From 7cbf9de572e28cdf5361f91a5ea48231cef5f26e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pregmodder <pregmodder@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 18 May 2018 19:44:10 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] no more consuming veterans. Also bodyswap work.

---
 devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt |   1 +
 src/SecExp/widgets/unitsWidgets.tw           |   8 +-
 src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw      | 520 ++++++++++++-------
 3 files changed, 335 insertions(+), 194 deletions(-)

diff --git a/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt b/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt
index a0eeefdd818..3c72f288d43 100644
--- a/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt
+++ b/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
 	1
 	-added bodyswapping
 	-begining of pronoun rework
+	-fixes
 
 0.10.7.1-0.1.x
 
diff --git a/src/SecExp/widgets/unitsWidgets.tw b/src/SecExp/widgets/unitsWidgets.tw
index 4a95af800e6..1760c71c98d 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/widgets/unitsWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/widgets/unitsWidgets.tw
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@
 			They are equipped with the best the modern world has to offer: modern firearms, explosives, specialized weaponry, experimental railguns, adaptive body armor and high tech recon equipment.
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].training <= 33>>
-			They lack the experience to be considered consumed professionals, but their eagerness to defend the arcology makes up for it.
+			They lack the experience to be considered consummate professionals, but their eagerness to defend the arcology makes up for it.
 		<<elseif $args[0].training <= 66>>
 			They have trained <<if $args[0].battlesFought > 0>>and fought<</if>> enough to be considered disciplined, professional soldiers, ready to face the battlefield.
 		<<else>>
-			They are consumed veterans, with a wealth of experience and perfectly trained. On the battlefield they are a well oiled war machine capable of facing pretty much anything.
+			They are consummate veterans, with a wealth of experience and perfectly trained. On the battlefield they are a well oiled war machine capable of facing pretty much anything.
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].loyalty < 10>>
 			The unit is extremely disloyal. Careful monitoring of their activities and relationships should be implemented.
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
 		<<elseif $args[0].training <= 66>>
 			They have trained <<if $args[0].battlesFought > 0>>and fought<</if>> enough to be considered disciplined, professional soldiers, ready to face the battlefield.
 		<<else>>
-			They are consumed veterans, with a wealth of experience and perfectly trained. On the battlefield they are a well oiled war machine capable of facing pretty much anything.
+			They are consummate veterans, with a wealth of experience and perfectly trained. On the battlefield they are a well oiled war machine capable of facing pretty much anything.
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].loyalty < 10>>
 			The unit is extremely disloyal. Careful monitoring of their activities and relationships should be implemented.
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
 		<<elseif $args[0].training <= 66>>
 			They have trained <<if $args[0].battlesFought > 0>>and fought<</if>> enough to be considered disciplined, professional soldiers, ready to face the battlefield.
 		<<else>>
-			They are consumed veterans, with a wealth of experience and perfectly trained. On the battlefield they are a well oiled war machine capable of facing pretty much anything.
+			They are consummate veterans, with a wealth of experience and perfectly trained. On the battlefield they are a well oiled war machine capable of facing pretty much anything.
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].loyalty < 10>>
 			The unit is extremely disloyal. Careful monitoring of their activities and relationships should be implemented.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
index 6b82d038175..bd02d46ea72 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@
 
 $args[0].slaveName is recovering nicely.
 <<if $args[0].health >= $args[1].health+10>>
-	The monitors indicate that her health has improved from her previous body. Whatever else happens, she will likely appreciate this.
+	The monitors indicate that her @@.green;health has improved@@ from her previous body. Whatever else happens, she will likely appreciate this.
 <<elseif $args[0].health <= $args[1].health-10>>
-	The monitors indicate that her health has degraded from her previous body. Whatever else happens, this will likely upset her.
+	The monitors indicate that her @@.red;health has degraded@@ from her previous body. Whatever else happens, this will likely upset her.
 <</if>>
 Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 	<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 		After a while, she begins to stir, her eyes fluttering. She lets out a low groan and reaches up to rub at her eyes. She stops and stares uncomprehendingly
 		<<if _sight == -2>>
-			into the darkness that is her new world. She goes into a panic and begins thrashing violently until she is restrained and sedated. Hopefully when she comes to again, she'll have forgotten she could ever see in the first place.
+			into @@.red;the darkness that is her new world.@@ She goes into a panic and begins thrashing violently until she is restrained and sedated. Hopefully when she comes to again, she'll have forgotten she could ever see in the first place.
 			<<set _end = 1>>
 		<<elseif _sight == 2>>
-			at the hand she can now see. The gift of sight is lost upon her, as is that she is no longer in her own body.
+			at the hand @@.green;she can now see.@@ The gift of sight is lost upon her, as is that she is no longer in her own body.
 			<<set _end = 1>>
 		<<else>>
 			at the hand for moment before looking for her own. Eventually, she bumps into heself and realizes it belongs to her. From then, her old body is nothing more than a blur, soon to be forgetten forever.
@@ -41,29 +41,29 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 	<<elseif $args[0].devotion >= 50>>
 		After a while, she begins to stir, her eyes fluttering. She lets out a low groan and reaches up to rub at her eyes. She stops and stares uncomprehendingly
 		<<if _sight == -2>>
-			into the darkness that is her new world. She barely manages to keep calm before accepting this is the fate you have chosen for her.
+			into @@.red;the darkness that is her new world.@@ She barely manages to keep calm before accepting this is the fate you have chosen for her.
 		<<elseif _sight == -1>>
-			at the hand she can now hardly see. As she squints at it, she realizes that it’s not her own and a smile begins to form on her face.
+			at the hand @@.red;she can now hardly see.@@ As she squints at it, she realizes that it’s not her own and a smile begins to form on her face.
 		<<elseif _sight == 2>>
-			at the hand she can now see. She is by no means ungrateful for such a gift, but is too shocked by it to truly respond. As her eyes move to you, however, she quickly blushes and looks away.
+			at the @@.green;hand she can now see.@@ She is by no means ungrateful for such a gift, but is too shocked by it to truly respond. As her eyes move to you, however, she quickly blushes and looks away.
 		<<elseif _sight == 1>>
-			at the hand for moment before she realizes that it’s not her own. A smile begins to form on her face, followed by a gasp once she realizes she can see the world clearly now.
+			at the hand for moment before she realizes that it’s not her own. A smile begins to form on her face, followed by a gasp once she realizes she can @@.green;see the world clearly now.@@
 		<<else>>
 			at the hand for moment before she realizes that it’s not her own. A smile begins to form on her face.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 		After a while, she begins to stir, her eyes fluttering. She lets out a low groan and reaches up to rub at her eyes. She stops and stares uncomprehendingly
 		<<if _sight == -2>>
-			into the darkness that is her new world. After a short expurgation of @@.gold;grief and terror,@@ she takes a deep breath and visibly suppresses her emotions before returning to her inspection.
+			into the @@.red;darkness that is her new world.@@ After a short expurgation of @@.gold;grief and terror,@@ she takes a deep breath and visibly suppresses her emotions before returning to her inspection.
 			<<set $args[0].trust -= 15>>
 		<<elseif _sight == -1>>
-			at the hand @@.gold;she can now hardly see.@@ As she squints at it, she realizes that her vision is not the only thing that has changed.
+			at the hand @@.gold;she can now hardly see.@@ As she @@.red;squints at it,@@ she realizes that her vision is not the only thing that has changed.
 			<<set $args[0].trust -= 5>>
 		<<elseif _sight == 2>>
-			at the hand she can now see. She's @@.hotpink;quite grateful@@ that @@.mediumaquamarine;you would give her such a gift.@@ She quickly returns to her senses and looks back to her hand finally realizing just why she can see now.
+			at the hand @@.green;she can now see.@@ She's @@.hotpink;quite grateful@@ that @@.mediumaquamarine;you would give her such a gift.@@ She quickly returns to her senses and looks back to her hand finally realizing just why she can see now.
 			<<set $args[0].devotion += 15, $args[0].trust += 10>>
 		<<elseif _sight == 1>>
-			at the hand for moment before she realizes that it’s not her own. She lets out a gasp once she realizes she can see the world clearly now; she accepted her fate already, but she's @@.hotpink;quite grateful@@ that @@.mediumaquamarine;you would give her perfect vision.@@
+			at the hand for moment before she realizes that it’s not her own. She lets out a gasp once she realizes she can @@.green;see the world clearly now;@@ she accepted her fate already, but she's @@.hotpink;quite grateful@@ that @@.mediumaquamarine;you would give her perfect vision.@@
 			<<set $args[0].devotion += 5, $args[0].trust += 3>>
 		<<else>>
 			at the hand for moment before she realizes that it’s not her own.
