diff --git a/src/npc/fKiss.tw b/src/npc/fKiss.tw
index 7d09e2f166bdca083699d7607c11a71ca361f402..898f97912d1d945b7f5517b61a66122ba04f517d 100644
--- a/src/npc/fKiss.tw
+++ b/src/npc/fKiss.tw
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ Then, you gently raise $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>heartrendingly beautifu
 			$He asks nervously before cringing, "I-i<<s>> that it, <<Master>>?"
 		<</if>>
 	<<else>>
-		$He accepts the kiss willingly. As you are so close to $him, you sense considerable turmoil in the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>woman<<else>>$girl<</if>>; $he's doing $his duty as a wife by complying with your wishes, and is probably struggling with the mixture of resistance, obedience and perhaps even devotion forced to the forefront of $his mind by your lips and tongue. When you finally break the kiss, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes gaze into yours searchingly<<else>>$he gazes at you<</if>>, looking for answers that are not there.
+		$He accepts the kiss willingly. As you are so close to $him, you sense considerable turmoil in the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>$woman<<else>>$girl<</if>>; $he's doing $his duty as a wife by complying with your wishes, and is probably struggling with the mixture of resistance, obedience and perhaps even devotion forced to the forefront of $his mind by your lips and tongue. When you finally break the kiss, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes gaze into yours searchingly<<else>>$he gazes at you<</if>>, looking for answers that are not there.
 		<<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>
 			$His <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes beg<<else>>expression begs<</if>> for an answer: is that it?
 		<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ Then, you gently raise $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>heartrendingly beautifu
 		"I love you, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s forthrightly.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
-	$He accepts the kiss willingly. As you are so close to $him, you sense considerable turmoil in the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>woman<<else>>$girl<</if>>; $he's doing $his duty as a slave by complying with your wishes, and is probably struggling with the mixture of resistance, obedience and perhaps even devotion forced to the forefront of $his mind by your lips and tongue. When you finally break the kiss, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes gaze into yours searchingly<<else>>$he gazes at you<</if>>, looking for answers that are not there.
+	$He accepts the kiss willingly. As you are so close to $him, you sense considerable turmoil in the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>$woman<<else>>$girl<</if>>; $he's doing $his duty as a slave by complying with your wishes, and is probably struggling with the mixture of resistance, obedience and perhaps even devotion forced to the forefront of $his mind by your lips and tongue. When you finally break the kiss, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes gaze into yours searchingly<<else>>$he gazes at you<</if>>, looking for answers that are not there.
 	<<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>
 		$His <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes beg<<else>>expression begs<</if>> for an answer: is that it?
 	<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ Then, you gently raise $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>heartrendingly beautifu
 		$He asks hesitantly, "I-i<<s>> that it, <<Master>>?"
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -50)>>
-	$He is nearly frozen with fear, and does not resist as you kiss $him. In fact, $he barely reacts at all. $He opens $his mouth mechanically in response to your insistent tongue, but it's like kissing a doll. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. When you bore of making out with the poor <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>woman<<else>>$girl<</if>> and pull away, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension.
+	$He is nearly frozen with fear, and does not resist as you kiss $him. In fact, $he barely reacts at all. $He opens $his mouth mechanically in response to your insistent tongue, but it's like kissing a doll. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. When you bore of making out with the poor <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>$woman<<else>>$girl<</if>> and pull away, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension.
 	<<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>
 		$His <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes beg<<else>>expression begs<</if>> for an answer: is that it?
