.lips > 95>>
- $He is @@.pink;effectively mute@@, since $his lips are so large that $he can no longer speak intelligibly. $He can still <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 50>>moan<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>whimper<<else>>scream<</if>> through them, though.
+ $He is @@.pink;effectively mute,@@ since $his lips are so large that $he can no longer speak intelligibly. $He can still <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 50>>moan<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>whimper<<else>>scream<</if>> through them, though.
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -1768,7 +1768,7 @@ $He is
<<if $activeSlave.fuckdoll == 0>>
<<if $activeSlave.minorInjury != 0>>
<<if $activeSlave.minorInjury != "sore ass">>
- $He is sporting a @@.red;$activeSlave.minorInjury@@, covered by makeup.
+ $He is sporting a @@.red;$activeSlave.minorInjury,@@ covered by makeup.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -1943,7 +1943,7 @@ $He is
<<elseif ($activeSlave.addict > 0) && ($activeSlave.addict < 10)>>
$He is a confirmed @@.cyan;aphrodisiac addict@@.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.addict > 0)>>
- $He is completely @@.cyan;dependent on aphrodisiacs@@, and it is unlikely you will ever be able to wean $him off them.
+ $He is completely @@.cyan;dependent on aphrodisiacs,@@ and it is unlikely you will ever be able to wean $him off them.
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
index fbb0343b062..681522e85cb 100644
--- a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
+++ b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ PLAYING FREE CITIES
<br> Spend the rest of your @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ on prospects: slaves that are @@.yellowgreen;[[cheap|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ now, but can be improved quickly. As long as you keep @@.hotpink;devotion@@ pretty high, low @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ can be fixed reliably. Unknown fetishes, emaciated or fat, flaws, deep voice, and poor skills are all good ways to drive prices down, and can all be fixed quickly. Virginities are a bad idea because they drive costs up and are easy to break. @@.cyan;Education@@ can take awhile and will take slaves away from other jobs, so make them all educated for now, and keep their @@.cyan;intelligence@@ reasonably high.
<br><br>__First turn__
- <br> Assign one of your head girls to be Head Girl and make the other whore. Assign everyone else to whore. The [[rules ssistant|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Rules Assistant"]] will speed things up a lot when you know the basics, but leave it off for now; it's easy to miss a lot of stuff if you set it up without a bit of experience. Go through your girls one by one and experiment with their options, but anyone who's @@.hotpink;Accepting@@ or better should get nice clothes, accessories, and [[living conditions|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Living Conditions"]]; anyone who's not should not. When slaves tip over into @@.hotpink;Accepting,@@ switch them over from bedrolls and uncomfortable straps; until then, the good life is a waste of @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ and will spoil them. Give @@.red;unhealthy@@ slaves curatives, and give everyone hormones, since they're @@.yellowgreen;[[cheap|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ and have good front end benefits. Get everyone working out or dieting to reach a basic fitness level and an attractive (not @@.red;red@@) [[weight|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Weight"]]. Sell the girl(s) your predecessor left behind for seed @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@, and choose the most profitable option; there are ways to maximize this, but worry about that later. Check out the arcology management menu. You should have the @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ to upgrade the security systems, build the [[head girl suite|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Head Girl Suite"]], and to buy the kitchen upgrade; this will make dieting work faster. Check out the slave market, and buy a single bargain slave: @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(2000)>>@@ is good. Put her in the suite: if she won't go, abuse her until she will. Open the personal attention menu, and fix your head girl's flaws; softening is powerful but it takes longer and we're focusing on the basics. ''Save the game'' and end the turn.
+ <br> Assign one of your head girls to be Head Girl and make the other whore. Assign everyone else to whore. The [[rules ssistant|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Rules Assistant"]] will speed things up a lot when you know the basics, but leave it off for now; it's easy to miss a lot of stuff if you set it up without a bit of experience. Go through your girls one by one and experiment with their options, but anyone who's @@.hotpink;Accepting@@ or better should get nice clothes, accessories, and [[living conditions|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Living Conditions"]]; anyone who's not should not. When slaves tip over into @@.hotpink;Accepting,@@ switch them over from bedrolls and uncomfortable straps; until then, the good life is a waste of @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ and will spoil them. Give @@.red;unhealthy@@ slaves curatives, and give everyone hormones, since they're @@.yellowgreen;[[cheap|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ and have good front end benefits. Get everyone working out or dieting to reach a basic fitness level and an attractive (not @@.red;red@@) [[weight|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Weight"]]. Sell the girl(s) your predecessor left behind for seed @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]],@@ and choose the most profitable option; there are ways to maximize this, but worry about that later. Check out the arcology management menu. You should have the @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ to upgrade the security systems, build the [[head girl suite|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Head Girl Suite"]], and to buy the kitchen upgrade; this will make dieting work faster. Check out the slave market, and buy a single bargain slave: @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(2000)>>@@ is good. Put her in the suite: if she won't go, abuse her until she will. Open the personal attention menu, and fix your head girl's flaws; softening is powerful but it takes longer and we're focusing on the basics. ''Save the game'' and end the turn.
<br><br>__The end turn report__
<br> Read this, and note all the colored text. Pay particular attention to @@.red;red,@@ @@.gold;gold,@@ or @@.mediumorchid;orchid@@ text; these are generally bad. Being a slave whore is a hard life, and some trouble is inevitable. But take particular note of things like slaves losing [[health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]], becoming [[fearful|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]], or [[hating|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]] you due to their [[rules|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Rules Assistant"]], [[conditions|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Living Conditions"]], or other slaves - these things you can control. Reload your save and fiddle around with the options to address these areas. (The head girl's girl may have a rough time; you can't affect that.) Since your head girl has her own slave to help her around the house, she'll work with two of your slaves.
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ Design Your Master
<<if $showSecExp == 1>>
and @@.darkviolet;[[authority|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Security Expansion"]]@@
<</if>>
- losses each week. You can spend your free time selling your body for @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@, at the cost of a large amount of @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@.
+ losses each week. You can spend your free time selling your body for @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]],@@ at the cost of a large amount of @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@.
<br><br>''celebrity'' provides extra @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ at game start
<<if $showSecExp == 1>>
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ BEING IN CHARGE
<br><br>//Your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ is, of course, already quite impressive. The @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ tracked in the sidebar is specifically your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ as a slaveowner. It can be raised through decadent actions that display your munificence and opulence. Some random events can increase it, but the most reliable way to improve your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ is to send sexually skilled slaves out into the arcology to offer free sexual services. This assignment is very similar to prostitution, but produces @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ rather than @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@.//
- <br><br>//As your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ develops, you may have the opportunity to guide the future of your arcology's society. Successfully doing so will increase your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ in turn, which will duly enable you to further shape society. Managing societal development well will have a recursive effect on your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@, and can drive it to great heights.//
+ <br><br>//As your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ develops, you may have the opportunity to guide the future of your arcology's society. Successfully doing so will increase your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ in turn, which will duly enable you to further shape society. Managing societal development well will have a recursive effect on your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]],@@ and can drive it to great heights.//
<br><br>//The benefits of high @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ are numerous. Many business and enslavement opportunities will open to you once you are reputable. Some of the most advanced technology is only available to those with impeccable @@.green;[[reputations|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ as slaveowners, and many of the finer slave markets will only consider reputable buyers. You may eventually become so renowned that merely branding a slave with your mark will increase her value on the open market.//
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ BEING IN CHARGE
Rules can also be renamed to be more indicative of their intended purpose.
<br><br>__Rule activation:__
- In order to apply a rule to slaves, the activation will need to be set. Choose an activation type (@@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, sex drive, health, [[weight|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Weight"]], [[muscles|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Musculature"]], lactation, pregnancy, fetuses, implant size, or age) and then choose the level at which to apply. For example to apply a rule to obedient slaves, choose '@@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@' for the activation and 4 or more for the lower limit by selecting '>='.
+ In order to apply a rule to slaves, the activation will need to be set. Choose an activation type (@@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ sex drive, health, [[weight|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Weight"]], [[muscles|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Musculature"]], lactation, pregnancy, fetuses, implant size, or age) and then choose the level at which to apply. For example to apply a rule to obedient slaves, choose '@@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@' for the activation and 4 or more for the lower limit by selecting '>='.
<br><br>__Selecting or excluding slaves from a rule:__
Slaves can be selected for a rule by selecting slaves from the list so that a rule can apply only to them. Slaves can similarly be excluded from a rule.
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ BEING IN CHARGE
Once a corporation is created, it will get its own establishment in the slave market. Stockholders are offered discounts on its slaves, which increase with the size of the owner's share in the corporation. As the corporation's assets increase, it can be given direction about what kind of slaves it should train and how it should train them, which will affect the slaves seen in the corporate catalog. Each asset type allows three choices:
<br> General: Slave breaking, diets, and fitness.
- <br> Entrapment: Obedience, @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, and @@.cyan;intelligence@@.
+ <br> Entrapment: Obedience, @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ and @@.cyan;intelligence@@.
<br> Capture: Gender, age and race.
@@ -402,11 +402,11 @@ SLAVES
<<case "Devotion">>
- ''Devotion'' is a measure of a slave's liking for the player character, and secondarily, how accepting she is of her place in life. (Low Devotion is also referred to as hatred.) Along with @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, it is the main measure of a slave's mental state. A highly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ slave will always obey and will do her best on assignments. With low Devotion, obedience depends on trust: if trust is high, the slave will generally resist and do badly, but if trust is low enough the slave will obey out of fear. Almost everything in the game can effect Devotion in some way: @@.mediumorchid;orchid text@@ indicates a Devotion loss, while @@.hotpink;hot pink@@ text indicates a Devotion gain. Maximized or minimized Devotion is somewhat sticky: lightly abusing a perfectly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ slave will not damage Devotion, while minor kindnesses will not affect a hateful slave. If a slave is very @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, extremely high Devotion will boost trust weekly (extremely low Devotion will do the reverse), and any Devotion gains that push it over its maximum value will overflow into trust. However, if a slave is very frightened, high Devotion will not impact trust. If both trust and Devotion are maximized, the slave's sex drive will be increased. If she's already a nympho, @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ is increased instead.
+ ''Devotion'' is a measure of a slave's liking for the player character, and secondarily, how accepting she is of her place in life. (Low Devotion is also referred to as hatred.) Along with @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ it is the main measure of a slave's mental state. A highly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ slave will always obey and will do her best on assignments. With low Devotion, obedience depends on trust: if trust is high, the slave will generally resist and do badly, but if trust is low enough the slave will obey out of fear. Almost everything in the game can effect Devotion in some way: @@.mediumorchid;orchid text@@ indicates a Devotion loss, while @@.hotpink;hot pink@@ text indicates a Devotion gain. Maximized or minimized Devotion is somewhat sticky: lightly abusing a perfectly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ slave will not damage Devotion, while minor kindnesses will not affect a hateful slave. If a slave is very @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ extremely high Devotion will boost trust weekly (extremely low Devotion will do the reverse), and any Devotion gains that push it over its maximum value will overflow into trust. However, if a slave is very frightened, high Devotion will not impact trust. If both trust and Devotion are maximized, the slave's sex drive will be increased. If she's already a nympho, @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ is increased instead.
<<case "Trust">>
- ''Trust'' is a measure of a slave's expectations of the player character, and secondarily, how confident she is of her ability to do well. (Low trust is also referred to as fear.) Along with @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, it is the main measure of a slave's mental state. A highly trusting slave is often more expensive to keep, but will do better in a leadership position and is more valuable. Slaves who are not intended for special assignments or resale can usually be kept terrified.
+ ''Trust'' is a measure of a slave's expectations of the player character, and secondarily, how confident she is of her ability to do well. (Low trust is also referred to as fear.) Along with @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ it is the main measure of a slave's mental state. A highly trusting slave is often more expensive to keep, but will do better in a leadership position and is more valuable. Slaves who are not intended for special assignments or resale can usually be kept terrified.
<br><br>This can become negative if a slave is not sufficiently @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@: in this case, she will not obey since she neither likes nor fears the player character. Many game mechanics can effect trust in some way: @@.mediumaquamarine;aquamarine text@@ text indicates a trust gain, while @@.gold;gold@@ indicates a trust loss. Maximized or minimized trust is somewhat sticky: lightly abusing a perfectly trusting slave will not damage trust, while minor confidence boosts will not affect an abjectly terrified slave. Extremely high trust will boost Devotion weekly, and any trust gains that push it over its maximum value will overflow into Devotion. If both are maximized, the slave's sex drive is increased. If she's already a nympho, Reputation is increased instead.
@@ -420,11 +420,11 @@ SLAVES
<br><br>//Enhancement injections,// improvements on 20th century legacy steroids. These often include an element not dissimilar to liposuction in which a slurry of the patient's own tissues is included in the injection to promote tissue growth at the injection site. These drugs increase cosmetic body area size faster than any other option other than plastic surgery, but can have negative health consequences.
- <br><br>//Psychosuppressants,// cocktails of legacy mental health treatments delivered in extremely high doses designed to reduce the patient's ability to think independently. The most common set of effects include increased obedience, reduced @@.orangered;[[rebelliousness|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, and irreversible damage to mental faculties.
+ <br><br>//Psychosuppressants,// cocktails of legacy mental health treatments delivered in extremely high doses designed to reduce the patient's ability to think independently. The most common set of effects include increased obedience, reduced @@.orangered;[[rebelliousness|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ and irreversible damage to mental faculties.
<br><br>//Aphrodisiacs,// powerful, addictive sexual enhancers that cause a mental and physical state not dissimilar to traditional hypersexuality. These drugs are based on female hormones, and may have long-term effects similar to female hormone reassignment treatment. They are strongly addictive, both physically and mentally, and the usual recommendation to slaveowners is that slaves should be put on aphrodisiacs only for a brief time, or permanently. Aphrodisiac addiction can typically only be overcome by supporting a slave through withdrawal for a similar period to the amount of time she was on the drugs.
- Aphrodisiacs can also be administered in //extreme doses.// This is medically dangerous, but is sometimes used by unscrupulous slaveowners. Slaves so dosed will feel an extreme need for sex regardless of their emotional state; for example, @@.orangered;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, virgin slaves on extreme aphrodisiac doses will typically enjoy having their virginity sold.
+ Aphrodisiacs can also be administered in //extreme doses.// This is medically dangerous, but is sometimes used by unscrupulous slaveowners. Slaves so dosed will feel an extreme need for sex regardless of their emotional state; for example, @@.orangered;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ virgin slaves on extreme aphrodisiac doses will typically enjoy having their virginity sold.
<br><br>//Anaphrodisiacs// are in many ways the opposite of aphrodisiacs, in that they limit the slave's libido. However, their method of action is generally slower, gentler and less damaging to the body's chemistry. They still allow for a healthy appetite.
@@ -489,13 +489,13 @@ SLAVES
<<case "Lingua Franca">>
- At the beginning of the game, the lingua franca of the arcology will be determined, either by customization or by default to the most common language of the selected continent. When slaves are generated during the game, they will be assigned a familiarity with the lingua franca based on their nationality, @@.cyan;intelligence@@, education, and in some cases, ethnicity. This accent can range from nonexistent (typical for slaves from the country where the language originated) to crippling, rendering the slave more or less unable to speak and only able to understand basic orders. The latter will reduce a slave's attractiveness. Slaves will learn the lingua franca naturally, a process that is faster for intelligent slaves. It can be sped up by allowing slaves to speak and providing basic slave education. Light accents are considered attractive, but can be eliminated using speech rules that encourage unaccented speech. A thick accent will impede a Head Girl.
+ At the beginning of the game, the lingua franca of the arcology will be determined, either by customization or by default to the most common language of the selected continent. When slaves are generated during the game, they will be assigned a familiarity with the lingua franca based on their nationality, @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ education, and in some cases, ethnicity. This accent can range from nonexistent (typical for slaves from the country where the language originated) to crippling, rendering the slave more or less unable to speak and only able to understand basic orders. The latter will reduce a slave's attractiveness. Slaves will learn the lingua franca naturally, a process that is faster for intelligent slaves. It can be sped up by allowing slaves to speak and providing basic slave education. Light accents are considered attractive, but can be eliminated using speech rules that encourage unaccented speech. A thick accent will impede a Head Girl.
<<case "Slave Score (Attractiveness)">>
A slave's ''Attractiveness Score'' is a derived stat used to determine a slave's performance at many assignments. It also plays a major role in her price if bought or sold. It's a rough measure, but it's intended to serve as a rough count of how many of your arcology's citizens would be interested in paying to fuck her over the course of a week. The amount they would be willing to pay is determined by her [[Sexual Score|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Slave Score (Sexual)"]]. Attractiveness Score is affected by virtually every physical trait a slave has, some skills, and societal tastes.
<<case "Slave Score (Sexual)">>
- A slave's ''Sexual Score'' is a derived stat used to determine a slave's performance at many assignments. It also plays a major role in her price if bought or sold. It's a rough measure, but it's intended to serve as an estimate of the average price she would command as a street whore over the course of a week. The number of your arcology citizens who might be willing to pay that price is determined by her [[Attractiveness Score|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Slave Score (Attractiveness)"]]. Sexual Score is affected by sexual skills, some physical traits, [[Health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]] and @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, and societal tastes.
+ A slave's ''Sexual Score'' is a derived stat used to determine a slave's performance at many assignments. It also plays a major role in her price if bought or sold. It's a rough measure, but it's intended to serve as an estimate of the average price she would command as a street whore over the course of a week. The number of your arcology citizens who might be willing to pay that price is determined by her [[Attractiveness Score|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Slave Score (Attractiveness)"]]. Sexual Score is affected by sexual skills, some physical traits, [[Health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]] and @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ and societal tastes.
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OBTAINING SLAVES
@@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<<case "Attendant">>
- An ''Attendant'' can be selected once the [[Spa|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Spa"]] facility has been built. Attendants provide emotional help to slaves in the spa, and can also soften flaws and even fix mindbroken slaves. Good Attendants are free of fetishes or submissive, have a calm libido, older than 35, a motherly air, @@.cyan;intelligent@@, and naturally female.
+ An ''Attendant'' can be selected once the [[Spa|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Spa"]] facility has been built. Attendants provide emotional help to slaves in the spa, and can also soften flaws and even fix mindbroken slaves. Good Attendants are free of fetishes or submissive, have a calm libido, older than 35, a motherly air, @@.cyan;intelligent,@@ and naturally female.
<<case "Matron">>
A ''Matron'' can be selected once the [[Nursery|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nursery"]] facility has been built. Matrons oversee the day-to-day activities of the Nursery, and can soften flaws of nannies working under them. Good Matrons is [[caring|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Caring"]], [[funny|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Funny"]], [[intelligent|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Intelligence"]], and has given birth before. //This entry still needs work and will be updated with more information as it matures. If this message is still here, remind one of the devs to remove it.//
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>A ''Bodyguard'' can be selected once the Armory upgrade is purchased. Duties include protection of the player character during violent events; good bodyguards produce some @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ as well, based on how deadly they are. Toned but not excessive [[muscles|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Musculature"]], [[combat kills|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Combat Skill"]], and [[height|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Height"]] contribute to deadliness. Big [[breasts|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Breasts"]], [[butts|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Butts"]], poor [[health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]], excess [[weight|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Weight"]], and [[pregnancy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Pregnancy"]] all detract from deadliness.
- <br><br>Skilled, @@.cyan;intelligent@@, and @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ Bodyguards may become concerned that they have no potential successor if you do not keep several other combat capable slaves in your penthouse. Such a Bodyguard will do her best to find responsible and physically capable slaves to teach self defense to when she can. Potential recipients of this training include her lover or wife if she has one, the [[Head Girl|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Head Girl"]], the [[Wardeness|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Wardeness"]], and your [[Concubine|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Concubine"]].