@@ -71,16 +71,16 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 	<<else>>
 		She reaches up to rub at her eyes and pauses to stare in shock
 		<<if _sight == -2>>
-			into the darkness that is her new world. After a short expurgation of @@.gold;grief and terror,@@ she takes a deep breath and visibly suppresses her emotions. She
+			into the @@.red;darkness that is her new world.@@ After a short expurgation of @@.gold;grief and terror,@@ she takes a deep breath and visibly suppresses her emotions. She
 			<<set $args[0].trust -= 15>>
 		<<elseif _sight == -1>>
-			at her hand; an unfamiliar hand that she can just barely see. She
+			at her hand; an unfamiliar hand that she can @@.red;just barely see.@@ She
 			<<set $args[0].trust -= 5>>
 		<<elseif _sight == 2>>
-			at the hand she can now see. She's @@.hotpink;quite grateful@@ that @@.mediumaquamarine;you would give her such a gift.@@ The gift of sight is short lived, however, as she
+			at the hand @@.green;she can now see.@@ She's @@.hotpink;quite grateful@@ that @@.mediumaquamarine;you would give her such a gift.@@ The gift of sight is short lived, however, as she
 			<<set $args[0].devotion += 15, $args[0].trust += 10>>
 		<<elseif _sight == 1>>
-			at her hand; a hand that she can clearly see is not her own. She
+			at her hand; a hand that she @@.green;can clearly see@@ is not her own. She
 			<<set $args[0].devotion += 5, $args[0].trust += 3>>
 		<<else>>
 			at her hand. She
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 	
 	<<if _end != 1>>
 		<<if $args[0].skin != $args[1].skin && canSee($args[0]) && $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
-			Her newly $args[0].skin skin is the first thing that leaps out at her.
+			Her @@.coral;newly $args[0].skin skin@@ is the first thing that leaps out at her.
 			<<if $args[0].devotion > 50>>
 				She is fascinated by the change and what this means for her.
 			<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -124,17 +124,17 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			finger as if nothing changed.
 		<<elseif $args[0].muscles < $args[1].muscles-5>> /*(less muscle)*/
 			<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-				finger; the arm notably less muscular than her old one.
+				finger; the arm @@.orange;notably less muscular@@ than her old one.
 			<<else>>
-				finger and noticing her arm feels less muscular than she remembers. She becomes irritated with her newfound weakness and @@.mediumorchid;frowns angrily.@@
+				finger and noticing her arm feels @@.orange;less muscular@@ than she remembers. She becomes irritated with her newfound weakness and @@.mediumorchid;frowns angrily.@@
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 1>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].muscles > $args[1].muscles+5>> /*(more muscle)*/
 			<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20 || $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
-				finger; the arm <<if canSee($args[0])>>visibly more toned<<else>>noticeably stronger<</if>> than her old one. With a clench of her fist, the muscles of the limb bulge slightly. She is @@.hotpink;happy@@ that you would take into consideration such a small detail, and knows that life will be just that much easier now.
+				finger; the arm @@.lime;<<if canSee($args[0])>>visibly more toned<<else>>noticeably stronger<</if>>@@ than her old one. With a clench of her fist, the muscles of the limb bulge slightly. She is @@.hotpink;happy@@ that you would take into consideration such a small detail, and knows that life will be just that much easier now.
 				<<set $args[0].devotion += 2>>
 			<<else>>
-				finger. Flexing, she realizes she is noticeably stronger than she was before. @@.mediumaquamarine;She takes a moment to relish her newfound strength.@@
+				finger. Flexing, she realizes she is @@.lime;noticeably stronger@@ than she was before. @@.mediumaquamarine;She takes a moment to relish her newfound strength.@@
 				<<set $args[0].trust += 10>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<else>> /* (same muscle (within five units)) */
@@ -142,26 +142,26 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<<if !canSee($args[0])>>
 					finger. She traces her 
 					<<if $args[1].physicalAge >= 40>>
-						arm and feels how less wrinkled her skin is and how firmer her muscles are.
+						arm and feels how @@.green;less wrinkled@@ her skin is and how firmer her muscles are.
 					<<else>>
-						arm, feeling just how much younger she is.
+						arm, feeling just @@.green;how much younger@@ she is.
 					<</if>>
 				<<else>>
-					finger and noticing how much younger she is.
+					finger and noticing @@.green;how much younger@@ she is.
 					<<if $args[1].physicalAge >= 40>>
-						She is pleased to see her hand is now less wrinkled and the muscles that coat her arm are now firmer than they were before.
+						She is pleased to see her hand is now @@.green;less wrinkled@@ and the muscles that coat her arm are now firmer than they were before.
 					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].physicalAge > $args[1].physicalAge+5>>
 				<<if !canSee($args[0])>>
 					finger. She traces her 
 					<<if $args[1].physicalAge < 40>>
-						arm and feels the wrinkles in her skin. With a despondent note, she lowers her hands back to her sides.
+						arm and feels the @@.red;wrinkles in her skin.@@ With a despondent note, she lowers her hands back to her sides.
 					<<else>>
-						arm, feeling just how much older she is.
+						arm, feeling just @@.red;how much older@@ she is.
 					<</if>>
 				<<else>>
-					finger and noticing how much older she is.
+					finger and noticing @@.red;how much older@@ she is.
 					<<if $args[1].physicalAge < 40>>
 						With a despondent note, she lowers her hand back to her side, having seen the wrinkles that now coat her new arm.
 					<</if>>
@@ -173,26 +173,33 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 
 		Her hand roams over her face searching for changes.
 
+		<<if ($args[0].earPiercing != 0 && $args[1].earPiercing == 0) || ($args[0].eyebrowPiercing != 0 && $args[1].eyebrowPiercing == 0) || ($args[0].nosePiercing != 0 && $args[1].nosePiercing == 0)>>
+			She finds several new piercings adorning her face.
+		<</if>>
+
 		<<if $args[0].sexualFlaw == "oral fixation" && $args[0].lips > $args[1].lips+10>> /* (bigger lip+oral fixation) */
-			She slowly runs her fingertips over the plush pillows. A blush blossoms over her face and the beeping of her heart monitor speeds up slightly. You know that she’ll put them to good use.
+			She slowly runs her fingertips over the @@.lime;plush pillows.@@ A blush blossoms over her face and the beeping of her heart monitor speeds up slightly. You know that she’ll put them to good use.
 			<<if $args[0].devotion <= 20>>
 				She pauses, and begins to @@.hotpink;hesitantly smile@@ as she feels the softness of her lovely new lips.
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].lips > $args[1].lips+10>>
-			Her fingers brush her lips and she pauses for a moment,<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">> as if<</if>> noticing that they are larger now than they once were.
+			Her fingers brush her lips and she pauses for a moment,<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">> as if<</if>> noticing that @@.lime;they are larger now@@ than they once were.
 		<<elseif $args[0].sexualFlaw == "oral fixation" && $args[0].lips < $args[1].lips-10>> /* (smaller lip+oral fixation) */
 			<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-				Her fingers pause and almost flinch away once they reach her lips. A second later, they return to confirm her fear. Her pride and joy are gone. She lets out a sniff and @@.mediumorchid;tears begin to roll down her cheeks.@@
+				Her fingers pause and almost flinch away once they reach her lips. A second later, they return to confirm her fear. Her pride and joy are @@.orange;gone.@@ She lets out a sniff and @@.mediumorchid;tears begin to roll down her cheeks.@@
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 10>>
 			<<else>>
-				Her hand flinches, and she pulls it away as <<if $args[0].voice == 0>>attempted <</if>>sobs well up from her. For someone who values her lips like her, this is a truly @@.mediumorchid;terrible fate.@@
+				Her hand flinches, and she pulls it away as <<if $args[0].voice == 0>>attempted <</if>>sobs well up from her. For someone who values her lips like her, for them @@.orange;to be gone@@ is a truly @@.mediumorchid;terrible fate.@@
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 20>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].lips < $args[1].lips-10>>
-			Her fingers brush her lips and she pauses for a moment,<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">> as if<</if>> noticing that they are smaller now than they once were.
+			Her fingers brush her lips and she pauses for a moment,<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">> as if<</if>> noticing that @@.orange;they are smaller@@ now than they once were.
 		<<else>>
 			Her fingers brush her lips and she pauses for a moment,<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">> having found nothing different about them<<else>> finding them familiar enough<</if>>.
 		<</if>>
+		<<if $args[0].lipsPiercing != 0 && $args[1].lipsPiercing == 0>>
+			She now has piercws lips and she flexes her lips so it clicks against her teeth.
+		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].teeth == "removable" && $args[1].teeth != "removable">> /* no teeth */
 			A look of confusion crosses her face, her brow furrowing slightly. You see her work her jaw for moment before she turns her head and spits out a set of dentures.
 			<<if $args[0].devotion <= -20 && $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
@@ -204,10 +211,10 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].physicalAge < 40 && $args[1].physicalAge > 50 && $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 			<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-				She can feel the lack of wrinkles on her face and @@.hotpink;smiles broadly.@@
+				She can feel the @@.green;lack of wrinkles@@ on her face and @@.hotpink;smiles broadly.@@
 				<<set $args[0].devotion += 2>>
 			<<else>>
-				She can feel the lack of wrinkles on her face and cringes at what this means for her future.