 	<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
diff --git a/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw b/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
index d842916c5cbf0f385ae82f2eac948e7818f91114..9dd0fc53cd36229272e08395390f68522a7f252c 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Then, you gently tilt $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>overwhelmingly stunning<
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20) && ($activeSlave.trust < -20)>>
 	$He shakes at your touch fearfully. As you move your hand along $his unresisting face, $his eagerness to avoid punishment leads $him to stiffen, $his nervousness is made apparent. You continue stroking $his cheek, enjoying $his fear, and the physical intimacy slowly does its work. $He starts to relax, $his resistance easing and $his eyes start to close. When finally move your hand away, $he looks at you for a long moment, $his eyes darting up at you, before visibly catching $himself with a reminder that $he's a slave and you're $his owner. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs hesitantly, asking if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -50)>>
-	$He is nearly frozen with fear, and does not resist as you start to caress $his face. In fact, $he barely reacts at all. $He stares at you as you move your fingers across $his stiff face, but it's like touching a statue. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff even as it becomes clear to $his you're not going to hurt $him. When you bore of touching the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>woman<<else>>$girl<</if>> and move your hand away, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs spastically, begging fearfully to know if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks nervously, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks nervously, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>> Then $he cringes.
+	$He is nearly frozen with fear, and does not resist as you start to caress $his face. In fact, $he barely reacts at all. $He stares at you as you move your fingers across $his stiff face, but it's like touching a statue. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff even as it becomes clear to $his you're not going to hurt $him. When you bore of touching the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>$woman<<else>>$girl<</if>> and move your hand away, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs spastically, begging fearfully to know if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks nervously, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks nervously, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>> Then $he cringes.
 <<else>>
 	$He reflexively turns away from you, but you catch $his head with one hand and slowly but gently move your other hand along $his face. Spluttering, $he leans backwards, but you tip forward with $him and pin $him against your desk, not stopping your gentle touch on $his head. $He tries to wriggle out of your grasp desperately, but $his struggles slowly subside as $he realizes that you're not taking this any farther. When you bore of it and move your hand away, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes demand an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs irritably, asking whether that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He splutters, "Ith that it, <<Master>>!?"<<else>>$He splutters, "Is that it, <<Master>>!?"<</if>>
 <</if>>
diff --git a/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw b/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw
index 81d9791527da57da0da36ec5ce485f88fba4c041..c1e0edd28ca14545d7111318575b3a637c9508d6 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ You walk around $him and put your hands around $his abdomen,<<if ($activeSlave.a
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20) && ($activeSlave.trust < -20)>>
 	$He shakes at your touch fearfully. As you softly press $his trembling body against you, $his eagerness to avoid punishment leads $him to stiffen in your arms. While $he continues to shudder, you continue embracing $him, enjoying $his fear, and the physical intimacy slowly does its work. $He starts to relax, $his resistance easing and $his eyes start to close. When you relax your arms for a moment, $he opens $his eyes to look at you for a long moment, $his eyes darting up to your face, before visibly catching $himself with a reminder that $he's a slave and you're $his owner. <<if ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs hesitantly, asking if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -50)>>
-	$He is nearly frozen with fear, and does not resist as you start to squeeze your arms around $him. In fact, $he barely reacts at all. $He stares at your arms as they continue squeezing, but it's like touching a statue. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. When you bore of embracing the still <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>woman<<else>>$girl<</if>> and release $him, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension. <<if ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs spastically, begging fearfully to know if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks nervously, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks nervously, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>> Then $he cringes, unsure of what you are going to do next.
+	$He is nearly frozen with fear, and does not resist as you start to squeeze your arms around $him. In fact, $he barely reacts at all. $He stares at your arms as they continue squeezing, but it's like touching a statue. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. When you bore of embracing the still <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>$woman<<else>>$girl<</if>> and release $him, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension. <<if ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs spastically, begging fearfully to know if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks nervously, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks nervously, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>> Then $he cringes, unsure of what you are going to do next.
 <<else>>
 	$He reflexively tries to break free from your arms, but you keep $him wrapped in them. Shuddering, $he desperately leans away from you, but you tip forward with $him and pin $him against your desk, continuing your hold on $him. $He tries to wriggle out of your grasp desperately, but $his struggles slowly subside as $he realizes that you're not taking this any farther. When you bore of it and release $him, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension. <<if ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$His eyes demand an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs irritably, asking whether that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He splutters, "Ith that it, <<Master>>!?"<<else>>$He splutters, "Is that it, <<Master>>!?"<</if>> $He shakes uncontrollably, apprehensive at what you are going to do next.
