From cb9980c8e1bd33b3047fc473b1ce754a528b23ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 22 Dec 2018 23:41:21 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] SmallStuff
---
devNotes/twine JS.txt | 2 +-
src/art/vector/Pussy.tw | 1 -
src/cheats/PCCheatMenu.tw | 2 +-
src/js/utilJS.tw | 2 +-
.../personalAssistantAppearance.tw | 6 +--
src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw | 18 +++----
src/uncategorized/reBrothelFunction.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw | 31 +++++------
src/uncategorized/reHGReplacement.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/reLegendaryBalls.tw | 17 +++---
src/uncategorized/reLegendaryCow.tw | 17 +++---
src/uncategorized/recruiterWorkaround.tw | 1 -
src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw | 6 +--
src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw | 52 +++++++++----------
src/uncategorized/storyCaption.tw | 2 +-
15 files changed, 81 insertions(+), 80 deletions(-)
diff --git a/devNotes/twine JS.txt b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
index ad7ae796f99..129813992f1 100644
--- a/devNotes/twine JS.txt
+++ b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
@@ -4204,7 +4204,7 @@ window.ResearchLabStockPile = function() {
+$stockpile.erectileImplant)>>
Ocular: $stockpile.ocularImplant
Cochlear: $stockpile.cochlearImplant
- // Erectile: $stockpile.erectileImplant
+ // Erectile: $stockpile.erectileImplant//
Electrolarynx: $stockpile.electrolarynx`
}
diff --git a/src/art/vector/Pussy.tw b/src/art/vector/Pussy.tw
index 4a3012f1004..7ba2a9af163 100644
--- a/src/art/vector/Pussy.tw
+++ b/src/art/vector/Pussy.tw
@@ -3,4 +3,3 @@
<<if _artSlave.vagina >= 0 && _artSlave.clothes != "a latex catsuit" && _artSlave.clothes != "a comfortable bodysuit" && _artSlave.clothes != "a cybersuit">>
<<include Art_Vector_Pussy>>
<</if>>
-
diff --git a/src/cheats/PCCheatMenu.tw b/src/cheats/PCCheatMenu.tw
index 0693f9c9147..2b409e683a3 100644
--- a/src/cheats/PCCheatMenu.tw
+++ b/src/cheats/PCCheatMenu.tw
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ Title: ''<<if $tempSlave.title == 0>>Master<<else>>Mistress<</if>>''
__pregnancy__
<br>''Pregnancy length'': <<textbox "$tempSlave.preg" $tempSlave.preg>> //how far along the your pregnancy is (pregMood kicks in at 24+ weeks) - -2: infertile, -1: contraceptives, 0: not pregnant, 1 - 42: pregnant, 43+: giving birth//
<br>''Fetus Count'': <<textbox "$tempSlave.pregType" $tempSlave.pregType>> //how many you're having (1-8)//
- <br>''PregSource'': <<textbox "$tempSlave.pregSource" $tempSlave.pregSource>> //who knocked you up - 0: unknown, -1: Societal Elite, -2: client, -3: former master, -4: male arc owner, -5: citizen, -6: self-impreg//
+ <br>''PregSource'': <<textbox "$tempSlave.pregSource" $tempSlave.pregSource>> //who knocked you up - 0: unknown, -1: self-impreg, -2: citizen, -3: former master, -4: male arc owner, -5: client, -6: Societal Elite, -7: designer baby//
<br>''PregMood'': <<textbox "$tempSlave.pregMood" $tempSlave.pregMood>> //how you act when heavily pregnant - 0: no change, 1: submissive and motherly, 2: aggressive and dominant//
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/js/utilJS.tw b/src/js/utilJS.tw
index 59655e0c63c..c964cca7c29 100644
--- a/src/js/utilJS.tw
+++ b/src/js/utilJS.tw
@@ -1073,6 +1073,6 @@ window.ResearchLabStockPile = function() {
+$stockpile.erectileImplant)>>
Ocular: $stockpile.ocularImplant
Cochlear: $stockpile.cochlearImplant
- // Erectile: $stockpile.erectileImplant
+ // Erectile: $stockpile.erectileImplant//
Electrolarynx: $stockpile.electrolarynx`
}
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw b/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw
index e556eb5cb0e..1393d8d2c19 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw
@@ -625,7 +625,7 @@ She's a cute little <<if $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist != "unset" && $assistantFS
<<case "eugenics">>
slavegirl wearing nothing but an overly complex chastity belt and trying her best to do master proud.