+				She can feel the @@.green;lack of wrinkles@@ on her face and cringes at what this means for her future.
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 
@@ -228,7 +235,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<if $args[0].boobsImplant > 0 && $args[1].boobsImplant > 0>> /*(breast implants)*/
 			and finds
 			<<if $args[0].boobsImplant >= $args[1].boobsImplant+20000 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Massive implants+breast fetish)*/
-				she still has breast implants; implants easily bigger than any old world woman's.
+				she @@.lime;still has breast implants; implants easily bigger than any old world woman's.@@
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
 					The sheer size of her silicone titans greatly excites her to the point that she can't hold back. She gropes her new chest boulders until an intense orgasm @@.hotpink;courses through her body.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
@@ -237,7 +244,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Massive+breast fetish)*/
-				she still has breast implants resting on her chest. Even if they aren't clearly implants, she can barely move under the weight of her new breasts.
+				she @@.lime;still has breast implants resting on her chest. Even if they aren't clearly implants, she can barely move under the weight of her new breasts.@@
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
 					The sheer size of her titanic tits greatly excites her to the point that she can't hold back. She gropes her new chest pillows until an intense orgasm @@.hotpink;rewards her for enjoying your gift.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
@@ -246,7 +253,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobsImplant >= $args[1].boobsImplant+20000>> /*(Extreme bigger implants)*/
-				a pair of absolutely enormous fake tits ballooning out from her.
+				@@.lime;a pair of absolutely enormous fake tits ballooning out from her.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					As she examines her breasts, she seems to understand that they are much bigger now, though what lies within eludes her mind.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -256,7 +263,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 10, $args[0].trust -= 10>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000>> /*(Extreme bigger breasts)*/
-				a pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she feels them, she recognizes the familiar firmnesss of the implants at their cores.<</if>>
+				@@.lime;a pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.@@<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she feels them, she recognizes the familiar firmnesss of the implants at their cores.<</if>>
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					As she examines her breasts, she seems to understand that they are much bigger now.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -267,34 +274,34 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Bigger+breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					her bust has grown. She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
+					@@.lime;her bust has grown.@@ She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
 				<<else>>
-					her breasts have expanded in size. She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
+					@@.lime;her breasts have expanded in size.@@ She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100>> /*(Bigger breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that they are bigger now.
+					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that @@.lime;they are bigger now.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					her bust has grown. She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at their mass.
+					@@.lime;her bust has grown.@@ She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at their mass.
 				<<else>>
-					her chest is heavier than ever. However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
+					@@.lime;her chest is heavier than ever.@@ However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Smaller breasts + breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					her bust has shrunk. She is saddened by the loss of the beautiful weight she once beared and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, and succeeds. @@.mediumorchid;But only barely.@@
+					@@.orange;her bust has shrunk.@@ She is saddened by the loss of the beautiful weight she once beared and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, and succeeds. @@.mediumorchid;But only barely.@@
 				<<else>>
-					that her chest is not as large as it once was.  @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and lets the tears finish running from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
+					@@.orange;that her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and lets the tears finish running from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
 				<</if>>
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300>> /*(Smaller breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that they are smaller now.
+					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that @@.orange;they are smaller now.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					that her chest is smaller. She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
+					@@.orange;that her chest is smaller.@@ She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
 				<<else>>
-					that her chest is not as large as it once was. She looks at you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
+					@@.orange;that her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ She looks at you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>> /*(No change (less than a 100 cc’s of change)*/
@@ -314,7 +321,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<elseif $args[0].boobsImplant > 0 && $args[1].boobsImplant == 0>>
 			and finds
 			<<if $args[0].boobsImplant >= $args[1].boobsImplant+20000 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Massive implants+breast fetish)*/
-				a pair of massive implants bulging out from her.
+				@@.lime;a pair of massive implants bulging out from her.@@
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
 					The sheer size of her silicone titans greatly excites her to the point that she can't hold back. She roughly gropes her new chest boulders until an intense orgasm @@.hotpink;courses through her body.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
@@ -323,7 +330,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Massive+breast fetish)*/
-				she has breast implants hanging from her chest, somewhere. Even if they aren't clearly implants, she can barely move with the weight of her new breasts.
+				@@.lime;she has breast implants hanging from her chest, somewhere. Even if they aren't clearly implants, she can barely move with the weight of her new breasts.@@
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
 					The sheer size of her titanic tits greatly excites her to the point that she can't hold back. She shudders against her new chest pillows as she fondles herself until an intense orgasm @@.hotpink;rewards her for enjoying your gift.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
@@ -332,7 +339,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobsImplant >= $args[1].boobsImplant+20000>> /*(Extreme bigger implants)*/
-				a pair of absolutely enormous fake tits protruding far from her body.
+				@@.lime;a pair of absolutely enormous fake tits protruding far from her body.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					As she examines her breasts, she seems to understand that they are much bigger now, yet far more firm then they were before.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -342,7 +349,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 10, $args[0].trust -= 10>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000>> /*(Extreme bigger breasts)*/
-				a pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she moves, she recognizes a familiar firmness at their cores.<</if>>
+				@@.lime;a pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.@@<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she moves, she recognizes a familiar firmness at their cores.<</if>>
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					As she examines her breasts, she seems to understand that they are much bigger now, yet far more soft then they were before.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -353,34 +360,34 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Bigger+breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					her bust has grown. She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
+					@@.lime;her bust has grown.@@ She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
 				<<else>>
-					her breasts have expanded in size. She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
+					@@.lime;her breasts have expanded in size.@@ She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100>> /*(Bigger breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that they are bigger now.
+					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that @@.lime;they are bigger now.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					her bust has grown. She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at their firmness.
+					@@.lime;her bust has grown.@@ She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at their firmness.
 				<<else>>
-					her chest is heavy with implants. However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
+					@@.lime;her chest is heavy with implants.@@ However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Smaller breasts + breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					her bust has shrunk. She is saddened by the loss of the beautiful weight she once beared and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
+					@@.orange;her bust has shrunk.@@ She is saddened by the loss of the beautiful weight she once beared and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
 				<<else>>
-					that her chest is not as large as it once was. @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and let the tears run from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
+					@@.orange;her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and let the tears run from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
 				<</if>>
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300>> /*(Smaller breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that they are smaller now.
+					breasts. As she examines them closer, she seems to understand that @@.orange;they are smaller now.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					that her chest is smaller. She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
+					@@.orange;her chest is smaller.@@ She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
 				<<else>>
-					that her chest is not as large as it once was. She <<if canSee($args[0])>>looks at<<else>>faces<</if>> you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
+					@@.orange;her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ She <<if canSee($args[0])>>looks at<<else>>faces<</if>> you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>> /*(No change (less than a 100 cc’s of change)*/
@@ -402,22 +409,22 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<elseif $args[0].boobsImplant == 0 && $args[1].boobsImplant > 0>>
 			<<if $args[0].boobs <= 300 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>>/*flat+fetish*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds not only her implants gone, but her breasts entirely. She is saddened by her flat chest and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
+					and finds @@.orange;not only her implants gone, but her breasts entirely.@@ She is saddened by her flat chest and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
 				<<else>>
-					and finds that her implants are gone, along with the rest of her breasts. @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and wipe the tears that are running from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
+					and finds that @@.orange;her implants are gone, along with the rest of her breasts.@@ @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and wipe the tears that are running from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
 				<</if>>
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= 300>> /*flat*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					and finds that her implants and breasts are completely gone. This draws no reaction from her.
+					and finds that @@.orange;her implants and breasts are completely gone.@@ This draws no reaction from her.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds nothing. Not only have her implants been removed, but she's been left completely flat. It is what it is.
+					and finds nothing. @@.orange;Not only have her implants been removed, but she's been left completely flat.@@ It is what it is.
 				<<else>>
-					and finds nothing. Not only have her implants been removed, but she's been left completely flat. <<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>She knows much of society will view her as a lesser person and a part of her feels the same.<</if>> This feels like a cruel manipulation of her body and she @@.mediumorchid;hates you@@ a little more for it.
+					and finds nothing. @@.orange;Not only have her implants been removed, but she's been left completely flat.@@ <<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>She knows much of society will view her as a lesser person and a part of her feels the same.<</if>> This feels like a cruel manipulation of her body and she @@.mediumorchid;hates you@@ a little more for it.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Massive+breast fetish)*/
-				and finds nothing but breast. As she thoroughly gropes them, she can just make out that she no longer has implants.
+				@@.lime;and finds nothing but breast.@@ As she thoroughly gropes them, she can just make out that she no longer has implants.
