diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pHostageAcquisition.tw b/src/uncategorized/pHostageAcquisition.tw
index 58e812c58e11c57b8d46c64aec936d032e9585ad..6dbb76ba4b53d12a28d86209cf1307b0f83aa976 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pHostageAcquisition.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pHostageAcquisition.tw
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ Your hired mercenaries are en route now with your precious cargo.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust = 80>>
 		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "This one's got quite some spunk in her, you better ready yourself. We're coming in now."
 		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a distinct hatred. As you step forward, she stands her ground. After several steps, she shouts "Stay away from me, you sick fuck! I've seen what you do to your girls! Filling them up with growth drugs! Don't you ever THINK abou-"
-		The mercenary captain quickly gags her, "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful. Please be careful when you unbind her, she may try to do something stupid." He says, as he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but she acts nothing like the girl you used to know. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, given her hatred for huge assets.
+		The mercenary captain quickly gags her. "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful. Please be careful when you unbind her, she may try to do something stupid," he says. He and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but she acts nothing like the girl you used to know. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, given her hatred for huge assets.
 	<</if>>
 <<case "Pastoralism">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.health = 60>>
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ Your hired mercenaries are en route now with your precious cargo.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust = 80>>
 		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "We got a problem sir. $He, um, isn't going to fit... We could try bringing her in through the penthouse balcony, but I'd worry about breaking things."
 		Once $activeSlave.slaveName's immense form is safely in the penthouse, you finally get a good look at her. Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a distinct hatred. As you step forward, she begins to let out a low growl. After several steps, she shouts "Stay away from me, you sick fuck! Fit girls are trash! Real men like big soft bodies! You're sick! SICK! Don't you-"
-		The mercenary captain quickly gags her, "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful." He pats her grotesque breast, "least she won't be going anywhere." He says, before he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged and struggling $activeSlave.slaveName. You sigh at the amount of motion running through her absurd tits, mountainous ass, and obese body. The girl you used to know is barely recognizable under all that flesh and she certainly doesn't think the same anymore. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, once her body sheds the weight. Or you could leave her as an immobile ornament, though assets of that size are definitely out of style.
+		The mercenary captain quickly gags $him. "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful," he says as he pats her grotesque breast, "Least $he won't be going anywhere." He and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged and struggling $activeSlave.slaveName. You sigh at the amount of motion running through her absurd tits, mountainous ass, and obese body. The girl you used to know is barely recognizable under all that flesh and she certainly doesn't think the same anymore. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, once her body sheds the weight. Or you could leave her as an immobile ornament, though assets of that size are definitely out of style.
 	<</if>>
 <<case "Physical Idealism">>
 	<<if $rivalryDuration <= 5>>
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@ Your hired mercenaries are en route now with your precious cargo.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust = 80>>
 		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "We got a problem sir. $He, um, is rather heavy and can't walk well... We're working our way up, but, do you have a freight elevator by chance?"
 		Once $activeSlave.slaveName's hugely fat ass is safely in the penthouse, you finally get a good look at her. Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a distinct hatred. As you step forward, she begins to let out a low growl. After several steps, she shouts "Stay away from me, you sick fuck! Fit girls are trash! Real men like big soft bodies! You're sick! SICK! Don't you-"
-		The mercenary captain quickly gags her, "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful." He pats her fat coated shoulder, to which she immediately sits down. Several mercs join their captain in trying to pull her back to her feet. A load crack and a groan of pain escapes the captain as he drops to the ground clutching his back. His comrades quickly help him from the penthouse, leaving you to deal with the scowling blob of fat and flesh. $He is intent on not budging from that spot and you aren't interested in breaking anything, though you're certain she'll be begging for food within an hour and easily manipulated. $He is massively fat, a stark difference from the fit, thin girl you used to know; she certainly doesn't think the same anymore, either. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, be it breaking furniture or getting stuck in doors, though given her rather laid back life up until this point, she is likely to be quite malleable. Though she is wheezing quite a lot considering she is just sitting there.
+		The mercenary captain quickly gags her, "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful." He pats her fat coated shoulder, to which she immediately sits down. Several mercs join their captain in trying to pull her back to her feet. A load crack and a groan of pain escapes the captain as he drops to the ground clutching his back. His comrades quickly help him from the penthouse, leaving you to deal with the scowling blob of fat and flesh. $He is intent on not budging from that spot and you aren't interested in breaking anything, though you're certain $he'll be begging for food within an hour and easily manipulated. $He is massively fat, a stark difference from the fit, thin $girl you used to know; she certainly doesn't think the same anymore, either. Odds are high that $he'll cause problems for you in the future, be it breaking furniture or getting stuck in doors, though given her rather laid back life up until this point, she is likely to be quite malleable. Though she is wheezing quite a lot considering she is just sitting there.