<<case "degradationist">>
- girl wearing an oversized v-neck t-shirt. The neck hole hangs low enough to show off her perky a-cup tits and the piercings through them.
+ girl wearing an oversized v-neck t-shirt. The neck hole hangs low enough to show off her perky A-cup tits and the piercings through them.
<<case "physical idealist">>
girl wearing spats and a tight shirt. She occasionally renders herself sweaty, as if just finishing exercising.
<<case "hedonistic decadence">>
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ She's a cute little <<if $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist != "unset" && $assistantFS
<<case "eugenics">>
belly, rather, she was. Her chastity belt has been torn open and her belly is grotesquely swollen with subhuman spawn. Occasionally a malformed, impish child claws its way out of her violated pussy.
<<case "degradationist">>
- belly wearing an open vest and a thong. It shows off her pierced milky b-cup tits and swollen pregnant belly. A large bar is driven through her popped navel.
+ belly wearing an open vest and a thong. It shows off her pierced milky B-cup tits and swollen pregnant belly. A large bar is driven through her popped navel.
<<case "physical idealist">>
belly wearing spats and a tight shirt. Her shirt rides up on her large belly and her growing butt fills out her spats nicely. She cradles her belly with a sullen look knowing it limits her activities.
<<case "hedonistic decadence">>
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ She's a cute little <<if $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist != "unset" && $assistantFS
<<case "transformation fetishist">>
belly wearing short shorts and a t-shirt. At first glance it looks like she stuck two overinflated balloons up her shirt but with closer inspection they are revealed to be ridiculous implants. They sit atop her bulging belly.
<<case "pastoralist">>
- belly wearing shorts and a white shirt. There's a little wet spot over each of her nipples. Her breasts have swollen to c-cups thanks to her pregnancy and the milkings.
+ belly wearing shorts and a white shirt. There's a little wet spot over each of her nipples. Her breasts have swollen to C-cups thanks to her pregnancy and the milkings.
<<case "maturity preferentialist">>
belly wearing a school uniform. Her top is left unbuttoned to allow her belly room. She keeps rubbing her bottom, making it look like Teacher just spanked her.
<<case "youth preferentialist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw b/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
index 30f7ebf6538..0e264c39d14 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
@@ -796,16 +796,16 @@
<<elseif $activeSlave.energy > 95>>
She enjoys using her mouth, but no more than other kinds of sexual activity.
<<else>>
- If she had any special regard for cum, you'd know it, and she doesn't.
+ If $he had any special regard for cum, you'd know it, and $he doesn't.
<</if>>
<br> You carefully watch her reaction as you let her spend a short time relaxing with a pregnant slave.
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy">>
- $He's fascinated. She fetishizes fertility! Discovering this with you has @@.hotpink;increased her devotion to you.@@
+ $He's fascinated. $He fetishizes fertility! Discovering this with you has @@.hotpink;increased her devotion to you.@@
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<<elseif $activeSlave.energy > 95>>
- She spends most of the rest ogling the pregnant slave's boobs.
+ $He spends most of the rest ogling the pregnant slave's boobs.
<<else>>
- She simply enjoys the rest.
+ $He simply enjoys the rest.
<</if>>
<br> You restrain the pregnant slave and administer a brief beating across her bare buttocks, ensuring that you cause enough pain to produce a few tears, a bit of begging, and some struggling.
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "sadist">>
@@ -852,21 +852,21 @@
<<BasicTrainingDefaulter>>
<<case "induce arrogance">>
- Since you've decided to incite her to arrogance, you praise her effusively, and give orders that others are to do so as well. Other slaves are punished for things she's allowed to get away with.