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
 					The sheer size of her titanic tits greatly excites her to the point that she can't hold back. She shudders against her new chest pillows as an intense orgasm @@.hotpink;rewards her for enjoying your gift.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
@@ -426,7 +433,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000>> /*(Extreme bigger breasts)*/
-				and finds a pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she fondles them, she can just make out that she no longer has implants.<</if>>
+				@@.lime;and finds a pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.@@<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she fondles them, she can just make out that she no longer has implants.<</if>>
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					As she examines her breasts, she seems to understand that they are much bigger now.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -437,44 +444,44 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Bigger+breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds her tits are bigger than ever, yet implant free. She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
+					@@.lime;and finds her tits are bigger than ever, yet implant free.@@ She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
 				<<else>>
-					and finds that her breasts have expanded in size, yet lack implants. She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
+					@@.lime;and finds that her breasts have expanded in size, yet lack implants.@@ She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100>> /*(Bigger breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					breasts. As she examines them, she seems to understand that they are bigger now.
+					breasts. As she examines them, she seems to understand that @@.lime;they are bigger now.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds her bust has grown. She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at the motion of silicone free flesh.
+					@@.lime;and finds her bust has grown.@@ She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at the motion of silicone free flesh.
 				<<else>>
-					and finds her chest is heavier than ever, and not because of silicone. However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
+					@@.lime;and finds her chest is heavier than ever, and not because of silicone.@@ However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Smaller breasts + breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					ands finds her bust has shrunk. She is saddened by the loss of her implants and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
+					@@.orange;and finds her bust has shrunk.@@ She is saddened by the loss of her implants and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
 				<<else>>
-					ands finds that her chest is not as large as it once was. @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her natural breasts begin to quiver<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and wipes the tears from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
+					@@.orange;and finds that her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her natural breasts begin to quiver<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and wipes the tears from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
 				<</if>>
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300>> /*(Smaller breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds that her implants have been removed. She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
+					@@.orange;and finds that her implants have been removed.@@ She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
 				<<else>>
-					ands finds that her chest is not as large as it once was. She <<if canSee($args[0])>>looks<<else>>gazes<</if>> at you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
+					@@.orange;and finds that her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ She <<if canSee($args[0])>>looks<<else>>gazes<</if>> at you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>> /*(No change (less than a 100 cc’s of change)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					and finds nothing off about her chest.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds a familiar chest waiting for her, albiet implant free.
+					and finds a familiar chest waiting for her, albiet @@.coral;implant free.@@
 					<<if ($args[0].physicalAge < $args[1].physicalAge-5)>> /*(younger)*/
 						She is pleased to see her breasts are now more pert and smooth then they were before.
 					<</if>>
 				<<else>>
-					and finds that her breasts are roughly the same, save for their missing implants.
+					and finds that her breasts are roughly the same, save for their @@.coral;missing implants.@@
 					<<if ($args[0].physicalAge < $args[1].physicalAge-5)>> /*(younger)*/
 						Except, of course, that they are younger and more pert, something that she @@.hotpink;can't help but appreciate.@@
 						<<set $args[0].devotion += 2>>
@@ -484,22 +491,22 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<else>>
 			<<if $args[0].boobs <= 300 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>>/*flat+fetish*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds no tits at all. She is saddened by her flat chest and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, and succeeds. @@.mediumorchid;Barely.@@
+					and finds @@.orange;no tits at all.@@ She is saddened by her flat chest and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, and succeeds. @@.mediumorchid;Barely.@@
 				<<else>>
-					and finds no tits at all. @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and let the tears run from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
+					and finds @@.orange;no tits at all.@@ @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and let the tears run from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
 				<</if>>
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= 300>> /*flat*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					and finds nothing. She doesn't seem to care, though.
+					and @@.orange;finds nothing.@@ She doesn't seem to care, though.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds nothing; her breasts are completely gone. At least it's a literal weight off her chest.
+					and finds nothing; @@.orange;her breasts are completely gone.@@ At least it's a literal weight off her chest.
 				<<else>>
-					and finds nothing; her breasts are completely gone. <<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>She knows much of society will view her as a lesser person and a part of her feels the same.<</if>> This feels like a cruel manipulation of her body and she @@.mediumorchid;hates you@@ a little more for it.
+					and finds nothing; @@.orange;her breasts are completely gone.@@ <<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>She knows much of society will view her as a lesser person and a part of her feels the same.<</if>> This feels like a cruel manipulation of her body and she @@.mediumorchid;hates you@@ a little more for it.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Massive+breast fetish)*/
-				and finds nothing but breast. As she jiggles them back and forth between her arms, she can make out that they are all natural.
+				and finds @@.lime;nothing but breast.@@ As she jiggles them back and forth between her arms, she can make out that they are all natural.
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
 					The sheer size of her titanic tits greatly excites her to the point that she can't hold back. She shudders against her new chest pillows as an intense orgasm @@.hotpink;rewards her for enjoying your gift.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
@@ -508,7 +515,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs >= $args[1].boobs+20000>> /*(Extreme bigger breasts)*/
-				and finds a pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she feels them, she can clearly tell they are completely natural.<</if>>
+				and finds a @@.lime;pair of massive tits hanging from her chest.@@<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> As she feels them, she can clearly tell they are completely natural.<</if>>
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					As she examines her breasts, she seems to understand that they are much bigger now.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -519,34 +526,34 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Bigger+breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds her tits are bigger than ever. She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
+					and finds @@.lime;her tits are bigger than ever.@@ She gropes her mammaries eagerly, desperate to familiarize herself with them. She bites her lower lip as she teases her nipples. From the look on her face, you know she’ll want to put them to the test.
 				<<else>>
-					and finds her breasts have expanded in size. She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
+					and finds @@.lime;her breasts have expanded in size.@@ She wrestles with the fact that you have clearly not done this for her benefit, @@.hotpink;but decides this is definitely better than the alternative.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs > $args[1].boobs+100>> /*(Bigger breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					and finds breasts. As she examines them, she seems to understand that they are bigger now.
+					and finds breasts. As she examines them, she seems to understand that @@.lime;they are bigger now.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds her bust has grown. She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at the motion of her soft flesh.
+					and finds @@.lime;her bust has grown.@@ She is caught off guard at the size of her new chest. She bounces them in her palms, marveling at the motion of her soft flesh.
 				<<else>>
-					and finds that her chest is heavier than ever. However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
+					and finds that @@.lime;her chest is heavier than ever.@@ However, she is well aware however that these breasts are not for her benefit or pleasure. She views this as a @@.mediumorchid;cruel manipulation of her body@@ on top of what has already been done to her.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Smaller breasts + breast fetish)*/
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					and finds that her bust has shrunk. She is saddened by her smaller chest and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
+					and finds that @@.orange;her bust has shrunk.@@ She is saddened by her smaller chest and struggles to keep herself under control for your sake, @@.mediumorchid;barely.@@
 				<<else>>
-					and finds that her chest is not as large as it once was. @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and wipe the tears from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
+					and finds that @@.orange;her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ @@.mediumcorchid;Tears leap into her eyes@@ as her her shoulders begin to shake<<if $args[0].voice != 0>> and sobs echo about the room<</if>>. She pauses to gather herself together and wipe the tears from her eyes before continuing her bodily inspection.
 				<</if>>
 				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobs <= $args[1].boobs-100 && $args[1].boobs > 300>> /*(Smaller breasts)*/
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-					breasts. As she examines them, she seems to understand that they smaller now.
+					breasts. As she examines them, she seems to understand @@.orange;that they smaller now.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					that her breasts are smaller. She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
+					that @@.orange;her breasts are smaller.@@ She shrugs this off, as her devotion to you overrides any anguish this might cause.
 				<<else>>
-					that her chest is not as large as it once was. She looks at you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
+					that @@.orange;her chest is not as large as it once was.@@ She looks at you with @@.mediumorchid;anger<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset">>@@ as this is not only a cruel manipulation of her body, but she is now less of a woman in the eyes of a vast majority of society.<<else>>.@@<</if>>
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>> /*(No change (less than a 100 cc’s of change)*/
@@ -566,14 +573,17 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
-
+		<<if $args[0].areolaePiercing != 0 && $args[1].areolaePiercing == 0>>
+			She bumps into the piercings in her areolae, brushing her fingers against them and toying with them for a moment.
+		<</if>>
+	
 		/*(if lactation status has changed)*/
 		<<if $args[0].lactation > 0 && $args[1].lactation == 0>> /*(lactating now, wasn’t before)*/
 			As she fondles her breasts,
 			<<if $args[0].lactation == 1>>
-				solitary drops of milk begin to drop from her nipples.
+				@@.coral;solitary drops of milk begin to drop from her nipples.@@
 			<<else>>
-				steady streams of milk start to flow from her nipples.
+				@@.coral;steady streams of milk start to flow from her nipples.@@
 			<</if>>
 			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 				She reels back at the wet feeling.
@@ -584,19 +594,45 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 		<<elseif $args[0].lactation > 1 && $args[1].lactation == 1>>
-			She realizes her breasts are rapidly producing milk. She groans at the unfamiliar pressure.