+ <br><br>Skilled, @@.cyan;intelligent,@@ and @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ Bodyguards may become concerned that they have no potential successor if you do not keep several other combat capable slaves in your penthouse. Such a Bodyguard will do her best to find responsible and physically capable slaves to teach self defense to when she can. Potential recipients of this training include her lover or wife if she has one, the [[Head Girl|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Head Girl"]], the [[Wardeness|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Wardeness"]], and your [[Concubine|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Concubine"]].
<<case "Concubine">>
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>-- Van Diemen, D. C. G., //Free Cities Fashion (FCF), January 2032////
- <br><br>A ''DJ'' can be selected once the [[Club|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Club"]] facility is built. DJs apply a multiplier to @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ gains from serving in the club. Entertainment skills, toned but not massive [[muscles|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Musculature"]], @@.cyan;intelligence@@, and a pretty face make a good DJ.
+ <br><br>A ''DJ'' can be selected once the [[Club|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Club"]] facility is built. DJs apply a multiplier to @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ gains from serving in the club. Entertainment skills, toned but not massive [[muscles|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Musculature"]], @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ and a pretty face make a good DJ.
<br><br>If a DJ isn't responsible for enough sluts to occupy her full time, she'll spend time fucking citizens herself. This is exactly the same as [[Public Service|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Public Service"]] out of the Club: she'll benefit from any [[Advertising|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Advertising"]] or [[Variety|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Variety"]] bonuses available, and will even benefit from her own leadership skills.
@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>A ''Head Girl'' can be selected from among your @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ slaves immediately. Duties are numerous, but mostly involve training slaves. They will generally train whichever girls they think appropriate, but can be given some direction on the same menu used to select one. Giving your [[Head Girl a suite|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Head Girl Suite"]] and a personal slave will allow her to train an extra slave each week, an extremely powerful ability.
- @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, @@.cyan;intelligence@@, and age over 35 all help Head Girls do well. Head Girls will do better if they are comfortable with the arcology's [[lingua franca|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Lingua Franca"]]. Skills are required when teaching that skill, meaning that slaves without vaginas cannot teach vaginal skills. Conversely, slaves with functional dicks are better at teaching other sexual skills. Also having max sex skills, dom as their fetish and being your wife provide more boosts.
+ @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ and age over 35 all help Head Girls do well. Head Girls will do better if they are comfortable with the arcology's [[lingua franca|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Lingua Franca"]]. Skills are required when teaching that skill, meaning that slaves without vaginas cannot teach vaginal skills. Conversely, slaves with functional dicks are better at teaching other sexual skills. Also having max sex skills, dom as their fetish and being your wife provide more boosts.
<<case "Madam">>
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>
- A ''Madam'' can be selected once the [[Brothel|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Brothel"]] facility is built. Madams apply a multiplier to @@.yellowgreen;[[income|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ from the brothel. Whoring skills, age over 35, @@.cyan;intelligence@@, being your wife and a functional cock help a Madam.
+ A ''Madam'' can be selected once the [[Brothel|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Brothel"]] facility is built. Madams apply a multiplier to @@.yellowgreen;[[income|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ from the brothel. Whoring skills, age over 35, @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ being your wife and a functional cock help a Madam.
<br><br>If a Madam isn't managing enough whores to occupy her full time, she'll sell herself as much as she has time for. This is exactly the same as [[Whoring|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Whoring"]] out of the Brothel: she'll benefit from any [[Advertising|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Advertising"]] or [[Variety|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Variety"]] bonuses available, and will even benefit from her own management skills.
@@ -821,11 +821,11 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<<case "Nurse">>
- An ''Nurse'' can be selected once the [[Clinic|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Clinic"]] facility is built. Nurses increase [[health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]] gains in the Clinic. Good Nurses are [[nymphomaniacs|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nymphomania"]], highly @@.cyan;intelligent@@, physically fit, and very beautiful.
+ An ''Nurse'' can be selected once the [[Clinic|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Clinic"]] facility is built. Nurses increase [[health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]] gains in the Clinic. Good Nurses are [[nymphomaniacs|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nymphomania"]], highly @@.cyan;intelligent,@@ physically fit, and very beautiful.
<<case "Recruiter">>
- A ''recruiter'' can be selected from among your @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ slaves immediately. @@.cyan;intelligence@@, entertainment skills, and luxurious living standards help a recruiter convince vulnerable people to submit to voluntary enslavement. Each targetable group is also more sympathetic to an appropriate recruiter:
+ A ''recruiter'' can be selected from among your @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ slaves immediately. @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ entertainment skills, and luxurious living standards help a recruiter convince vulnerable people to submit to voluntary enslavement. Each targetable group is also more sympathetic to an appropriate recruiter:
<br> <br> <br> <br> Desperate whores: a sexually veteran recruiter
<br> <br> <br> <br> Expectant mothers: a visibly pregnant recruiter
<br> <br> <br> <br> Young migrants: a [[healthy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]] and pretty recruiter
@@ -836,7 +836,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<<case "Schoolteacher">>
- A ''schoolteacher'' can be selected once the [[Schoolroom|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Schoolroom"]] facility is built. Schoolteachers increase the rate at which students in the schoolroom learn. Good Schoolteachers are older than 35, beautiful, @@.cyan;intelligent@@, and educated.
+ A ''schoolteacher'' can be selected once the [[Schoolroom|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Schoolroom"]] facility is built. Schoolteachers increase the rate at which students in the schoolroom learn. Good Schoolteachers are older than 35, beautiful, @@.cyan;intelligent,@@ and educated.
<<case "Stewardess">>
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>-- Lawrence, W. G., //Guide to Modern Slavery, 2037 Edition////
- <br><br>A ''Stewardess'' can be selected once the [[Servants' Quarters|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Servants' Quarters"]] facility is built. Stewardesses increase the upkeep reduction effects of servants working out of the servants' quarters. Being older than 35, having good [[Health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "health"]], @@.cyan;intelligence@@, and [[nymphomania|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nymphomania"]] or [[dominance|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Doms"]] make a good Stewardess.
+ <br><br>A ''Stewardess'' can be selected once the [[Servants' Quarters|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Servants' Quarters"]] facility is built. Stewardesses increase the upkeep reduction effects of servants working out of the servants' quarters. Being older than 35, having good [[Health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "health"]], @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ and [[nymphomania|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nymphomania"]] or [[dominance|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Doms"]] make a good Stewardess.
<<case "Wardeness">>
@@ -1133,7 +1133,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, and being milked.
- <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, and being milked.
+ <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ and being milked.
<br><br>The fetish will increase XX attraction. Boob Fetishists enjoy cowbell collars, breast surgery, and being milked. Milkmaids can become boob fetishists naturally.
@@ -1143,7 +1143,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, anally focused fucktoy service, service in a [[Dairy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Dairy"]] upgraded with reciprocating dildos, the dildo drug dispenser upgrade, anal accessories, and being a painal queen.
- <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, the dildo drug dispenser upgrade, and being a painal queen.
+ <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ the dildo drug dispenser upgrade, and being a painal queen.
<br><br>Buttsluttery will soften the 'hates anal' flaw into 'painal queen,' the 'hates penetration' flaw into 'strugglefuck queen,' and the 'repressed' flaw into 'perverted,' or remove these flaws if a quirk is already present. Buttsluts with vaginas enjoy wearing chastity belts, and all buttsluts enjoy buttock enhancement and anal rejuvenation surgeries. Buttsluts do not mind a lack of hormonal feminization. The fetish will increase XY attraction.
@@ -1151,7 +1151,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<<case "Cumsluts">>
''Cumsluts'' fetishize oral sex and ejaculate.
- <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, the phallic food dispenser upgrade, cum diets, and being a gagfuck queen.
+ <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ the phallic food dispenser upgrade, cum diets, and being a gagfuck queen.
<br><br>Cumsluttery will soften the 'hates oral' flaw into 'gagfuck queen,' the 'hates women' flaw into 'adores men,' and the 'repressed' flaw into 'perverted,' or remove these flaws if a quirk is already present. Cumsluts enjoy cum diets. The fetish will increase XY attraction.
@@ -1161,7 +1161,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, unfocused fucktoy service, and being confident or cutting.
- <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, being confident, and being cutting.
+ <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ being confident, and being cutting.
<br><br>Dominance will remove the apathetic flaw if a quirk is already present. Doms do not mind a lack of hormonal feminization. The fetish will increase XX attraction. Stewardesses and Nurses do better when [[nymphomaniacs|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nymphomania"]]. The [[Head Girl|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Head Girl"]], [[Madam|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Madam"]], [[Schoolteacher|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Schoolteacher"]], [[Stewardess|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Stewardess"]], and [[Nurse|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nurse"]] can become Doms naturally.
@@ -1171,7 +1171,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, or being sinful, a tease, or perverted.
- <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, being sinful, being a tease, and being perverted.
+ <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ being sinful, being a tease, and being perverted.
<br><br>A humiliation fetish will soften the 'bitchy' flaw into 'cutting' and the 'shamefast' flaw into 'tease,' or remove these flaws if a quirk is already present. The fetish will increase XY attraction. Humiliation fetishists enjoy nudity, and like revealing clothing at a lower @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ than other slaves. DJs can become humiliation fetishists naturally.
@@ -1184,7 +1184,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, uncomfortable clothing, being [[funny|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Funny"]] and being a[[strugglefuck queen|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Strugglefuck Queen"]]
<br><br>
- It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, being [[funny|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Funny"]] and being a[[strugglefuck queen|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Strugglefuck Queen"]]
+ It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ being [[funny|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Funny"]] and being a[[strugglefuck queen|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Strugglefuck Queen"]]
<br><br>
Masochism will soften the liberated flaw into advocate or remove this flaw if a quirk is already present. Masochists can be abused without causing deleterious flaws.
@@ -1195,7 +1195,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, having sex while pregnant, adoring men, being a tease, and being romantic.
- <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, adoring men, being a tease, and being romantic.
+ <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ adoring men, being a tease, and being romantic.
<br><br>The fetish will increase XY attraction. Pregnancy fetishists greatly enjoy all kinds of impregnation, and love or hate fertility surgeries depending on what's being changed.
@@ -1215,7 +1215,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
<br><br>The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, unfocused fucktoy service, crawling due to damaged tendons, being caring, being an advocate, and being insecure.
- <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, being caring, being an advocate, and being insecure.
+ <br><br>It can be advanced by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ being caring, being an advocate, and being insecure.
<br><br>Submissiveness will soften the 'arrogant' flaw into 'confident,' the 'apathetic' flaw into 'caring,' and the 'idealistic' flaw into 'romantic,' or remove these flaws if a quirk is already present. The fetish will increase XY attraction. It improves performance at the servant assignment and working in the Servants' Quarters. Attendants do better when submissive, and can become submissives naturally.
@@ -1665,7 +1665,7 @@ ARCOLOGY FACILITIES
<<case "Master Suite">>
- The ''Master Suite'' is the //[[Fucktoy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Fucktoy"]] facility.// Slaves will generate @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@, but at a lower efficiency than on the club. The Suite can be furnished according to [[future society|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Future Societies"]] styles, and doing so will add a slight @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ boost to slaves serving there.
+ The ''Master Suite'' is the //[[Fucktoy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Fucktoy"]] facility.// Slaves will generate @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]],@@ but at a lower efficiency than on the club. The Suite can be furnished according to [[future society|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Future Societies"]] styles, and doing so will add a slight @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ boost to slaves serving there.
<<case "Pit">>
@@ -1761,7 +1761,7 @@ FUTURE SOCIETIES
<br><br>-- Lawrence, W. G., //Guide to Modern Slavery, Online Edition. Accessed April 2, 2032.////
- <br><br>''Future Society Models'' are societal goals the player can select and pursue for the arcology. It is possible to maintain four future society goals at once. The first is unlocked after week 5 for players with greater than rumored(<<print commaNum(3000)>>) @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@, or at game start with the Social Engineering character option; the rest unlock as the player achieves higher @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ levels.
+ <br><br>''Future Society Models'' are societal goals the player can select and pursue for the arcology. It is possible to maintain four future society goals at once. The first is unlocked after week 5 for players with greater than rumored(<<print commaNum(3000)>>) @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]],@@ or at game start with the Social Engineering character option; the rest unlock as the player achieves higher @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ levels.
<br><br>All societies approve of specific things, usually slaves with specific characteristics; some societies also have dislikes. All societies are advanced by the things they approve of and slowed by the things they disapprove of, and all societies give and take @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ when approving and disapproving. All societies unlock unique events, arcology upgrades, and slave behaviors; some even unlock special clothing.
@@ -1802,7 +1802,7 @@ FUTURE SOCIETIES
<<case "Paternalism">>
- ''Paternalism'' is a future society model which approves of @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, slaves choosing their own assignments, good education, mental health treatment, and high [[Health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]]; it disapproves of stupidity and undereducation.
+ ''Paternalism'' is a future society model which approves of @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ slaves choosing their own assignments, good education, mental health treatment, and high [[Health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]]; it disapproves of stupidity and undereducation.
<br> Applies a small @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ boost to all slaves and increases fines paid by citizens who injure whores and public servants.
<br> Increases the @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ penalty for operating an arcade.
<br> Slows increases in the ratio of slaves to citizens.
@@ -1892,7 +1892,7 @@ FUTURE SOCIETIES
<<case "Chattel Religionism">>
- ''Chattel Religionism'' is a future society model which approves of appropriate clothing, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, and [[slave marriages|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Slave Marriages"]]; it disapproves of slutty clothing.
+ ''Chattel Religionism'' is a future society model which approves of appropriate clothing, high @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ and [[slave marriages|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Slave Marriages"]]; it disapproves of slutty clothing.
<br> Applies a small @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ boost to all slaves, and can remove the weekly @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ gain cap.
<br> Drives an increase in the ratio of slaves to citizens.
<br> Can be developed to permanently boost @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ and quicken slaves' mental conditioning.
@@ -2060,7 +2060,7 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<<case "Gingering">>
//Like much of the traditional husbandry terminology, 'gingering' is a term whose meaning in the Free Cities is slowly diverging from its original old world definition. In animal husbandry, especially of horses, gingering is the nearly extinct practice of placing an irritant compound (traditionally ginger, hence the term) inside one of the animal's orifices, typically the anus, in order to make the animal step high, be sprightly, and generally behave energetically due to the discomfort. Though it was sometimes used at shows and competitions, the usual application was to make the animal seem more valuable for sale.
- <br><br>In the Free Cities, 'gingering' is coming to mean any drugging or other temporary adulteration of a slave in order to make her seem more valuable. For poorly broken slaves, stimulants and depressants are both common. These can be applied to make a resistant slave seem less @@.hotpink;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@, or a terrified slave more @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@, though of course this is unreliable.
+ <br><br>In the Free Cities, 'gingering' is coming to mean any drugging or other temporary adulteration of a slave in order to make her seem more valuable. For poorly broken slaves, stimulants and depressants are both common. These can be applied to make a resistant slave seem less @@.hotpink;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ or a terrified slave more @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ though of course this is unreliable.
<br><br>More traditional gingering is also sometimes applied. Many new slaves will naturally present their buttocks if an anal irritant is administered in an attempt to relieve the uncomfortable area. Novices to the slave markets may mistake this for sexual promiscuity, though few experienced brokers are likely to be misled, a clue as to why few experienced brokers seriously oppose gingering.
@@ -2116,7 +2116,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
<br><br>The safest slave society is a stratified slave society. Innovative Free Cities slaveowners are carefully differentiating their chattel, ensuring that favored slaves are interposed between them and the masses of their lesser stock. This is one of the oldest principles of leadership, ensuring that the grind of day-to-day direction and correction comes from subordinate leaders, while rewards and planning come from the top. The addition of sexuality to this model simply means that many Free Cities slaves get it, so to speak, from both ends.
- <br><br>There can be great advantages for talented and hardworking slaves. Out in the old world, crime, war, natural disasters, and simple crushing want often strike with little distinction based on @@.cyan;intelligence@@, skill, or strength. A truly excellent individual serving in a well-thought-out arcology can rise to a position of considerable @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ and power on her merits. It would be foolish to over-romanticize the reality of slavery, however, for all that advancement rests entirely on the whim of her owner. Talent can count for little for girls unlucky enough to find themselves owned by a capricious master.
+ <br><br>There can be great advantages for talented and hardworking slaves. Out in the old world, crime, war, natural disasters, and simple crushing want often strike with little distinction based on @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ skill, or strength. A truly excellent individual serving in a well-thought-out arcology can rise to a position of considerable @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ and power on her merits. It would be foolish to over-romanticize the reality of slavery, however, for all that advancement rests entirely on the whim of her owner. Talent can count for little for girls unlucky enough to find themselves owned by a capricious master.
<br><br> -- Lawrence, J. K., and Bolingbroke, D. S., __Trends in Free Cities Culture, 2031__ //Journal of Modern Social Sciences, International Edition, February 2032////
@@ -2679,14 +2679,14 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
<br> ''Slaving and Raiding'' will directly bring in cash and (occasionally) slaves, with the amounts and quality increasing with the force's development. All three will occur every week, but the focus will determine the primary result.
- <br><br>''Rules of Engagement:'' This will determine how carefully the force uses its weapons, and affect its change in @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@, as well as events seen. Will they hold their fire unless fired upon? Or will they call in an artillery strike on a refugee convoy that took a potshot at them?
+ <br><br>''Rules of Engagement:'' This will determine how carefully the force uses its weapons, and affect its change in @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]],@@ as well as events seen. Will they hold their fire unless fired upon? Or will they call in an artillery strike on a refugee convoy that took a potshot at them?
<br> ''Hold Fire'' will restrict the force to only returning fire if they're fired upon.
<br> ''Limited Fire'' will permit some proactive fire from the force (to eliminate known threats).
<br> ''Free Fire'' will permit the force to shoot at anything/anyone, at any time, for any reason.
- <br><br>''Accountability:'' This will determine how accountable the force is for its actions outside the Arcology, and affect its change in @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@, as well as events seen. Will you punish them if they massacre a caravan for one choice slave girl? Or shoot random civilians for their valuables?
+ <br><br>''Accountability:'' This will determine how accountable the force is for its actions outside the Arcology, and affect its change in @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]],@@ as well as events seen. Will you punish them if they massacre a caravan for one choice slave girl? Or shoot random civilians for their valuables?
<br> ''Strict Accountability'' will ensure the force avoids committing atrocities (other than immense collateral damage if free-fire is enabled).
diff --git a/src/npc/abort.tw b/src/npc/abort.tw
index 5422596447b..1fdbbde81c6 100644
--- a/src/npc/abort.tw
+++ b/src/npc/abort.tw
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ The remote surgery makes aborting a pregnancy quick and efficient. $activeSlave.
dully obedient. $He has been broken to slave life so thoroughly that even this is neither surprising nor affecting. $He is @@.gold;terrified of your power@@ over $his body.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
<<else>>
- @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development@@, since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
+ @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development,@@ since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
index db359a96d01..fab881fec83 100644
--- a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
+++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
@@ -1525,7 +1525,7 @@ Her nationality is $activeSlave.nationality.