 		<<set $activeSlave.health = -80>>
 	<</if>>
 <<case "Hedonistic Decadence">>
@@ -381,9 +381,9 @@ Your hired mercenaries are en route now with your precious cargo.
 		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName shifts her weight back and forth, unsure of what to make of you. As you step forward, she quickly steps back. After several steps, she screams "Keep away from me! I don't want ever want to be a fat sow again!". $He is thin and extremely muscular, a stark difference from the soft, chubby girl you used to know; she certainly doesn't think the same anymore, either.
 	<<else>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust = 100>>
-		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "We have a problem, sir. This one is a fighter, she already broke one of our guy's jaw. We think she is tranq'd and restrained enough to bring in. Please be ready."
+		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "We have a problem, sir. This one is a fighter, $he already broke one of our guy's jaw. We think $he is tranq'd and restrained enough to bring in. Please be ready."
 		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a distinct hatred. As you step forward, she stands her ground. After several steps, she shouts "Stay away from me, you sick fuck! I'll never be a cow again. DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH ME!"
-		The mercenary captain is thrown back as she explodes her restraints, having been preparing to gag her. The rest of the troop center their weapons on her, forcing her to back down. $He glares at you as the captain picks himself up and exits your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. She grunts as she exits the office for the slave quarters, stopping in the doorway. "I'll be your slave, but you're going to be sorry.". With a hand on each door frame, she rips it out of the wall. $He lets out a single laugh while scowling at you. $He is thin and extremely muscular, a stark difference from the soft, chubby girl you used to know; she certainly doesn't think the same anymore, either. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, given her hatred for you and her frightening strength.
+		The mercenary captain is thrown back as $he explodes her restraints, having been preparing to gag her. The rest of the troop center their weapons on her, forcing her to back down. $He glares at you as the captain picks himself up and exits your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. $He grunts as she exits the office for the slave quarters, stopping in the doorway. "I'll be your slave, but you're going to be sorry." With a hand on each door frame, she rips it out of the wall. $He lets out a single laugh while scowling at you. $He is thin and extremely muscular, a stark difference from the soft, chubby girl you used to know; she certainly doesn't think the same anymore, either. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, given her hatred for you and her frightening strength.
 	<</if>>
 <<case "Chattel Religionism">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.health = 50>>
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ Your hired mercenaries are en route now with your precious cargo.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust = 80>>
 		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "This one's got quite some spunk in her, you better ready yourself. We're coming in now."
 		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a distinct hatred. As you step forward, she stands her ground. After several steps, she shouts "Stay away from me, you crazy psycho! Making your own religion, blasphemous! You think yourself a proph-"
-		The mercenary captain quickly gags her, "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful. Please be careful when you unbind her, she may try to do something stupid." He says, as he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but she acts nothing like the girl you used to know. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future.
+		The mercenary captain quickly gags her. "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful. Please be careful when you unbind her, she may try to do something stupid.", he says, as he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but she acts nothing like the girl you used to know. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future.
 	<</if>>
 <<case "Multiculturalism">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.health = 60>>
@@ -416,23 +416,23 @@ Your hired mercenaries are en route now with your precious cargo.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust = 80>>
 		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "This one's got quite a mouth on her, you better ready yourself. We're coming in now."
 		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a mercy. As you step forward, she stands her ground. After several steps, she shouts "Be still, I'll lead your arcology to salvation. Place your faith in me and be sav-"
-		The mercenary captain quickly gags her, "My apologies, I did warn you about that mouth. Please be careful when you unbind her, she may try to do something stupid." He says, as he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the disappointed $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but she acts nothing like the girl you used to know. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, trying to preach her new faith.
+		The mercenary captain quickly gags $him. "My apologies, I did warn you about that mouth. Please be careful when you unbind her, she may try to do something stupid.", he says, as he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the disappointed $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but she acts nothing like the girl you used to know. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future, trying to preach her new faith.
 	<</if>>
 <<default>>
 	<<set $activeSlave.health = 40>>
 	<<if $rivalryDuration <= 5>>
 		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName dives into your <<if $PC.boobs == 1>>ample bust<<else>>chest<</if>> sobbing "They told me such horrible things about you!". You gently wrap your arms around her in a comforting embrace. $He's exactly as you remember.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 10>>
-		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName gingerly approaches, uncertain if she should. You pull her into your <<if $PC.boobs == 1>>ample bust<<else>>chest<</if>> as she breaks down in tears. "You aren't trying to make some crazy old timey society, are you?". While she looks the same as you remember, she certainly doesn't think the same anymore.