 <</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
index 4cfefad7308d223848e46e8fc438bb8ae671e9c8..e27d29f1dbe30a5dd049d2f1ebe57c92c447d124 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
@@ -834,9 +834,9 @@ Passing the slave quarters late at night, you hear <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>
 voice. It's $subSlave.slaveName.
 <<if $subSlave.belly >= 120000 && $activeSlave.dick > 3>>
 	<<if $subSlave.bellyPreg >= 2000>>
-		"I'm way too pregnant, there'<<s>> ju<<s>>t no room for a big cock like your<<s>> inside me anymore. Plu<<s>> you'll wake them up and they'll be kicking all night again."
+		"I'm way too pregnant; there'<<s>> ju<<s>>t no room for a big cock like your<<s>> in<<s>>ide me anymore. Plu<<s>> you'll wake them up and they'll be kicking all night again."
 	<<elseif $subSlave.bellyImplant >= 2000>>
-		"My belly'<<s>> <<s>>o filled by my implant that there'<<s>> just no room for a big cock like your<<s>> inside me anymore."
+		"My belly'<<s>> <<s>>o filled by my implant that there'<<s>> ju<<s>>t no room for a big cock like your<<s>> in<<s>>ide me anymore."
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $subSlave.bellyFluid >= 10000 && $activeSlave.dick > 3>>
 	"I'm really full of $subSlave.inflationType. I don't know what will happen if you fuck me."
@@ -845,7 +845,7 @@ voice. It's $subSlave.slaveName.
 <<elseif $subSlave.assignment == "work in the brothel" || $subSlave.assignment == "whore">>
 	"And my <<if _vaginal>>pu<<ss>>y<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> i<<s>> <<s>>ore. Cu<<s>>tomer<<s>> <<if _vaginal>>fucked me<<else>>pounded it<</if>> all day."
 <<elseif $subSlave.assignment == "serve in the club" || $subSlave.assignment == "serve the public">>
-	"And my <<if _vaginal>>pu<<ss>>y<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> i<<s>> <<s>>ore. Citizen<<s>> <<if _vaginal>>fucked me<<else>>pounded it<</if>> all day."
+	"And my <<if _vaginal>>pu<<ss>>y<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> i<<s>> <<s>>ore. <<C>>itizen<<s>> <<if _vaginal>>fucked me<<else>>pounded it<</if>> all day."
 <<else>>
 	"I'm tired, and I have to $subSlave.assignment tomorrow. I ju<<s>>t want to go to <<s>>leep."
 <</if>>
@@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ The slaves are about to go to bed; they're naked, and the horny $activeSlave.sla
 <<elseif $subSlave.boobShape == "torpedo-shaped">>
 	"Your torpedoe<<s>> are incredible," $he wheedles. "<<if $subSlave.boobs > 400>>The way they <<s>>way when you move <<sh>>ould be again<<s>>t the rule<<s>>.<<else>>They're <<s>>o tiny and cute!<</if>> I want you<<if !_vaginal>>r a<<ss>><</if>> <<s>>o much!"
 <<elseif $subSlave.muscles > 30>>
-	"You're <<s>>o jacked," $he wheedles. "I ju<<s>>t want to <<if _vaginal>>feel tho<<s>>e huge thigh<<s>> wrap around me a<<s>> I fuck you<<else>>feel that mu<<s>>cular booty flex under me a<<s>> I fuck your butt<</if>>!"
+	"You're <<s>>o jacked," $he wheedles. "I ju<<s>>t want to <<if _vaginal>>feel tho<<s>>e huge thigh<<s>> wrap around me a<<s>> I fuck you<<else>>feel that mu<<s>>cular booty fle<<x>> under me a<<s>> I fuck your butt<</if>>!"
 <<elseif $subSlave.entertainSkill > 95>>
 	"You're <<s>>o beautiful and gra<<c>>eful," $he wheedles. "I love watching you walk. Look at you, ju<<s>>t <<s>>tanding there you're <<s>>o perfectly feminine. I want to make love to you<<if !_vaginal>>r butt<</if>>!"