<<elseif $PC.career == "celebrity">>
one free level of @@.cyan;entertainment skill.@@
<<elseif $PC.career == "escort">>
- two free levels of @@.cyan;sex skills@@, one free level of @@.cyan;prostitution skill@@, and one free level of @@.cyan;entertainment skill.@@
+ two free levels of @@.cyan;sex skills,@@ one free level of @@.cyan;prostitution skill,@@ and one free level of @@.cyan;entertainment skill.@@
<<elseif $PC.career == "servant">>
@@.mediumaquamarine;+10 trust@@ and @@.hotpink;+10 devotion.@@
<<elseif $PC.career == "gang">>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw b/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw
index 32a62ab06e1..0963a76f700 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ before calling in the _animal.species. The _animal.species slowly saunters up to
Since $he is well broken, @@.lime;losing $his virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you@@.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20) && ($activeSlave.devotion < 50)>>
- @@.lime;Losing $his virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you@@, though $he is @@.gold;fearful@@ that you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
+ @@.lime;Losing $his virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you,@@ though $he is @@.gold;fearful@@ that you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -50) && ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
$He is clearly @@.mediumorchid;unhappy@@ in the manner in which $his virginity has been taken, and $he @@.gold;fears@@ you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ before calling in the _animal.species. The _animal.species slowly saunters up to
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
- Having $his @@.lime;pearl of great price taken@@ by a mere beast has @@.mediumorchid;reinforced the hatred $he holds towards you@@, and $he is @@.gold;terrified@@ you'll only use $him as a plaything for your animals.
+ Having $his @@.lime;pearl of great price taken@@ by a mere beast has @@.mediumorchid;reinforced the hatred $he holds towards you,@@ and $he is @@.gold;terrified@@ you'll only use $him as a plaything for your animals.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10, $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ before calling in the _animal.species. The _animal.species slowly saunters up to
Since $he is well broken, @@.lime;losing $his anal virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you@@.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20) && ($activeSlave.devotion < 50)>>
- @@.lime;Losing $his anal virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you@@, though $he is @@.gold;fearful@@ that you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
+ @@.lime;Losing $his anal virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you,@@ though $he is @@.gold;fearful@@ that you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -50) && ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
$He is clearly @@.mediumorchid;unhappy@@ in the manner in which @@.lime;$his anal virginity has been taken,@@ and $he @@.gold;fears@@ you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ before calling in the _animal.species. The _animal.species slowly saunters up to
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
- Having @@.lime;$his rosebud taken@@ by a mere beast has @@.mediumorchid;reinforced the hatred $he holds towards you@@, and $he is @@.gold;terrified@@ you'll only use $him as a plaything for your animals.
+ Having @@.lime;$his rosebud taken@@ by a mere beast has @@.mediumorchid;reinforced the hatred $he holds towards you,@@ and $he is @@.gold;terrified@@ you'll only use $him as a plaything for your animals.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10, $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/beastFucked.tw b/src/pregmod/beastFucked.tw
index 74e342b4903..75fe3673c42 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/beastFucked.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/beastFucked.tw
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ before calling in the _animal.species. The _animal.species slowly saunters up to
Since $he is well broken, @@.lime;losing $his virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you.@@
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20) && ($activeSlave.devotion <= 50)>>
- @@.lime;Losing $his virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you@@, though $he is @@.gold;fearful@@ that you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
+ @@.lime;Losing $his virginity@@ in such a manner has @@.hotpink;increased $his submission to you,@@ though $he is @@.gold;fearful@@ that you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -50) && ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
$He is clearly @@.mediumorchid;unhappy@@ in the manner in which $his virginity has been taken, and $he @@.gold;fears@@ you'll decide to only use $him to sate your animals' lust.
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ before calling in the _animal.species. The _animal.species slowly saunters up to
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
- Having $his @@.lime;pearl of great price taken@@ by a mere beast has @@.mediumorchid;reinforced the hatred $he holds towards you@@, and $he is @@.gold;terrified@@ you'll only use $him as a plaything for your animals.
+ Having $his @@.lime;pearl of great price taken@@ by a mere beast has @@.mediumorchid;reinforced the hatred $he holds towards you,@@ and $he is @@.gold;terrified@@ you'll only use $him as a plaything for your animals.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10, $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/csec.tw b/src/pregmod/csec.tw
index dba02968f3d..111f2d8b3bc 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/csec.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/csec.tw
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ Performing a cesarean section is trivial for the remote surgery to carry out. $a
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy">>
$He's a little disappointed $he didn't get to give birth, but can't wait to get pregnant again.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
- $He is @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development@@, since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
+ $He is @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development,@@ since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
$He is broken enough to accept your control of $his pregnancies.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw b/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
index cc64e709f38..ece810df530 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
<<else>>
You know that signal, but $he isn't allowed to get fucked, so you reposition $him so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he drinks from $milkTap.slaveName's tits. With every thrust against the moaning slave, you push $him into the grinning $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat.
<</if>>
- You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with milk and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's free nipple to prevent _him2 from feeling left out. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting from $his meal<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) || canDoAnal($activeSlave)>> and from the pleasure you drove into $him<</if>>. Both slaves @@.hotpink;loved the attention@@, though $milkTap.slaveName even more so thanks to _his2 lighter breasts.
+ You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with milk and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's free nipple to prevent _him2 from feeling left out. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting from $his meal<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) || canDoAnal($activeSlave)>> and from the pleasure you drove into $him<</if>>. Both slaves @@.hotpink;loved the attention,@@ though $milkTap.slaveName even more so thanks to _his2 lighter breasts.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4, $milkTap.devotion += 4>>
<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
$activeSlave.slaveName got off quite strongly from the growing pressure within $him, @@.hotpink;cementing@@ $his @@.lime;first fucking@@ as something special.
@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
<<else>>
You know that signal, but $he isn't allowed to get fucked, so you reposition $his so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he deepthroats $milkTap.slaveName. With every thrust against the moaning slave, both you and $milkTap.slaveName come closer to climax.
<</if>>
- You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with ejaculate and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's breasts to prevent _him2 from feeling left out from your attention. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting from $his meal and from the pleasure you drove into $him. Both slaves @@.hotpink;loved the attention@@, though $milkTap.slaveName even more so after so much relief.
+ You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with ejaculate and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's breasts to prevent _him2 from feeling left out from your attention. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting from $his meal and from the pleasure you drove into $him. Both slaves @@.hotpink;loved the attention,@@ though $milkTap.slaveName even more so after so much relief.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<<set $milkTap.devotion += 4>>
<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fSlaveSelfImpreg.tw b/src/pregmod/fSlaveSelfImpreg.tw
index 8c429fe7ba3..d3880932947 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fSlaveSelfImpreg.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fSlaveSelfImpreg.tw
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
<<if ($activeSlave.dick > 6 && $activeSlave.balls <= 4)>>
Although $he is aroused by the idea of impregnating $himself, $activeSlave.slaveName's cock is simply too large to easily become erect. A quick injection of vasodilators later, and $he's ready to go. Because $he's so eager, you simply stand back and let the magic happen.
<<if ($activeSlave.vagina == 0 && $activeSlave.mpreg != 1) || ($activeSlave.anus == 0 && $activeSlave.mpreg == 1)>>
- As ways to lose one's virginity go, this is one hell of a way to do it. Without needing any instruction, $activeSlave.slaveName grasps $his massive shaft in both hands and feeds it around so the head is <<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>kissing $his anus<<else>>nestled between $his own labia<</if>>. $He shows only the tiniest hesitation before easing $his cock inside $his own body, @@.lime;<<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>through $his virgin backdoor<<else>>past $his maidenhead<</if>>@@, until you can tell the head is nestled snugly against $his own cervix.
+ As ways to lose one's virginity go, this is one hell of a way to do it. Without needing any instruction, $activeSlave.slaveName grasps $his massive shaft in both hands and feeds it around so the head is <<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>kissing $his anus<<else>>nestled between $his own labia<</if>>. $He shows only the tiniest hesitation before easing $his cock inside $his own body, @@.lime;<<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>through $his virgin backdoor<<else>>past $his maidenhead<</if>>,@@ until you can tell the head is nestled snugly against $his own cervix.
<<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>
<<set $activeSlave.anus = 1>>
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveVagConsummate.tw b/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveVagConsummate.tw
index d395b58d233..a2ea01a5871 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveVagConsummate.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveVagConsummate.tw
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
<</if>>
<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "submissive") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60) && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
- $He presents $his virgin pussy to $slaverapistx.slaveName without protest. This act @@.lime; breaks in $his pussy@@, and @@.hotpink;reminds $him@@ of $his status as a submissive slave.
+ $He presents $his virgin pussy to $slaverapistx.slaveName without protest. This act @@.lime; breaks in $his pussy,@@ and @@.hotpink;reminds $him@@ of $his status as a submissive slave.
<<set $activeSlave.vagina = 1>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<<set $activeSlave.fetishStrength += 1>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw b/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw
index ea61c5f1732..61bae5f6766 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
<</if>>
<</if>>
<br><br>
- You congratulate yourself on having made the right decision as $activeSlave.slaveName @@.hotpink;grows ever closer to you@@, and ever larger in $his middle, over the course of the next week.
+ You congratulate yourself on having made the right decision as $activeSlave.slaveName @@.hotpink;grows ever closer to you,@@ and ever larger in $his middle, over the course of the next week.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw b/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
index 02ceaea6f83..a515bac07e2 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@
<</if>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].fetish == "pregnancy" && $slaves[$i].fetishKnown == 0>>
<<if $slaves[$i].preg < -1>>
- $His collar's display reveals all sorts of personal information about $his womb, which nearly causes $him to have a @@.mediumorchid;mental breakdown@@, painting $him as an infertile @@.lightcoral;pregnancy fetishist.@@
+ $His collar's display reveals all sorts of personal information about $his womb, which nearly causes $him to have a @@.mediumorchid;mental breakdown,@@ painting $him as an infertile @@.lightcoral;pregnancy fetishist.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
<<else>>
$His collar's display reveals all sorts of personal information about $his womb, @@.hotpink;oddly exciting@@ $him. It would seem $he has a @@.lightcoral;pregnancy fetish!@@
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion <= 50>>
$He is dully obedient. $He has been broken to slave life so thoroughly that even this is neither surprising nor affecting.
<<else>>
- $He is @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development@@, since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
+ $He is @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development,@@ since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
<</if>>
<<elseif ($slaves[$i].fetish == "pregnancy") && ($slaves[$i].devotion > 50)>>
- $He carries $his fake belly @@.hotpink;with pride@@, eager for the day you give $him one of $his own.
+ $He carries $his fake belly @@.hotpink;with pride,@@ eager for the day you give $him one of $his own.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
<<elseif ($slaves[$i].fetish == "pregnancy") && ($slaves[$i].pregKnown == 0) && ($slaves[$i].ovaries ==1 || $slaves[$i].mpreg == 1)>>
The fake belly $he wears @@.mediumorchid;reminds $him@@ that $he isn't pregnant with a child.
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion <= 50>>
dully obedient. $He has been broken to slave life so thoroughly that even this is neither surprising nor affecting.
<<else>>
- @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development@@, since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
+ @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development,@@ since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he'll be able to fuck better now.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/saInflation.tw b/src/pregmod/saInflation.tw
index 68f7d4fa87d..1645ead7761 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/saInflation.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/saInflation.tw
@@ -257,13 +257,13 @@
You no longer have a functional dairy. @@.yellow;$His inflation regimen has been ended.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].inflation = 0, $slaves[$i].inflationType = "none", $slaves[$i].inflationMethod = 0, SetBellySize($slaves[$i])>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 3>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of milk, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next gorging.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of milk, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next gorging.
<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10, $slaves[$i].devotion += 5, $slaves[$i].trust += 5>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 2>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of milk, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next feeding.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of milk, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next feeding.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4, $slaves[$i].trust += 4>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 1>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of milk, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next meal.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of milk, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next meal.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflationMethod == 2>>
@@ -271,13 +271,13 @@
You no longer have a functional dairy. @@.yellow;$His inflation regimen has been ended.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].inflation = 0, $slaves[$i].inflationType = "none", $slaves[$i].inflationMethod = 0, SetBellySize($slaves[$i])>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 3>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of milk, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of milk, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10, $slaves[$i].devotion += 4, $slaves[$i].trust += 4>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 2>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of milk, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of milk, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 1>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of milk, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of milk, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1, $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflationMethod == 3>>
@@ -286,13 +286,13 @@
$slaves[_saf].slaveName is no longer lactating and thus can no longer keep $slaves[$i].slaveName filled with milk. @@.yellow;$His inflation regimen has been ended.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].inflation = 0, $slaves[$i].inflationType = "none", $slaves[$i].inflationMethod = 0, $slaves[$i].milkSource = 0, SetBellySize($slaves[$i])>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 3>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from $slaves[_saf].slaveName until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of milk, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next gorging.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from $slaves[_saf].slaveName until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of milk, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next gorging.
<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10, $slaves[$i].devotion += 5, $slaves[$i].trust += 5>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 2>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from $slaves[_saf].slaveName until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of milk, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next feeding.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from $slaves[_saf].slaveName until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of milk, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next feeding.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4, $slaves[$i].trust += 4>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 1>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from $slaves[_saf].slaveName until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of milk, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next meal.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from $slaves[_saf].slaveName until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of milk, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next meal.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -389,13 +389,13 @@
You no longer have a functional cum dairy. @@.yellow;$His inflation regimen has been ended.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].inflation = 0, $slaves[$i].inflationType = "none", $slaves[$i].inflationMethod = 0, SetBellySize($slaves[$i])>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 3>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of cum, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next gorging.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of cum, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next gorging.
<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10, $slaves[$i].devotion += 5, $slaves[$i].trust += 5>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 2>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of cum, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next feeding.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of cum, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next feeding.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4, $slaves[$i].trust += 4>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 1>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of cum, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next meal.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of cum, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next meal.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflationMethod == 2>>
@@ -403,13 +403,13 @@
You no longer have a functional cum dairy. @@.yellow;$His inflation regimen has been ended.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].inflation = 0, $slaves[$i].inflationType = "none", $slaves[$i].inflationMethod = 0, SetBellySize($slaves[$i])>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 3>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of cum, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of cum, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10, $slaves[$i].devotion += 4, $slaves[$i].trust += 4>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 2>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of cum, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of cum, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 1>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of cum, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;happily@@ fills $his rectum from the dairy tap until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of cum, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ though $he wishes $he could have swallowed it instead.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion++, $slaves[$i].trust++>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflationMethod == 3>>
@@ -418,13 +418,13 @@
$slaves[_saf].slaveName has no longer has testicles and thus can no longer keep $slaves[$i].slaveName filled with cum. @@.yellow;$His inflation regimen has been ended.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].inflation = 0, $slaves[$i].inflationType = "none", $slaves[$i].inflationMethod = 0, $slaves[$i].cumSource = 0, SetBellySize($slaves[$i])>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 3>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks $slaves[_saf].slaveName's <<if $slaves[_saf].dick > 0>>cock<<else>>cum hole<</if>> until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of cum, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next gorging.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks $slaves[_saf].slaveName's <<if $slaves[_saf].dick > 0>>cock<<else>>cum hole<</if>> until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of cum, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his full belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next gorging.
<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10, $slaves[$i].devotion += 5, $slaves[$i].trust += 5>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 2>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks $slaves[_saf].slaveName's <<if $slaves[_saf].dick > 0>>cock<<else>>cum hole<</if>> until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of cum, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next feeding.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks $slaves[_saf].slaveName's <<if $slaves[_saf].dick > 0>>cock<<else>>cum hole<</if>> until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of cum, leaving $him looking pregnant. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next feeding.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4, $slaves[$i].trust += 4>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 1>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks $slaves[_saf].slaveName's <<if $slaves[_saf].dick > 0>>cock<<else>>cum hole<</if>> until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of cum, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next meal.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ sucks $slaves[_saf].slaveName's <<if $slaves[_saf].dick > 0>>cock<<else>>cum hole<</if>> until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of cum, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his sloshing belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next meal.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -483,13 +483,13 @@
<</if>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].behavioralFlaw == "gluttonous">>
<<if $slaves[$i].inflation == 3>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ stuffs $his face with servings of slave food until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of the paste, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his stuffed belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next gorging.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ stuffs $his face with servings of slave food until $his stomach is @@.red;painfully bloated@@ with nearly two gallons of the paste, leaving $him looking ready to burst. $He rubs $his stuffed belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next gorging.
<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10, $slaves[$i].devotion += 10, $slaves[$i].trust += 10>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 2>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ stuffs $his face with servings of slave food until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of the paste, giving $him quite the food baby. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next meal.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ stuffs $his face with servings of slave food until $his stomach is bloated with nearly four liters of the paste, giving $him quite the food baby. $He rubs $his taut belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next meal.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 7, $slaves[$i].trust += 7>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].inflation == 1>>
- Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ stuffs $his face with servings of slave food until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of the paste, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his stuffed belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently@@, anticipating $his next helping.
+ Throughout the week, $he @@.hotpink;eagerly@@ stuffs $his face with servings of slave food until $his stomach is bloated with nearly two liters of the paste, leaving $his belly noticeably distended. $He rubs $his stuffed belly @@.mediumaquamarine;contently,@@ anticipating $his next helping.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 5, $slaves[$i].trust += 5>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw b/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw
index b80b3f57553..51a82d36656 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw
@@ -189,21 +189,21 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
You awake some time later in a recovery room<<if _concubinePresent > 0>>, $Concubine.slaveName beside you<</if>>, your stomach extremely sore; a quick glance at the prominent scar tells you everything you need to know. Seeing you're awake, $HeadGirl.slaveName catches your attention. In $his arms
<<switch _curBabies>>
<<case 1>>
- is @@.lime;your baby <<if _gender == "XX">>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from $his breast,<</if>>
+ is @@.lime;your baby <<if _gender == "XX">>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from $his breast,<</if>>
<<case 2>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn twins@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from $his breasts,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn twins,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from $his breasts,<</if>>
<<case 3>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn triplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn triplets,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 4>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn quadruplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn quadruplets,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 5>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn quintuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn quintuplets,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 6>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn sextuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn sextuplets,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 7>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn septuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn septuplets,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 8>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn octuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn octuplets,@@ <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<</switch>>
alive and well.
<<elseif _concubinePresent == 1>>
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
<</if>>
<<if $Cash4Babies == 1>>
<<set _seed = random(1,10)>>
- Alternatively, since it is @@.orange;legal to sell slave babies@@, your child should be worth quite a pretty ¤ at auction.
+ Alternatively, since it is @@.orange;legal to sell slave babies,@@ your child should be worth quite a pretty ¤ at auction.
<</if>>
<br><br>
<span id="choice">What will it be?
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
index 96d075bd9fc..184beabea80 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
@@ -177,16 +177,16 @@ Now you only have to wait for $him to wake up.
/* ear changes - WIP for future ear shape options */
$He runs $his hands over $his ears, finding
<<if $args[0].hears <= -2 && $args[1].hears > -2>>
- that, @@.gold;much to $his horror@@, there is nothing closing up $his ear canals, and this @@.red;world of silence@@ is $his new reality.
+ that, @@.gold;much to $his horror,@@ there is nothing closing up $his ear canals, and this @@.red;world of silence@@ is $his new reality.
<<set $args[0].trust -= 15>>
<<elseif $args[0].hears == -1 && $args[1].hears > -1>>
- that, @@.gold;much to $his distress@@, there is nothing blocking $his ear canals, and $his @@.red;diminished hearing@@ is all natural.
+ that, @@.gold;much to $his distress,@@ there is nothing blocking $his ear canals, and $his @@.red;diminished hearing@@ is all natural.
<<set $args[0].trust -= 5>>
<<elseif $args[0].hears > -2 && $args[1].hears <= -2>>
- that, @@.hotpink;much to $his elation@@, $he @@.green;can now hear@@. While $he may question your motives, this is a gift $he will treasure.
+ that, @@.hotpink;much to $his elation,@@ $he @@.green;can now hear@@. While $he may question your motives, this is a gift $he will treasure.