+		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName gingerly approaches, uncertain if $he should. You pull her into your <<if $PC.boobs == 1>>ample bust<<else>>chest<</if>> as $he breaks down in tears. "You aren't trying to make some crazy old-timey society, are you?". While $he looks the same as you remember, $he certainly doesn't think the same anymore.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 15>>
-		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName shifts her weight back and forth, unsure of what to make of you. As you step forward, she hesitatingly approaches. Once she is close enough she says "Please don't make me play along...". While she looks the same as you remember, she certainly doesn't think the same anymore.
+		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName shifts her weight back and forth, unsure of what to make of you. As you step forward, $he hesitatingly approaches. Once $he is close enough $he says "Please don't make me play along...". While $he looks the same as you remember, $he certainly doesn't think the same anymore.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 20>>
-		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName shifts her weight back and forth, unsure of what to make of you. As you step forward, she quickly steps back. After several steps, $he screams "Keep away from me! I don't want to be part of your crazy society!". While she looks the same as you remember, she definitely doesn't think the same anymore.
+		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName shifts her weight back and forth, unsure of what to make of you. As you step forward, $he quickly steps back. After several steps, $he screams "Keep away from me! I don't want to be part of your crazy society!". While $he looks the same as you remember, $he definitely doesn't think the same anymore.
 	<<else>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust = 80>>
 		Your mercenaries radio you upon arrival. "This one's got quite some spunk in her, you better ready yourself. We're coming in now."
-		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a distinct hatred. As you step forward, she stands her ground. After several steps, she shouts "Stay away from me, you crazy psycho! Remaking a fallen empire, madness! You think yourself a king-"
-		The mercenary captain quickly gags her, "My apologies, I did warn you she was a handful. Please be careful when you unbind her, she may try to do something stupid." He says, as he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but $he acts nothing like the $girl you used to know. Odds are high that she'll cause problems for you in the future.
+		Upon seeing you, $activeSlave.slaveName's eyes fill with a distinct hatred. As you step forward, $he stands her ground. After several steps, $he shouts "Stay away from me, you crazy psycho! Remaking a fallen empire, madness! You think yourself a king-"
+		The mercenary captain quickly gags $him, "My apologies, I did warn you $he was a handful. Please be careful when you unbind her, $he may try to do something stupid." He says, as he and his group exit your penthouse, leaving you with the enraged $activeSlave.slaveName. $He looks the same as you remember, but $he acts nothing like the $girl you used to know. Odds are high that $he'll cause problems for you in the future.
 	<</if>>
 <</switch>>
 
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalInitiation.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalInitiation.tw
index 5c6a7f43fd9706210d8d6dfe7669d426a494a6e2..dd743ecd5c722f921485d8b43d6f9234a3460be7 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalInitiation.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalInitiation.tw
@@ -11,52 +11,57 @@
 
 <<else>>
 
-This is a special week, the week of your victory. <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> awaits your pleasure. You could certainly do to her anything and everything you usually do to your chattel. You could also do something special to mark the occasion.
+<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
+
+This is a special week, the week of your victory. <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> awaits your pleasure. You could certainly do to $him anything and everything you usually do to your chattel. You could also do something special to mark the occasion.
 
 <br><br>
 
 <span id="result">
-<<link "Force her to do a public relations tour with you">>
+<<link "Force $him to do a public relations tour with you">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	Though she hates you with all her heart, she knows better than most what happens to slaves who disobey. So, when you describe your public relations plans to her, she promises to obey before you even get to the threats. She finds herself accompanying you to the arcology's finest establishment in a lovely evening dress. The two of you share an understandably quiet meal, with a growing crowd coming to leer at the defeated slaveowner-cum-slave. At a prearranged signal from you, she stands, quickly strips naked, gets down on her knees, and <<if $PC.dick == 1>>sucks you off<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and <</if>><</if>><<if $PC.vagina == 1>>eats you out<</if>>. Such public humiliation starts her down the path of @@.hotpink;obedience,@@ and is the @@.green;talk of the Free Cities.@@
+	Though $he hates you with all $his heart, $he knows better than most what happens to slaves who disobey. So, when you describe your public relations plans to $him, $he promises to obey before you even get to the threats. $He finds $himself accompanying you to the arcology's finest establishment in a lovely evening dress. The two of you share an understandably quiet meal, with a growing crowd coming to leer at the defeated slaveowner-cum-slave. At a prearranged signal from you, $he stands, quickly strips naked, gets down on $his knees, and <<if $PC.dick == 1>>sucks you off<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and <</if>><</if>><<if $PC.vagina == 1>>eats you out<</if>>. Such public humiliation starts $him down the path of @@.hotpink;obedience,@@ and is the @@.green;talk of the Free Cities.@@
 	<<set $rep += 500, $activeSlave.devotion += 4, $activeSlave.oralCount += 1, $oralTotal += 1>>
 	<<set $rivalID = 0>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
-<br><<link "Make her orally service your other slaves in public">>
+<br><<link "Make $him orally service your other slaves in public">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	$slaves[0].slaveName leads her out into the arcology's largest atrium, forces her to her knees, and in full view of the whole arcology, orally rapes someone who was until this week a slaveowner herself. Behind her, $slaves[1].slaveName is standing ready for her turn, and all your other slaves are behind. Public opinion is divided; the precedent is universally agreed to be bad, but the punishment is generally thought to be terrible and deserved. Your slaves, however, are almost insufferably @@.hotpink;pleased with you@@ for forcing $activeSlave.slaveName, whom they still view as a slaveowner, to pleasure them.