 <<else>>
@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ $activeSlave.slaveName is almost in tears.
 		<<if _hole > 2>>
 			"I'm t-too big," $he adds sadly, gesturing to $his massive erection. "<<S>>ome of the other girl<<s>> can't take me, and I have to be gentle. Plea<<s>>e, let me u<<s>>e you. I need to fuck <<s>>o bad."
 		<<else>>
-			"Your <<if _vaginal>>beautiful cunt<<else>><<s>>phincter<</if>> will make me explode. I haven't gotten to fuck anything today and I need it <<s>>o bad. Plea<<s>>e."
+			"Your <<if _vaginal>>beautiful cunt<<else>><<s>>phincter<</if>> will make me e<<x>>plode. I haven't gotten to fuck anything today and I need it <<s>>o bad. Plea<<s>>e."
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > _hole+1>>
 		"I've been dreaming about your tight <<if _vaginal>>cunt<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> all day. My dick i<<s>> a perfect fit for it, it'll make me feel <<s>>o good. I want to fuck it <<s>>o bad. Plea<<s>>e."
@@ -1468,8 +1468,8 @@ $he adds impishly. Hearing this, $subSlave.slaveName lets the breast pop free of
 <<link "$He's not wrong">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You ask $activeSlave.slaveName what $he said in a neutral tone. $He gives you a quick glance, not sure whether to be aroused or afraid, but takes a breath to steady $himself and begins. For _his2 part, $subSlave.slaveName vainly tries to stop crying in front of you. When $activeSlave.slaveName reaches "_HeP'<<s>> going to hold you down and <<sh>>ove _hisP <<if $PC.dick == 1>>huge cockhead<<else>>bigge<<s>>t <<s>>trap-on<</if>> right up again<<s>>t thi<<s>> tight little hole," you hold up a hand to get $him to pause. $He does, and you suddenly shove $subSlave.slaveName towards the couch. _He2 crashes face-down into the cushions, already sobbing in terror. You place a hand on _his2 $activeSlave.skin back to hold _him2 down and then use the other to apply some lube to your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>penis<<else>>strap-on<</if>> before pressing it against the quivering slave's virgin anus. _He2 shakes with anguish, causing <<if $PC.dick == 1>>your cock to rub deliciously<<else>>the strap-on to slide amusingly<</if>> up and down _his2 asscrack. You make a come-on gesture to $activeSlave.slaveName, and $he continues, "You're going to do your be<<s>>t to relax like a good little _girl2."
-	$subSlave.slaveName desperately takes in a huge breath. $activeSlave.slaveName, who has gotten the idea (and to go by $his furious masturbation, clearly likes it), gasps out, "But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big! It'<<s>> going to burn!" Here you begin to apply inexorable pressure. $subSlave.slaveName manages one more deep breath, but it becomes a squeal of anguish and _he2 tries frantically to burrow into the couch, away from the penetrating <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>>. "You're going to panic, and <<s>>truggle, and _heP'<<s>> going to hold you down and rape your butt while you <<s>>cream and cry..."
+	You ask $activeSlave.slaveName what $he said in a neutral tone. $He gives you a quick glance, not sure whether to be aroused or afraid, but takes a breath to steady $himself and begins. For _his2 part, $subSlave.slaveName vainly tries to stop crying in front of you. When $activeSlave.slaveName reaches "<<HeP>>'<<s>> going to hold you down and <<sh>>ove <<hisP>> <<if $PC.dick == 1>>huge cockhead<<else>>bigge<<s>>t <<s>>trap-on<</if>> right up again<<s>>t thi<<s>> tight little hole," you hold up a hand to get $him to pause. $He does, and you suddenly shove $subSlave.slaveName towards the couch. _He2 crashes face-down into the cushions, already sobbing in terror. You place a hand on _his2 $activeSlave.skin back to hold _him2 down and then use the other to apply some lube to your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>penis<<else>>strap-on<</if>> before pressing it against the quivering slave's virgin anus. _He2 shakes with anguish, causing <<if $PC.dick == 1>>your cock to rub deliciously<<else>>the strap-on to slide amusingly<</if>> up and down _his2 asscrack. You make a come-on gesture to $activeSlave.slaveName, and $he continues, "You're going to do your be<<s>>t to relax like a good little _girl2."