+ Since you've decided to incite her to arrogance, you praise her effusively, and give orders that others are to do so as well. Other slaves are punished for things $he's allowed to get away with.
<<InduceFlawLenityEffects>>
<<if $activeSlave.training < 100>>
- She isn't seriously affected; you'll have to be more subtle next week.
+ $He isn't seriously affected; you'll have to be more subtle next week.
<<else>>
<<set $activeSlave.training = 0>>
- She begins to think herself special, and is now @@.red;arrogant.@@
+ $He begins to think $himself special, and is now @@.red;arrogant.@@
<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "arrogant">>
<<BasicTrainingDefaulter>>
<</if>>
<<case "induce bitchiness">>
- Since you've decided to induce her to bitchiness, you keep her in your office and induce her to criticize other slaves, rewarding her when she's especially catty.
+ Since you've decided to induce $him to bitchiness, you keep $him in your office and induce $him to criticize other slaves, rewarding $him when $he's especially catty.
<<InduceFlawLenityEffects>>
<<if $activeSlave.training < 100>>
- She goes along, but remains cautious and will need more practice.
+ $He goes along, but remains cautious and will need more practice.
<<else>>
She starts making @@.red;bitchy@@ remarks without being prompted.
<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "bitchy">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reBrothelFunction.tw b/src/uncategorized/reBrothelFunction.tw
index 5586dc3a079..beebf10c403 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reBrothelFunction.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reBrothelFunction.tw
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ $brothelNameCaps is a reputable establishment in $arcologies[0].name, a veritabl
<br><br>
One request comes to you written on a letterhead featuring the logo of a fellow arcology owner. She describes her husband's preference for your hard working brothel whores, whom he patronizes on his regular business trips to your arcology. Such indulgences have been a distraction to her husband of late, and she has dispatched him to undertake a task in your arcology that simply cannot go poorly. With this in mind, she beseeches you to close down your brothel for a single day out of solidarity for a fellow arcology owner - and for the significant sum of <<print cashFormat(10000)>>.
<br><br>
-Another of these bids for your brothel comes in the form of a curious video call. The video comes from an infamous lothario in your arcology, a seducer of powerful and prominent women citizens. Indeed, the recording was surreptitiously recorded in the bedroom of one such influential woman, with the casanova describing his request in hushed tones while his wealthy host minces about unknowingly in the background. He explains that he is finally ready to hang up his coat and end his days of debauchery and copious casual sex, but that he would like to do so by engaging in a full day of indulgence at $brothelNameCaps.
+Another of these bids for your brothel comes in the form of a curious video call. The video comes from an infamous lothario in your arcology, a seducer of powerful and prominent women citizens. Indeed, the recording was surreptitiously recorded in the bedroom of one such influential woman, with the Casanova describing his request in hushed tones while his wealthy host minces about unknowingly in the background. He explains that he is finally ready to hang up his coat and end his days of debauchery and copious casual sex, but that he would like to do so by engaging in a full day of indulgence at $brothelNameCaps.
<br><br>
The last of these requests comes in the form of a letter, stamped with the herald of a prominent arcology family. It seems the eldest son of the family, known to you largely as a spoiled child riding on the coattails of his parents, is about to reach the age of majority. At his behest, his parents have contacted you to reserve your brothel for a day so that their son may become a man in true Free Cities fashion - amongst a roil of writhing flesh and wanton debauchery.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw
index 012a006b9cf..4061207c960 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFormerAbolitionist.tw
@@ -9,38 +9,39 @@
<<else>>
<<set $activeSlave = $eventSlave>>
<</if>>
+<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
Crime is extremely rare in $arcologies[0].name, and some would say justice rarer still, but if there's one thing that unites the citizens of $arcologies[0].name, it's a mutual outrage towards attempted abolitionists. Slaveownership is the cornerstone of the society that protects and enriches them, and they see those who would attempt to unlawfully free slaves not just as thieves of property but as anarchists trying to bring down everything they have worked to build.