+	<<setLocalPronouns $slaves[1] 2>>
+	$slaves[0].slaveName leads $him out into the arcology's largest atrium, forces $him to $his knees, and in full view of the whole arcology, orally rapes someone who was until this week a slaveowner herself. Behind them, $slaves[1].slaveName is standing ready for _his2 turn, and all your other slaves stand behind _him2. Public opinion is divided; the precedent is universally agreed to be bad, but the punishment is generally thought to be terrible and deserved. Your slaves, however, are almost insufferably @@.hotpink;pleased with you@@ for forcing $activeSlave.slaveName, whom they still view as a slaveowner, to pleasure them.
 	<<set $activeSlave.oralCount += $slaves.length*2, $oralTotal += $slaves.length*2>>
 	<<run $slaves.forEach(function(s) { s.devotion += 10; })>>
 	<<set $rivalID = 0>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 <<if $activeSlave.anus == 0>>
-	<br><<link "Break her ass and then let the public use it">>
+	<br><<link "Break $his ass and then let the public use it">>
 		<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		$activeSlave.slaveName, who has been fairly dignified up to this point, breaks down when she's placed in stocks with her ass in the air. Her sobs become screams when, for the first time in her life, she feels the burning sensation of a well-lubricated <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cockhead<<else>>strap-on<</if>> forcing its way past her virgin sphincter. Raping a virgin anus is not a new pleasure for you, but the usual shrieking, struggling and spasming is all the sweeter this time. @@.green;Half the arcology@@ has used her @@.red;poor injured butthole@@ by the end of the day, she @@.gold;is learning to fear you,@@ and hates you @@.mediumorchid;even more@@ if possible.
+		$activeSlave.slaveName, who has been fairly dignified up to this point, breaks down when $he's placed in stocks with $his ass in the air. $His sobs become screams when, for the first time in $his life, $he feels the burning sensation of a well-lubricated <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cockhead<<else>>strap-on<</if>> forcing its way past $his virgin sphincter. Raping a virgin anus is not a new pleasure for you, but the usual shrieking, struggling and spasming is all the sweeter this time. @@.green;Half the arcology@@ has used $his @@.red;poor injured butthole@@ by the end of the day, $he @@.gold;is learning to fear you,@@ and hates you @@.mediumorchid;even more@@ if possible.
 		<<set $rep += 500, $activeSlave.devotion -= 4, $activeSlave.trust -= 5, $activeSlave.health -= 10, $activeSlave.anus = 3, $activeSlave.analCount += 47, $analTotal += 47>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.publicCount>><<set $activeSlave.publicCount += 47>><<else>><<set $activeSlave.publicCount = 47>><</if>>
 		<<set $rivalID = 0>>
 		<</replace>>
 	<</link>>
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.balls > 0) && ($seeExtreme == 1)>>
-	<br><<link "Publicly geld her">>
+<</if>>
+<<if ($activeSlave.balls > 0) && ($seeExtreme == 1)>>
+	<br><<link "Publicly geld $him">>
 		<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		You announce that since $activeSlave.slaveName has spent so much money and effort turning herself into a girl with expensive hormones, you'll take a lower-tech step to bring her further in that regard. An auto surgery is set up in public and the populace is treated to the edifying spectacle of a very large pair of testicles being efficiently removed by the modern surgical art. Unusually, she was not given general anesthesia, but instead given local painkillers and made to watch on a monitor, to her @@.gold;rage@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@ There is @@.green;applause@@ as the cauterizer seals the surgical site where her massive scrotum used to hang. Her cock looks softer already.
+		You announce that since $activeSlave.slaveName has spent so much money and effort turning herself into a girl with expensive hormones, you'll take a lower-tech step to bring $him further in that regard. An auto surgery is set up in public and the populace is treated to the edifying spectacle of a very large pair of testicles being efficiently removed by the modern surgical art. Unusually, she was not given general anesthesia, but instead given local painkillers and made to watch on a monitor, to $his @@.gold;rage@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@ There is @@.green;applause@@ as the cauterizer seals the surgical site where $his massive scrotum used to hang. $His cock looks softer already.
