From 7d63a633b8516c21bc8ee309c9fc3a527a5d1df1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 8 Dec 2019 21:02:06 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] NewSlaveIntro

---
 src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw | 38 +++++++++++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index 4da2e2e5bfd..f70c859d19e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 			<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.trust += 10>>
 		<<else>>
-			Seeing that you're a fellow futanari, $he's @@.mediumaquamarine;relieved@@ that $he's going to be your slave, not to mention @@.hotpink;quite eager@@ to have sex with you.
+			<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>Seeing<<else>>Learning<</if>> that you're a fellow futanari, $he's @@.mediumaquamarine;relieved@@ that $he's going to be your slave, not to mention @@.hotpink;quite eager@@ to have sex with you.
 			<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>>
 		<</if>>
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 <<if $PC.boobs >= 1400>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "boobs">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 0>>
-			$He keeps stealing glances at your huge rack<<if canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>, $his dick rapidly hardening<</if>>. You stretch, giving $him a fantastic view of your breasts, before circling around behind $him and cupping $his chest. Between your tits against $his back, and how teasingly big you are pretending $his breasts will be, $he can't contain $himself; $he cums from overstimulation, completely pinning $him @@.green;as a breast fetishist!@@
+			$He keeps stealing glances at your huge rack<<if canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>, $his dick rapidly hardening<</if>>. You stretch<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>, giving $him a fantastic view of your breasts,<</if>> before circling around behind $him and cupping $his chest. Between your tits against $his back, and how teasingly big you are pretending $his breasts will be, $he can't contain $himself; $he cums from overstimulation, completely pinning $him @@.green;as a breast fetishist!@@
 			<<set $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1>>
 		<<else>>
 			$He keeps stealing glances at your huge rack<<if canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>, $his dick rapidly hardening<</if>>. As you inspect $him, you take care to keep "accidentally" bumping $him with your tits, before "tripping" and landing with $his face buried in your chest. $He is practically bursting with lust by the end and @@.hotpink;eager to please you@@ so $he can be close to those boobs.
@@ -346,11 +346,11 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10>>
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust += 10>>
 <<elseif ($PC.career == "servant")>>
-	Seeing you in your <<if $PC.title == 0>>maid's dress<<else>>maid's outfit<</if>> @@.mediumaquamarine;calms $his fears;@@ however, $he is unwilling to @@.mediumorchid;listen to a servant.@@
+	<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>Seeing<<else>>Having<</if>> you in your <<if $PC.title == 0>>maid's dress<<else>>maid's outfit<</if>> @@.mediumaquamarine;calms $his fears;@@ however, $he is unwilling to @@.mediumorchid;listen to a servant.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 3>>
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust += 10>>
 <<elseif ($PC.career == "gang")>>
-	$He recognizes you from various crime reports @@.gold;filling $him with fear@@ over what life under you will be like.
+	$He recognizes you from various crime reports, @@.gold;filling $him with fear@@ over what life under you will be like.
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
 <</if>>
 
@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 	<<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>
 		| <<link "Put $him in $his place">>
 			<<replace "#introResult">>
-				You stand up and tell $him to strip. $He hesitates, staring at you in dawning apprehension, until $he sees that you're stepping into a strap-on. $He unconsciously takes a step backward, but that's as far as $he gets before you cover the ground between you, grab $him by the throat, and push $his back until $he falls onto the couch. You drag the head of the fake phallus down over $his pussylips, and $he shivers, but you keep going, telling $him that you'll only be fucking $him there when $he's good. When $he's bad, you'll assfuck $him. $His eyes fly open and $he tries to struggle, but you give $him a warning slap and then push yourself home. $He starts to cry, more from hopelessness than anal pain, knowing that @@.mediumorchid;you're a slaveowner like any other,@@ more likely to @@.gold;abuse $him@@ than be sympathetic.
+				You stand up and tell $him to strip. $He hesitates, staring at you in dawning apprehension, until $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees<<else>>realizes<</if>> that you're stepping into a strap-on. $He unconsciously takes a step backward, but that's as far as $he gets before you cover the ground between you, grab $him by the throat, and push $his back until $he falls onto the couch. You drag the head of the fake phallus down over $his pussylips, and $he shivers, but you keep going, telling $him that you'll only be fucking $him there when $he's good. When $he's bad, you'll assfuck $him. $His eyes fly open and $he tries to struggle, but you give $him a warning slap and then push yourself home. $He starts to cry, more from hopelessness than anal pain, knowing that @@.mediumorchid;you're a slaveowner like any other,@@ more likely to @@.gold;abuse $him@@ than be sympathetic.
