diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/longSlave.js b/src/npc/descriptions/longSlave.js index c0d30900e54de33b4ef597c749233e67a7a56f79..cbb0cf603d8268c185d901942c14c045a4ac01ee 100644 --- a/src/npc/descriptions/longSlave.js +++ b/src/npc/descriptions/longSlave.js @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ App.Desc.longSlave = function({slave = V.activeSlave, saleDescription = false, s r.push(`<span style="font-weight:bold"><span class="coral">V.desc.</span></span>`); if (slave.indenture > -1) { - r.push(`${His} `); + r.push(`${His}`); if (slave.indentureRestrictions > 1) { r.push(`restrictive`); } else if (slave.indentureRestrictions > 0) { @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ App.Desc.longSlave = function({slave = V.activeSlave, saleDescription = false, s } else { r.push(`unrestricted`); } - r.push(` indenture`); + r.push(`indenture`); if (slave.indenture > 0) { if (slave.indenture > 1) { r.push(`has ${slave.indenture} weeks left to run.`); @@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ App.Desc.longSlave = function({slave = V.activeSlave, saleDescription = false, s } } - let _pubertyAge = Math.min(slave.pubertyAgeXX, slave.pubertyAgeXY); + const _pubertyAge = Math.min(slave.pubertyAgeXX, slave.pubertyAgeXY); if (slave.physicalAge < _pubertyAge - 2) { r.push(`${He} is too sexually immature to have armpit hair.`); } else if (slave.underArmHStyle === "hairless") { @@ -405,31 +405,29 @@ App.Desc.longSlave = function({slave = V.activeSlave, saleDescription = false, s } else if (slave.underArmHStyle === "shaved") { r.push(`${His} armpits appear hairless, but closer inspection reveals light, ${slave.underArmHColor} stubble.`); } else if (slave.underArmHStyle === "neat") { - r.push(`${His} armpit hair is neatly trimmed `); + r.push(`${His} armpit hair is neatly trimmed`); if (!hasBothArms(slave)) { - r.push(`since `); + r.push(`since`); if (hasAnyArms(slave)) { r.push(`at least half`); } else { r.push(`it`); } - r.push(` is always in full view`); + r.push(`is always in full view.`); } else { - r.push(`to not be visible unless ${he} lifts ${his} arms`); + r.push(`to not be visible unless ${he} lifts ${his} arms.`); } - r.push(`.`); } else if (slave.underArmHStyle === "bushy") { - r.push(`${His} ${slave.underArmHColor} armpit hair has been allowed to grow freely, `); + r.push(`${His} ${slave.underArmHColor} armpit hair has been allowed to grow freely,`); if (!hasAnyArms(slave)) { - r.push(`creating two bushy patches under where ${his} arms used to be`); + r.push(`creating two bushy patches under where ${his} arms used to be.`); } else { r.push(`so it can be seen poking out from under ${his} arm`); if (hasBothArms(slave)) { r.push(`s`); } - r.push(` at all times`); + r.push(`at all times.`); } - r.push(`.`); } } @@ -437,7 +435,7 @@ App.Desc.longSlave = function({slave = V.activeSlave, saleDescription = false, s r.push(`${He} is <span class="pink">completely silent,</span> which is understandable, since ${he}'s mute.`); } else { if (slave.lips > 95) { - r.push(`${He} is <span class="pink">effectively mute,</span> since ${his} lips are so large that ${he} can no longer speak intelligibly. ${He} can still `); + r.push(`${He} is <span class="pink">effectively mute,</span> since ${his} lips are so large that ${he} can no longer speak intelligibly. ${He} can still`); if (slave.devotion > 50) { r.push(`moan`); } else if (slave.devotion > 20) { @@ -445,7 +443,7 @@ App.Desc.longSlave = function({slave = V.activeSlave, saleDescription = false, s } else { r.push(`scream`); } - r.push(` through them, though.`); + r.push(`through them, though.`); } } @@ -477,25 +475,25 @@ App.Desc.longSlave = function({slave = V.activeSlave, saleDescription = false, s r.push(App.Desc.mouthAccessory(slave)); if (slave.relationship > 4) { if (hasAnyArms(slave)) { - r.push(`${He} has a simple gold band on the little finger of ${his} `); + r.push(`${He} has a simple gold band on the little finger of ${his}`); if (!hasLeftArm(slave)) { r.push(`right`); } else { r.push(`left`); } - r.push(` hand.`); + r.push(`hand.`); } else { r.push(`${He} has a simple gold band on a length of chain around ${his} neck.`); } } else if ((slave.relationship === -3)) { if (hasAnyArms(slave)) { - r.push(`${He} has a simple steel band on the little finger of ${his} `); + r.push(`${He} has a simple steel band on the little finger of ${his}`); if (!hasLeftArm(slave)) { r.push(`right`); } else { r.push(`left`); } - r.push(` hand.`); + r.push(`hand.`); } else { r.push(`${He} has a simple steel band on a length of cord around ${his} neck.`); }