 		<<set $rep += 500, $activeSlave.devotion -= 50, $activeSlave.trust -= 50, $activeSlave.health -= 10, $activeSlave.balls = 0>>
 		<<set $rivalID = 0>>
 		<</replace>>
 	<</link>>
-<<elseif isFertile($activeSlave)>>
-	<br><<link "Let the public impregnate her">>
+<</if>>
+<<if (isFertile($activeSlave)) && ($seePreg == 1)>>
+	<br><<link "Let the public impregnate $him">>
 		<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		You announce that since $activeSlave.slaveName damaged the arcology, she will be taking a leading role in the reconstruction. She will be doing this by replacing one of the residents killed in the violence - by bearing a new slave, to be conceived collectively. The shame and @@.mediumorchid;horror@@ of her future as breeding stock comes home to her as she's restrained in a chair with her legs spread. Soon, the stream of fluids is running down her thoroughly-fucked pussy and over her virgin anus to pool on the floor beneath her. Modern medical imaging reveals her fertile ovum's last, losing battle against a legion of sperm in real time, and the images are projected on large screens.
+		You announce that since $activeSlave.slaveName damaged the arcology, $he will be taking a leading role in the reconstruction. $He will be doing this by replacing one of the residents killed in the violence - by bearing a new slave, to be conceived collectively. The shame and @@.mediumorchid;horror@@ of $his future as breeding stock comes home to $him as $he's restrained in a chair with $his legs spread. Soon, the stream of fluids is running down $his thoroughly-fucked pussy and over $his anus to pool on the floor beneath $him. Modern medical imaging reveals $his fertile ovum's last, losing battle against a legion of sperm in real time, and the images are projected on large screens.
 		<<set $rep += 500, $activeSlave.preg = 1, $activeSlave.pregSource = -2, $activeSlave.pregKnown = 1, $activeSlave.pregWeek = 1, $activeSlave.devotion -= 15>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.pregType = setPregType($activeSlave)>>
 		<<set WombImpregnate($activeSlave, $activeSlave.pregType, -2, 1)>>
@@ -68,4 +73,3 @@ This is a special week, the week of your victory. <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>>
 </span>
 
 <</if>> /* def $activeSlave */
-
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
index c57f89398d474131362980f4aca4a556faa83243..e95eaa4a343f044af459b8422fb2d7fe84e555f3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.butt = 4>>
 		<<set $hostage.behavioralFlaw = "anorexic">>
 		<<set $hostage.sexualFlaw = "crude">>
-		screaming as she watches $his breasts swell from the intense amount of A-HGH being pumped into them.
+		screaming as $he watches $his breasts swell from the intense amount of A-HGH being pumped into them.
 	<<case "Asset Expansionism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.butt = 2>>
 		<<set $hostage.behavioralFlaw = "anorexic">>
 		<<set $hostage.sexualFlaw = "hates penetration">>
-		struggling with a feeding tube down $his throat, $his belly heavily bloated with fattening slave food, $his body already looking a little soft. She is being forcibly fucked, $his middle jiggling with each thrust; 28 tallies are already drawn over $his pussy.
+		struggling with a feeding tube down $his throat, $his belly heavily bloated with fattening slave food, $his body already looking a little soft. $He is being forcibly fucked, $his middle jiggling with each thrust; 28 tallies are already drawn over $his pussy.
 	<<case "Hedonistic Decadence">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -368,14 +368,14 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.boobsImplant += 2000>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetish = "boobs">>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 10>>
-		blushing as she attempts to get dressed with $his massive <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc fake tits getting in the way.
+		blushing as $he attempts to get dressed with $his massive <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc fake tits getting in the way.
 	<<case "Transformation Fetishism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetish = "submissive">>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 10>>
-		blushing as she recollects all the compliments $his pure body has received so far.
+		blushing as $he recollects all the compliments $his pure body has received so far.
 	<<case "Youth Preferentialism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.analCount += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetish = "submissive">>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 10>>
-		blushing as she thinks about being dominated by that MILF.
+		blushing as $he thinks about being dominated by that MILF.
 	<<case "Maturity Preferentialism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.analCount += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetish = "dom">>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 10>>
-		blushing as she thinks about possibly dominating $his energetic harasser.
+		blushing as $he thinks about possibly dominating $his energetic harasser.
 	<<case "Slimness Enthusiasm">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -402,12 +402,12 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.butt = 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetish = "boobs">>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 10>>
-		blushing as she attempts to get dressed with $his massive <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc tits getting in the way.
+		blushing as $he attempts to get dressed with $his massive <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc tits getting in the way.
 	<<case "Asset Expansionism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		blushing as she recollects all the compliments $his slim body has received so far.
+		blushing as $he recollects all the compliments $his slim body has received so far.