<<set $args[0].devotion += 15, $args[0].trust += 10>>
<<elseif $args[0].hears > -1 && $args[1].hears == -1>>
- that, @@.hotpink;much to $his joy@@, $he can now @@.green;hear much more clearly@@. While $he may question your motives, this is a gift $he will appreciate.
+ that, @@.hotpink;much to $his joy,@@ $he can now @@.green;hear much more clearly@@. While $he may question your motives, this is a gift $he will appreciate.
<<set $args[0].devotion += 5, $args[0].trust += 3>>
<<else>>
nothing particularly noteworthy.
@@ -1452,7 +1452,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for $him to wake up.
amazing addition to $his body is @@.hotpink;surely welcome@@. $He moans as $he fondles $his new balls, groaning as $he rolls their weight around. $His face is flushed by the time $he's done "examining" them.
<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
<<else>>
- addition to $his body is @@.mediumaquamarine;annoying@@, clearly. The frustrated irritation on $his face contrasts sharply with the actions of $his hands, which are busy causing <<if $args[0].dick>>$his dick to become engorged with blood<<else>>precum to start flowing freely<</if>>. Catching $himself, $he takes a few soothing breaths to calm $his body down.
+ addition to $his body is @@.mediumaquamarine;annoying,@@ clearly. The frustrated irritation on $his face contrasts sharply with the actions of $his hands, which are busy causing <<if $args[0].dick>>$his dick to become engorged with blood<<else>>precum to start flowing freely<</if>>. Catching $himself, $he takes a few soothing breaths to calm $his body down.
<<set $args[0].trust += 5>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $args[0].balls > $args[1].balls>>
@@ -3040,7 +3040,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for $him to wake up.
amazing addition to $his body is @@.hotpink;surely welcome@@. $He moans as $he rubs against $his new balls, groaning as their weight shifts around. $His face is flushed by the time $he's done "examining" them.
<<set $args[0].devotion +=5>>
<<else>>
- addition to $his body is @@.mediumaquamarine;annoying@@, clearly. The frustrated irritation on $his face contrasts sharply with the actions of $his hips, which are busy causing <<if $args[0].dick>>$his dick to become engorged with blood<<else>>precum to start flowing freely<</if>>. Catching $himself, $he takes a few soothing breaths to calm $his body down.
+ addition to $his body is @@.mediumaquamarine;annoying,@@ clearly. The frustrated irritation on $his face contrasts sharply with the actions of $his hips, which are busy causing <<if $args[0].dick>>$his dick to become engorged with blood<<else>>precum to start flowing freely<</if>>. Catching $himself, $he takes a few soothing breaths to calm $his body down.
<<set $args[0].trust += 5>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $args[0].balls > $args[1].balls>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/seBirthWidgets.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/seBirthWidgets.tw
index 29b4af77374..36bf36e713e 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/seBirthWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/seBirthWidgets.tw
@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ This decriptions can be expanded with more outcomes later. But it's not practica
<</if>>
<<if $slaves[$i].laborCount > 0>>
<br>
- $He has @@.green;given birth before@@, so $he knows just what to do.
+ $He has @@.green;given birth before,@@ so $he knows just what to do.
<</if>>
<<if $slaves[$i].hips > 0>>
<br>
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ This decriptions can be expanded with more outcomes later. But it's not practica
<</if>>
<<if setup.nurseCareers.includes($slaves[$i].career) && $slaves[$i].fetish != "mindbroken" && $slaves[$i].muscles >= -95>>
<br>
- Thanks to $his @@.green;previous career@@, childbirth went smoothly.
+ Thanks to $his @@.green;previous career,@@ childbirth went smoothly.
<</if>>
<<if $slaves[$i].intelligenceImplant >= 15>>
<br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw
index c464b36b972..6ff3124e84e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<<link "$He uses $his muscles to manhandle him">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName stomps over to the drunken delinquent, who finds himself sobering up with each step the muscular woman makes in his direction. Soon he finds himself <<if ($activeSlave.height > 170)>>staring up at her $activeSlave.faceShape face<<elseif ($activeSlave.height > 150)>>eye to eye with her $activeSlave.faceShape face<<else>>looking down at her $activeSlave.faceShape face<</if>> as $he grips him by the shoulders and lifts him bodily off of the ground. The man squeals with terror as he begs forgiveness for his affront to you, but $activeSlave.slaveName simply tosses him away from your presence as if discharging him from a bar. Word of your herculean protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond@@, with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior so strong $he can throw any man the breadth of a room in a single heave.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName stomps over to the drunken delinquent, who finds himself sobering up with each step the muscular woman makes in his direction. Soon he finds himself <<if ($activeSlave.height > 170)>>staring up at her $activeSlave.faceShape face<<elseif ($activeSlave.height > 150)>>eye to eye with her $activeSlave.faceShape face<<else>>looking down at her $activeSlave.faceShape face<</if>> as $he grips him by the shoulders and lifts him bodily off of the ground. The man squeals with terror as he begs forgiveness for his affront to you, but $activeSlave.slaveName simply tosses him away from your presence as if discharging him from a bar. Word of your herculean protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior so strong $he can throw any man the breadth of a room in a single heave.
<<set $rep += 500>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $he can throw a man the breadth of a room in a single heave.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He intimidates him with $his towering height">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName calmly strides over to the drunken delinquent and simply towers over him with a glower on her $activeSlave.faceShape face. The man quickly finds himself sobering up and moves to run from the scene with all the drunken haste he can muster. Unfortunately for him, $activeSlave.slaveName matches his pace with a brisk power-walk, and the citizen soon finds himself face down on the pavement after a swift strike to the back of the head. Word of your giant protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond@@, with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior twice the height of any man.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName calmly strides over to the drunken delinquent and simply towers over him with a glower on her $activeSlave.faceShape face. The man quickly finds himself sobering up and moves to run from the scene with all the drunken haste he can muster. Unfortunately for him, $activeSlave.slaveName matches his pace with a brisk power-walk, and the citizen soon finds himself face down on the pavement after a swift strike to the back of the head. Word of your giant protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior twice the height of any man.
<<set $rep += 500>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $he is twice the height of any man.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He distracts him with her beautiful face">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName seductively saunters over to the drunken delinquent and poses alluringly nearby. The man can't help but become entranced by her gorgeous $activeSlave.faceShape face, and follows her like a lost puppy as $he beckons with one outstretched finger. $activeSlave.slaveName lures her prey into a nearby alley before slamming her fist into the unsuspecting drunkard's face, leaving him knocked out cold on the floor before returning to guard you. Word of your beautiful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond@@, with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior unmatched by any woman in the world in her good looks.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName seductively saunters over to the drunken delinquent and poses alluringly nearby. The man can't help but become entranced by her gorgeous $activeSlave.faceShape face, and follows her like a lost puppy as $he beckons with one outstretched finger. $activeSlave.slaveName lures her prey into a nearby alley before slamming her fist into the unsuspecting drunkard's face, leaving him knocked out cold on the floor before returning to guard you. Word of your beautiful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior unmatched by any woman in the world in her good looks.
<<set $rep += 500>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $his beauty is unmatched by any woman in the world.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He de-escalates the situation with tact">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName walks over to the man, puts an arm about his shoulders and explains to him <<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>in hushed whispers<<else>>with rapid sign language<</if>> the severity of the situation. The man sobers up quickly as the reality of his actions set in and he soon beats a hasty exit from the scene as $activeSlave.slaveName returns to guard your body. Word of your tactful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond@@, with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose silver tongue is the envy of many politicians.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName walks over to the man, puts an arm about his shoulders and explains to him <<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>in hushed whispers<<else>>with rapid sign language<</if>> the severity of the situation. The man sobers up quickly as the reality of his actions set in and he soon beats a hasty exit from the scene as $activeSlave.slaveName returns to guard your body. Word of your tactful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose silver tongue is the envy of many politicians.
<<set $rep += 500>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "$His silver tongue is the envy of many in the arcology.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He fights him hand to hand">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName quickly maneuvers over to the man and strikes him low in the stomach, robbing him of breath in a single strike. The man sobers up somewhat and raises his arms to defend himself, but finds himself outmatched by $activeSlave.slaveName's skillful attacks. It doesn't take long for $activeSlave.slaveName to reduce the man to a battered heap on the ground with her hands alone, after which $he soon returns to you to guard your body. Word of your martial protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond@@, with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose hands are deadlier than many weapons.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName quickly maneuvers over to the man and strikes him low in the stomach, robbing him of breath in a single strike. The man sobers up somewhat and raises his arms to defend himself, but finds himself outmatched by $activeSlave.slaveName's skillful attacks. It doesn't take long for $activeSlave.slaveName to reduce the man to a battered heap on the ground with her hands alone, after which $he soon returns to you to guard your body. Word of your martial protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose hands are deadlier than many weapons.
<<set $rep += 500>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $his hands are deadlier than many weapons.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<<link "Spend a night as equals">>
<<replace "#result">>
<<if $MixedMarriage == 1 && $activeSlave.relationship == -3 && $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist >= 60>>
- You instruct your slave-wife $activeSlave.slaveName to put on her best dress and meet you at the door. You spend a nice night out with her, taking in the sights before heading to a nice restaurant, where you receive the occasional @@.green;admiring glance@@ from your paternalistic citizens. Afterward, you attend a show at a venue known for its respectful plays acted out by talented slaves, and you conclude the evening by returning to your penthouse to have loving sex in your master bed. When you wake the next morning, you're greeted with a long kiss and @@.hotpink;an adoring look@@, before $activeSlave.slaveName slides out of bed to begin her morning duties.
+ You instruct your slave-wife $activeSlave.slaveName to put on her best dress and meet you at the door. You spend a nice night out with her, taking in the sights before heading to a nice restaurant, where you receive the occasional @@.green;admiring glance@@ from your paternalistic citizens. Afterward, you attend a show at a venue known for its respectful plays acted out by talented slaves, and you conclude the evening by returning to your penthouse to have loving sex in your master bed. When you wake the next morning, you're greeted with a long kiss and @@.hotpink;an adoring look,@@ before $activeSlave.slaveName slides out of bed to begin her morning duties.
<<set $rep += 100>>
<<else>>
You instruct $activeSlave.slaveName to put on her best dress and meet you at the door. You spend a nice night out with her, walking along the club to a nice restaurant and then seeing a show before returning home for loving sex in your master bed. $He nestles under your arm, falling to sleep well before you, a @@.hotpink;contented@@ smile on her face. There's a reason $he gets to sleep much quicker than you do. You lie awake for some time, remembering the @@.red;doubting and disapproving@@ faces of other prosperous citizens whenever they realized that you were treating a slave as an equal this evening.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
index 43d72c5d9a4..05744e9d2ca 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen
<<if $cash >= 1000>>
<br><<link "Offer to sponsor her for a promotional video">>
<<replace "#result">>
- Despite her hulking, muscular exterior, the citizen proves to be a shrewd and capable advertisement executive as well. The two of you sit beside a hefty dumbbell rack for some time and together craft a simple promotional ad campaign featuring the herculean physical form of the citizen. Shooting the video is simple, footage of the citizen going about her various fitness routines is inspiring enough, and soon her every muscle and sinew is being broadcast across the world to laud the physical achievements of $arcologies[0].name. Your citizens are @@.green;filled with pride@@, knowing the rest of the world was just awed by their pursuit of bodily perfection.
+ Despite her hulking, muscular exterior, the citizen proves to be a shrewd and capable advertisement executive as well. The two of you sit beside a hefty dumbbell rack for some time and together craft a simple promotional ad campaign featuring the herculean physical form of the citizen. Shooting the video is simple, footage of the citizen going about her various fitness routines is inspiring enough, and soon her every muscle and sinew is being broadcast across the world to laud the physical achievements of $arcologies[0].name. Your citizens are @@.green;filled with pride,@@ knowing the rest of the world was just awed by their pursuit of bodily perfection.
<<set $rep += 1000, $cash -= 1000>>
<</replace>>
<</link>> // This will cost <<print cashFormat(1000)>>. //
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index a8db49808dd..c72adcd0318 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -4441,7 +4441,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> has been sent to del
<<else>>
chest
<</if>>
- planting your moistening pussy over the $girl's face. You lean forward, teasing $his twitching cock, as you grind against her face. As $he begins to moan with lust, you quickly bind the base of $his penis, denying her release. You grind your cunt into her face, telling $him that YOU are the one who'll be orgasming here, not $him. Only once you have taught $him $his place by soaking her face in your cum do you release her dick and lean back to avoid the coming blast. Just undoing the binding is enough to set her over the edge, coating her <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 1500>>pregnancy<<else>>belly<</if>> in her virile sperm. You turn around and order the exhausted $girl to clean $himself up and go back to her assignment; $he @@.hotpink;complies meekly@@, understanding that having a potent penis is meaningless in her position.<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "none">>The next time $he walks past your office, you can't help notice the growing erection $he carries. @@.coral; Your dominating display has left $him craving domination.@@<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "submissive", $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>><</if>>
+ planting your moistening pussy over the $girl's face. You lean forward, teasing $his twitching cock, as you grind against her face. As $he begins to moan with lust, you quickly bind the base of $his penis, denying her release. You grind your cunt into her face, telling $him that YOU are the one who'll be orgasming here, not $him. Only once you have taught $him $his place by soaking her face in your cum do you release her dick and lean back to avoid the coming blast. Just undoing the binding is enough to set her over the edge, coating her <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 1500>>pregnancy<<else>>belly<</if>> in her virile sperm. You turn around and order the exhausted $girl to clean $himself up and go back to her assignment; $he @@.hotpink;complies meekly,@@ understanding that having a potent penis is meaningless in her position.<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "none">>The next time $he walks past your office, you can't help notice the growing erection $he carries. @@.coral; Your dominating display has left $him craving domination.@@<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "submissive", $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>><</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<</replace>>
<<else>>
@@ -4495,7 +4495,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> has been sent to del
<<else>>
flat
<</if>>
- butt sinking your cock deep into her <<if $activeSlave.anus == 0>>virgin<</if>> asspussy. You lean forward, running your hands across $his nipples<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> and _belly <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 3000>>pregnant <</if>>belly<</if>> as you move to tease her stiff prick. Between your dick in $his ass and your hand on $his cock, $he rapidly approaches her peak. Quickly, you bind the base of $his penis, denying her release and eliciting a long moan from the pent-up $girl. You begin thrusting hard, telling $him that YOU are the one who'll be orgasming here, not $him. Only once you have taught $him $his place by filling her asspussy with your cum do you allow her release. Just undoing the binding is enough to set her over the edge, coating the cushions<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> and the bottom of her _belly <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 3000>>pregnant <</if>>belly<</if>> in her virile sperm. You dismount and order the exhausted $girl to clean $himself and the couch up before going back to her assignment; $he @@.hotpink;complies meekly@@, understanding that having a potent penis is meaningless in her position.<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "none">>The next time $he walks past your office, you can't help notice the growing erection $he carries. @@.coral;Your dominating display has left her craving domination.@@<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "submissive", $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>><</if>>
+ butt sinking your cock deep into her <<if $activeSlave.anus == 0>>virgin<</if>> asspussy. You lean forward, running your hands across $his nipples<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> and _belly <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 3000>>pregnant <</if>>belly<</if>> as you move to tease her stiff prick. Between your dick in $his ass and your hand on $his cock, $he rapidly approaches her peak. Quickly, you bind the base of $his penis, denying her release and eliciting a long moan from the pent-up $girl. You begin thrusting hard, telling $him that YOU are the one who'll be orgasming here, not $him. Only once you have taught $him $his place by filling her asspussy with your cum do you allow her release. Just undoing the binding is enough to set her over the edge, coating the cushions<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> and the bottom of her _belly <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 3000>>pregnant <</if>>belly<</if>> in her virile sperm. You dismount and order the exhausted $girl to clean $himself and the couch up before going back to her assignment; $he @@.hotpink;complies meekly,@@ understanding that having a potent penis is meaningless in her position.<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "none">>The next time $he walks past your office, you can't help notice the growing erection $he carries. @@.coral;Your dominating display has left her craving domination.@@<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "submissive", $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>><</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<</replace>>
<</if>>
@@ -6908,7 +6908,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> has been sent to del
<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
and @@.mediumaquamarine;earnestly asks@@ for more.
<<else>>
- and @@.mediumaquamarine;asks earnestly@@, "More plea<<s>>e, <<Master>>."
+ and @@.mediumaquamarine;asks earnestly,@@ "More plea<<s>>e, <<Master>>."
<</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>>
<<= AnalVCheck()>>
@@ -7218,7 +7218,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> has been sent to del
<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
and @@.mediumaquamarine;earnestly asks@@ for more when you get the chance.
<<else>>
- and @@.mediumaquamarine;asks earnestly@@, "Want <<s>>ome more, <<Master>>"
+ and @@.mediumaquamarine;asks earnestly,@@ "Want <<s>>ome more, <<Master>>"
<</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4, $activeSlave.penetrativeCount++, $penetrativeTotal++>>
<<if canImpreg($PC, $activeSlave)>>
@@ -14870,7 +14870,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
$activeSlave.slaveName's cock oozes cum from her intense orgasm, and you command $him to clean it off the floor before $he gets back to her duties.
<</if>>
<<if random(1,4) == 4>>
- @@.lightcoral;You've successfully linked cum and pleasure in her mind@@, guaranteeing $him a confusing few days as $he tries to reconcile this with $his hatred of oral sex.
+ @@.lightcoral;You've successfully linked cum and pleasure in her mind,@@ guaranteeing $him a confusing few days as $he tries to reconcile this with $his hatred of oral sex.
<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "cumslut", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1, $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>>
<<else>>
This has @@.green;broken her of her bad habits.@@
@@ -17351,7 +17351,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<<link "Have mercy on the poor $girl and take her off her cum diet for now">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You see how $activeSlave.slaveName is suffering and you decide to reconsider her dietary prescription. You instruct $assistantName to change <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s diet to exclude cum for now. Slaves who can't eat are unhealthy, and unhealthy slaves are unprofitable slaves. $He is now @@.mediumorchid;more confident that $he can resist you and get her way@@, $he also @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts you a little more@@ to look after her well being.
+ You see how $activeSlave.slaveName is suffering and you decide to reconsider her dietary prescription. You instruct $assistantName to change <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s diet to exclude cum for now. Slaves who can't eat are unhealthy, and unhealthy slaves are unprofitable slaves. $He is now @@.mediumorchid;more confident that $he can resist you and get her way,@@ $he also @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts you a little more@@ to look after her well being.
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5, $activeSlave.devotion -= 5, $activeSlave.dietCum = 0>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -17359,7 +17359,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<br><<link "Force her onto a heavy cum diet, and double up on her ejaculate intake">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You instruct $assistantName to double down on <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s cum diet. Ungrateful little sluts who retch up their expensive food sometimes need tough love. Making her cum-food thicker and more concentrated might help $him to learn that no matter how bad things seem, you can always make them worse. Initially her new heavy cum diet makes no difference in her ability to keep it down, but you tell $him to give it some time. Eventually $he will learn to appreciate cum as the primary ingredient in everything $he ingests. All of your future cumsluts do, sooner or later. $His pathetic tears reveal how @@.gold;helpless $he feels@@, but they don't hide the @@.mediumorchid;streak of rebelliousness@@ that remains burning inside $him.
