From bf8e9a155fed6aaa6191ed861c7542e485a29b06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pregmodder <pregmodder@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 15 Nov 2020 20:07:03 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] player/desc/playerBoobs.js fix + career work

---
 src/player/desc/playerBoobs.js | 23 ++++++++++++++++++-----
 src/player/js/PlayerState.js   | 23 ++++++++++++-----------
 2 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/player/desc/playerBoobs.js b/src/player/desc/playerBoobs.js
index a9d95077f8e..1335bcc2297 100644
--- a/src/player/desc/playerBoobs.js
+++ b/src/player/desc/playerBoobs.js
@@ -294,13 +294,19 @@ App.Desc.Player.boobs = function() {
 		} else if (V.PC.title === 1) {
 			r.push(`Your chest is quite`);
 			if (V.PC.lactation > 0) {
-				frag = ` masculine, though the pair of wet spots forming over your nipples suggest otherwise,`;
+				frag = ` masculine, though the pair of wet spots forming over your nipples suggest otherwise`;
 			} else {
 				frag = ` masculine`;
 			}
 			if (V.PC.markings === "freckles") {
+				if (V.PC.lactation > 0) {
+					frag += `,`;
+				}
 				frag += ` and covered in a light spray of freckles.`;
 			} else if (V.PC.markings === "heavily freckled") {
+				if (V.PC.lactation > 0) {
+					frag += `,`;
+				}
 				frag += ` and covered in dense freckles.`;
 			} else {
 				frag += `.`; // all this frag bs is to make sure there is no space before the period.  Sigh.
@@ -309,17 +315,24 @@ App.Desc.Player.boobs = function() {
 		} else {
 			r.push(`Your chest is`);
 			if (V.PC.lactation > 0) {
-				frag = `non-existent, save for the pair of bulging milk glands beneath your nipples,`;
+				frag = ` non-existent, save for the pair of bulging milk glands beneath your nipples`;
 			} else {
-				frag = `non-existent`;
+				frag = ` non-existent`;
 			}
 			if (V.PC.markings === "freckles") {
-				frag += `and covered in a light spray of freckles.`;
+				if (V.PC.lactation > 0) {
+					frag += `,`;
+				}
+				frag += ` and covered in a light spray of freckles.`;
 			} else if (V.PC.markings === "heavily freckled") {
-				frag += `and covered in dense freckles.`;
+				if (V.PC.lactation > 0) {
+					frag += `,`;
+				}
+				frag += ` and covered in dense freckles.`;
 			} else {
 				frag += `.`;
 			}
+			r.push(frag);
 		}
 	}
 	return r.join(" ");
diff --git a/src/player/js/PlayerState.js b/src/player/js/PlayerState.js
index 1cbe58b9244..225cf3abfd9 100644
--- a/src/player/js/PlayerState.js
+++ b/src/player/js/PlayerState.js
@@ -289,17 +289,18 @@ App.Entity.PlayerState = class PlayerState {
 		this.pronoun = App.Data.Pronouns.Kind.male;
 		/**
 		 * * career prior to becoming owner
-		 * * "wealth"
-		 * * "capitalist"
-		 * * "mercenary"
-		 * * "slaver"
-		 * * "engineer"
-		 * * "medicine"
-		 * * "celebrity"
-		 * * "escort"
-		 * * "servant"
-		 * * "gang"
-		 * * "BlackHat"
+		 * * (22+)			(14+)					(10+)
+		 * * "wealth"		("trust fund")			("rich kid")
+		 * * "capitalist"	("entrepreneur")		("business kid")
+		 * * "mercenary"	("recruit")				("child soldier")
+		 * * "slaver"		("slave overseer")		("slave tender")
+		 * * "engineer"		("construction")		("worksite helper")
+		 * * "medicine" 	("medical assistant")	("nurse")
+		 * * "celebrity"	("rising star")			("child star")
+		 * * "escort"		("prostitute")			("child prostitute")
+		 * * "servant"		("handmaiden")			("child servant")
+		 * * "gang"			("hoodlum")				("street urchin")
+		 * * "BlackHat"		("hacker")				("script kiddy")
 		 * * "arcology owner"
 		 */
 		this.career = "capitalist";
-- 
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