 	<<case "Pastoralism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetish = "dom">>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 10>>
-		crashing into $his bed, exhausted from all $his exercise. As she massages $his sore body, she can't help gasp at the weight she has lost.
+		crashing into $his bed, exhausted from all $his exercise. As $he massages $his sore body, $he can't help gasp at the weight $he has lost.
 	<<case "Cummunism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.boobs += 1000>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetish = "boobs">>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 10>>
-		groaning as she lowers $his growing body onto $his cot. She shoves a massive <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc milky breast aside so she can massage $his hugely distended belly. She moans in pain under the massive amount of high-caloric fluid within $his gut.
+		groaning as $he lowers $his growing body onto $his cot. $He shoves a massive <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc milky breast aside so $he can massage $his hugely distended belly. $He moans in pain under the massive amount of high-caloric fluid within $his gut.
 	<<case "Physical Idealism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vagina = 3>>
 		<<set $hostage.behavioralFlaw = "anorexic">>
 		<<set $hostage.sexualFlaw = "hates penetration">>
-		groaning as $his taut belly is measured and $his weight is taken; 140 tallies adorn $his lower belly. "88 kilos, a good start, but nowhere near the end. Now about that fetish of yours..." She responds with a meek
+		groaning as $his taut belly is measured and $his weight is taken; 140 tallies adorn $his lower belly. "88 kilos, a good start, but nowhere near the end. Now about that fetish of yours..." $He responds with a meek
 		<<set $hostageFetish = either("submissive", "cumslut", "humiliation", "buttslut", "boobs", "sadist", "masochist", "dom", "pregnancy")>>
 		<<switch $hostageFetish>>
 		<<case "submissive">>
@@ -2857,7 +2857,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.weight -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.muscles += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength += 5>>
-		checking $himself out in the mirror, gawking at how much weight she lost.
+		checking $himself out in the mirror, gawking at how much weight $he's lost.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 15>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -2870,10 +2870,10 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.weight -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.muscles += 5>>
-		massaging body oil into $his abs and checking herself out in a mirror.
+		massaging body oil into $his abs and checking $himself out in a mirror.
 	<<else>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		massaging body oil into $his abs and posing in front of the mirror. She is proud to have gone from a fat cow to a ripped goddess.
+		massaging body oil into $his abs and posing in front of the mirror. $He is proud to have gone from a fat cow to a ripped goddess.
 	<</if>>
 	<<case "Chattel Religionism">>
 	<<if $rivalryDuration <= 5>>
@@ -2911,7 +2911,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		questioning why she is made to pray for your arcology's salvation.
+		questioning why $he is made to pray for your arcology's salvation.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 15>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -3088,7 +3088,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.analCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.mammaryCount += 50>>
-		sobbing as she tries to coax the cum out of $his womb.
+		sobbing as $he tries to coax the cum out of $his womb.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 10>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -3097,7 +3097,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.analCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.mammaryCount += 50>>
-		crying as she cradles $his unwelcome pregnancy.
+		crying as $he cradles $his unwelcome pregnancy.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 15>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -3132,7 +3132,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.analCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.mammaryCount += 50>>
-		sobbing as she tries to coax the cum out of $his womb.
+		sobbing as $he tries to coax the cum out of $his womb.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 10>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -3142,7 +3142,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.analCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.mammaryCount += 50>>
-		crying as she cradles $his full-sized pregnancy.
+		crying as $he cradles $his full-sized pregnancy.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 15>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -3249,7 +3249,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.analCount += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.mammaryCount += 50>>
-		panicking as she attempts to mime a plea to not get cut by $his aggressor.
+		panicking as $he attempts to mime a plea to not get cut by $his aggressor.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 20>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion += 5>>
@@ -3345,7 +3345,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		admiring how pure $his body is in the mirror.
 	<<else>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		admiring $his pure body from every angle she can.
+		admiring $his pure body from every angle $he can.
 	<</if>>
 	<<case "Youth Preferentialism">>
 	<<if $rivalryDuration <= 5>>
@@ -3441,13 +3441,13 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.weight += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.boobs += 1000>>
-		smiling as the breast injections swell $his breasts to <<print $hostage.boobs>>ccs. She runs $his hand across $his huge butt and softening body.
+		smiling as the breast injections swell $his breasts to <<print $hostage.boobs>>ccs. $He runs $his hand across $his huge butt and softening body.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 20>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.weight += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.boobs += 1000>>
-		practically orgasming as the breast injections swell $his breasts to <<print $hostage.boobs>>ccs. She sinks $his hands into $his enormous butt and fat belly.
+		practically orgasming as the breast injections swell $his breasts to <<print $hostage.boobs>>ccs. $He sinks $his hands into $his enormous butt and fat belly.