+			She realizes her breasts are @@.lime;rapidly producing milk.@@ She groans at the unfamiliar pressure.
 		<<elseif $args[0].lactation == 1 && $args[1].lactation == 2>>
-			She realizes that her breasts are producing less milk. She seems a little relieved.
+			She realizes that her breasts are @@.orange;producing less milk.@@ She seems a little relieved.
 		<<elseif $args[0].lactation == 0 && $args[1].lactation > 0>>
-			She realizes that her breasts no longer produce milk. She doesn’t show much reaction to this change.
+			She realizes that her breasts @@.orange;no longer produce milk.@@ She doesn’t show much reaction to this change.
 		<<elseif $args[0].lactation > 0 && $args[1].lactation > 0>>
 			The familiar feeling of fullness in her breasts tells her she's producing as much milk as ever.
 		<</if>>
 
 		<<if $args[0].nipples != $args[1].nipples && $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">> /*(if nipples have changed shape)*/
 			Once she is satisfied with her tits, she shifts her chest to get a better <<if canSee($args[0])>>view of<<else>>feel of<</if>> her nipples, having noticed that they don’t <<if canSee($args[0])>>look<<else>>seem<</if>> quite the same as before.
-			<<if $args[0].nipples == "fuckable">>
-				She doesn't seem interested until she slips a finger deep into a nipple. She reddens at the thought of what the intent of this is.
+			<<switch $args[0].nipples>>
+			<<case "fuckable">>
+				She doesn't seem interested in them until she slips a @@.lime;finger deep inside one of the folds.@@ She reddens at the thought of what the intent of this is.
+			<<case "tiny">>
+				She's a little depressed by @@.orange;how tiny they've become.@@
+			<<case "puffy">>
+				She quivers a little as she traces the edges of her @@.lime;puffy nipples.@@
+			<<case "huge">>
+				She quivers a little as she grabs hold of the @@.lime;two towering protrusions@@ jutting out from her breasts.
+			<<case "partially inverted">>
+				She quivers a little as she
+				<<if $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing != 0>>
+					tugs on the piercings, pulling @@.lime;partially inverted nipples@@ out.
+				<<else>>
+					teases the @@.lime;little exposed nipples@@ sticking out of her breasts.
+				<</if>>
+			<<case "inverted">>
+				She quivers a little as she
+				<<if $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing != 0>>
+					tugs on the piercings, forcing her @@.lime;inverted nipples@@ completely out.
+				<<else>>
+					accidentally pops one of her @@.lime;inverted nipples@@ out.
+				<</if>>
+			<<default>>
+				They can only be called normal, though she can still call them cute.
+			<</switch>>
+			<<if $args[0].nipplesPiercing != 0 && $args[1].nipplesPiercing == 0 && $args[0].nipples != "inverted" && $args[0].nipples != "partially inverted">>
+				She also finds they are pierced, and takes a moment to pull at one, shivering at the tingles the action sends through her chest.
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 
@@ -604,27 +640,27 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<if $args[0].boobShape != $args[1].boobShape && $args[0].boobs > 300 && $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 			As she releases her boobs, she discovers they no longer rest the same either;
 			<<if $args[0].boobShape == "saggy">> /*(drooping or older)*/
-				they now sag, disappointing her.
+				@@.red;they now sag,@@ disappointing her.
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobShape == "downward-facing">>
-				they now face downwards, disappointing her.
+				@@.red;they now face downwards,@@ disappointing her.
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobShape == "wide-set">>
-				they rest heavily to either side of her body.
+				@@.green;they settle heavily to either side of her body.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobShape == "perky">>
-				they are much perkier.
+				@@.green;they are much perkier.@@
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					She jostles them playfully.
 				<<else>>
 					She is intrigued by this development.
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].boobShape == "torpedo-shaped">>
-				they stick out far from her body.
+				@@.green;they stick out far from her body.@@
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					She bounces to make them sway about.
 				<<else>>
 					She is intrigued by this development.
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>>
-				they can only be called normal.
+				@@.green;they can only be called normal.@@
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 		
@@ -633,16 +669,24 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<<if $args[1].voice == 0>>
 				When she finishes, she turns to you and gestures for a mirror.
 				<<if $args[0].voice != 0>>
-					You gesture as if you couldn't hear her, to which she squeeks in response. It immediately @@.hotpink;dawns on her@@ what this means. She @@.mediumaquamarine;thanks you profusely@@ before asking for a mirror.
+					You gesture as if you couldn't hear her, to which she @@.green;squeeks in response.@@ It immediately @@.hotpink;dawns on her@@ what this means. She @@.mediumaquamarine;thanks you profusely@@ before asking for a mirror.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 5, $args[0].trust += 10>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>>
 				When she finishes, she turns to you and opens her mouth to
 				<<if $args[0].voice == 0>>
-					speak, but finds no words come. She tries again, frowning. She rubs her throat and tears well in her eyes, but no sobs can be heard as her shoulders begin to @@.gold;shake.@@ After a bit, she extends her hand, and gestures @@.mediumorchid;somberly@@ for a mirror.
+					speak, but finds @@.coral;no words come.@@ She tries again, frowning. She rubs her throat and tears well in her eyes, but no sobs can be heard as her shoulders begin to @@.gold;shake.@@ After a bit, she extends her hand, and gestures @@.mediumorchid;somberly@@ for a mirror.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 5, $args[0].trust -= 5>>
-				<<elseif $args[0].voice != $args[1].voice>>
-					speak. At first she's slightly startled by her new voice, but manages a single word. "...mirror..."
+				<<else>>
+					speak. At first she's slightly startled by her new 
+					<<if $args[0].voice < $args[1].voice>>
+						@@.orange;<<if $args[0].voice < $args[1].voicelower-1>>much <</if>>lower voice,@@
+					<<elseif $args[0].voice > $args[1].voice>>
+						@@.lime;<<if $args[0].voice < $args[1].voicelower+1>>much <</if>>higher voice,@@
+					<<else>>
+						voice, 
+					<</if>>
+					but manages a single word. "...mirror..."
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 			<br><br>
@@ -689,21 +733,21 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<if $args[0].height >= $args[1].height+10>>
 			wobbles for a moment as she adjusts to her new height.
 			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-				The benefits of being taller don't register to the broken girl.
+				The benefits of @@.lime;being taller@@ don't register to the broken girl.
 			<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-				She is @@.hotpink;truly pleased@@ that you have taken the effort to make her taller, knowing that a lot of everyday things in life will be easier, and that she will be viewed as having more stature now, both metaphorically and literally.
+				She is @@.hotpink;truly pleased@@ that you have taken the effort to make her @@.lime;taller,@@ knowing that a lot of everyday things in life will be easier, and that she will be viewed as having more stature now, both metaphorically and literally.
 				<<set $args[0].devotion += 2>>
 			<<else>>
-				She frowns for a moment, before shrugging and accepting this small gift, even knowing that it is likely not for her sake that you have done this. Her mouth curls into a @@.hotpink;small grin@@ for just a moment.
-				<<set $args[0].devotion += 1>>
+				She frowns for a moment, before shrugging and accepting this small gift, even knowing that it is likely not for her sake that you have done this. Her mouth curls into a @@.mediumaquamarine;small grin@@ for just a moment as she considers how @@.lime;being taller@@ will benefit her.
+				<<set $args[0].trust += 1>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].height <= $args[1].height-10>>
 			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
-				Doesn't quite realize that she is shorter than before.
+				Doesn't quite realize that she is @@.lime;shorter than before.@@
 			<<else>>
-				starts at the falling sensation before realizing she is just shorter than she was before.
+				starts at the falling sensation before realizing she is just @@.lime;shorter than she was before.@@
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-					As frustrating as it will be, she tries to look at the bright side of this and thinks of all the fun things she will be able to do easier now, like being picked up and set on a counter or pinned against a wall.  She drools a little, before shking her head and continuing on.
+					As frustrating as it will be, she tries to look at the bright side of this and thinks of all the fun things she will be able to do easier now, like being picked up and set on a counter or pinned against a wall.  She drools a little, before shaking her head and continuing on.
 				<<else>>
 					This is aggravating more than anything to her. Everything will just be just that much more difficult now. She @@.mediumorchid;glowers at you.@@
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
@@ -718,7 +762,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		
 		<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken" && canSee($args[0])>>
 			<<if $args[0].race != $args[1].race>> /*(race changes)*/
-				It immediately strikes her that she is no longer <<print $args[1].race>>. Her new $args[0].race body
+				It immediately strikes her that she is @@.coral;no longer <<print $args[1].race>>.@@ Her new $args[0].race body
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 50>>
 					intrigues and delights her. She is happy that you invested in her appearance in such an interesting way.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -736,9 +780,9 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		
 		<<if $args[0].bald == 1 && $args[1].bald == 0>> /*(+baldness)*/
 			<<if canSee($args[0])>>
-				Something about her head catches her eye; she is now bald.