-While a brutal flogging or surgical mutilation soothes their outrage, nothing warms the collective heart of $arcologies[0].name's mob like the sight of a former abolitionist well and truly broken. <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is one such shining example, and her borderline worship of you is doing wonders for your reputation lately as she becomes a local celebrity and a popular topic of discussion.
+While a brutal flogging or surgical mutilation soothes their outrage, nothing warms the collective heart of $arcologies[0].name's mob like the sight of a former abolitionist well and truly broken. <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is one such shining example, and $his borderline worship of you is doing wonders for your reputation lately as $he becomes a local celebrity and a popular topic of discussion.
-This is a rare opportunity. While the mob is quick to pat itself on the back for withstanding attacks from abolitionists, before long they will tire of remembering those dangers and turn their attention elsewhere. It might be possible, with a serious investment of funds in publicity, to really fix her in the public mind as a shining example of your slave-breaking prowess.
+This is a rare opportunity. While the mob is quick to pat itself on the back for withstanding attacks from abolitionists, before long they will tire of remembering those dangers and turn their attention elsewhere. It might be possible, with a serious investment of funds in publicity, to really fix $him in the public mind as a shining example of your slave-breaking prowess.
<br><br>
<span id="result">
-<<link "Just capitalize on her popularity to increase your reputation">>
+<<link "Just capitalize on $his popularity to increase your reputation">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
-You spend the week parading $activeSlave.slaveName around in public, letting everyone get a good look at her fawning adoration of you. A variety of public sex acts really nails the point home in the psyche of your citizens and @@.yellowgreen;increases your reputation,@@ and after a few days you start to receive a sincere golf clap from onlookers every time you cum in or on $activeSlave.slaveName.
+You spend the week parading $activeSlave.slaveName around in public, letting everyone get a good look at $his fawning adoration of you. A variety of public sex acts really nails the point home in the psyche of your citizens and @@.yellowgreen;increases your reputation,@@ and after a few days you start to receive a sincere golf clap from onlookers every time you cum in or on $activeSlave.slaveName.
<<set $rep += 200>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<span id="result">
-<br><<link "Just capitalize on her popularity by renting out her mouth">>
+<br><<link "Just capitalize on $his popularity by renting out $his mouth">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
-You fasten $activeSlave.slaveName in a kneeling position in the center of your club, secured by shackles around her wrists and ankles - purely decorative, since she's so devoted she'd perform her role in this if you just hinted it would please you if she did. In front of her, you place a sign: "Fuck the mouth that preached abolitionism, <<print cashFormat(5)>>." In a few moments, the morning crowd will begin to arrive, and you have no doubt that $activeSlave.slaveName will be very, very popular. And she is. Even with an extra dose of curatives and a check-up every night, the strain of a week of dicks and a diet of cum @@.red;has taken a toll on her health.@@ But even after you pay to have the area that $activeSlave.slaveName worked thoroughly cleaned, you have made @@.yellowgreen;a tidy profit@@.
+You fasten $activeSlave.slaveName in a kneeling position in the center of your club, secured by shackles around $his wrists and ankles - purely decorative, since $he's so devoted $he'd perform $his role in this if you just hinted it would please you if $he did. In front of $him, you place a sign: "Fuck the mouth that preached abolitionism, <<print cashFormat(5)>>." In a few moments, the morning crowd will begin to arrive, and you have no doubt that $activeSlave.slaveName will be very, very popular. And $he is. Even with an extra dose of curatives and a check-up every night, the strain of a week of dicks and a diet of cum @@.red;has taken a toll on $his health.@@ But even after you pay to have the area that $activeSlave.slaveName worked thoroughly cleaned, you have made @@.yellowgreen;a tidy profit@@.
