diff --git a/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js b/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js index b88b01ba877301d44fd4b097cd3e143b5f7c7495..66c1ef5bfffeea9a9471481c9c35bc04f53aeaad 100644 --- a/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js +++ b/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ App.Events.REFIBoobslut = class REFIBoobslut extends App.Events.BaseEvent { } else { t.push("over,"); } - t.push(`take some of ${his2} creamy, ${subSlave.milkFlavor === "none" ? `` : `${subSlave.milkFlavor} flavored `}milk straight from the source. Every time you do, ${he2} shudders convulsively,`); + t.push(`take some of ${his2} creamy${subSlave.milkFlavor === "none" ? `` : `, ${subSlave.milkFlavor}-flavored`} milk straight from the source. Every time you do, ${he2} shudders convulsively,`); if (canTalk(subSlave)) { t.push(`giving little mewling whimpers.`); } else { diff --git a/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js b/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js index d97dbd197b937f10b61d7d2b28b1514bb5d9c0a6..b5b9ab70760afedb44d9df2846cd18ff211ce034 100644 --- a/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js +++ b/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ App.Events.RESSAraAra = class RESSAraAra extends App.Events.BaseEvent { const r = new SpacedTextAccumulator(node); r.push(`Passing by the kitchen in the morning, you take a moment to listen to the low hum of your slaves chatting as they`); - if (V.feeder !== 0) { + if (V.cockFeeder !== 0) { r.push(`wait their turn at the phallic feeders.`); } else { r.push(`drink their breakfasts.`); diff --git a/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js b/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js index 3346782c5bc689a97dcc6299f2a651d58c02aaed..5ff004323a847faa6394ab7e6696521fd037ca53 100644 --- a/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js +++ b/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ App.Events.RESSFirstPeriod = class RESSFirstPeriod extends App.Events.BaseEvent } else { r.push(`${He} uses gestures to point to ${his} stomach, and explains that ${he} is feeling an unusual pain.`); } - r.push(`You check ${his} records and discover ${he} has very likely just become a woman.`); + r.push(`You check ${his} records and discover ${he} has very likely just became a woman.`); slave.pubertyXX = 1; App.Events.addParagraph(node, r); diff --git a/src/js/birth/birth.js b/src/js/birth/birth.js index 6b1e0a6d32525275f2d926ac292f15593d5e1e77..56a71b0dac496923d8eb3a381f9b182b0c89bde3 100644 --- a/src/js/birth/birth.js +++ b/src/js/birth/birth.js @@ -3671,7 +3671,7 @@ globalThis.birth = function(slave, {birthStorm = false, cSection = false, artRen case Job.MADAM: if (random(1, 20) > suddenBirth) { - r.push(`${He} heads to a private room in the back of the club accompanied by an influential patron. ${He} settles ${himself} onto his lap and begins working on birthing ${firstText} baby,`); + r.push(`${He} heads to a private room in the back of the brothel accompanied by an influential patron. ${He} settles ${himself} onto his lap and begins working on birthing ${firstText} baby,`); if (slave.geneticQuirks.uterineHypersensitivity === 2) { r.push(`convulsing with orgasms in the process and`); } diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/career.js b/src/npc/descriptions/career.js index 10bad3191c3110ff96f8f46fd2de91b5c5409db4..3a5484431ba439d27586c2671d1f6fbaed1c4c68 100644 --- a/src/npc/descriptions/career.js +++ b/src/npc/descriptions/career.js @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ App.Desc.career = function(slave) { } else if (App.Data.Careers.General.grateful.includes(slave.career)) { r.push(`${career}, so ${he} can remember what it's like`); if (slave.career === "prisoner") { - r.push(`no one looking out for you.`); + r.push(`with no one looking out for you.`); } else { r.push(`to have the freedom to starve.`); } diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js index f137577b74691cd35006d4a6d480a4caee0f3398..3f684b220b40568a22f387efad2afae1b3904f2c 100644 --- a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js +++ b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js @@ -1610,7 +1610,7 @@ App.Desc.geneticQuirkAssessment = function(slave) { } else if (slave.dick > 0) { r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, though it is unlikely to naturally grow any larger than it currently is.`); } else { - r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, or would, if ${he} had one.`); + r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, or would be, if ${he} had one.`); } } else if (slave.geneticQuirks.wellHung === 1 && V.geneticMappingUpgrade >= 2) { r.push(`${He} is a carrier of a gene that causes enhanced penile development.`);