+				Something about her head catches her eye; @@.red;she is now bald.@@
 			<<else>>
-				She begins to run her fingers through her hair, only to find it gone.
+				She begins to run her fingers through her hair, only to @@.red;find it gone.@@
 			<</if>>
 			This
 			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
@@ -751,9 +795,9 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].bald == 0 && $args[1].bald == 1>> /*(-baldness)*/
 			<<if canSee($args[0])>>
-				Something about her head catches her eye; she now has hair.
+				Something about her head catches her eye; @@.green;she now has hair.@@
 			<<else>>
-				She moves to rub her bald head, only to find she has a full head of hair.
+				She moves to rub her bald head, only to find she @@.green;has a full head of hair.@@
 			<</if>>
 			This
 			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
@@ -774,7 +818,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<<if canSee($args[0])>>
 				Something about her head catches her 
 				<<if $args[0].hColor != $args[1].hColor>>
-					eye; she now has $args[0].hColor hair.
+					eye; she @@.coral;now has $args[0].hColor hair.@@
 				<<else>>
 					eye, but it was a trick of the light; her hair is more or less the same.
 				<</if>>
@@ -786,7 +830,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		/*(age)*/
 		<<if $args[0].visualAge >= $args[1].visualAge+5 || ($args[0].physicalAge > 18 && $args[1].physicalAge < 16)>> /*(older)*/
 			<<if $args[0].physicalAge > 18 && $args[1].physicalAge < 16>>
-				She starts at just how much older her <<if canSee($args[0])>>face and body are<<else>>body is<</if>>.
+				She starts at just how much @@.red;older her <<if canSee($args[0])>>face and body are<<else>>body is<</if>>.@@
 				<<if $args[0].physicalAge > 100>>
 					She's thoroughly shocked to find she's knocking on death's door.
 				<<elseif $args[0].physicalAge > 80>>
@@ -822,7 +866,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
-				She starts as she <<if canSee($args[0])>>sees<<else>>discovers<</if>> that she is now older than she once was. This is disturbing to her on a fundamental level,
+				She starts as she <<if canSee($args[0])>>sees<<else>>discovers<</if>> that she is @@.red;now older than she once was.@@ This is disturbing to her on a fundamental level,
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 50>>
 					as that means she will now will have less time with you before the end of her
 					<<if $PhysicalRetirementAgePolicy == 1>>
@@ -841,7 +885,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].physicalAge <= $args[1].physicalAge-5 || ($args[0].physicalAge < 18 && $args[0].physicalAge < $args[1].physicalAge)>> /*(younger)*/
-			She starts at her youthful new <<if canSee($args[0])>>face and <</if>>body.
+			She starts at her @@.green;youthful new <<if canSee($args[0])>>face and <</if>>body.@@
 			<<if $args[1].physicalAge >= 18>>
 				<<if $args[0].physicalAge < 4>>
 					She's thoroughly shocked to find she's a toddler again.
@@ -858,7 +902,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 				<<set _puberty = 0>>
 				<<if (($args[0].physicalAge < $fertilityAge && ($args[0].ovaries == 1 || $args[0].mpreg == 1)) || ($args[0].physicalAge < $potencyAge && $args[0].balls > 0)) && ($args[1].pubertyXX == 1 || $args[1].pubertyXY == 1)>>
-					She realizes that she will have to go through puberty again, now that she is $args[0].physicalAge once more. This is unnerving to her.
+					She realizes that she will have to @@.coral;go through puberty again,@@ now that she is $args[0].physicalAge once more. This is unnerving to her.
 					<<set _puberty = 1>>
 				<</if>>
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -893,7 +937,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<if $args[0].weight >= $args[1].weight + 5 || $args[0].weight <= $args[1].weight - 5>>
 			The very next thing she finds is how much
 			<<if $args[0].weight >= $args[1].weight + 5>>
-				heavier she is.
+				@@.red;heavier she is.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					With her broken mind, she shows no real reaction to this new weight.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion >= 50>>
@@ -945,7 +989,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>>
-				lighter she is.
+				@@.green;lighter she is.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>/*mindbroken*/
 					She doesn’t show much reaction to her lost weight.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion >= 50>>/*devoted*/
@@ -970,7 +1014,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<if $args[0].muscles >= $args[1].muscles +5 || $args[0].muscles <= $args[1].muscles - 5>>
 			The last major change to her body structure worth her attention is
 			<<if $args[0].muscles >= $args[1].muscles + 5>>
-				that she is significantly more muscular than she once was.
+				that she is @@.lime;significantly more muscular@@ than she once was.
 				<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 					<<if $args[0].devotion >= 50>>
 						She is happy with her newfound strength and looks forward to putting this power to work for you.
@@ -986,7 +1030,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>>
-				that she is significantly less muscular than before.
+				that she is @@.orange;significantly less muscular@@ than before.
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= 50>>
 					She appreciates that you would take the time to make her more feminine.
 				<<else>>
@@ -1003,22 +1047,22 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			Her hands drift over her stomach,
 			<<if $args[0].bellyPreg < 100>>
 				<<if $args[0].birthsTotal == 0>>
-					but she's too inexperienced to recognize her early pregnancy.
+					but she's too inexperienced to recognize her @@.pink;early pregnancy.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].birthsTotal > 0>>
-					and since this is not her first pregnancy, she is able to recognize the life within her.
+					and since this is not her first pregnancy, she is able to recognize the @@.pink;life within her.@@
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyPreg >= 450000>>
-				and she can immediately see that she is insanely pregnant; her body stretched full of babies.
+				and she can immediately see that she is @@.pink;insanely pregnant;@@ her body stretched full of babies.
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyPreg >= 150000>>
-				and she can quite clearly see that she is enormously pregnant, so much so that her body could quite believably be carrying nine full sized babies.
+				and she can quite clearly see that she is @@.pink;enormously pregnant,@@ so much so that her body could quite believably be carrying nine full sized babies.
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyPreg >= 60000>>
-				and she can see that she is almost unnaturely pregnant, with a belly swollen to a size that could easily carry four full grown babies.
+				and she can see that she is almost @@.pink;unnaturely pregnant,@@ with a belly swollen to a size that could easily carry four full grown babies.
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyPreg >= 15000>>
-				and she can clearly see that she is quite pregnant, as she cradles a belly that could easily cary a full sized baby.
+				and she can clearly see that she is @@.pink;quite pregnant,@@ as she cradles a belly that could easily cary a full sized baby.
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyPreg >= 5000>>
-				and she feels a bump in her stomach, as well as a gentle kick.
+				and she feels a @@.pink;bump in her stomach,@@ as well as a gentle kick.
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyPreg >= 100>>
-				and she feels a slight swell to her stomach.
+				and she feels a @@.pink;slight swell to her stomach.@@
 			<</if>>
 			<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 				<<if $args[0].bellyPreg >= 100 || $args[0].birthsTotal > 0>>
@@ -1043,17 +1087,17 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<br><br>
 			Her hands drift over her stomach, where she
 			<<if $args[0].bellyImplant >= 450000>>
-				finds there is no chance of her reaching her navel across her massive middle.
+				finds there is no chance of her reaching her navel across her @@.pink;massive middle.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 150000>>
-				hugs what could be a belly carrying a multitude of children.
+				hugs what could be a @@.pink;belly carrying a multitude of children.@2
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 60000>>
-				embraces a belly that could be laden with multiples at the brink of birth.
+				embraces a @@.pink;belly that could be laden with multiples at the brink of birth.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 15000>>
-				cradles a belly swollen enough to be carrying at least one baby ready to drop.
+				cradles a @@.pink;belly swollen enough to be carrying at least one baby ready to drop.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 5000>>
-				feels a clear bump in her stomach from the belly implant.
+				feels a @@.pink;clear bump in her stomach from the belly implant.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 100>>
-				feels a slight swell to her stomach.
+				feels a @@.pink;slight swell to her stomach.@@
 			<</if>>
 			<<if $args[0].devotion >= 50>>
 				She likes how the bulge looks on her and can't wait to get fucked with it in the way.
@@ -1087,7 +1131,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<<set _weightChange = 1>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].pregKnown == 0 && $args[1].pregKnown == 1>>
 			<br><br>
-			Her hands drift over her stomach, where she discovers she is no longer pregnant.
+			Her hands drift over her stomach, where she discovers she is @@.pink;no longer pregnant.@@
 			<<if $args[0].fetish == "pregnancy">>
 				<<if $args[0].devotion >= 50>>
 					She @@.mediumorchid;scowls with momentary wrath@@ before regaining her composure. She resents being seperated from her pregnancy<<if canGetPregnant($args[0])>>, though that is easily remedied<</if>>.
@@ -1114,17 +1158,17 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<br><br>
 			Her hands drift over her stomach, where she
 			<<if $args[0].bellyImplant >= 450000>>
-				finds there is still no chance of her reaching her navel across her massive middle.
+				finds there is @@.pink;still no chance of her reaching her navel across her massive middle.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 150000>>
-				hugs what could be a belly carrying a multitude of children.
