From a3237d563494b9b51ab406bf3700f945a4961be8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anu <anulithic@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 6 Oct 2022 15:31:15 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Misc fixes
---
src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js | 2 +-
src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js | 2 +-
src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js | 2 +-
src/js/birth/birth.js | 2 +-
src/npc/descriptions/career.js | 2 +-
src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js | 2 +-
6 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js b/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js
index b88b01ba877..66c1ef5bfff 100644
--- a/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js
+++ b/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ App.Events.REFIBoobslut = class REFIBoobslut extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
} else {
t.push("over,");
}
- t.push(`take some of ${his2} creamy, ${subSlave.milkFlavor === "none" ? `` : `${subSlave.milkFlavor} flavored `}milk straight from the source. Every time you do, ${he2} shudders convulsively,`);
+ t.push(`take some of ${his2} creamy${subSlave.milkFlavor === "none" ? `` : `, ${subSlave.milkFlavor}-flavored`} milk straight from the source. Every time you do, ${he2} shudders convulsively,`);
if (canTalk(subSlave)) {
t.push(`giving little mewling whimpers.`);
} else {
diff --git a/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js b/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js
index d97dbd197b9..b5b9ab70760 100644
--- a/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js
+++ b/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ App.Events.RESSAraAra = class RESSAraAra extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
const r = new SpacedTextAccumulator(node);
r.push(`Passing by the kitchen in the morning, you take a moment to listen to the low hum of your slaves chatting as they`);
- if (V.feeder !== 0) {
+ if (V.cockFeeder !== 0) {
r.push(`wait their turn at the phallic feeders.`);
} else {
r.push(`drink their breakfasts.`);
diff --git a/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js b/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js
index 3346782c5bc..5ff004323a8 100644
--- a/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js
+++ b/src/events/RESS/review/firstPeriod.js
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ App.Events.RESSFirstPeriod = class RESSFirstPeriod extends App.Events.BaseEvent
} else {
r.push(`${He} uses gestures to point to ${his} stomach, and explains that ${he} is feeling an unusual pain.`);
}
- r.push(`You check ${his} records and discover ${he} has very likely just become a woman.`);
+ r.push(`You check ${his} records and discover ${he} has very likely just became a woman.`);
slave.pubertyXX = 1;
App.Events.addParagraph(node, r);
diff --git a/src/js/birth/birth.js b/src/js/birth/birth.js
index 6b1e0a6d325..56a71b0dac4 100644
--- a/src/js/birth/birth.js
+++ b/src/js/birth/birth.js
@@ -3671,7 +3671,7 @@ globalThis.birth = function(slave, {birthStorm = false, cSection = false, artRen
case Job.MADAM:
if (random(1, 20) > suddenBirth) {
- r.push(`${He} heads to a private room in the back of the club accompanied by an influential patron. ${He} settles ${himself} onto his lap and begins working on birthing ${firstText} baby,`);
+ r.push(`${He} heads to a private room in the back of the brothel accompanied by an influential patron. ${He} settles ${himself} onto his lap and begins working on birthing ${firstText} baby,`);
if (slave.geneticQuirks.uterineHypersensitivity === 2) {
r.push(`convulsing with orgasms in the process and`);
}
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/career.js b/src/npc/descriptions/career.js
index 10bad3191c3..3a5484431ba 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/career.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/career.js
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ App.Desc.career = function(slave) {
} else if (App.Data.Careers.General.grateful.includes(slave.career)) {
r.push(`${career}, so ${he} can remember what it's like`);
if (slave.career === "prisoner") {
- r.push(`no one looking out for you.`);
+ r.push(`with no one looking out for you.`);
} else {
r.push(`to have the freedom to starve.`);
}
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js
index f137577b746..3f684b220b4 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js
@@ -1610,7 +1610,7 @@ App.Desc.geneticQuirkAssessment = function(slave) {
} else if (slave.dick > 0) {
r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, though it is unlikely to naturally grow any larger than it currently is.`);
} else {
- r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, or would, if ${he} had one.`);
+ r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, or would be, if ${he} had one.`);
}
} else if (slave.geneticQuirks.wellHung === 1 && V.geneticMappingUpgrade >= 2) {
r.push(`${He} is a carrier of a gene that causes enhanced penile development.`);
--
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