+	$subSlave.slaveName desperately takes in a huge breath. $activeSlave.slaveName, who has gotten the idea (and to go by $his furious masturbation, clearly likes it), gasps out, "But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big! It'<<s>> going to burn!" Here you begin to apply inexorable pressure. $subSlave.slaveName manages one more deep breath, but it becomes a squeal of anguish and _he2 tries frantically to burrow into the couch, away from the penetrating <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>>. "You're going to panic, and <<s>>truggle, and <<heP>>'<<s>> going to hold you down and rape your butt while you <<s>>cream and cry..."
 	$activeSlave.slaveName trails off as $he shakes with orgasm; $he doesn't say any more, but the @@.hotpink;wild satisfaction@@ <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>in $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes<<else>>on $his face<</if>> says it for $him. $subSlave.slaveName, meanwhile, is a mess, but hurries @@.gold;fearfully@@ to obey your instructions to go clean _himself2, and hides _his2 @@.mediumorchid;hatred@@ as _he2 gingerly applies an enema to _his2 @@.lime;loosened butt.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 	<<set $subSlave.trust -= 10, $subSlave.devotion -= 5, $subSlave.analCount++, $subSlave.anus = 1>>
@@ -1485,7 +1485,7 @@ $he adds impishly. Hearing this, $subSlave.slaveName lets the breast pop free of
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	You approach and observe to $activeSlave.slaveName that it sounds like $he's speaking from experience. $He glances at you nervously, but agrees. You tell $him to go on, so $he turns to the mystified $subSlave.slaveName and mumbles, "It wa<<s>>n't ea<<s>>y for me the fir<<s>>t time either."
 	$He gasps as you slide around behind $him, your hands snaking around $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 2000>>massive tits<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 1000>>big boobs<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 400>>prominent breasts<<else>>chest<</if>> to pinch $his $activeSlave.nipples nipples. You whisper into $his ear, ordering $him to tell $his little story again, slowly. "_HeP'<<s>> going to hold you down and <<sh>>ove _hisP <<if $PC.dick == 1>>huge cockhead<<else>>bigge<<s>>t <<s>>trap-on<</if>> right up again<<s>>t thi<<s>> tight little hole," $he tells $subSlave.slaveName. The poor _girl2 doesn't know what to do, so _he2 just stands <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>and listens<<else>>still<</if>>, <<if canSee($subSlave)>>watching<<else>>staring<</if>> dumbly as $activeSlave.slaveName talks. $He's a lot less intimidating this time around, gasping out the words as you maneuver your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> against $his <<if $activeSlave.anus > 2>>loose butthole<<elseif $activeSlave.anus > 1>>experienced ass<<else>>tight butthole<</if>> for some standing anal. "You're going to do your be<<s>>t to relax like a good little _girl2," $he moans. <<if ($activeSlave.dick > 0) && !canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>$His limp dick hangs lamely as you press against $his backdoor, but it's dripping precum.<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>$He has a throbbing erection.<<elseif $activeSlave.clit > 0>>As you shove $him into place, your hand brushes against $his enormously erect clit.<<else>>As you shove $him into place, your hand brushes against moisture coating $his inner thighs.<</if>> The bitch is getting off on this.