+ You instruct $assistantName to double down on <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s cum diet. Ungrateful little sluts who retch up their expensive food sometimes need tough love. Making her cum-food thicker and more concentrated might help $him to learn that no matter how bad things seem, you can always make them worse. Initially her new heavy cum diet makes no difference in her ability to keep it down, but you tell $him to give it some time. Eventually $he will learn to appreciate cum as the primary ingredient in everything $he ingests. All of your future cumsluts do, sooner or later. $His pathetic tears reveal how @@.gold;helpless $he feels,@@ but they don't hide the @@.mediumorchid;streak of rebelliousness@@ that remains burning inside $him.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 3, $activeSlave.trust -= 3, $activeSlave.dietCum = 2>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -17367,14 +17367,14 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<br><<link "Give the poor $girl a break and reduce her cum intake to a more modest level">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is on a very heavy cum diet, and it's possible you're forcing $him to take too much, too soon. You decide to give $him a break and instruct $assistantName to reduce, but not eliminate the amount of cum in her diet. Although it doesn't immediately make her hate cum any less, @@.hotpink;$he appreciates your willingness@@ to make things a little less unpleasant for $him. @@.mediumaquamarine;$He is a little less afraid of you too@@, although not as much as if you'd taken her off her cum diet altogether.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is on a very heavy cum diet, and it's possible you're forcing $him to take too much, too soon. You decide to give $him a break and instruct $assistantName to reduce, but not eliminate the amount of cum in her diet. Although it doesn't immediately make her hate cum any less, @@.hotpink;$he appreciates your willingness@@ to make things a little less unpleasant for $him. @@.mediumaquamarine;$He is a little less afraid of you too,@@ although not as much as if you'd taken her off her cum diet altogether.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 2, $activeSlave.trust += 2, $activeSlave.dietCum = 1>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<br><<link "Suppress her gag reflex and double her cum intake for a week">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $He is already on a very heavy cum-based diet, and there's only so much ejaculate you can force a slut to ingest before it negatively affects $his health. However, as a temporary measure, you still have options. You instruct $assistantName to re-double the amount of ejaculate in <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s diet for the week. You also have her closely monitored and injected with anti-nausea drugs to help her hold down her food. Although the idea of being forced to eat large amounts of human reproductive fluid still disgusts $him, the week of having a super-concentrated cum-diet, along with the suppressed reflex to purge it has its effect. Knowing that you monitor and control every aspect of her life @@.hotpink;breaks down her resistance to your will@@, and by the end of the week, $he is grateful that you return $him to a more nutritionally viable regimen--even if its cum content is still overwhelmingly high. <<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>>@@.lightcoral;$His brain has now begun to accept the sexual perversity of her food as a turn on.@@<<else>>$He is now able to eat and digest her prescribed diet without pharmacological assistance.<</if>>
+ $He is already on a very heavy cum-based diet, and there's only so much ejaculate you can force a slut to ingest before it negatively affects $his health. However, as a temporary measure, you still have options. You instruct $assistantName to re-double the amount of ejaculate in <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s diet for the week. You also have her closely monitored and injected with anti-nausea drugs to help her hold down her food. Although the idea of being forced to eat large amounts of human reproductive fluid still disgusts $him, the week of having a super-concentrated cum-diet, along with the suppressed reflex to purge it has its effect. Knowing that you monitor and control every aspect of her life @@.hotpink;breaks down her resistance to your will,@@ and by the end of the week, $he is grateful that you return $him to a more nutritionally viable regimen--even if its cum content is still overwhelmingly high. <<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>>@@.lightcoral;$His brain has now begun to accept the sexual perversity of her food as a turn on.@@<<else>>$He is now able to eat and digest her prescribed diet without pharmacological assistance.<</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.fetish = "cumslut">>
<<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>>
<<set $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>>
@@ -17386,7 +17386,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<br><<link "Sentence $him to a day in $arcadeName for cum injection therapy">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You have $assistantName inform $activeSlave.slaveName of $his unacceptable behavior and sentence $him to a day in $arcadeName. $He cries and pleads for mercy, and even begs to be allowed to suck a cock, any cock, so $he can prove $his newfound enthusiasm for cum, but you are unmerciful as two other slaves drag $him off to serve $his sentence. $He is forced to wear a<<if $activeSlave.vagina != -1>> combined vaginal and<<else>>n<</if>> anal chastity belt so that the only hole available is $his mouth, and is then confined in $arcadeName with $his mouth spread open by a ring gag and her head sticking through the hole in the wall. A sign below $his mouth proclaims $him to be a "cum extraction tube" and $he is used that way for the duration of her stay--a grueling, 18-hour marathon of relentless throat fucking. <<if $activeSlave.sexualFlaw != "hates oral">>$His ordeal is so extreme that $he now @@.red;hates oral sex@@<<else>>$His hatred of oral sex makes her ordeal that much more horrific<</if>>, but it @@.hotpink;breaks down her resistance@@. $He now @@.gold;better understands the terrifying power you have over her@@, and the sheer amount of cum $he is forced to ingest @@.red;negatively effects $his health@@. Your other cum-fed slaves take note of what you do to those who can't hold down their assigned diet.
+ You have $assistantName inform $activeSlave.slaveName of $his unacceptable behavior and sentence $him to a day in $arcadeName. $He cries and pleads for mercy, and even begs to be allowed to suck a cock, any cock, so $he can prove $his newfound enthusiasm for cum, but you are unmerciful as two other slaves drag $him off to serve $his sentence. $He is forced to wear a<<if $activeSlave.vagina != -1>> combined vaginal and<<else>>n<</if>> anal chastity belt so that the only hole available is $his mouth, and is then confined in $arcadeName with $his mouth spread open by a ring gag and her head sticking through the hole in the wall. A sign below $his mouth proclaims $him to be a "cum extraction tube" and $he is used that way for the duration of her stay--a grueling, 18-hour marathon of relentless throat fucking. <<if $activeSlave.sexualFlaw != "hates oral">>$His ordeal is so extreme that $he now @@.red;hates oral sex@@<<else>>$His hatred of oral sex makes her ordeal that much more horrific<</if>>, but it @@.hotpink;breaks down her resistance@@. $He now @@.gold;better understands the terrifying power you have over her,@@ and the sheer amount of cum $he is forced to ingest @@.red;negatively effects $his health@@. Your other cum-fed slaves take note of what you do to those who can't hold down their assigned diet.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 5, $activeSlave.health -= 5, $activeSlave.oralCount += 55, $activeSlave.publicCount += 55, $oralTotal += 55, $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "hates oral", $activeSlave.fetish = "masochist">>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -17411,7 +17411,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<</if>>
and $he whimpers and begs for you to reconsider even as $he's strapped onto the operating table.
<br><br>
- By the time $he wakes up from the anesthesia, you've already made the necessary alterations to $his permanent records, which now clearly indicate that $he was born <<print $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace>>, and as such, can be rightfully regarded as the racially inferior fuck-animal $he now is. Of course, your fellow slaveowners and the slave market will be savvy enough to see through the alterations you've forced upon $him, but when you make $him available for a day of use in the public square, all your average citizen knows is that the $girl they are fucking is simply a worthless $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace slut who doesn't deserve much more than a stomach full of cum. The surgery @@.red;negatively effects $his health@@, but by the end of a long day $he'll likely never forget, $he has gotten a crash course in what it means to be a $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace slave in your arcology, and any evidence that $he was born $activeSlave.race has been efficiently expunged from $his records. <<if ($activeSlave.vagina == 0 || $activeSlave.anus == 0)>>@@.lime;All vestiges of $his virginity have been unceremoniously stripped away@@.<</if>> The experience has @@.hotpink;broken down $his resistance@@, and your willingness to go to such extremes to subjugate $him @@.gold;greatly increases $his fear of you@@.
+ By the time $he wakes up from the anesthesia, you've already made the necessary alterations to $his permanent records, which now clearly indicate that $he was born <<print $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace>>, and as such, can be rightfully regarded as the racially inferior fuck-animal $he now is. Of course, your fellow slaveowners and the slave market will be savvy enough to see through the alterations you've forced upon $him, but when you make $him available for a day of use in the public square, all your average citizen knows is that the $girl they are fucking is simply a worthless $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace slut who doesn't deserve much more than a stomach full of cum. The surgery @@.red;negatively effects $his health,@@ but by the end of a long day $he'll likely never forget, $he has gotten a crash course in what it means to be a $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace slave in your arcology, and any evidence that $he was born $activeSlave.race has been efficiently expunged from $his records. <<if ($activeSlave.vagina == 0 || $activeSlave.anus == 0)>>@@.lime;All vestiges of $his virginity have been unceremoniously stripped away@@.<</if>> The experience has @@.hotpink;broken down $his resistance,@@ and your willingness to go to such extremes to subjugate $him @@.gold;greatly increases $his fear of you@@.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 10, $activeSlave.analCount += 25, $activeSlave.oralCount += 35, $analTotal += 25, $oralTotal += 35, $activeSlave.anus++, $activeSlave.publicCount += 60>>
<<if $activeSlave.vagina > -1>>
<<set $activeSlave.vagina++, $activeSlave.vaginalCount += 20, $vaginalTotal += 20, $activeSlave.publicCount += 20>>
@@ -17504,7 +17504,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
you take $him over to the glory hole area, where distinct labels adorn the holes reserved for members of the slave race, and $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace fuck-holes are afforded "special attention" by "sympathetic" citizens of the arcology.
<</if>>
<br><br>
- At first $activeSlave.slaveName is confused as to why you are showing $him these things, but you soon make your point clear. You explain that if $he doesn't start accepting $his role, you can easily alter $his appearance and force $him to accept a much different role instead. You see $his <<if $activeSlave.intelligence+$activeSlave.intelligenceImplant < -15>> stupid <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> finally start to show signs of understanding<<else>>intelligent <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> quickly realize what you are talking about<</if>> and $he starts to whimper helplessly, begging you not to turn $him into a $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace sub-human. By the end of the tour $he better realizes exactly what it means to be a slave. $He is starting to understand the @@.hotpink;power you have over her@@, and @@.gold;$he fears you even more because of it.@@
+ At first $activeSlave.slaveName is confused as to why you are showing $him these things, but you soon make your point clear. You explain that if $he doesn't start accepting $his role, you can easily alter $his appearance and force $him to accept a much different role instead. You see $his <<if $activeSlave.intelligence+$activeSlave.intelligenceImplant < -15>> stupid <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> finally start to show signs of understanding<<else>>intelligent <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> quickly realize what you are talking about<</if>> and $he starts to whimper helplessly, begging you not to turn $him into a $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace sub-human. By the end of the tour $he better realizes exactly what it means to be a slave. $He is starting to understand the @@.hotpink;power you have over her,@@ and @@.gold;$he fears you even more because of it.@@
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -17519,7 +17519,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<</if>>
and spank her hard and relentlessly. $He screams and whines and struggles, and you call in an obedient slave to help keep control of $him as you punish her reddened bottom. You also make sure to tell her how lucky $he is that $he isn't one of those worthless sub-human $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace sluts, and that $he is getting off easy. But you also remind $him that there are worse owners to belong to, and if $he continues to resist your will, you will be very selective about who you sell $him to.
<br><br>
- By the time you've finished with $his sensitive ass, it shines red, and $he is crying and whimpering in pain. You send $him away, having @@.hotpink;dampened her resistance a bit@@, and @@.gold;scared $him with your tales of how much worse life could be@@ for $him
+ By the time you've finished with $his sensitive ass, it shines red, and $he is crying and whimpering in pain. You send $him away, having @@.hotpink;dampened her resistance a bit,@@ and @@.gold;scared $him with your tales of how much worse life could be@@ for $him
<<if $activeSlave.race == $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace>>
if $he weren't born of the supreme race.
<<else>>
@@ -17599,7 +17599,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<<else>>
her dick starts to come to attention.
<</if>>
- You then book $him to be the main attraction at a corporate office party that afternoon, where $he will be the target of a blow-bang and bukkake. You see that $he's dosed heavily with the drugs every day this week, and then book the rest of her afternoons for similar duties, making sure $he still tends to her regular assignments as well. In the meantime, you also instruct the kitchen that $he is to eat as much cum-based food from the dispensers as $he can suck down in order to fuel up for these exhausting escapades. By the end of the week, the aphrodisiacs and her slide into an inescapable routine of cum immersion have done their job, and $he has begun to @@.lightcoral;view cum as an inevitable component of her daily life@@. $He also manages to @@.green;gain a little weight@@. Thanks to your manipulation of her Pavlovian responses through extreme drug therapy, her @@.red;health has suffered a bit@@, but $he is also @@.hotpink;more dependent on you@@ thanks to her <<if $activeSlave.addict == 0>>@@.cyan;new@@<<else>>@@.cyan;developing@@<</if>> @@.cyan;addiction to aphrodisiacs.@@
+ You then book $him to be the main attraction at a corporate office party that afternoon, where $he will be the target of a blow-bang and bukkake. You see that $he's dosed heavily with the drugs every day this week, and then book the rest of her afternoons for similar duties, making sure $he still tends to her regular assignments as well. In the meantime, you also instruct the kitchen that $he is to eat as much cum-based food from the dispensers as $he can suck down in order to fuel up for these exhausting escapades. By the end of the week, the aphrodisiacs and her slide into an inescapable routine of cum immersion have done their job, and $he has begun to @@.lightcoral;view cum as an inevitable component of her daily life@@. $He also manages to @@.green;gain a little weight@@. Thanks to your manipulation of her Pavlovian responses through extreme drug therapy, her @@.red;health has suffered a bit,@@ but $he is also @@.hotpink;more dependent on you@@ thanks to her <<if $activeSlave.addict == 0>>@@.cyan;new@@<<else>>@@.cyan;developing@@<</if>> @@.cyan;addiction to aphrodisiacs.@@
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.health -= 10, $activeSlave.weight += 10, $activeSlave.fetish = "cumslut", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1, $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10, $activeSlave.oralCount += 50, $oralTotal += 50, $activeSlave.publicCount += 50, $activeSlave.addict += 1>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -19582,7 +19582,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<br><<link "Show $him that short girls are amusing in the arcade">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You inform $activeSlave.slaveName that short girls like $him are delightfully amusing when immured in the arcade. Magnanimous as you are, you have two other slaves drag $him off to be installed in the arcade for a day, so that $he too may see the humor in having short girls serve in the arcade. Though $arcadeName has arcade pens to match any height of slave, you have $activeSlave.slaveName confined in a pen built for a much taller slave. Although her head and neck protrude from one side of the pen without issue, $he is too short for $his ass to fill the other opening. As a result, $he must use the tips of $his toes maintain an unsteady grip on the rear opening, forcing $him to maintain an extremely taxing stretch just to keep $his body held aloft within the pen. Customers are unable to fuck $his holes but readily delight in watching her squirm to keep $his body extended and horizontal, even with hard cocks brutally fucking $his face. Somewhere in the grueling, 18-hour marathon of relentless throat fucking, her precarious position slips and her lower half tumbles into the interior of the pen proper. Until an attendant rescues $him, her neck is held crooked at an unnatural angle by her restraints, as the rest of $his body dangles beneath it. $His ordeal forces $him to accept that a short $girl's place is as an @@.hotpink;amusing arcade hole@@, though $he can't find the humor@@.gold;in such a terrible plight@@. Furthermore, her intense exertions during her stay @@.red;negatively effects $his health@@. Your other slaves take note of what you do to short girls who ask questions about their place in your penthouse.
+ You inform $activeSlave.slaveName that short girls like $him are delightfully amusing when immured in the arcade. Magnanimous as you are, you have two other slaves drag $him off to be installed in the arcade for a day, so that $he too may see the humor in having short girls serve in the arcade. Though $arcadeName has arcade pens to match any height of slave, you have $activeSlave.slaveName confined in a pen built for a much taller slave. Although her head and neck protrude from one side of the pen without issue, $he is too short for $his ass to fill the other opening. As a result, $he must use the tips of $his toes maintain an unsteady grip on the rear opening, forcing $him to maintain an extremely taxing stretch just to keep $his body held aloft within the pen. Customers are unable to fuck $his holes but readily delight in watching her squirm to keep $his body extended and horizontal, even with hard cocks brutally fucking $his face. Somewhere in the grueling, 18-hour marathon of relentless throat fucking, her precarious position slips and her lower half tumbles into the interior of the pen proper. Until an attendant rescues $him, her neck is held crooked at an unnatural angle by her restraints, as the rest of $his body dangles beneath it. $His ordeal forces $him to accept that a short $girl's place is as an @@.hotpink;amusing arcade hole,@@ though $he can't find the humor@@.gold;in such a terrible plight@@. Furthermore, her intense exertions during her stay @@.red;negatively effects $his health@@. Your other slaves take note of what you do to short girls who ask questions about their place in your penthouse.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 5, $activeSlave.health -= 5, $activeSlave.oralCount += 55, $oralTotal += 55>>
<<set $activeSlave.publicCount += 55>>
<</replace>>
@@ -19773,7 +19773,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t
<<else>>
butt comically held up in the air. Using $his ass
<</if>>
- in such a way @@.hotpink;nearly fucked her senseless@@, but $he'll remember @@.gold;your objectifying treatment of her@@.
+ in such a way @@.hotpink;nearly fucked her senseless,@@ but $he'll remember @@.gold;your objectifying treatment of her@@.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 2, $activeSlave.trust -= 2>>
<</if>>
<</replace>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw b/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw
index 389ba6cef5f..599a64d57cb 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw
@@ -1055,7 +1055,7 @@ You own
<<if $helots > 0>>
<<if $helots > Math.trunc(_LSCD / ($slaveProductivity + _slaveProductivity) - _SCD)>>
<<set _earnings += Math.trunc((_LSCD / ($slaveProductivity + _slaveProductivity) - _SCD) * 10>>
- <br>@@.red;more menial slaves than there was work@@, consider selling some. You own
+ <br>@@.red;more menial slaves than there was work,@@ consider selling some. You own
<<else>>
<<set _earnings += $helots*10>>
<<if $Sweatshops > 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/corporationDevelopments.tw b/src/uncategorized/corporationDevelopments.tw
index 1e9492e81fe..c5c0aef614e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/corporationDevelopments.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/corporationDevelopments.tw
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash += Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 99 : 98)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You sold <<print commaNum(1000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>@@, driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>You sold <<print commaNum(1000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>,@@ driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<if $personalShares-5000 > $publicShares>>
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 99 : 98)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You sold <<print commaNum(5000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95))>>@@, driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>You sold <<print commaNum(5000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95))>>,@@ driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 99 : 98)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You sold <<print commaNum(10000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>@@, driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>You sold <<print commaNum(10000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>,@@ driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 99 : 98)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You sold <<print commaNum(15000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>@@, driving the share price down somewhat.
+ <br>You sold <<print commaNum(15000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>,@@ driving the share price down somewhat.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 99 : 98)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You sold <<print commaNum(20000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>@@, driving the share price down significantly.
+ <br>You sold <<print commaNum(20000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>,@@ driving the share price down significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 99 : 98)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You sold <<print commaNum($customValue)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>@@, driving the share price down significantly.
+ <br>You sold <<print commaNum($customValue)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>,@@ driving the share price down significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*1000))>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(1000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>@@, driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(1000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>,@@ driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<if $personalShares-5000 > $publicShares>>
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.9)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(5000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.9))>>@@, driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(5000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.9))>>,@@ driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(10000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>@@, driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(10000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>,@@ driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*random(96,98)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(15000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>@@, driving the share price down somewhat.
+ <br>The corporation issued <<print commaNum(15000)>> new shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>,@@ driving the share price down somewhat.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(1000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>@@, from the corporation driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(1000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>,@@ from the corporation driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<if $cash > $sharePrice*5000>>
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(5000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95))>>@@, from the corporation driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(5000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95))>>,@@ from the corporation driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(10000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>@@, from the corporation driving the share price down slightly.