+				hugs what could be a @@.pink;belly carrying a multitude of children.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 60000>>
-				embraces a belly that could be laden with multiples at the brink of birth.
+				embraces a @@.pink;belly that could be laden with multiples at the brink of birth.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 15000>>
-				cradles a belly swollen enough to be carrying at least one baby ready to drop.
+				cradles a @@.pink;belly swollen enough to be carrying at least one baby ready to drop.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 5000>>
-				feels a clear bump in her stomach from the belly implant.
+				feels a @@.pink;clear bump in her stomach from the belly implant.@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellyImplant >= 100>>
-				feels a slight swell to her stomach.
+				feels a @@.pink;slight swell to her stomach.@@
 			<<else>>
 				discovers
 			<</if>>
@@ -1145,7 +1189,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			She continues to fondle
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].weight >= $args[1].weight+30>> /*(fatter)*/
-			her stomach until she feels just how much more weight she is carrying.
+			her stomach until she feels just how @@.red;much more weight@@ she is carrying.
 			<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					She finds her new curves intriguing.
@@ -1155,7 +1199,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if $args[0].bellySag > $args[1].bellySag && $args[0].belly < 100>>
-				She also notices how much it sags.
+				She also notices @@.red;how much it sags.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 					<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 						This isn’t pleasant, but she bears it for you.
@@ -1165,10 +1209,10 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellySag < $args[1].bellySag && $args[0].belly < 100>>
-				She also notices it is tighter despite being softer.
+				She also notices it is @@.green;tighter despite being softer.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 					<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
-						This is great for her self image and she happily strokes her new firmer belly.
+						This is great for her self image and she happily strokes her new firm belly.
 					<<else>>
 						Whatever else this transition brings, this is a gift she will appreciate and she @@.hotpink;smiles, just a bit.@@
 						<<set $args[0].devotion += 1>>
@@ -1176,7 +1220,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].weight <= $args[1].weight-30>> /*(thinner)*/
-			her stomach and she finds her body thinner.
+			her stomach and she finds her body @@.green;thinner.@@
 			<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					She finds her new curves intriguing.
@@ -1186,7 +1230,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if $args[0].bellySag > $args[1].bellySag && $args[0].belly < 100>>
-				She also notices how it has a sag to it.
+				She also notices how it @@.red;has a sag to it.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 					<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 						This isn’t pleasant, but she bears it for you.
@@ -1196,7 +1240,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].bellySag < $args[1].bellySag && $args[0].belly < 100>>
-				She also notices it is tighter despite being softer.
+				She also notices it is @@.green;tighter despite being softer.@@
 				<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 					<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 						This is great for her self image and she happily strokes her new perkier belly.
@@ -1207,7 +1251,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].bellySag > $args[1].bellySag && $args[0].belly < 100>> /*(belly sag)*/
-			her stomach and she notices a sag in her belly.
+			her stomach and she notices a @@.red;sag in her belly.@@
 			<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					This isn’t pleasant, but she bears it for you.
@@ -1217,7 +1261,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].bellySag < $args[1].bellySag && $args[0].belly < 100>> /*(subtracted)*/
-			her stomach and notices the sag in her belly has lessened.
+			her stomach and notices the @@.green;sag in her belly has lessened.@@
 			<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					This is great for her self image and she happily strokes her new tight belly.
@@ -1227,7 +1271,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[0].weight < 10 && $args[0].muscles > 5 && $args[0].belly < 100>>
-			her muscled stomach. She stops to trace her abs.
+			her @@.lime;muscled stomach.@@ She stops to trace her abs.
 			<<if $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken">>
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					She finds her new strength intriguing.
@@ -1237,14 +1281,45 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
+		<<if $args[0].navelPiercing != 0 && $args[1].navelPiercing == 0>>
+			She now has a piercing in her navel; she rolls her tummy<<if $args[0].belly >= 15000>>, a feat in and of itself<</if>>, fascinated by her new hardware grazing her stomach to the motion.
+		<</if>>
 
+		/* waist */
+		<<if $args[0].waist > $args[1].waist+40>>
+			As she explores her middle, she also takes note of her @@.orange;wider waist.@@
+			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
+				The effects of such a change on her appearance go right over her head.
+			<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
+				This change disappoints her. She wishes she could have been more feminine for you.
+			<<else>>
+				This change @@.mediumorchid;disgusts her;@@ it will only leave her treated worse compared to the more feminine slaves.
+				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 1>>
+			<</if>>
+		<<elseif args[0].waist < $args[1].waist-40>>
+			As she explores her middle, she also takes note of her @@.lime;narrower waist.@@
+			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
+				The effects of such a change on her appearance go right over her head.
+			<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
+				This change pleases her; she can't wait to feel your hands around her.
+			<<else>>
+				That you would make such a change to her @@.mediumorchid;disgusts her,@@ though she @@.mediumaquamarine;takes solace@@ in the fact that she will likely be treated better for being more attractive.
+				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 1, $args[0].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+
+		/* corest piercing */
+		<<if $args[0].corsetPiercing != 0 && $args[1].corsetPiercing == 0>>
+			An odd feeling on her back draws her attention. She discovers a series of rings running down her spine and, flexing her back muscles, shudders at the sensation.
+		<</if>>
+		
 		<br><br>
 		As her hands wander lower,
 
 		/*(changed genitals)*/
 		<<if $args[1].vagina > -1>> /*(had a vagina)*/
 			<<if $args[0].dick > 0 && $args[1].dick > 0>> /*(had a penis)*/
-				she is relieved to find
+				she is relieved to find @@.coral;
 				<<if $args[0].balls > 0 && $args[0].scrotum > 0 && $args[1].balls > 0 && $args[1].scrotum > 0>>
 					a cock, balls and pussy.
 				<<elseif $args[0].balls == 0 && $args[1].balls > 0 && $args[1].scrotum > 0>>
@@ -1254,30 +1329,31 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<<else>>
 					both a cock and pussy.
 				<</if>>
+				@@
 			<<elseif $args[0].dick > 0 && $args[1].dick == 0>> /*(+penis)*/
-				she is startled to find she has a penis now.
+				she is startled to find she @@.coral;has a penis@@ now.
 				<<if $args[0].vagina > -1>> /*(kept vagina)*/
-					She is confused for a moment until she lifts her new penis to <<if canSee($args[0])>>see<<else>>discover<</if>> a pussy under it.
+					She is confused for a moment until she lifts her new penis to @@.coral;<<if canSee($args[0])>>see<<else>>discover<</if>> a pussy under it.@@
 				<<else>> /*(did not keep vagina, +penis or not)*/
-					She understands that she no longer has a vagina.
+					She understands that she @@.coral;no longer has a vagina.@@
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].dick == 0 && $args[1].dick > 0>> /*(had a penis)*/
-				she is shocked to <<if canSee($args[0])>>see<<else>>discover<</if>> that she no longer has a
+				she is shocked to <<if canSee($args[0])>>see<<else>>discover<</if>> that she @@.coral;no longer has a
 				<<if $args[0].balls > 0 && $args[0].scrotum > 0>>
-					penis, mostly because she still has balls.
+					penis, mostly because she still has balls.@@
 				<<elseif $args[0].vagina > -1>>
-					penis, though she is glad to still have a pussy.
+					penis, though she is glad to still have a pussy.@@
 				<<else>>
-					penis, or anything, for that matter, on her crotch.
+					penis, or anything, for that matter, on her crotch.@@
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].vagina > -1>>
 				she is happy to find a familiar hole.
 			<<else>>
-				she is startled to find she no longer has genitals.
+				she is startled to find she @@.coral;no longer has genitals.@@
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $args[1].dick > 0>> /*(had a penis)*/
 			<<if $args[0].dick > 0>>
-				she is relieved to find she still has her
+				she is relieved to find she @@.coral;still has her
 				<<if $args[0].balls > 0 && $args[0].scrotum > 0 && $args[1].balls > 0 && $args[1].scrotum > 0>>
 					penis and testicles.
 				<<elseif $args[0].balls == 0 && $args[1].balls > 0 && $args[1].scrotum > 0>>
@@ -1287,11 +1363,12 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<<else>>
 					penis.
 				<</if>>
+				@@
 				<<if $args[0].vagina > -1>>
-					A new sensation causes her to roam lower. Much to her surprise, she now also has a pussy.
+					A new sensation causes her to roam lower. Much to her surprise, she @@.coral;now also has a pussy.@@
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>>
-				she is shocked to find that she no longer has a
+				she is shocked to find that she @@.coral;no longer has a
 				<<if $args[0].balls > 0 && $args[0].scrotum > 0 && $args[1].balls > 0 && $args[1].scrotum > 0>>
 					penis, but still has balls.
 				<<elseif $args[0].vagina > -1>>
@@ -1299,6 +1376,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<<else>>
 					penis, or anything, for genitals.