 			<</replace>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 5>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
@@ -1342,7 +1342,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 	<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
 	<<link "Threaten $his pregnancy">>
 		<<replace "#introResult">>
-			You place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>blindly <</if>>stare at it for a long moment. Then, you roll the cylinder slowly across the smooth surface, rotating it until its label comes into $his view. It depicts the silhouette of a pregnant woman, with a red "X" over it. Abortifacients. After an <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>short period<<else>>instant<</if>> of horrified comprehension, $he flings $himself at your feet, crying, begging, promising. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick != 0>><<if $PC.vagina != -1>>eat you out, <</if>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as @@.gold;you don't hurt $his baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll keep $him as a pregnant slut. $He thanks you through $his tears.
+			You place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>blindly <</if>>stare at it for a long moment. Then, you roll the cylinder slowly across the smooth surface, rotating it until its label comes into <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$his<<else>>your<</if>> view. It depicts the silhouette of a pregnant woman, with a red "X" over it. Abortifacients. After an <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>short period<<else>>instant<</if>> of horrified comprehension, $he flings $himself at your feet, crying, begging, promising. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick != 0>><<if $PC.vagina != -1>>eat you out, <</if>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as @@.gold;you don't hurt $his baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll keep $him as a pregnant slut. $He thanks you through $his tears.
 		<</replace>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
@@ -1928,7 +1928,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 	<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
 	<<link "Let your ample bust dominate $his pathetic one">>
 		<<replace "#introResult">>
-			You quickly strip off your shirt and draw close to $activeSlave.slaveName. You grab $him as $he attempts to back away and pull $his tits directly into your own. Both of sets of <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes lock onto their pair of breasts<<else>>tits push out against each other<</if>>, or they would have, had yours not utterly eclipsed their rival. Scoffing, you release the confused $girl and walk away; leaving $him cupping $his own breasts and feeling uncertain about $himself. $He gets caught up in how small they really are, and how much @@.hotpink;lesser@@ than $his <<= WrittenMaster($activeSlave)>> $he is.
+			You quickly strip off your shirt and draw close to $activeSlave.slaveName. You grab $him as $he attempts to back away and pull $his tits directly into your own. Both sets of <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes lock onto their pair of breasts<<else>>tits push out against each other<</if>>, or they would have, had yours not utterly eclipsed their rival. Scoffing, you release the confused $girl and walk away; leaving $him cupping $his own breasts and feeling uncertain about $himself. $He gets caught up in how small they really are, and how much @@.hotpink;lesser@@ than $his <<= WrittenMaster($activeSlave)>> $he is.
 			<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "boobs">>
 				<<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 0>>
 					You did note one thing when your breasts touched: $his nipples <<if $activeSlave.nipples == "fuckable">>tightened around yours<<else>>got very hard<</if>>. @@.green;Looks like $he's a breast fetishist!@@
@@ -2189,7 +2189,15 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 	<<link "Threaten $him with the Industrial Dairy">>
 		<<setNonlocalPronouns $seeDicks>>
 		<<replace "#introResult">>
-			You tell $him that it's in $his interests to be a good $girl. $He does not react immediately, perhaps wondering if you think such a trite statement will have a real impact, but then you point at a wallscreen behind $him. $He turns, and beholds a live feed from the Industrial Dairy. $He gazes spellbound at the interleaved row of bodies intertwined with machines in embraces far more intimate than any lover could hope to match. The gently heaving masses of breastflesh hold $his fascinated and horrified attention until one of the machines fortuitously chooses this moment to cycle its occupant's anal hydration regimen. It withdraws its horse-sized phallus from the slave's anus, leaving _hisU gape pulsing gently as it awaits the resumption of the endless assrape. $activeSlave.slaveName lets out a huge sob and turns to you, @@.gold;fear suffusing $him@@ as $he promises to @@.hotpink;be a good $girl.@@
+			You tell $him that it's in $his interests to be a good $girl. $He does not react immediately, perhaps wondering if you think such a trite statement will have a real impact, but then you <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>point at<<else>>direct $him towards<</if>> a wallscreen behind $him. $He turns, and beholds a live feed from the Industrial Dairy. 