+ <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(10000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>,@@ from the corporation driving the share price down slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(15000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>@@, from the corporation driving the share price down somewhat.
+ <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(15000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>,@@ from the corporation driving the share price down somewhat.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(20000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>@@, from the corporation driving the share price down significantly.
+ <br>You purchased <<print commaNum(20000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>,@@ from the corporation driving the share price down significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash += Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*$customValue/10)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(98,99)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You purchased <<print commaNum($customValue)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>@@, from the corporation driving the share price down significantly.
+ <br>You purchased <<print commaNum($customValue)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>,@@ from the corporation driving the share price down significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash -= Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 101 : 102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You bought <<print commaNum(1000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>@@, driving the share price up slightly.
+ <br>You bought <<print commaNum(1000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>,@@ driving the share price up slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<if $publicShares > 5000 && $cash >= $sharePrice*5000>>
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 101 : 102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You bought <<print commaNum(5000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95))>>@@, driving the share price up slightly.
+ <br>You bought <<print commaNum(5000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95))>>,@@ driving the share price up slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 101 : 102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You bought <<print commaNum(10000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>@@, driving the share price up slightly.
+ <br>You bought <<print commaNum(10000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>,@@ driving the share price up slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 101 : 102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You bought <<print commaNum(15000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>@@, driving the share price up somewhat.
+ <br>You bought <<print commaNum(15000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>,@@ driving the share price up somewhat.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 101 : 102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You bought <<print commaNum(20000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>@@, driving the share price up significantly.
+ <br>You bought <<print commaNum(20000)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>,@@ driving the share price up significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $cash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102,$PC.trading >= 100 ? 101 : 102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>You bought <<print commaNum($customValue)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>@@, driving the share price up significantly.
+ <br>You bought <<print commaNum($customValue)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>,@@ driving the share price up significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash -= 1000*Math.ceil($sharePrice)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(1000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>@@, driving the share price up slightly.
+ <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(1000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil($sharePrice*1000))>>,@@ driving the share price up slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<if $publicShares > 5000 && $corpCash >= $sharePrice*5000>>
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*5000)*.95)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(5000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil((($sharePrice*5000)*.95)))>>@@, driving the share price up slightly.
+ <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(5000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil((($sharePrice*5000)*.95)))>>,@@ driving the share price up slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(10000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>@@, driving the share price up slightly.
+ <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(10000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*10000)*.9))>>,@@ driving the share price up slightly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -489,7 +489,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(15000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>@@, driving the share price up somewhat.
+ <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(15000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*15000)*.85))>>,@@ driving the share price up somewhat.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(20000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>@@, driving the share price up significantly.
+ <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum(20000)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*20000)*.8))>>,@@ driving the share price up significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ You hold <<print commaNum($personalShares)>> shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<p
<<set $corpCash -= Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100)>>
<<set $sharePrice = (Math.trunc($sharePrice*either(101,102)))/100>>
<<replace "#CorpAction">>
- <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum($customValue)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>@@, driving the share price up significantly.
+ <br>The corporation bought back <<print commaNum($customValue)>> public shares valued at @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.ceil(($sharePrice*$customValue)*$customValue/100))>>,@@ driving the share price up significantly.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw b/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw
index 7e641eb893c..815412afc4d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw
@@ -861,7 +861,7 @@ A screen opposite your desk springs to life, <<if $assistant == 0>>showing your
<<link "The emotional distress isn't worth the trouble">>
<<replace "#result">>
- Since subjecting all the affected slaves to abortions would cause you severe losses, you've decided to let them keep the pregnancies. You hope you are prepared for all the children you'll be producing. Those who couldn't become pregnant @@.lime;gained some breast, hip and ass size@@, as well as @@.lime;began lactating@@.
+ Since subjecting all the affected slaves to abortions would cause you severe losses, you've decided to let them keep the pregnancies. You hope you are prepared for all the children you'll be producing. Those who couldn't become pregnant @@.lime;gained some breast, hip and ass size,@@ as well as @@.lime;began lactating@@.
<<for $i = 0; $i < $slaves.length; $i++>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].drugs == "breast injections") && canGetPregnant($slaves[$i])>>
<<set $slaves[$i].preg = 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
index e0e97a683ae..01e8c40d62e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
@@ -38,13 +38,13 @@
is
-<<if $activeSlave.devotion < -95>>a @@.darkviolet;hate-filled@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -50>>a @@.darkviolet;hateful@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>a @@.mediumorchid;reluctant@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 20>>a @@.yellow;hesitant@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 50>>an @@.hotpink;accepting@@,
-<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 95>>a @@.deeppink;devoted@@,
-<<else>>a @@.magenta;worshipful@@,
+<<if $activeSlave.devotion < -95>>a @@.darkviolet;hate-filled,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -50>>a @@.darkviolet;hateful,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>a @@.mediumorchid;reluctant,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 20>>a @@.yellow;hesitant,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 50>>an @@.hotpink;accepting,@@
+<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 95>>a @@.deeppink;devoted,@@
+<<else>>a @@.magenta;worshipful,@@
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.trust < -95>>@@.goldenrod;abjectly terrified@@
<<elseif $activeSlave.trust < -50>>@@.goldenrod;terrified@@
@@ -604,7 +604,7 @@ is
but has learned to keep $his faith private.
<</if>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>>
- $He behaves @@.red;oddly@@, saying and doing random things.
+ $He behaves @@.red;oddly,@@ saying and doing random things.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "hates men")>>
$He @@.red;strongly dislikes@@ being around
<<if ($activeSlave.attrXY >= 85) && ($activeSlave.energy >= 40)>>
@@ -722,9 +722,9 @@ is
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "arrogant")>>
$His arrogance is really just a thin shell to protect $his true need to @@.lightcoral;submit@@.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's an extreme @@.lightcoral;submissive@@, and relishes the strictures of slavery.
+ $He's an extreme @@.lightcoral;submissive,@@ and relishes the strictures of slavery.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
- $He's a confirmed @@.lightcoral;submissive@@, and enjoys the strictures of slavery.
+ $He's a confirmed @@.lightcoral;submissive,@@ and enjoys the strictures of slavery.
<<else>>
$He has @@.lightcoral;submissive@@ tendencies, and likes the strictures of slavery.
<</if>>
@@ -732,11 +732,11 @@ is
<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "hates oral")>>
$He's torn between $his @@.lightcoral;love of semen@@ and $his dislike of having cocks in $his mouth.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's a @@.lightcoral;cumslut@@, and loves giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
+ $He's a @@.lightcoral;cumslut,@@ and loves giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
- $He @@.lightcoral;prefers giving oral@@, and enjoys sucking dick and receiving facials.
+ $He @@.lightcoral;prefers giving oral,@@ and enjoys sucking dick and receiving facials.
<<else>>
- $He has an @@.lightcoral;oral fixation@@, and likes giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
+ $He has an @@.lightcoral;oral fixation,@@ and likes giving blowjobs and receiving facials.
<</if>>
<<case "humiliation">>
<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>>
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ is
<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>>
$His shame is genuine, and it is with real self-loathing that $he @@.lightcoral;gets off on humiliation.@@
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's a slut for @@.lightcoral;humiliation@@, and gets off on having others see $his enslavement.
+ $He's a slut for @@.lightcoral;humiliation,@@ and gets off on having others see $his enslavement.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
$He enjoys @@.lightcoral;humiliating@@ sex.
<<else>>
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ is
<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "hates anal")>>
$His hatred is just pretense to cover $his shame about how much $he really loves getting @@.lightcoral;fucked in the butt@@.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
- $He's a @@.lightcoral;buttslut@@, happy to have anyone put anything up $his ass.
+ $He's a @@.lightcoral;buttslut,@@ happy to have anyone put anything up $his ass.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
$He @@.lightcoral;prefers anal.@@
<<else>>
@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ is
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
$He is a @@.lightcoral;complete dom;@@ with other slaves this is expressed as a strong preference to top, and with $his betters $he's an almost competitive lover.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
- $He likes to take an active, powerful role in sex; with other slaves this is expressed as @@.lightcoral;dominance@@, and with $his betters $he's a very energetic lover.
+ $He likes to take an active, powerful role in sex; with other slaves this is expressed as @@.lightcoral;dominance,@@ and with $his betters $he's a very energetic lover.
<<else>>
$He prefers to take a @@.lightcoral;dominant@@ sexual role.
<</if>>
@@ -2097,10 +2097,10 @@ $He is
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.voice == 0>>
- $He is @@.pink;completely silent@@, which is understandable, since $he's mute.
+ $He is @@.pink;completely silent,@@ which is understandable, since $he's mute.
<<else>>
<<if $activeSlave.lips > 95>>
- $He is @@.pink;effectively mute@@, since $his lips are so large that $he can no longer speak intelligibly. $He can still <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 50>>moan<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>whimper<<else>>scream<</if>> through them, though.
+ $He is @@.pink;effectively mute,@@ since $his lips are so large that $he can no longer speak intelligibly. $He can still <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 50>>moan<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>whimper<<else>>scream<</if>> through them, though.
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -2153,7 +2153,7 @@ $He is
<<if $activeSlave.fuckdoll == 0>>
<<if $activeSlave.minorInjury != 0>>
<<if $activeSlave.minorInjury != "sore ass">>
- $He is sporting a @@.red;$activeSlave.minorInjury@@, covered by makeup.
+ $He is sporting a @@.red;$activeSlave.minorInjury,@@ covered by makeup.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -2328,7 +2328,7 @@ $He is
<<elseif ($activeSlave.addict > 0) && ($activeSlave.addict < 10)>>
$He is a confirmed @@.cyan;aphrodisiac addict@@.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.addict > 0)>>
- $He is completely @@.cyan;dependent on aphrodisiacs@@, and it is unlikely you will ever be able to wean $him off them.
+ $He is completely @@.cyan;dependent on aphrodisiacs,@@ and it is unlikely you will ever be able to wean $him off them.
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw
index 8f613524457..5a7020ee7fb 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw
@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@
<<case "your trustees">>
a small group of leading citizens who are serving as @@.mediumseagreen;your trustees@@.
<<case "an individual">>
- @@.cyan;an individual@@, making its development vibrant but unpredictable.
+ @@.cyan;an individual,@@ making its development vibrant but unpredictable.
<<case "your agent">>
- @@.deeppink;your agent@@, who is directing the arcology in your stead.
+ @@.deeppink;your agent,@@ who is directing the arcology in your stead.
<<case "a corporation">>
a corporation, making its development steady and unspectacular.
<<default>>
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;racial Subjugationism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;racial Subjugationism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSSubjugationist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "the home of an advanced project to create a subservient race of ">>
<<set $desc = $desc + $arcologies[$i].FSSubjugationistRace>>
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;racial Supremacy@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;racial Supremacy,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSSubjugationist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a global magnet for ">>
<<set $desc = $desc + $arcologies[$i].FSSupremacistRace>>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Repopulation@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Repopulation,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSRepopulationFocus > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "notorious for the size and number of pregnancies among its population.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSRepopulationFocus > 40>>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Eugenics@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Eugenics,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSRestart > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "notorious for the number of powerful civilians inhabiting it.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSRestart > 40>>
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Gender Radicalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Gender Radicalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSGenderRadicalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "notorious for the openness with which its citizens fuck its slavegirls in the ass until they cum.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSGenderRadicalist > 40>>
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Gender Fundamentalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Gender Fundamentalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSGenderFundamentalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "famous for its slave schools, crowded with a future generation of world class slaves.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSGenderFundamentalist > 40>>
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Paternalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Paternalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSPaternalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "the home of an educated, enlightened caste of slaves more productive than some arcologies' citizens.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSPaternalist > 40>>
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Degradationism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Degradationism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSDegradationist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "renowned and feared by slaves worldwide, as a place of blood and steel from which few ever leave.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSDegradationist > 40>>
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Body Purism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Body Purism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSBodyPurist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a world leader in the drug industry due to its pharmaceutical research breakthroughs.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSBodyPurist > 40>>
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Transformation Fetishism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Transformation Fetishism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSTransformationFetishist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "renowned as the source of some of the world's most unbelievable surgical transformations.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSTransformationFetishist > 40>>
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Youth Preferentialism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Youth Preferentialism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSYouthPreferentialist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "famous for the intense celebratory attention slaves receive there once reaching their majorities.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSYouthPreferentialist > 40>>
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Maturity Preferentialism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Maturity Preferentialism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSMaturityPreferentialist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "world famous among mature slaves, who see it as a paradise in which MILFs are the most valuable girls around.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSMaturityPreferentialist > 40>>
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Slimness Enthusiasm@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Slimness Enthusiasm,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSSlimnessEnthusiast > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "very well known for the wonderful variety of nubile bodies that can be seen there.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSSlimnessEnthusiast > 40>>
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Asset Expansionism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Asset Expansionism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSAssetExpansionist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "widely considered an interior design masterpiece for its adaptations to slaves with fifty kilos of tits.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSAssetExpansionist > 40>>
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Pastoralist@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Pastoralist,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSPastoralist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a world-renowned producer of cowgirl dairy products of all kinds.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSPastoralist > 40>>
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Cummunism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Cummunism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSCummunism > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a world-renowned producer of cum-based products of all kinds.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSCummunism > 40>>
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Physical Idealism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Physical Idealism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSPhysicalIdealist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a constant standout at international athletic competitions, where both its citizens and slaves do very well.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSPhysicalIdealist > 40>>
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Hedonistic Decadence@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Hedonistic Decadence,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSHedonisticDecadence > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "very well known as a place where every imaginable desire and fantasy can be fulfilled.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSHedonisticDecadence > 40>>
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Incest Fetishism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Incest Fetishism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSIncestFetishist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "highly recommended as a place to stop by if you like threesomes with twins or familial gangbangs.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSIncestFetishist > 40>>
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Chattel Religionism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Chattel Religionism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSChattelReligionist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a significant force in the global development of Chattel Religionist dogma.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSChattelReligionist > 40>>
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Roman Revivalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Roman Revivalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSRomanRevivalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "hugely famous for its broadcasts of gladiatorial combat, popular even in the old world.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSRomanRevivalist > 40>>
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Aztec Revivalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Aztec Revivalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSAztecRevivalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "world famous for its incredible architecture and highly qualified leading caste and military.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSAztecRevivalist > 40>>
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Egyptian Revivalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Egyptian Revivalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSEgyptianRevivalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a world famous tourist destination for the traditional festival in its plaza, which never stops.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSEgyptianRevivalist > 40>>
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Edo Revivalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Edo Revivalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSEdoRevivalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "visibly trailing cherry blossoms, blown off its balconies by the wind.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSEdoRevivalist > 40>>
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Arabian Revivalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Arabian Revivalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSArabianRevivalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a famous center of Arabian romanticism, since it has the wisdom not to be historically perfect.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSArabianRevivalist > 40>>
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<else>>
<<set $desc = "just establishing ">>
<</if>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Chinese Revivalism@@, and is ">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Chinese Revivalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSChineseRevivalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "now confidently mature about its possession of the Mandate of Heaven.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSChineseRevivalist > 40>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/neighborsFSAdoption.tw b/src/uncategorized/neighborsFSAdoption.tw
index 879685cc2d3..93dbdd57254 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/neighborsFSAdoption.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/neighborsFSAdoption.tw
@@ -322,10 +322,10 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSRepopulationFocus == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSRestart == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].fetish == "pregnancy">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Repopulationism@@, since as a pregnancy fetishist, she can't wait to see the female population's bellies swell with life.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Repopulationism,@@ since as a pregnancy fetishist, she can't wait to see the female population's bellies swell with life.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSRepopulationFocus = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif ($leaders[$j].preg < -1 || ($leaders[$j].ovaries == 0 && $leaders[$j].mpreg != 1)) && $leaders[$j].genes == "XX">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Eugenics@@, since if no-one can get pregnant, she won't be alone.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Eugenics,@@ since if no-one can get pregnant, she won't be alone.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSRestart = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -333,10 +333,10 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSGenderRadicalist == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSGenderFundamentalist == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].dick > 0>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Gender Radicalism@@, since she's a walking, swinging argument for dickgirls.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Gender Radicalism,@@ since she's a walking, swinging argument for dickgirls.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSGenderRadicalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].pregKnown == 1 || $leaders[$j].bellyPreg > 1500>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Gender Fundamentalism@@, since its citizens find leadership by a pregnant woman fascinating.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Gender Fundamentalism,@@ since its citizens find leadership by a pregnant woman fascinating.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSGenderFundamentalist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -344,10 +344,10 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSPaternalist == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSDegradationist == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "advocate">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Paternalism@@, since as an advocate for slavery, she believes in its benefits.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Paternalism,@@ since as an advocate for slavery, she believes in its benefits.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSPaternalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].fetish == "sadist">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Degradationism@@, since as a sexual sadist, she's excited by the idea of leading a society that applauds her cruelest impulses.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Degradationism,@@ since as a sexual sadist, she's excited by the idea of leading a society that applauds her cruelest impulses.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSDegradationist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -355,10 +355,10 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSBodyPurist == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSTransformationFetishist == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].chem > 50>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Body Purism@@, since she knows what long term drug damage feels like, and doesn't want any slave to ever experience it again.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Body Purism,@@ since she knows what long term drug damage feels like, and doesn't want any slave to ever experience it again.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSBodyPurist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].boobsImplant > 1000>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Transformation Fetishism@@, out of a perverse desire to subject all slaves to massive implants like hers.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Transformation Fetishism,@@ out of a perverse desire to subject all slaves to massive implants like hers.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSTransformationFetishist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -366,10 +366,10 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSYouthPreferentialist == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSMaturityPreferentialist == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].actualAge <= 25>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Youth Preferentialism@@, to buttress acceptance of her own young age.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Youth Preferentialism,@@ to buttress acceptance of her own young age.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSYouthPreferentialist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].actualAge > 35>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Maturity Preferentialism@@, since she has a certain personal interest in promoting the idea that MILFs are sexy.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Maturity Preferentialism,@@ since she has a certain personal interest in promoting the idea that MILFs are sexy.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSMaturityPreferentialist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -377,10 +377,10 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSAssetExpansionist == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Slimness Enthusiasm@@, since her history of anorexia has deeply impacted her idea of beauty.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Slimness Enthusiasm,@@ since her history of anorexia has deeply impacted her idea of beauty.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSSlimnessEnthusiast = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].fetish == "boobs">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Asset Expansionism@@, since she's a breast expansion fetishist in addition to being a mere breast fetishist.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Asset Expansionism,@@ since she's a breast expansion fetishist in addition to being a mere breast fetishist.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSAssetExpansionist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -388,10 +388,10 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSPastoralist == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSCummunism == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].fetish == "cumslut">> /* this will become the cum focused condition, being replaced with breast focus for milk */
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Cummunism@@, since she already loves sucking down huge loads of cum.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Cummunism,@@ since she already loves sucking down huge loads of cum.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSCummunism = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].fetish == "boobs">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Pastoralism@@, since she loves boobs and adores suckling them.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Pastoralism,@@ since she loves boobs and adores suckling them.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSPastoralist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -399,13 +399,13 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSHedonisticDecadence == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSPhysicalIdealist == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].behavioralFlaw == "gluttonous">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Decadent Hedonism@@, since she already loves over-eating.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Decadent Hedonism,@@ since she already loves over-eating.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSHedonisticDecadence = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "fitness">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Physical Idealism@@, since she's a fitness fanatic herself.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Physical Idealism,@@ since she's a fitness fanatic herself.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSPhysicalIdealist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].fetish != "none" && $leaders[$j].fetishStrength >= 100>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Decadent Hedonism@@, since she seeks to satisfy her powerful fetish.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Decadent Hedonism,@@ since she seeks to satisfy her powerful fetish.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSHedonisticDecadence = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -417,17 +417,17 @@ societal development.