<<set $activeSlave.health -= 10>>
<<set $activeSlave.oralCount += random(410,440)>>
<<set $cash += 2000>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
-<br><<link "Invest <<print cashFormat(5000)>> in making her locally famous">>
+<br><<link "Invest <<print cashFormat(5000)>> in making $him locally famous">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 50>>
<<replace "#result">>
-You buy media coverage of her, invest in an ad campaign, and even arrange for her to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them. Your efforts are a success. Her current extreme popularity will fade in time, but you have managed to arrange for her a permanent place as an @@.green;example of your slave-breaking skills.@@
+You buy media coverage of $him, invest in an ad campaign, and even arrange for $him to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them. Your efforts are a success. $His current extreme popularity will fade in time, but you have managed to arrange for $him a permanent place as an @@.green;example of your slave-breaking skills.@@
<<set $cash -= 5000>>
<<set $rep += 200>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
@@ -48,17 +49,17 @@ You buy media coverage of her, invest in an ad campaign, and even arrange for he
<</replace>>
<<else>>
<<replace "#result">>
-You buy media coverage of her, invest in an ad campaign, and even arrange for her to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them. Unfortunately, popularity remains an art, not a science; though you do your best, the public mind's fancy eludes your grasp. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased,@@ but in a week she'll be forgotten.
+You buy media coverage of $him, invest in an ad campaign, and even arrange for $him to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them. Unfortunately, popularity remains an art, not a science; though you do your best, the public mind's fancy eludes your grasp. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased,@@ but in a week $he'll be forgotten.
<<set $cash -= 5000>>
<<set $rep += 200>>
<</replace>>
<</if>>
<</link>>
-<br><<link "Lavish <<print cashFormat(10000)>> on her locally famous">>
+<br><<link "Lavish <<print cashFormat(10000)>> on making $him locally famous">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 10>>
<<replace "#result">>
-You buy prime media coverage of her, invest in a lavish ad campaign, and even arrange for her to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them that is broadcast around the world. Your efforts are a success. Her current extreme popularity will fade in time, but you have managed to arrange for her a permanent place as an @@.green;example of your slave-breaking skills.@@
+You buy prime media coverage of $him, invest in a lavish ad campaign, and even arrange for $him to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them that is broadcast around the world. Your efforts are a success. $His current extreme popularity will fade in time, but you have managed to arrange for $him a permanent place as an @@.green;example of your slave-breaking skills.@@
<<set $cash -= 10000>>
<<set $rep += 400>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
@@ -66,18 +67,18 @@ You buy prime media coverage of her, invest in a lavish ad campaign, and even ar
<</replace>>
<<else>>
<<replace "#result">>
-You buy prime media coverage of her, invest in a lavish ad campaign, and even arrange for her to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them that is broadcast around the world. Unfortunately, popularity remains an art, not a science; though you do your best, the public mind's fancy eludes your grasp. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased,@@ but in a week she'll be forgotten.
+You buy prime media coverage of $him, invest in a lavish ad campaign, and even arrange for $him to give a speech denouncing the abolitionist movement and praising your efforts in fighting against them that is broadcast around the world. Unfortunately, popularity remains an art, not a science; though you do your best, the public mind's fancy eludes your grasp. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased,@@ but in a week $he'll be forgotten.
<<set $cash -= 10000>>
<<set $rep += 400>>
<</replace>>
<</if>>
<</link>>
</span>
-<br><<link "Spend <<print cashFormat(25000)>> on an attempt to make her world famous">>
+<br><<link "Spend <<print cashFormat(25000)>> on an attempt to make $him world famous">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 50>>
<<replace "#result">>
-The world is in love with $activeSlave.slaveName. Her face graces magazine covers the world over and her passionate arguments (ghostwritten by the best spin doctors money can buy) spark debate everywhere they're heard. She is mentioned by name in strident denunciations about the immorality of the present day from religious leaders. She appears on the internet with all sorts of attempts at humor superimposed on her image. Her loving and overblown descriptions of you spark a new trend in protagonists of badly-written romance novels. When a very popular talk show host attempts to call her bluff and receives oral sex in front of a live studio audience, @@.yellowgreen;you know for sure that her fame has stuck@@.
