From a9ec95b31e180e42ecaf5a68c17b90966d3bcfdb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pregmodder <pregmodder@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 1 Nov 2018 21:17:37 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] fix
---
src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw | 6 +++---
src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw | 6 +++---
2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
index 11b6fc18fd5..5e73f351eb0 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
@@ -219,11 +219,11 @@ Of all the wonders present, the thing that catches your eye the most is a shady
<<if $ImplantProductionUpgrade == 1>>
<<if $surgeryUpgrade == 1>>
<<if $cash >= 20000>>
- [[Purchase documents about the broodmother implant firmware hack|The Black Market][$cash -= 20000, $PGHack = 1, _dump = $merchantIllegalWares.delete("PGHack")]] //@@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>.@@//
+ [[Purchase documents regarding the broodmother implant firmware hack|The Black Market][$cash -= 20000, $PGHack = 1, _dump = $merchantIllegalWares.delete("PGHack")]] //@@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>.@@//
<<else>>
- You cannot afford the asking price of @@.red;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>@@ for the broodmoter implant firmware data.
+ You cannot afford the asking price of @@.red;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>@@ for the broodmother implant firmware data.
<</if>>
- "I might have something for you, if interested. Some time ago a hacker manage to crack the firmware of the publicly available broodmother implant and found how to manipulate it through the radio channel normally used for monitoring. His goal was to take revenge on an arcology owner who's loved concubine had this implant, but this plan failed as he couldn't hide his hacking attempt - to send something to the implant you need to be very close to it. In a fact, you need a special actuator inserted up to the cervix, which just so happens to be included in this deal. And it is very much advised to use it in a surgical suite, in case of complications, such as the sudden activation of the birthing process. But anyway, the hack, if applied appropriately, can interfere with original logic of the implant, forcing it to release more than one ova every week. Originally, the hacker made it about dozen, but after we tweaked his initial code, now it will be just two or three ova. You will get all the needed data and schematics for the autosurgery upgrade, but you will need to make and install it on your own."
+ "I might have something for you, if you're interested. Some time ago a hacker manage to crack the firmware of the publicly available broodmother implant and found how to manipulate it through the radio channel normally used for monitoring. His goal was to take revenge on an arcology owner who's beloved concubine had this implant, but this plan failed as he couldn't hide his hacking attempt; to send something to the implant you need to be very close to it. In fact, you need a special actuator inserted up to the cervix, which just so happens to be included in this deal. It is very much advised to use it from within a surgical suite, in case of complications, such as the sudden activation of the birthing process. But anyway, the hack, if applied appropriately, can interfere with the original logic of the implant, forcing it to release more than one ovum every week. Originally, the hacker made it about a dozen, but after we tweaked his initial code, now it will be just two or three ova. You will get all the required data and schematics for the autosurgery upgrade, but you will need to make and install it on your own."
<<else>>
The autosurgery lacks the needed actuators, so applying the broodmother implant hack complex is impossible.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
index 8011e176237..aec896307a7 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
<</if>>
<<case "preg1hack">>
- The hacking process is brief, being little more than inserting the actuator in $his vagina, and leaves $him with @@.red;nothing more than minor health effects@@ from the altered implant funcitons. $He leaves the surgery without any specific feeling, but $he knows that something done to $his implant.
+ The hacking process is brief, being little more than inserting the actuator into $his vagina, and leaves $him with @@.red;nothing more than minor health effects@@ from the altered implant functions. $He leaves the surgery without any specific feeling, but $he knows that something has been done to $his implant.
<<set $activeSlave.broodmotherFetuses = either(2,2,2,2,3,3,4)>> /*My testing show that 2 or 3 relatively safe for generic adult slave with effective curvatives or clinic, 4 - high risk of bursting. So there is a catch with it.*/
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
/*nothing*/
@@ -492,14 +492,14 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
$He is @@.hotpink; filled with joy@@ about being even more swollen with life and gleefully rubs $his soon-to-be-larger belly. $He's so pleased that $he now @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts@@ your plans for $his body. As with all surgery @@.d;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4, $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
- $He's @@.hotpink;grateful@@ that you think $his offspring are valuable, but is little afraid about how $his body will catch up with $his hacked implant.
+ $He's @@.hotpink;grateful@@ that you think $his offspring are valuable, but is a little afraid about how $his body will catch up with $his hacked implant.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 2>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 2>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
$He understands the realities of $his life as a slave, so even this isn't much of a shock. $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body and how big $he will get.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
<<else>>
- $He does not understand the realities of $his life as a slave at a core level, so $he's @@.mediumorchid;terrified and angry@@ that you not just have forced $him to be a broodmother but also messed with the implant, not thinking about $his safety. $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body and $his even more rapidly filling womb.
+ $He does not understand the realities of $his life as a slave at a core level, so $he's @@.mediumorchid;terrified and angry@@ that you not only have forced $him to be a broodmother but also messed with the implant, with no thought for $his safety. $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body and $his even more rapidly filling womb.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 15, $activeSlave.devotion -= 15>>
<</if>>
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