<<set _lover = $slaves.find(function(s) { return s.ID == $leaders[$j].relationshipTarget && s.ID == $leaders[$j].relationTaget && s.assignment == "live with your agent"; })>>
<</if>>
<<if ($leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "sinful" || $leaders[$j].sexualQuirk == "perverted") && def _lover>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Incest Festishism@@, to share the love and joy she holds with her relativeTerm($leaders[$j], _lover).
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Incest Festishism,@@ to share the love and joy she holds with her relativeTerm($leaders[$j], _lover).
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSIncestFetishist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSChattelReligionist == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSNull == "unset")>>
<<if $leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "devout">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chattel Religionism@@, to share and spread her deeply held beliefs about the holiness of sexual service.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chattel Religionism,@@ to share and spread her deeply held beliefs about the holiness of sexual service.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSChattelReligionist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "sinful">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chattel Religionism@@, since she's excited by the prospect of getting away with horrible sins against old religions in public.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chattel Religionism,@@ since she's excited by the prospect of getting away with horrible sins against old religions in public.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSChattelReligionist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -442,23 +442,23 @@ societal development.
<<if ($leaders[$j].relationshipTarget != 0)>>
<<set _lover = $slaves.findIndex(function(s) { return areRelated(s, $leaders[$j]) && $leaders[$j].relationshipTarget == s.ID; })>>
<<if _lover != -1>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Egyptian Revivalism@@, since she's already part of a gloriously incestuous relationship.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Egyptian Revivalism,@@ since she's already part of a gloriously incestuous relationship.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSEgyptianRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].nationality == "Chinese">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chinese Revivalism@@, since she's Chinese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chinese Revivalism,@@ since she's Chinese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSChineseRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].nationality == "Japanese">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Edo Revivalism@@, since she's Japanese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Edo Revivalism,@@ since she's Japanese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSEdoRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].nationality == "Mexican">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Aztec Revivalism@@, since she's Mexican herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Aztec Revivalism,@@ since she's Mexican herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSAztecRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "confident">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Roman Revivalism@@, since it appeals to her confident, patrician nature.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Roman Revivalism,@@ since it appeals to her confident, patrician nature.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSRomanRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].fetish == "dom">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Arabian Revivalism@@, since she's sexually dominant and quite likes the idea of overseeing slave bazaars.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Arabian Revivalism,@@ since she's sexually dominant and quite likes the idea of overseeing slave bazaars.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSArabianRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -475,22 +475,22 @@ societal development.
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSArabianRevivalist == "unset")>>
<<if ($arcologies[$i].FSChineseRevivalist == "unset")>>
<<if ($leaders[$j].relationshipTarget != 0) && ($leaders[$j].relationshipTarget == $leaders[$j].relationTarget)>>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Egyptian Revivalism@@, since she's already part of a gloriously incestuous relationship.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Egyptian Revivalism,@@ since she's already part of a gloriously incestuous relationship.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSEgyptianRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].nationality == "Chinese">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chinese Revivalism@@, since she's Chinese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Chinese Revivalism,@@ since she's Chinese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSChineseRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].nationality == "Japanese">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Edo Revivalism@@, since she's Japanese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Edo Revivalism,@@ since she's Japanese herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSEdoRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].nationality == "Mexican">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Aztec Revivalism@@, since she's Mexican herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Aztec Revivalism,@@ since she's Mexican herself and can claim high honor in such a society.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSAztecRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].behavioralQuirk == "confident">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Roman Revivalism@@, since it appeals to her confident, patrician nature.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Roman Revivalism,@@ since it appeals to her confident, patrician nature.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSRomanRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<<elseif $leaders[$j].fetish == "dom">>
- Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Arabian Revivalism@@, since she's sexually dominant and quite likes the idea of overseeing slave bazaars.
+ Your agent @@.pink;$leaders[$j].slaveName@@ successfully pushes it to @@.yellow;adopt Arabian Revivalism,@@ since she's sexually dominant and quite likes the idea of overseeing slave bazaars.
<<set $arcologies[$i].FSArabianRevivalist = 5>><<break>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index 5466c206ae0..4c27ed8a95f 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -1452,7 +1452,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
<<elseif $activeSlave.dick == 6>>
You grin sadistically at $him as $his massive dick fills both of your hands.
<</if>>
- As $he begins to moan with lust, you grip down tightly and force $him to the floor. You straddle $him and lower your dripping pussy onto $his face<<if $PC.dick == 1>>, your erect cock coming to rest on $his forehead<</if>>. You continue stroking your toy's rod as $he eagerly begins eating you out. As $his cock begins to throb, anticipating $his upcoming orgasm, you quickly bind the base of $his penis, denying $his release. You grind your cunt into $his face, telling $him that YOU are the one who'll be orgasming here, not $him. Only once you have initiated the new slave by soaking $his face in your cum do you release $his dick and lean back to avoid the coming blast. A few strokes later and your hand is coated in $his cum. You turn around and order the exhausted girl to clean $his cum off your hand<<if $PC.dick == 1>> and to finish off $his twitching dick<</if>>; $he @@.hotpink;complies meekly@@, knowing you are the @@.gold;dominant force@@ in $his life now.
+ As $he begins to moan with lust, you grip down tightly and force $him to the floor. You straddle $him and lower your dripping pussy onto $his face<<if $PC.dick == 1>>, your erect cock coming to rest on $his forehead<</if>>. You continue stroking your toy's rod as $he eagerly begins eating you out. As $his cock begins to throb, anticipating $his upcoming orgasm, you quickly bind the base of $his penis, denying $his release. You grind your cunt into $his face, telling $him that YOU are the one who'll be orgasming here, not $him. Only once you have initiated the new slave by soaking $his face in your cum do you release $his dick and lean back to avoid the coming blast. A few strokes later and your hand is coated in $his cum. You turn around and order the exhausted girl to clean $his cum off your hand<<if $PC.dick == 1>> and to finish off $his twitching dick<</if>>; $he @@.hotpink;complies meekly,@@ knowing you are the @@.gold;dominant force@@ in $his life now.
<</replace>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 3>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw b/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw
index d66ff6f631a..b9f38308685 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ On a whim, you ask her whether she feels lonely. Caught off guard, she <<if !can
<<if ($slaves[$j].anus > 1)>> Her lacy panties are designed to spread her buttocks a little and display her big butthole.<<elseif ($slaves[$j].anus == 0)>> Her lacy panties cover her virgin anus, for once.<</if>>
<<if ($slaves[$j].boobs > 1000)>>Her bra makes no attempt to cover or even support her huge breasts, simply letting them through holes in the lace to jut proudly out.<<elseif ($slaves[$j].boobs > 500)>>Her bra supports and presents her big breasts, leaving her stiffening nipples bare.<<else>>Her bra supports and presents her breasts, giving her more cleavage than she usually displays.<</if>>
<br><br>
- The procedure is simple. The two of them prostrate themselves on the ground and beg your indulgence, though $slaves[$j].slaveName is running on pure autopilot by this point. You state that you grant it, and hand each of them a simple gold band to be worn on the little finger in advertisement of the inferiority of their union. In turn, each of them gives the other her ring, and $activeSlave.slaveName kisses her stunned bride. You pronounce them @@.lightgreen;slave wives@@, and send them to the armory for their honeymoon. $activeSlave.slaveName is so enthusiastic that in the coming days her obvious devotion @@.hotpink;wins $slaves[$j].slaveName over to the arrangement.@@
+ The procedure is simple. The two of them prostrate themselves on the ground and beg your indulgence, though $slaves[$j].slaveName is running on pure autopilot by this point. You state that you grant it, and hand each of them a simple gold band to be worn on the little finger in advertisement of the inferiority of their union. In turn, each of them gives the other her ring, and $activeSlave.slaveName kisses her stunned bride. You pronounce them @@.lightgreen;slave wives,@@ and send them to the armory for their honeymoon. $activeSlave.slaveName is so enthusiastic that in the coming days her obvious devotion @@.hotpink;wins $slaves[$j].slaveName over to the arrangement.@@
<<set $slaves[$j].devotion = Math.max(20, $slaves[$j].devotion + 10)>> /* to accepting or better */
<<set $slaves[$j].relationship = 5>>
<<set $slaves[$j].relationshipTarget = $activeSlave.ID>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw b/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw
index 51d0041715b..0f489c02d9b 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
<<set $rep = Math.trunc($rep*.90)>>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRestart != "unset">>
<<if $PC.pregSource != -1 && $PC.pregSource != -6>>
- You focus on finding "dates" this week and earn @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(25)>>@@, barely enough to cover the abortion the john that gave it to you told you to get. Showing off your gravid body @@.red;infuriates your citizens and cripples your reputation@@.
+ You focus on finding "dates" this week and earn @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(25)>>,@@ barely enough to cover the abortion the john that gave it to you told you to get. Showing off your gravid body @@.red;infuriates your citizens and cripples your reputation@@.
<<set $cash += 25>>
<<set $rep = Math.trunc($rep*.25)>>
<<if $eugenicsFullControl != 1>>
@@ -187,10 +187,10 @@
<<case "eugenics">>
<<set _income += random(2500,4000)>>
<<if $eugenicsFullControl != 1>>
- You are smuggling <<if $PC.dick != 0>>your<<else>>one of the Societal Elite's<</if>> semen to allow some desperate girls to be pregnant. Anonymity is really hard to attain, and it is easy to find out what you've been doing. Even if you did manage to make @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>@@, the Societal Elite are @@.red;quite displeased@@ by your actions.
+ You are smuggling <<if $PC.dick != 0>>your<<else>>one of the Societal Elite's<</if>> semen to allow some desperate girls to be pregnant. Anonymity is really hard to attain, and it is easy to find out what you've been doing. Even if you did manage to make @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>,@@ the Societal Elite are @@.red;quite displeased@@ by your actions.
<<set $failedElite += 50, _caught = 1>>
<<else>>
- You are smuggling <<if $PC.dick != 0>>your<<else>>one of the Societal Elite's<</if>> semen to allow some desperate girls to be pregnant. Anonymity is really hard to attain, and it is easy to find out what you've been doing. Even if you did manage to make @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>@@, the Societal Elite are @@.red;quite displeased@@ by your actions, even though they know how little they can do about it now.
+ You are smuggling <<if $PC.dick != 0>>your<<else>>one of the Societal Elite's<</if>> semen to allow some desperate girls to be pregnant. Anonymity is really hard to attain, and it is easy to find out what you've been doing. Even if you did manage to make @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>,@@ the Societal Elite are @@.red;quite displeased@@ by your actions, even though they know how little they can do about it now.
<<set _caught = 1>>
<</if>>
<<case "paternalist">>
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@
<<set $rep = Math.trunc($rep*.8)>>
<<set $enduringRep *= .95>>
<<else>>
- Some people whisper when you pass by them. They seem to know who you are, and you know that @@.red;after a bit of alcohol, their tongue will come loose@@, and you can't afford to shut them up right here, right now.
+ Some people whisper when you pass by them. They seem to know who you are, and you know that @@.red;after a bit of alcohol, their tongue will come loose,@@ and you can't afford to shut them up right here, right now.
<<set $rep = Math.trunc($rep*.55)>>
<<set $enduringRep *= .8>>
<</if>>
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@
<<if random(0,100) >= _Catchtchance>>
However, since the source of the attack was traced back to your arcology, your
<<if $secExp == 1>> <<set _X = 1>>
- @@.red;authority@@, <<set $authority -= random(100,500)>> @@.red;crime rate@@ <<set $crime += random(10,25)>> and
+ @@.red;authority,@@ <<set $authority -= random(100,500)>> @@.red;crime rate@@ <<set $crime += random(10,25)>> and
<</if>>
@@.red;reputation@@ <<set $rep -= random (100,500)>>
<<if _X != 1>>
@@ -768,7 +768,7 @@ Routine upkeep of your demesne costs @@.yellow;<<print cashFormat($costs)>>.@@
<<if $cash > 0>>
<<set $cash -= _weatherRepairCost>>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRestartDecoration == 100>>
- Since you lack the resources to effect prompt repairs yourself, the Societal Elite cover for you. The arcology's prosperity is @@.red;is damaged@@, but your public reputation is left intact.
+ Since you lack the resources to effect prompt repairs yourself, the Societal Elite cover for you. The arcology's prosperity is @@.red;is damaged,@@ but your public reputation is left intact.
<<if $eugenicsFullControl != 1>>
The Societal Elite @@.red;are troubled by your failure@@.
<<set $failedElite += 100>>
@@ -900,7 +900,7 @@ Routine upkeep of your demesne costs @@.yellow;<<print cashFormat($costs)>>.@@
the current demand will @@.yellow;''remain stable''@@ for the coming months.
<</if>>
<<elseif $menialDemandFactor >= 35000>>
- <br>Demand for slaves is approaching a @@.green;''historic high''@@, forecasts predict
+ <br>Demand for slaves is approaching a @@.green;''historic high'',@@ forecasts predict
<<if $deltaDemand > 0>>
@@.green;''demand will continue to rise'',@@ but warn the peak is in sight.
<<elseif $deltaDemand < 0>>
@@ -982,7 +982,7 @@ Routine upkeep of your demesne costs @@.yellow;<<print cashFormat($costs)>>.@@
the current supply will @@.yellow;''remain stable''@@ for the coming months.
<</if>>
<<elseif $menialSupplyFactor >= 20000>>
- <br>Supply for slaves is @@.red;''very high''@@, forecasts predict
+ <br>Supply for slaves is @@.red;''very high'',@@ forecasts predict
<<if $deltaSupply > 0>>
@@.red;''supply will continue to rise''.@@
<<elseif $deltaSupply < 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw b/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
index c17d7acc6bd..f63231acef5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
@@ -838,11 +838,11 @@
<br> You already know that she
<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
<<case "submissive" "cumslut" "buttslut" "sadist" "masochist" "dom">>
- is a @@.coral;$activeSlave.fetish@@,
+ is a @@.coral;$activeSlave.fetish,@@
<<case "mindbroken">>
- is @@.red;mindbroken@@,
+ is @@.red;mindbroken,@@
<<case "boobs" "humiliation" "pregnancy">>
- loves @@.coral;$activeSlave.fetish@@,
+ loves @@.coral;$activeSlave.fetish,@@
<<default>>
lacks a fetish,
<</switch>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reAWOL.tw b/src/uncategorized/reAWOL.tw
index 282bd5a91e3..e71e0d2749b 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reAWOL.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reAWOL.tw
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ Your window of opportunity to act is closing. If you have plans for punishing th
<<link "You want $him dead">>
<<replace "#SFresult">>
- Despite the trouble $he has caused you, the culmination of this mercenary's wanton flight from the rest of the $mercenariesTitle is decidedly anti-climatic. The last you hear of $him is in the footnote of one of your daily reports, with some minute yet suitably gory pictures as an accompaniment. When the stolen weapons are returned to their rightful place in your arcology, the unfortunate matter is concluded once and for all. @@.green;Your reputation and $arcologies[0].name's prosperity improves@@, a result of the fear crossing you will bring, in addition toshowing your citizens that you are willing and able to deal with such matters in-house.
+ Despite the trouble $he has caused you, the culmination of this mercenary's wanton flight from the rest of the $mercenariesTitle is decidedly anti-climatic. The last you hear of $him is in the footnote of one of your daily reports, with some minute yet suitably gory pictures as an accompaniment. When the stolen weapons are returned to their rightful place in your arcology, the unfortunate matter is concluded once and for all. @@.green;Your reputation and $arcologies[0].name's prosperity improves,@@ a result of the fear crossing you will bring, in addition toshowing your citizens that you are willing and able to deal with such matters in-house.
<<set $rep += 1000,$arcologies[0].prosperity += 2>>
<<if $arcologies[0].prosperity > $AProsperityCap>>
<<set $arcologies[0].prosperity = $AProsperityCap>>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ Your window of opportunity to act is closing. If you have plans for punishing th
<<link "Flog $him in public then exile $him from the arcology">>
<<replace "#aliveresult">>
- An example must be made. There is a binding contract between you and your $mercenariesTitle, and this $woman attempted to undermine it for $his own selfish profit. The protesting bitch is stripped and flogged on the promenade before being escorted bleeding from the arcology. The public @@.green;approves of this harshness.@@ In addition @@.green;Arcology prosperity improves@@, a result of showing your citizens that you are willing and able to deal with such matters in-house.
+ An example must be made. There is a binding contract between you and your $mercenariesTitle, and this $woman attempted to undermine it for $his own selfish profit. The protesting bitch is stripped and flogged on the promenade before being escorted bleeding from the arcology. The public @@.green;approves of this harshness.@@ In addition @@.green;Arcology prosperity improves,@@ a result of showing your citizens that you are willing and able to deal with such matters in-house.
<<set $rep += 1000,$arcologies[0].prosperity += 2>>
<<if $arcologies[0].prosperity > $AProsperityCap>>
<<set $arcologies[0].prosperity = $AProsperityCap>>
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ Your window of opportunity to act is closing. If you have plans for punishing th
<<link "You want $him dead">>
<<replace "#bountyresult">>
- Despite the trouble $he has caused you, the culmination of this mercenary's wanton flight from the rest of the $mercenariesTitle is decidedly an anti-climax. The last you hear of $him is in the footnote of one of your daily reports, with some minute yet suitably gory pictures as an accompaniment. When the stolen weapons are returned to their rightful place in your arcology, the unfortunate matter is concluded once and for all. @@.green;Your reputation improves@@, a result of the fear of crossing you that your unpleasantness has inspired.
+ Despite the trouble $he has caused you, the culmination of this mercenary's wanton flight from the rest of the $mercenariesTitle is decidedly an anti-climax. The last you hear of $him is in the footnote of one of your daily reports, with some minute yet suitably gory pictures as an accompaniment. When the stolen weapons are returned to their rightful place in your arcology, the unfortunate matter is concluded once and for all. @@.green;Your reputation improves,@@ a result of the fear of crossing you that your unpleasantness has inspired.
<<set $rep += 1000, $cash -= 5000>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw
index f58c60e64cf..0a194e33d77 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. While the mob is quick to pat itself on the back for
<<link "Just capitalize on her popularity to increase your reputation">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
-You spend the week parading $activeSlave.slaveName around in public, letting everyone get a good look at her fawning adoration of you. A variety of public sex acts really nails the point home in the psyche of your citizens and @@.yellowgreen;increases your reputation@@, and after a few days you start to receive a sincere golf clap from onlookers every time you cum in or on $activeSlave.slaveName.
+You spend the week parading $activeSlave.slaveName around in public, letting everyone get a good look at her fawning adoration of you. A variety of public sex acts really nails the point home in the psyche of your citizens and @@.yellowgreen;increases your reputation,@@ and after a few days you start to receive a sincere golf clap from onlookers every time you cum in or on $activeSlave.slaveName.
<<set $rep += 200>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw b/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw
index fa821816322..8270b138064 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@
<<elseif _growth == 4>>
@@.lime;$His height dramatically increased this week.@@
<<elseif _growth == 5>>
- @@.lime;$His body experienced explosive growth this week@@,
+ @@.lime;$His body experienced explosive growth this week,@@
<</if>>
/*health issues*/
<<if _growth == 5>>
@@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion <= 50>>
dully obedient. $He has been broken to slave life so thoroughly that even this is neither surprising nor affecting.
<<else>>
- @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development@@, since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he will be able to fuck better now once $his health recovers.