 	<<else>>
 		shouting at a plastic surgeon to make $his <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc tits even larger.
 	<</if>>
@@ -3522,20 +3522,20 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.weight += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.boobs += 1000>>
-		sighing as the milkers drain $his big <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc udders while she massages $his softening belly.
+		sighing as the milkers drain $his big <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc udders while $he massages $his softening belly.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 15>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.weight += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.boobs += 1000>>
-		sighing with relief as the milkers drain $his huge <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc udders while she massages $his jiggly belly.
+		sighing with relief as the milkers drain $his huge <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc udders while $he massages $his jiggly belly.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 20>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.weight += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.boobs += 1000>>
-		happily humming as the milkers drain $his giant <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc udders while she plays with $his fat belly and breasts.
+		happily humming as the milkers drain $his giant <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc udders while $he plays with $his fat belly and breasts.
 	<<else>>
 		moaning loudly as the milkers drain $his massive <<print $hostage.boobs>>cc udders.
 	<</if>>
@@ -3546,7 +3546,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.weight += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.boobs += 50>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 28>>
-		sobbing as she is forced is experience all manner of perversion in an effort to reveal $his fetishes.
+		sobbing as $he is forced is experience all manner of perversion in an effort to reveal $his fetishes.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 10>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -3556,12 +3556,12 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 28>>
 		<<switch $hostageFetish>>
 		<<case "submissive">>
-			struggling to hold back $his joy as she is forced to eat out another slave.
+			struggling to hold back $his joy as $he is forced to eat out another slave.
 		<<case "cumslut">>
 			struggling to hold back $his joy as a hot load spurts across $his face.
 			<<set $hostage.oralCount += 70>>
 		<<case "humiliation">>
-			struggling to hold back $his joy as she is paraded, naked, through the arcology.
+			struggling to hold back $his joy as $he is paraded, naked, through the arcology.
 		<<case "buttslut">>
 			struggling to hold back $his joy as $his ass is roughly fucked.
 			<<set $hostage.analCount += 21>>
@@ -3569,13 +3569,13 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<case "boobs">>
 			<<set $hostage.boobs += 100>>
 			<<set $hostage.boobsImplant += 100>>
-			struggling to hold back $his joy as she checks out $his new <<print $hostage.boobsImplant>>cc implants.
+			struggling to hold back $his joy as $he checks out $his new <<print $hostage.boobsImplant>>cc implants.
 		<<case "sadist">>
-			struggling to hold back $his joy as she is encouraged to beat a slave that spilled a cup of food on the clean floor.
+			struggling to hold back $his joy as $he is encouraged to beat a slave that spilled a cup of food on the clean floor.
 		<<case "masochist">>
 			struggling to hold back $his joy as $his nipples are cruelly pinched and twisted.
 		<<case "dom">>
-			struggling to hold back $his joy as she is told to order a waiting slave to do whatever she wants.
+			struggling to hold back $his joy as $he is told to order a waiting slave to do whatever $he wants.
 		<<case "pregnancy">>
 			struggling to hold back $his joy as another huge load shoots into $his fertile womb.
 			<<set $hostage.preg++>>
@@ -3644,11 +3644,11 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<case "sadist">>
 			cumming hard as the slave mounting $him writhes in pain at _hisU torment.
 		<<case "masochist">>
-			cumming hard as she is beaten during sex.
+			cumming hard as $he is beaten during sex.
 		<<case "dom">>
 			sitting on a slave that displeased $him and forcing the struggling _girlU to eat $him out.
 		<<case "pregnancy">>
-			puffing out $his already large belly pretending to be even more pregnant than she already is.
+			puffing out $his already large belly pretending to be even more pregnant than $he already is.
 			<<set $hostage.preg++>>
 			<<set $hostage.pregKnown = 1>>
 			<<set $hostage.pregWeek++>>
@@ -3758,7 +3758,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength += 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		crying as she is forced to service three dicks at once.
+		crying as $he is forced to service three dicks at once.