+			<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>
+				$He gazes spellbound at the interleaved row of bodies intertwined with machines in embraces far more intimate than any lover could hope to match. The gently heaving masses of breastflesh hold $his fascinated and horrified attention until one of the machines fortuitously chooses this moment to cycle its occupant's anal hydration regimen. 
+			<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>
+				$He listens entranced by the steady rhythm of the machines collecting their occupants' bodily fluids. The muffled moans and groans of the restrained slaves hold $his fascinated and horrified attention until one of the machines fortuitously chooses this moment to cycle its occupant's anal hydration regimen.
+			<<else>>
+				Such a broadcast would normally be pointless for a senseless slave like $activeSlave.slaveName, but you've taken precautions to accommodate such slaves. The wallscreen is connected to the heating, air conditioning, and sprinkler systems in order to accurately replicate the aura of an industrial slave dairy, so $he is fully immersed in the scene when one of the machines fortuitously chooses this moment to cycle its occupant's anal hydration regimen.
+			<</if>>
+			It withdraws its horse-sized phallus from the slave's anus, leaving _hisU gape pulsing gently as it awaits the resumption of the endless assrape. $activeSlave.slaveName lets out a huge sob and turns to you, @@.gold;fear suffusing $him@@ as $he promises to @@.hotpink;be a good $girl.@@
 		<</replace>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
@@ -2245,7 +2253,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 						You stroke $his gurgling stomach slowly, before turning off the valve, unfastening $his binds and leaving your @@.hotpink;very pleased@@ cum balloon to savor $his meal. You'll make sure to set aside enough cum from your cumslaves for $him to drink $himself stupid with, and, glancing over your shoulder, find $him eagerly masturbating to $his cum filled gut. $He'll probably intend to keep $himself filled to the brim, which is fine by you.
 						<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 					<<else>>
-						<<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>>$His face swells<<else>>$His eyes swell<</if>> with horror, but $he does not flinch or make a sound. $His belly also swells, from a few months of apparent pregnancy, to "spent too much time at the buffet", till it finally stops wobbling, grows taut and forces $his belly button into an outie. Satisfied, you shut off the valve, deciding to leave $him to consider $his cum filled middle. Time passes. $His <<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>>blind face is distant<<else>>eyes are glazed over<</if>>, but $he tolerates you slowly stroking $his stomach @@.hotpink;without apparent resentment.@@ You'll make sure to keep $him like this for the time being.
+						<<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>>$His face swells<<else>>$His eyes swell<</if>> with horror, but $he does not flinch or make a sound. $His belly also swells, from a few months of apparent pregnancy, to 'spent too much time at the buffet', till it finally stops wobbling, grows taut and forces $his belly button into an outie. Satisfied, you shut off the valve, deciding to leave $him to consider $his cum filled middle. Time passes. $His <<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>>blind face is distant<<else>>eyes are glazed over<</if>>, but $he tolerates you slowly stroking $his stomach @@.hotpink;without apparent resentment.@@ You'll make sure to keep $him like this for the time being.
 						<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
 					<</if>>
 				<<else>>
@@ -2276,7 +2284,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 				<br><br>
 				You pause to examine the tap, making sure it is set to milk, before releasing the valve and unleashing a steady flow. The feeder bucks against $his face as creamy, white liquid rushes downward towards the helpless slave.
 				<<if $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "gluttonous">>
-					<<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>>$His face swells<<else>>$His eyes swell<</if>> with horror, but $he does not flinch or make a sound. $His belly also swells, from a few months of apparent pregnancy, to "spent too much time at the buffet", till it finally stops wobbling, grows taut and forces $his belly button into an outie. Satisfied, you shut off the valve, deciding to leave $him to consider $his milk filled middle. Time passes. $His<<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>> blind face is distant<<else>> eyes are glazed over<</if>>, but $he tolerates you slowly stroking $his stomach @@.hotpink;without apparent resentment.@@ You'll make sure to keep $him like this for the time being.
