diff --git a/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw b/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw
index fb6ec0b53496ee6a21bb7d454a703e61219bac11..9159deae8629313ef92b195927bb7156cb202e5a 100644
--- a/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw
+++ b/src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ You're a relative unknown in the Free Cities, but it's clear you're already acco
 <br>[[Gang Leader|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "gang"]]
 <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//As a gang leader, you know how to haggle slaves<<if $showSecExp == 1>> and assert your authority. Plus upgrades in the security HQ will be cheaper<</if>>, but you will find reputation quite hard to maintain. Your starting slaves will be fitter and posses a free level of combat skill.//
 <br>[[Head Technican|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "head techncian"]]
-<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//As a head  techncian, you know how to manage techonology<<if $showSecExp == 1>> and some what assert your authority. Plus some upgrades in the weapons manufacturing and security HQ will be cheaper<</if>>, but you will find reputation quite hard to maintain.//
+<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//As a head  techncian, you know how to manage techonology<<if $showSecExp == 1>> and some upgrades (i.e weapons manufacturing and security HQ) will be cheaper<</if>>.//
 
 <</if>>
 
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
index 1c6d8b9c6a6c161ddee6adb02293501a0e591bce..2afc9fa683ddb460fe87ca11f9237f45a31b03e7 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
@@ -3934,7 +3934,6 @@ geany events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw events/intro/introSummary.tw uncategoriz
 		<<set _Sucess = 1>>
 	<</if>>
 	
-	<<if _Sucess = 1>>
 		<<switch $rivalryFS>>
 		<<case "Racial Subjugationism">>Racemixer
 		<<case "Racial Supremacism">>Miscegenator
@@ -3957,45 +3956,18 @@ geany events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw events/intro/introSummary.tw uncategoriz
 		<<case "Multiculturalism">>Prophet
 		<<default>>Target One
 		<</switch>>
-		Bag and taged. Confirm, bag and taged. No casualties, team exfiltrating."
-		<<set $rivalOwner = 1, $rivalryPower = 0>>
-		<<if $rivalSet != 0>>
-		  <<for _pra = 0; _pra < $arcologies.length; _pra++>>
-			<<if $arcologies[_pra].rival == 1>>
-			  <<set $arcologies[_pra].embargo = 0>>
-			  <<set $arcologies[_pra].embargoTarget = -1>>
-			  <<set $arcologies[_pra].influenceTarget = -1>>
-			  <<set $arcologies[_pra].rival = 0>>
-			  <<set $arcologies[_pra].government = "direct democracy">>
-			  <<break>>
-			<</if>>
-		  <</for>>
+		
+		<<if _Sucess = 1>> 
+			Bag and taged. Confirm, bag and taged.
+			No
+			<<set $rivalOwner = -1>> 
+		<<else>>
+			EKIA. Confirm, E. K. I. A. No other
+			<<set $rivalOwner = 0>>
 		<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-		<<switch $rivalryFS>>
-		<<case "Racial Subjugationism">>Racemixer
-		<<case "Racial Supremacism">>Miscegenator
-		<<case "Repopulation Focus">>Sterilizer
-		<<case "Eugenics">>Breeder
-		<<case "Gender Radicalism">>Handholder
-		<<case "Gender Fundamentalism">>Sodomite
-		<<case "Paternalism">>Lucifer
-		<<case "Degradationism">>Archangel Prime
-		<<case "Body Purism">>Plastic Surgeon
-		<<case "Transformation Fetishism">>Purist One
-		<<case "Youth Preferentialism">>Cake Eater
-		<<case "Maturity Preferentialism">>Epheb
-		<<case "Slimness Enthusiasm">>Grower
-		<<case "Asset Expansionism">>Flat Lover
-		<<case "Pastoralism">>Gym Rat
-		<<case "Physical Idealism">>Feeder
-		<<case "Hedonistic Decadence">>Gym Rat
-		<<case "Chattel Religionism">>Cultural Marxist
-		<<case "Multiculturalism">>Prophet
-		<<default>>Target One
-		<</switch>>
-		EKIA. Confirm, E. K. I. A. No other casualties, team exfiltrating."
-		<<set $rivalOwner = 0, $rivalryPower = 0>>
+		casualties, team exfiltrating."
+		<<set $rivalryPower = 0>>
+		
 		<<if $rivalSet != 0>>
 		  <<for _pra = 0; _pra < $arcologies.length; _pra++>>
 			<<if $arcologies[_pra].rival == 1>>
@@ -4008,7 +3980,6 @@ geany events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw events/intro/introSummary.tw uncategoriz
 			<</if>>
 		  <</for>>
 		<</if>>
-	<</if>>
 	
 	<<if $hostageAnnounced == 1>>
 		$assistantName pauses. "Also confirm package is secure."
@@ -4016,7 +3987,7 @@ geany events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw events/intro/introSummary.tw uncategoriz
 	<</if>>
 	You go back to your work.
 	<</replace>>
-<</link>>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//This option is available due to your @@.springgreen;military background and skills inaddition to your techncial mastery,@@ .	This will immediately end the conflict with a chance of enslaving your rival//
+<</link>>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//This option is available due to your @@.springgreen;military background and skills in addition to your techncial mastery,@@ . This will immediately end the conflict with a chance of enslaving your rival//
 <</if>>
 <</if>>
 </span>