From 76394f856dd4716f33a80f3a68fa0d03373bfe62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anu <anulithic@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Jan 2024 23:58:23 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] buttocks are plural + other minor proofreading
---
src/npc/descriptions/butt/butt.js | 26 +++++++++++++-------------
1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/butt/butt.js b/src/npc/descriptions/butt/butt.js
index 846b85fb34d..d29bfb0dc2e 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/butt/butt.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/butt/butt.js
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
if (slave.butt > 10) {
r.push(`panties' strings struggle to stay tied.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
- r.push(`huge buttocks stretches the fabric of ${his} lingerie.`);
+ r.push(`huge buttocks stretch the fabric of ${his} lingerie.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
r.push(`big butt is snug within ${his} panties.`);
} else {
@@ -123,9 +123,9 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
case "a maternity dress":
r.push(`${His}`);
if (slave.butt > 10) {
- r.push(`massive buttocks strains the seams of ${his} dress considerably.`);
+ r.push(`massive buttocks strain the seams of ${his} dress considerably.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
- r.push(`huge buttocks stretches the fabric of ${his} dress considerably.`);
+ r.push(`huge buttocks stretch the fabric of ${his} dress considerably.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
r.push(`big ass fills out ${his} dress nicely.`);
} else {
@@ -135,9 +135,9 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
case "stretch pants and a crop-top":
r.push(`${His}`);
if (slave.butt > 10) {
- r.push(`massive buttocks strains the seams of ${his} stretch pants considerably; ${he} can only manage to pull them halfway over it, creating plenty of jiggly ass cleavage to spill out over the elastic waist.`);
+ r.push(`massive buttocks strain the seams of ${his} stretch pants considerably; ${he} can only manage to pull them halfway over them, creating plenty of jiggly ass cleavage to spill out over the elastic waist.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
- r.push(`huge buttocks stretch the fabric of ${his} stretch pants considerably, ${he} can barely manage to pull them over it.`);
+ r.push(`huge buttocks stretch the fabric of ${his} stretch pants considerably; ${he} can barely manage to pull them over them.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
r.push(`big ass fills out ${his} stretch pants nicely.`);
} else {
@@ -576,9 +576,9 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
r.push(`The latex creaks ominously as it is strained by ${his} massive ass.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
- r.push(`${His} latex covered big buttocks are shapely and smooth.`);
+ r.push(`${His} big latex-covered buttocks are shapely and smooth.`);
} else {
- r.push(`${His} latex covered buttocks are shapely and smooth.`);
+ r.push(`${His} latex-covered buttocks are shapely and smooth.`);
}
break;
case "a military uniform":
@@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
r.push(`but ${his} huge ass makes itself known anyway, each cheek requiring an individually rounded plate that seems to somehow wobble even underneath the ludicrously heavy armor.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
- r.push(`but ${his} heavy butt pushes out the massive plating a little slightly, making its large size obvious.`);
+ r.push(`but ${his} heavy butt pushes out the massive plating slightly, making its large size obvious.`);
} else {
r.push(`creating an elegant, slim set of aerodynamic plate in the back.`);
}
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
case "harem gauze":
r.push(`${His} harem gauze filmily covers`);
if (slave.butt > 10) {
- r.push(`the acres of assflesh.`);
+ r.push(`${his} acres of assflesh.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
r.push(`the expanse of ${his} assflesh.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
@@ -1056,7 +1056,7 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
r.push(`massive buttocks, giving a tantalizing view as it parts ever so slightly.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
- r.push(`buttocks, making it look larger than it already is.`);
+ r.push(`buttocks, making them look larger than they already are.`);
} else {
r.push(`buttocks.`);
}
@@ -1064,9 +1064,9 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
case "a bimbo outfit":
r.push(`${His} scandalously short miniskirt`);
if (slave.butt > 10) {
- r.push(`is impossible to pull over ${his} enormous buttocks, leaving ${his} behind entirely exposed. The only hint of ${his} thong are a pair of straps disappearing into ${his} crack.`);
+ r.push(`is impossible to pull over ${his} enormous buttocks, leaving ${his} behind entirely exposed. The only hint of ${his} thong is a pair of straps disappearing into ${his} crack.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
- r.push(`is impossible to pull over ${his} huge butt, leaving ${his} behind entirely exposed as its enormity has since devoured ${his} thong.`);
+ r.push(`is impossible to pull over ${his} huge butt, leaving ${his} behind entirely exposed as its enormity has long since devoured ${his} thong.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
r.push(`is constantly sliding up ${his} ample buttocks, leaving ${his} thong completely visible.`);
} else {
@@ -1076,7 +1076,7 @@ App.Desc.butt = function(slave, descType = DescType.NORMAL) {
case "battledress":
r.push(`${His} fatigue pants`);
if (slave.butt > 10) {
- r.push(`are tailored as tastefully as possible to restrain ${his} enormous buttocks, though its massive size strains the seams.`);
+ r.push(`are tailored as tastefully as possible to restrain ${his} enormous buttocks, though their massive size strains the seams.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 6) {
r.push(`are tailored as tastefully as possible to restrain ${his} huge buttocks.`);
} else if (slave.butt > 3) {
--
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