-	"But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big - it'<<s>> going to bu-hu-hur-hurn... oh..." You're up $his ass and pounding away, <<if $subSlave.belly >= 5000>>with one hand on $his hips and the other around $his gravid belly<<else>>holding $his hips with both hands and<</if>> bouncing $his butt against your crotch as your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> slides in and out of $him. You administer a hard slap to $his ass and tell $him to keep going. $He shakes $his head and manages to get back on track, grunting out, "You're going to panic - and - and - oh - <<s>>-<<s>>truggle, and _heP'<<s>> going t-to h-ho-oh-old you d-down, oh ow, and r-ra-rape your b-butt while, oh p-plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, you <<s>>cream, ooh, and c-cry... o-oh... ah." $He feels your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>hot seed jet into $his asshole<<else>>own orgasm<</if>> and your hands release their grip, and slides wetly off you, <<if ($activeSlave.dick > 0) && !canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>$his own messy little orgasm running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>stepping around the mess $he shot onto the floor and trying to keep your load inside $his ass<<else>>$his feminine juices running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<</if>>. $He walks gingerly to the bathroom for a cleanup, looking a lot more @@.hotpink;submissive@@ than when you walked in. $subSlave.slaveName is still staring <<if canSee($subSlave)>>at<<else>>towards<</if>> you. There's a little @@.gold;fear@@ there, but some @@.hotpink;awe,@@ too.
+	"But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big - it'<<s>> going to bu-hu-hur-hurn... oh..." You're up $his ass and pounding away, <<if $subSlave.belly >= 5000>>with one hand on $his hips and the other around $his gravid belly<<else>>holding $his hips with both hands and<</if>> bouncing $his butt against your crotch as your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> slides in and out of $him. You administer a hard slap to $his ass and tell $him to keep going. $He shakes $his head and manages to get back on track, grunting out, "You're going to panic - and - and - oh - <<s>>-<<s>>truggle, and <<heP>>'<<s>> going t-to h-ho-oh-old you d-down, oh ow, and r-ra-rape your b-butt while, oh p-plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, you <<s>>cream, ooh, and c-cry... o-oh... ah." $He feels your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>hot seed jet into $his asshole<<else>>own orgasm<</if>> and your hands release their grip, and slides wetly off you, <<if ($activeSlave.dick > 0) && !canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>$his own messy little orgasm running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>stepping around the mess $he shot onto the floor and trying to keep your load inside $his ass<<else>>$his feminine juices running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<</if>>. $He walks gingerly to the bathroom for a cleanup, looking a lot more @@.hotpink;submissive@@ than when you walked in. $subSlave.slaveName is still staring <<if canSee($subSlave)>>at<<else>>towards<</if>> you. There's a little @@.gold;fear@@ there, but some @@.hotpink;awe,@@ too.
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.analCount++>>
 	<<set $analTotal++>>
 	<<if canImpreg($activeSlave, $PC)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
index cec2fa6a643101ad297559b3a6cb61484b455a2d..ac18155cca368422563c7fa2785312835e1fcb29 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 <<if $brandApplied || $degradation>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.fuckdoll == 0>>
-		<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>There's a mirror on the ceiling, so $he can see<<else>>$He can't see, so you're careful to describe<</if>> $his new appearance.
+		<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>There's a mirror on the ceiling, so $he can see<<else>>$He can't see, so <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>you're careful to describe<<else>>$he must, by $himself, get a feel for<</if>><</if>> $his new appearance.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $brandApplied>>
 		The smell of burnt flesh hangs in the air. Being branded @@.red;has hurt $his health a little.@@
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
index e82f982196f4bf77cec2faa4862ee98c8d2506d5..10dfcec41d4b90c99e7009c240ef2e7206c57952 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
@@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.boobs = 400>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 100>>
-		bench pressing a rather large dumbbell in a strong$woman contest. $He is overjoyed when $he places first.
+		bench pressing a rather large dumbbell in a strong<<= $woman>> contest. $He is overjoyed when $he places first.
 	<<case "Cummunism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -1083,7 +1083,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.boobs = 400>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 100>>
-		bench pressing a rather large dumbbell in a strong$woman contest. $He is overjoyed when $he places first.
+		bench pressing a rather large dumbbell in a strong<<= $woman>> contest. $He is overjoyed when $he places first.
 	<<case "Chattel Religionism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>