+					<<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>>$His face swells<<else>>$His eyes swell<</if>> with horror, but $he does not flinch or make a sound. $His belly also swells, from a few months of apparent pregnancy, to 'spent too much time at the buffet', till it finally stops wobbling, grows taut and forces $his belly button into an outie. Satisfied, you shut off the valve, deciding to leave $him to consider $his milk filled middle. Time passes. $His<<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>> blind face is distant<<else>> eyes are glazed over<</if>>, but $he tolerates you slowly stroking $his stomach @@.hotpink;without apparent resentment.@@ You'll make sure to keep $him like this for the time being.
 					<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 				<<else>>
 					$He gasps in horror, and starts to struggle frantically against $his bonds, <<if $activeSlave.voice != 0>>struggling to scream in panic.<<else>>$his whole body begging to scream.<</if>> However, as the fluid reaches $him, $he seems to despair and resigns $himself to $his fate. As $his belly swells, you find yourself comparing $him first to a binge eater, then some of the chubbier citizens you've seen, a large pregnancy, and finally a water balloon ready to burst. You stop the flow, and rest a hand on $his heaving stomach. $His @@.gold;terrified@@ breathing and distant expression are clearly due to the pain, not lust, but it's also now quite clear to $him who is in charge here. You have little intent on letting $his stomach empty and will be setting aside enough milk to keep $him bloated into submission.
@@ -2295,7 +2303,15 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
 	<<link "Threaten $him with the Arcade">>
 		<<setNonlocalPronouns $seeDicks>>
 		<<replace "#introResult">>
-			You tell $him that it's in $his best interests to be a good $girl. $He does not react immediately, perhaps wondering if you think such a trite statement will have a real impact, but then you point at a wallscreen behind $him. $He turns, and beholds a live feed from $arcadeName. $He gazes at the row of butts sticking out of the wall at dick height, not quite realizing what $he's seeing. Then $he notices that there are citizens pumping away in front of two of the butts, and $he understands. As $he watches, terrified, first one citizen and then the other finishes and steps away. The first arcade inmate's <<if $seeDicks != 100>>pussy<<else>>butt<</if>> is left looking sore until $arcadeName's systems cover _himU for a quick cleaning, and the second inmate's asshole <<if $seeDicks != 0>>has obviously seen severe use, since the poor _girlU doesn't have a pussy to spread the load<<else>>is loose enough that the machines have to clean up the cum it drools onto the floor<</if>>. $activeSlave.slaveName lets out a huge sob and turns to you, @@.gold;fear suffusing $him@@ as $he promises to @@.hotpink;be a good $girl.@@
+			You tell $him that it's in $his best interests to be a good $girl. $He does not react immediately, perhaps wondering if you think such a trite statement will have a real impact, but then you <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>point at<<else>>direct $him towards<</if>> a wallscreen behind $him. $He turns, and beholds a live feed from $arcadeName. 
+			<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>
+				$He gazes at the row of butts sticking out of the wall at dick height, not quite realizing what $he's seeing. Then $he notices that there are citizens pumping away in front of two of the butts, and $he understands.
+			<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>
+				$He listens to the wet sounds of flesh on flesh, not quite realizing what $he's hearing. Then $he picks out the sound of your citizens grunting and moaning as they pound away, and $he understands.
+			<<else>>
+				Such a broadcast would normally be pointless for a senseless slave like $activeSlave.slaveName, but you've taken precautions to accommodate such slaves. The wallscreen is connected to the heating, air conditioning, and sprinkler systems in order to accurately replicate the feeling of standing in front of a row of restrained public sex slaves, so the meaning of the scene in front of $him is not lost.
+			<</if>>
+			As $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>watches<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>listens<<else>>stands there<</if>>, terrified, first one citizen and then the other finishes and steps away. The first arcade inmate's <<if $seeDicks != 100>>pussy<<else>>butt<</if>> is left looking sore until $arcadeName's systems cover _himU for a quick cleaning, and the second inmate's asshole <<if $seeDicks != 0>>has obviously seen severe use, since the poor _girlU doesn't have a pussy to spread the load<<else>>is loose enough that the machines have to clean up the cum it drools onto the floor<</if>>. $activeSlave.slaveName lets out a huge sob and turns to you, @@.gold;fear suffusing $him@@ as $he promises to @@.hotpink;be a good $girl.@@
 		<</replace>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
-- 
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