 	<<elseif $rivalryDuration <= 15>>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw
index e0912c5f32d77cf056d8ac9c4bf2412af9dd2e79..17b902bb167bc60c729fac119ef93b49343cec32 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw
@@ -22,16 +22,9 @@
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 <<set _rivalType = _rivalType.random()>>
-Your 
-<<if passage() == "P rivalry actions">> 
-	target is quickly delivered. Politely dismissing the head of your <<if $mercenariesTitle != "mercenaries">> $mercenariesTitle<<else>> mercenaries<</if>>, you savor 
-<<else>>
-	bounty is quickly claimed, and you are treated to 
-<</if>>
-the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a black bag over her head and her hands cuffed behind her. She's one of your slaves now, fundamentally no different than any other. Looking her over, the causes of her downfall are 
+
 <<switch _rivalType>>
 <<case "expansionist shemale">>
-	immediately apparent: she's obviously been indulging in self-transformation to excess.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -68,7 +61,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "luxurious">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 80>>
 <<case "cum addict">>
-	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having cumflation and ball expansion fetishes, but applying them to oneself can be addictive.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -104,7 +96,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "neat">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 20>>
 <<case "hung shota">>
-	not immediately apparent: she's young, in good shape, and not lacking down there at all.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = $minimumSlaveAge>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 18>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -138,7 +129,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.sexualQuirk = "perverted">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 20>>
 <<case "masculine">>
-	not immediately apparent: she's in good shape, if quite masculine.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -170,7 +160,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "neat">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 5>>
 <<case "micropenis">>
-	immediately apparent: she's got a slavegirl's cock and balls, not an arcology owner's.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -202,7 +191,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "neat">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 5>>
 <<case "bull dyke">>
-	not immediately apparent: though female, she's obviously no stranger to taking a dominant sexual role, to put it politely.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -239,7 +227,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "neat">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 5>>
 <<case "breeder">>
-	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having a pregnancy fetish, but applying it to oneself is ill-fitting for an arcology owner.
 	<<if $pedo_mode == 1>>
 		<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = ($fertilityAge + 6)>>
 		<<set $one_time_age_overrides_pedo_mode = 1>> /% Old enough to have been pregnant many times. %/
@@ -294,7 +281,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "luxurious">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 80>>
 <<case "oppai loli">>
-	immediately apparent: she's young, inexperienced, and extremely top heavy.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = $minimumSlaveAge>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 12>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -327,7 +313,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "twin tails">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 40>>
 <<case "cow">>
-	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having lactation and breast expansion fetishes, but applying them to oneself can be addictive.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -361,7 +346,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "neat">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 5>>
 <<case "bimbo">>
-	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having a bimbo fetish, but applying it to oneself can be addictive.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -396,7 +380,6 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 	<<set $activeSlave.hStyle = "tails">>
 	<<set $activeSlave.hLength = 80>>
 <<default>>
-	immediately apparent: she seems to have recently fallen into serious aphrodisiac addiction.
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = 18>>
 	<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
 	<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
@@ -443,6 +426,41 @@ the delicious moment of finding your rival on her knees in front of you with a b
 <<if $activeSlave.physicalAge > 35>><<set $activeSlave.ageImplant = 1>><<AgeImplantAdjustment $activeSlave>><</if>>
 <<set $activeSlave.pubicHStyle = "waxed">>
 <<set $activeSlave.underArmHStyle = "waxed">>
+
+<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
+
+Your 
+<<if passage() == "P rivalry actions">> 
+	target is quickly delivered. Politely dismissing the head of your <<if $mercenariesTitle != "mercenaries">> $mercenariesTitle<<else>> mercenaries<</if>>, you savor 
+<<else>>
+	bounty is quickly claimed, and you are treated to 
+<</if>>
+the delicious moment of finding your rival on $his knees in front of you with a black bag over $his head and $his hands cuffed behind $him. $He's one of your slaves now, fundamentally no different than any other. Looking $him over, the causes of $his downfall are 
+<<switch _rivalType>>
+<<case "expansionist shemale">>
+	immediately apparent: $he's obviously been indulging in self-transformation to excess.
+<<case "cum addict">>
+	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having cumflation and ball expansion fetishes, but applying them to oneself can be addictive.
+<<case "hung shota">>
+	not immediately apparent: $he's young, in good shape, and not lacking down there at all.
+<<case "masculine">>
+	not immediately apparent: $he's in good shape, if quite masculine.
+<<case "micropenis">>
+	immediately apparent: $he's got a slavegirl's cock and balls, not an arcology owner's.
+<<case "bull dyke">>
+	not immediately apparent: though female, $he's obviously no stranger to taking a dominant sexual role, to put it politely.
+<<case "breeder">>
+	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having a pregnancy fetish, but applying it to oneself is ill-fitting for an arcology owner.
+<<case "oppai loli">>
+	immediately apparent: $he's young, inexperienced, and extremely top heavy.
+<<case "cow">>
+	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having lactation and breast expansion fetishes, but applying them to oneself can be addictive.
+<<case "bimbo">>
+	immediately apparent: there's nothing wrong with having a bimbo fetish, but applying it to oneself can be addictive.
+<<default>>
+	immediately apparent: $he seems to have recently fallen into serious aphrodisiac addiction.
+<</switch>>
+
 <<set $nextLink = "AS Dump", $returnTo = "P rival initiation", $rivalID = $activeSlave.ID>> /* proceed directly to rival initiation event after New Slave Intro */
 <<set $rivalRace = 0>>
 <<include "New Slave Intro">>
\ No newline at end of file