+ @@.hotpink;pleased by this stark development,@@ since $he is so attentive to your will. $He also expects $he will be able to fuck better now once $his health recovers.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
index ba04a2cea17..b893ce7586a 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
@@ -4949,7 +4949,7 @@
Even though $he is blind, $he is devoted enough to you to allow $himself to lower $his guard. $He becomes @@.mediumaquamarine;trusting@@ of your ability to keep $him safe.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
- Since $he's blind and on the cusp of devotion, $he becomes slightly @@.hotpink;more reliant@@, but also begins to be @@.mediumaquamarine;less fearful@@ of what $he can't see.
+ Since $he's blind and on the cusp of devotion, $he becomes slightly @@.hotpink;more reliant,@@ but also begins to be @@.mediumaquamarine;less fearful@@ of what $he can't see.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
<<elseif ["please you", "be your Concubine", "serve in the master suite"].includes($slaves[$i].assignment)>>
$He may be blind, but $he knows nobody would dare harm $him under your watch, @@.mediumaquamarine;building $his trust@@ in you.
@@ -5051,7 +5051,7 @@
Even though $he is deaf, $he is devoted enough to you to allow $himself to lower $his guard. $He becomes @@.mediumaquamarine;trusting@@ of your ability to watch $his back.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
- Since $he's deaf and on the cusp of devotion, $he becomes slightly @@.hotpink;more reliant@@, but also begins to be @@.mediumaquamarine;less fearful@@ of what is lurking out of sight.
+ Since $he's deaf and on the cusp of devotion, $he becomes slightly @@.hotpink;more reliant,@@ but also begins to be @@.mediumaquamarine;less fearful@@ of what is lurking out of sight.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1, $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
<<elseif ["please you", "be your Concubine", "serve in the master suite"].includes($slaves[$i].assignment)>>
$He may be deaf, but no one can sneak up on $him while $he is with you, @@.mediumaquamarine;developing the trust@@ that you have $his back.
@@ -5102,7 +5102,7 @@
$He knows $he is near helpless but is devoted enough to you to allow $himself to lower $his guard. $He becomes @@.mediumaquamarine;trusting@@ of your ability to keep $him safe.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
- Since $he's near helpless and on the cusp of devotion, $he becomes slightly @@.hotpink;more reliant@@, but also begins to be @@.mediumaquamarine;less fearful@@ of what $he can't see.
+ Since $he's near helpless and on the cusp of devotion, $he becomes slightly @@.hotpink;more reliant,@@ but also begins to be @@.mediumaquamarine;less fearful@@ of what $he can't see.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
<<elseif ["please you", "be your Concubine", "serve in the master suite"].includes($slaves[$i].assignment)>>
$He may be physically frail and vulnerable, but $he knows nobody would dare harm $him under your watch, @@.mediumaquamarine;building $his trust@@ in you.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw b/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw
index 3e581569387..53fe59dd00d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw
@@ -1408,7 +1408,7 @@
<</if>>
<<case "dom">>
<<if (_SlaveI.fetish != "submissive")>>
- _SlaveJ.slaveName holds _SlaveI.slaveName down and fucks her so many times that _SlaveI.slaveName starts to get off on being used. She becomes a true @@.lightcoral;sexual submissive@@, and loves _SlaveJ.slaveName all the more for dominating her.
+ _SlaveJ.slaveName holds _SlaveI.slaveName down and fucks her so many times that _SlaveI.slaveName starts to get off on being used. She becomes a true @@.lightcoral;sexual submissive,@@ and loves _SlaveJ.slaveName all the more for dominating her.
<<set _SlaveI.fetish = "submissive", _SlaveI.fetishKnown = 1, _SlaveI.fetishStrength = 65>>
<</if>>
<<case "masochist">>
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@
<</if>>
<<case "sadist">>
<<if (_SlaveI.fetish != "masochist")>>
- _SlaveJ.slaveName hits _SlaveI.slaveName during sex so often that _SlaveI.slaveName starts to get off on being beaten. She becomes a true @@.lightcoral;masochist@@, and loves _SlaveJ.slaveName all the more for abusing her.
+ _SlaveJ.slaveName hits _SlaveI.slaveName during sex so often that _SlaveI.slaveName starts to get off on being beaten. She becomes a true @@.lightcoral;masochist,@@ and loves _SlaveJ.slaveName all the more for abusing her.
<<set _SlaveI.fetish = "masochist", _SlaveI.fetishKnown = 1, _SlaveI.fetishStrength = 65>>
<</if>>
<<case "humiliation">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw b/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw
index 83e4c2d4ac0..0830e38cbeb 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<elseif (_winner.belly >= 600000) && (_loser.belly >= 600000)>>
- _winner.slaveName and _loser.slaveName stare each other down and both come to a realization. Neither can reach the other around their massive bellies. Instead, they choose to ram their bulk into each other in hopes of toppling the weaker. After a drawn out struggle, both slaves' middles are @@.red;dark red and shuddering@@, ready to burst open. Rather than continue, _loser.slaveName lets the next strike down her hoping that the outcome of this fight isn't fatal.
+ _winner.slaveName and _loser.slaveName stare each other down and both come to a realization. Neither can reach the other around their massive bellies. Instead, they choose to ram their bulk into each other in hopes of toppling the weaker. After a drawn out struggle, both slaves' middles are @@.red;dark red and shuddering,@@ ready to burst open. Rather than continue, _loser.slaveName lets the next strike down her hoping that the outcome of this fight isn't fatal.
<<set _winner.health -= 50>>
<<set _loser.health -= 50>>
<<if $pitAudience == "paid">>
@@ -763,28 +763,28 @@
<</if>>
<<if (_winner.sexualFlaw == "malicious")>>
- _winner.slaveName lives to torment and violate slave girls. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure@@, slapping her viciously, pinching her until she draws blood, and showing off for the spectators.
+ _winner.slaveName lives to torment and violate slave girls. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure,@@ slapping her viciously, pinching her until she draws blood, and showing off for the spectators.
<<if $pitAudience != "none">>
The audience @@.green;greatly enjoys@@ the depraved spectacle.
<<set $rep += 50>>
<</if>>
<<set _winner.devotion += 2>>
<<elseif (_winner.sexualFlaw == "abusive")>>
- _winner.slaveName lives to abuse and violate slave girls. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure@@, raping her mercilessly, striking her until she turns a deep reddish-purple, and showing off for the spectators.
+ _winner.slaveName lives to abuse and violate slave girls. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure,@@ raping her mercilessly, striking her until she turns a deep reddish-purple, and showing off for the spectators.
<<if $pitAudience != "none">>
The audience @@.green;greatly enjoys@@ the depraved spectacle.
<<set $rep += 50>>
<</if>>
<<set _winner.devotion += 2>>
<<elseif (_winner.energy > 95)>>
- _winner.slaveName doesn't have to feign willingness to rape a slave girl. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure@@, groping her, kissing her unwilling mouth, and showing off for the spectators.
+ _winner.slaveName doesn't have to feign willingness to rape a slave girl. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure,@@ groping her, kissing her unwilling mouth, and showing off for the spectators.
<<if $pitAudience != "none">>
The audience @@.green;greatly enjoys@@ the depraved spectacle.
<<set $rep += 50>>
<</if>>
<<set _winner.devotion += 1>>
<<elseif (_winner.fetish == "sadist") && (_winner.fetishStrength > 60)>>
- _winner.slaveName doesn't have to feign willingness abuse and violate a slave girl. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure@@, slapping her cruelly, pinching her until she draws blood, and showing off for the spectators.
+ _winner.slaveName doesn't have to feign willingness abuse and violate a slave girl. She uses _loser.slaveName for her @@.hotpink;pleasure,@@ slapping her cruelly, pinching her until she draws blood, and showing off for the spectators.
<<if $pitAudience != "none">>
The audience @@.green;greatly enjoys@@ the depraved spectacle.
<<set $rep += 50>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
index 57840aa2cdb..b8ff8c85faf 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
@@ -718,7 +718,7 @@
<</if>>
<</for>>
<<if (_slaveImpact == 1)>>
- Her willingness to obey will be tested. Her life will be forfeit, a fate many others @@.gold;fear might befall them@@, if $he does not perform.
+ Her willingness to obey will be tested. Her life will be forfeit, a fate many others @@.gold;fear might befall them,@@ if $he does not perform.
<</if>>
<<case "egyptian revivalist arcology">>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
index ae58f47c1c1..5cbda7b3fc0 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
@@ -5236,9 +5236,9 @@ $He's got a
<<if ($activeSlave.intelligence+$activeSlave.intelligenceImplant >= -95)>>
even with $his education, $he is still @@.orangered;really stupid.@@
<<elseif $activeSlave.intelligenceImplant > 0>>
- $he is @@.orangered;a moron@@, yet somehow still remembers the basics of an education.
+ $he is @@.orangered;a moron,@@ yet somehow still remembers the basics of an education.
<<else>>
- $he is @@.orangered;a moron@@, and ignorant to boot.
+ $he is @@.orangered;a moron,@@ and ignorant to boot.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
@@ -5296,9 +5296,9 @@ $He's got a
<<if ($activeSlave.intelligence+$activeSlave.intelligenceImplant >= -95)>>
even with $his education, $he is still @@.orangered;really stupid.@@
<<elseif $activeSlave.intelligenceImplant > 0>>
- $he is @@.orangered;a moron@@, yet somehow still remembers the basics of an education.
+ $he is @@.orangered;a moron,@@ yet somehow still remembers the basics of an education.
<<else>>
- $he is @@.orangered;a moron@@, and ignorant to boot.
+ $he is @@.orangered;a moron,@@ and ignorant to boot.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -5544,7 +5544,7 @@ $He has
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.teeth != "normal">>
<<if $activeSlave.teeth == "crooked">>
- $His teeth are @@.yellow;crooked@@, detracting from $his beauty whenever $he opens $his mouth.
+ $His teeth are @@.yellow;crooked,@@ detracting from $his beauty whenever $he opens $his mouth.
<<elseif $activeSlave.teeth == "straightening braces">>
$He has braces,
<<if $activeSlave.visualAge > 35>>
@@ -15996,7 +15996,7 @@ $He has
<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant == 0>>
$He has an abdominal implant, but it is completely empty.
<<elseif $activeSlave.pregKnown == 1>>
- $He is @@.pink;pregnant@@, though it isn't visible yet.
+ $He is @@.pink;pregnant,@@ though it isn't visible yet.
<<elseif $activeSlave.preg > 0 && $activeSlave.pregKnown == 0>>
$His period is late.
<</if>>
@@ -16415,7 +16415,7 @@ $He has
<<else>>
$He's originally @@.tan;<<print $activeSlave.nationality>>@@; ethnically, $he's
<</if>>
- @@.tan;<<print $activeSlave.race>>@@, and $his skin is <<print $activeSlave.skin>><<if $activeSlave.markings == "freckles">> and lightly freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.markings == "heavily freckled">> and heavily freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><</if>>.
+ @@.tan;<<print $activeSlave.race>>,@@ and $his skin is <<print $activeSlave.skin>><<if $activeSlave.markings == "freckles">> and lightly freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.markings == "heavily freckled">> and heavily freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><</if>>.
<<if $activeSlave.race != $activeSlave.origRace && $saleDescription != 1>>
$He has received plastic surgery to appear <<print $activeSlave.race>>; $he is originally <<print $activeSlave.origRace>>.
<<elseif $activeSlave.race != $activeSlave.origRace && $saleDescription == 1>>
@@ -16430,7 +16430,7 @@ $He has
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<elseif ($seeRace == 1)>>
- Ethnically, $he's @@.tan;<<print $activeSlave.race>>@@, and $his skin is <<print $activeSlave.skin>><<if $activeSlave.markings == "freckles">> and lightly freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.markings == "heavily freckled">> and heavily freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><</if>>.
+ Ethnically, $he's @@.tan;<<print $activeSlave.race>>,@@ and $his skin is <<print $activeSlave.skin>><<if $activeSlave.markings == "freckles">> and lightly freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.markings == "heavily freckled">> and heavily freckled<<if (($activeSlave.skin == "pale") || ($activeSlave.skin == "fair")) && ($activeSlave.hColor != "red")>>, an attractive combination<</if>><</if>>.
<<if $activeSlave.race != $activeSlave.origRace && $saleDescription != 1>>
$He has received plastic surgery to appear <<print $activeSlave.race>>; $he is originally <<print $activeSlave.origRace>>.
<<elseif $activeSlave.race != $activeSlave.origRace && $saleDescription == 1>>
@@ -16873,15 +16873,15 @@ $He has
<<if $activeSlave.amp != 0>>
<<if $activeSlave.amp == -1>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee@@, but $he's equipped with a set of modern prosthetic limbs that allow $him a fairly normal life.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee,@@ but $he's equipped with a set of modern prosthetic limbs that allow $him a fairly normal life.
<<elseif $activeSlave.amp == -2>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee@@, but $he's equipped with P-Limbs customized for sex. $His fingertips vibrate, $his finger joints are masked to prevent pinching, and $his hands can dispense lube.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee,@@ but $he's equipped with P-Limbs customized for sex. $His fingertips vibrate, $his finger joints are masked to prevent pinching, and $his hands can dispense lube.
<<elseif $activeSlave.amp == -3>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee@@, but $he's equipped with P-Limbs customized to look natural. They are covered in a material that closely mimics living $activeSlave.skin skin, and their servos are noise dampened.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee,@@ but $he's equipped with P-Limbs customized to look natural. They are covered in a material that closely mimics living $activeSlave.skin skin, and their servos are noise dampened.
<<elseif $activeSlave.amp == -4>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee@@, but $he's equipped with P-Limbs customized for combat. They're hardened, strengthened, and more responsive, and they conceal taser knuckles and extensible forearm blades.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee,@@ but $he's equipped with P-Limbs customized for combat. They're hardened, strengthened, and more responsive, and they conceal taser knuckles and extensible forearm blades.
<<elseif $activeSlave.amp == -5>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee@@, but $he's equipped with advanced cybernetic P-Limbs. The ultimate fusion of combat effectiveness and instruments of pleasure, they're capable of performing multiple functions. They can enhance sex through $his vibrating hands and increase $his combat skills with hardened, yet flexible artificial muscles. They have an advanced artificial skin that can send electrical impulses that can cause stimulation or extreme pain.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee,@@ but $he's equipped with advanced cybernetic P-Limbs. The ultimate fusion of combat effectiveness and instruments of pleasure, they're capable of performing multiple functions. They can enhance sex through $his vibrating hands and increase $his combat skills with hardened, yet flexible artificial muscles. They have an advanced artificial skin that can send electrical impulses that can cause stimulation or extreme pain.
<<elseif $activeSlave.fuckdoll > 0>>
$activeSlave.slaveName is a @@.pink;quadruple amputee,@@ making $him a convenient torso-only sex toy.
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
index a036856cac8..49ef0ae8569 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
@@ -3437,7 +3437,7 @@ $His
which do nothing to help $his @@.yellow;nearsightedness@@ and consequent clumsiness.
<</if>>
<<elseif $activeSlave.eyes < -1>>
- which, since $he is @@.red;blind@@, are just for show. $He moves carefully as to not bump into things.
+ which, since $he is @@.red;blind,@@ are just for show. $He moves carefully as to not bump into things.
<</if>>
<<else>>
<<if $activeSlave.eyes > -1>>
@@ -3448,10 +3448,10 @@ $His
<<if $activeSlave.eyewear == "corrective contacts">>
$He's wearing contact lenses to correct $his @@.yellow;nearsightedness@@.
<<else>>
- $He's @@.yellow;nearsighted@@, and a bit clumsy as a result.
+ $He's @@.yellow;nearsighted,@@ and a bit clumsy as a result.
<</if>>
<<elseif $activeSlave.eyes < -1>>
- $He is @@.red;blind@@, and moves very carefully as a result.
+ $He is @@.red;blind,@@ and moves very carefully as a result.
<</if>>
<</if>> /* CLOSES EYEWEAR */
<<if ($activeSlave.earwear == "hearing aids") || ($activeSlave.earwear == "muffling ear plugs") || ($activeSlave.earwear == "deafening ear plugs")>>
@@ -3463,7 +3463,7 @@ $His
<<elseif $activeSlave.hears == -1>>
which are used to correct $his @@.yellow;hearing impairment@@.
<<elseif $activeSlave.hears < -1>>
- which, due to $his @@.red;deafness@@, are useless.
+ which, due to $his @@.red;deafness,@@ are useless.
<</if>>
<<elseif $activeSlave.earwear == "muffling ear plugs">>
a pair of small foam ear plugs,
@@ -3486,9 +3486,9 @@ $His
<</if>>
<<else>>
<<if $activeSlave.hears == -1>>
- $He's @@.yellow;hard of hearing@@, and a bit nervous as a result.
+ $He's @@.yellow;hard of hearing,@@ and a bit nervous as a result.
<<elseif $activeSlave.hears < -1>>
- $He is @@.red;deaf@@, and overly paranoid as a result.
+ $He is @@.red;deaf,@@ and overly paranoid as a result.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/utility/extendedFamilyWidgets.tw b/src/utility/extendedFamilyWidgets.tw
index 9a91f9927e5..905b29e79fa 100644
--- a/src/utility/extendedFamilyWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/utility/extendedFamilyWidgets.tw
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@
<br>Your parents are @@.lightgreen;<<if $children[0].ID < 0>>your former slave<<if $children[1].ID < 0>>s<</if>><</if>> $children[0].slaveName and <<if $children[1].ID < 0 && $children[0].ID > 0>>your former slave<</if>> $children[1].slaveName@@.
<<elseif $children.length > 0>>
<<if $PC.father == $PC.mother>>
- <br>Your parent is @@.lightgreen;<<if $children[0].ID < 0>>your former slave<</if>> $children[0].slaveName@@, who impregnated $himself with you.
+ <br>Your parent is @@.lightgreen;<<if $children[0].ID < 0>>your former slave<</if>> $children[0].slaveName,@@ who impregnated $himself with you.
<<else>>
<br>You know one of your parents, @@.lightgreen;<<if $children[0].ID < 0>>your former slave<</if>> $children[0].slaveName@@.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/utility/saRulesWidgets.tw b/src/utility/saRulesWidgets.tw
index 7eb87e0cbb5..db081d223d3 100644
--- a/src/utility/saRulesWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/utility/saRulesWidgets.tw
@@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ and
<<if $averageDick > 4>>
<<if $slaves[$i].anus > 0 && $slaves[$i].anus < 3 && canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].anus*30)-($averageDick*5) < random(1,100)>>
- @@.lime;$His asshole is loosened@@, since $he begs hung slaves to fuck $his butt until $he cries.
+ @@.lime;$His asshole is loosened,@@ since $he begs hung slaves to fuck $his butt until $he cries.
<<set $slaves[$i].anus += 1>>
<<set $slaves[$i].analCount += 3, $analTotal += 3>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/utility/slaveCreationWidgets.tw b/src/utility/slaveCreationWidgets.tw
index 94ba78fb95b..a00b79d85b3 100644
--- a/src/utility/slaveCreationWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/utility/slaveCreationWidgets.tw
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@
<<elseif $PC.career == "gang">>
@@.green;+5 health@@ and a free level of @@.cyan;combat skill@@
<<elseif $PC.career == "escort">>
- two free levels of @@.cyan;sex skills@@, one free level of @@.cyan;prostitution skill@@, and one free level of @@.cyan;entertainment skill.@@
+ two free levels of @@.cyan;sex skills,@@ one free level of @@.cyan;prostitution skill,@@ and one free level of @@.cyan;entertainment skill.@@
<<elseif $PC.career == "servant">>
@@.mediumaquamarine;+10 trust@@ and @@.hotpink;+10 devotion.@@
<<elseif $PC.career == "wealth">>
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