 				<</if>>
+				@@
 			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
 			she is surprised to find
@@ -1318,7 +1396,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 		<<set _cockChanged = 0>>
 		/*(penis changes)*/
 		<<if $args[0].dick != $args[1].dick && $args[1].dick != 0>>
-			Her penis is <<if $args[0].dick > $args[1].dick + 4>>way bigger<<elseif $args[0].dick > $args[1].dick>>a good deal larger<<else>>smaller<</if>> than it was, and she is
+			Her penis is <<if $args[0].dick > $args[1].dick + 4>>@@.lime;way bigger@@<<elseif $args[0].dick > $args[1].dick>>@@.lime;a good deal larger@@<<else>>@@.orange;smaller@@<</if>> than it was, and she is
 			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 				not bothered one way or the other by this development; it isn't even clear if she notices anything different about her cock.
 			<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -1342,12 +1420,16 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			<</if>>
 			<<set _cockChanged = 1>>
 		<</if>>
+		<<if $args[0].dickPiercing != 0 && $args[1].dickPiercing == 0>>
+			There was no missing the piercing in her dick as well.
+			<<set _cockChanged = 1>>
+		<</if>>
 
 		/*(ball changes)*/
 		<<if $args[0].balls != $args[1].balls && $args[1].balls != 0>>
 			Then she takes a moment to cup her balls, it seems they are
 			<<if $args[0].balls > $args[1].balls + 4>>
-				much larger now. This
+				@@.lime;much larger@@ now. This
 				<<if $args[0].devotion > 20>>
 					amazing addition to her body is @@.hotpink;surely welcome@@. She moans as she fondles her new balls, groaning as she rolls their weight around. Her face is flushed by the time she’s done "examining" them.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion +=5>>
@@ -1356,7 +1438,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].trust += 5>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[0].balls > $args[1].balls>>
-				larger now. This
+				@@.lime;larger@@ now. This
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					change doesn't mean much of anything to her.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -1366,7 +1448,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion += 3>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<else>>
-				Smaller now, and this
+				@@.orange;smaller@@ now, and this
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					goes largely unnoticed.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -1395,7 +1477,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				Next she gives her vagina a closer inspection.
 			<</if>>
 			<<if $args[0].vagina == 0>> /*(+virginity)*/
-				As she prods at her pussy, she feels a slight tightness and a bit of difficulty as she tries to press her finger inside of herself. She realizes this body is a virgin!
+				As she prods at her pussy, she feels a slight tightness and a bit of difficulty as she tries to press her finger inside of herself. She realizes this body is a @@.lime;virgin@@!
 				<<if $args[0].vagina > 0>>
 					<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 						And this would likely mean something to her, if her mind was not lost.
@@ -1407,7 +1489,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[1].vagina != -1 && $args[0].vagina < $args[1].vagina>> /*(+tightness)*/
-				She notices she is tighter now than she was before.
+				She notices she is @@.lime;tighter@@ now than she was before.
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					And this might have been significant to her, if her brain worked correctly.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -1417,7 +1499,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 					<<set $args[0].devotion -= 2>>
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $args[1].vagina != -1 && $args[0].vagina > $args[1].vagina>> /*(-tightness)*/
-				She notices how she is now looser than she was before.
+				She notices how she is now @@.orange;looser@@ than she was before.
 				<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 					And this might be important to her, if her head was in working order.
 				<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
@@ -1432,10 +1514,35 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				After a bit of toying, she's satisfied with her new organ.
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
+		<<if $args[0].clitPiercing > 0 && $args[1].clitPiercing == 0 && $args[0].dick == 0>>
+			She also briefly felt something metallic near her clit. She frowns for a moment, before reaching down to her nether region to peel back her folds to feel a new, hard spot that wasn’t there before. As she pulls at it, her face and body contort in pleasure at the sensation.
+		<</if>>
+		<<if $args[0].vaginaPiercing != 0 && $args[1].vaginaPiercing == 0>>
+			She also now has piercings in her vagina, a ring around her labia, creating
+			<<if canSee($args[0])>>
+				a halo of sparkles that she couldn't help but marvel at.
+			<<else>>
+				such a sensory overload during her inspection that she nearly lost control.
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
 
-		/*(butt)*/
+		/*(butt) + hips*/
 		<br><br>
-		The last thing she learns is how
+		<<if $args[0].hips > $args[1].hips>>
+			As she moves to feel her ass, she smacks into an unfamiliar width; her hips are @@.lime;<<if $args[0].hips > $args[1].hips+3>>considerably <<elseif $args[0].hips < $args[1].hips-1>>much <</if>> wider.@@
+			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
+				She pays them little mind and reaches around to learn how
+			<<elseif $args[0].fetish == "pregnancy" && $args[0].birthsTotal > 0>>
+				She seems @@.hotpink;overjoyed@@ at their new size; It means she'll be even better at popping out babies than ever. She continues around back to learn how
+			<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 20>>
+				She gives them a little wiggle for your amusement before continuing around back to learn how
+			<<else>>
+				She takes the new addition well enough since it is likely to raise her worth in society and thus not the worst thing ever. How you intend to make use of her hips @@.gold;worries her,@@ however. She continues around back to learn how
+				<<set $args[0].trust -= 1>>
+			<</if>>
+		<<else>>
+			The last thing she learns is how
+		<</if>>
 		<<if $args[0].butt > $args[1].butt>> /*(bigger)*/
 			much @@.lime;bigger her butt is now.@@ As she <<if canSee($args[0])>>turns around, she sees<<else>>cups a cheek with each hand, she finds<</if>> it has grown
 			<<if $args[0].butt >= $args[1].butt+5>> /*(+to max size description or above)*/
@@ -1495,9 +1602,41 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
+		<<if $args[0].hips < $args[1].hips>>
+			As she finishes, it occurs to her that her hips are @@.orange;<<if $args[0].hips < $args[1].hips-3>>considerably <<elseif $args[0].hips < $args[1].hips-1>>much <</if>> narrower.@@
+			<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
+				She pays it little mind.
+			<<elseif $args[0].fetish == "pregnancy" && $args[0].birthsTotal > 0>>
+				She seems a little caught up on their new size, likely by concern over future pregnancies and childbirth.
+			<<elseif $args[0].devotion > 50>>
+				She gives them a little wiggle for your amusement.
+			<<elseif $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
+				She accepts your judgement that her new hips suit her better.
+				<<if $args[0].pregKnown && $args[0].birthsTotal > 0>>
+					She @@.gold;worries@@ about what this means for her coming birth.
+					<<set $args[0].trust -= 3>>
+				<</if>>
+			<<else>>
+				She seems upset, @@.mediumorchid;both from her loss of feminity and the overreach of your power,@@ that you would alter her body is such a way.
+				<<if $args[0].pregKnown && $args[0].birthsTotal > 0>>
+					A @@.gold;terrifying realization@@ dawns on her; her upcoming birth is going to be much harder than her last.
+					<<set $args[0].trust -= 5>>
+				<</if>>
+				<<set $args[0].devotion -= 3>>
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+		<<if $args[0].anusPiercing != 0 && $args[1].anusPiercing == 0>>
+			As she moves, she feels something odd in her butt. With a hesitant finger, she traces her anus and finds something that will take some getting used to; a new anal piercing.
+		<</if>>
 
+		/* tattoos */
+		<<if ($args[0].boobsTat != $args[1].boobsTat || $args[0].buttTat != $args[1].buttTat || $args[0].lipsTat != $args[1].lipsTat || $args[0].vaginaTat != $args[1].vaginaTat || $args[0].anusTat != $args[1].anusTat || $args[0].dickTat != $args[1].dickTat || $args[0].customTat != $args[1].customTat || $args[0].shouldersTat != $args[1].shouldersTat || $args[0].armsTat != $args[1].armsTat || $args[0].legsTat != $args[1].legsTat || $args[0].backTat != $args[1].backTat || $args[0].stampTat != $args[1].stampTat || $args[0].bellyTat != $args[1].bellyTat) && $args[0].fetish != "mindbroken" && canSee($args[0])>>
+			<br><br>
+			The ink adorning her body was not lost on her, but compared to everything else, it was truly insignificant.
+		<</if>>
+		
 	<</if>>
-<<else>> /* (amputee) */
+<<elseif canSee($args[0])>> /* (amputee) + sight */
 	After a while, she begins to stir, her eyes fluttering. She lets out a low groan and reaches up to rub at her eyes. Or rather, she attempts to. A visible look of confusion crosses her face and she strains to sit up, but all she manages to do is wiggle, her movements reminding you of a suffocating goldfish. As the cloud of anesthetics fades, she realizes what's happened to her
 	<<if $args[0].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 		and is supremely unaffected by it, as her mind has already left her.
@@ -1982,6 +2121,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for her to wake up.
 			 but then murmurs “...mirror”.
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
+<<else>> /* blind amp that needs you to detail the changes to her body */
 <</if>>
 
 /*(Flavor text for slave description after body transfer)*/
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