+The world is in love with $activeSlave.slaveName. $His face graces magazine covers the world over and $his passionate arguments (ghostwritten by the best spin doctors money can buy) spark debate everywhere they're heard. $He is mentioned by name in strident denunciations about the immorality of the present day from religious leaders. $He appears on the internet with all sorts of attempts at humor superimposed on $his image. $His loving and overblown descriptions of you spark a new trend in protagonists of badly-written romance novels. When a very popular talk show host attempts to call $his bluff and receives oral sex in front of a live studio audience, @@.yellowgreen;you know for sure that $his fame has stuck.@@
<<set $cash -= 25000>>
<<set $rep += 600>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 2>>
@@ -85,7 +86,7 @@ The world is in love with $activeSlave.slaveName. Her face graces magazine cover
<</replace>>
<<else>>
<<replace "#result">>
-The world seems temporarily enamored with $activeSlave.slaveName as she appears on talk shows and in political debates with millions of watchers, but before long her fifteen minutes of fame peter out and the only offers coming in are from pornography magnates and local talk radio shows. Though she achieved @@.yellowgreen;local fame@@ for appearing on the world stage, the rest of the world seems to have gotten bored with $activeSlave.slaveName.
+The world seems temporarily enamored with $activeSlave.slaveName as $he appears on talk shows and in political debates with millions of watchers, but before long $his fifteen minutes of fame peter out and the only offers coming in are from pornography magnates and local talk radio shows. Though $he achieved @@.yellowgreen;local fame@@ for appearing on the world stage, the rest of the world seems to have gotten bored with $activeSlave.slaveName.
<<set $cash -= 25000>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She is notorious as a former abolitionist turned devoted slave.">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reHGReplacement.tw b/src/uncategorized/reHGReplacement.tw
index 222baddc98d..1cb37e7ba1b 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reHGReplacement.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reHGReplacement.tw
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<<setLocalPronouns $HeadGirl 2>>
<<setSpokenLocalPronouns $activeSlave $HeadGirl>>
-There's a constant traffic of slaves in and out of your office as girls come in for instructions, inspections, and sex. Your Head Girl $HeadGirl.slaveName is one of the most frequent visitors, since although you trust _him2, _he2's still a slave and has to check with you before acting on some matters.<<if $HeadGirl.relationship == -3>> (_He2's also your wife, making _his2 visits a pleasant diversion.)<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalistLaw == 1>> (_He2's also your Consort, making _his2 visits a pleasant diversion.)<</if>> During one of _his2 visits, <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> happens to come in for $his scheduled inspection. $He perches politely on the couch, waiting $his turn like a good $girl. $His $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes are watchful, however, and $he seems to be paying very close attention to your conversation with your Head Girl.
+There's a constant traffic of slaves in and out of your office as your chattel comes in and out for instructions, inspections, and sex. Your Head Girl $HeadGirl.slaveName is one of the most frequent visitors, since although you trust _him2, _he2's still a slave and has to check with you before acting on some matters.<<if $HeadGirl.relationship == -3>> (_He2's also your wife, making _his2 visits a pleasant diversion.)<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalistLaw == 1>> (_He2's also your Consort, making _his2 visits a pleasant diversion.)<</if>> During one of _his2 visits, <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> happens to come in for $his scheduled inspection. $He perches politely on the couch, waiting $his turn like a good $girl. $His $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes are watchful, however, and $he seems to be paying very close attention to your conversation with your Head Girl.
When $HeadGirl.slaveName leaves, $he clears $his throat nervously. $He gathers $his courage, and <<say>>s, "<<Master>>, I think I would make a better Head Girl than $him." $He takes a deep breath and plunges on. "I'm ju<<s>>t a<<s>> <<s>>mart a<<s>> <<he 2>> i<<s>>. And, <<Master>>, I'm <<s>>ure you've noti<<c>>ed <<he 2>> i<<s>>n't very good at teaching other girl<<s>> vaginal <<s>>kill<<s>>.
<<if $HeadGirl.vagina > 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryBalls.tw b/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryBalls.tw
index 89df4c600c1..f91ccf8faec 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryBalls.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryBalls.tw
@@ -7,22 +7,23 @@
<<goto "RIE Eligibility Check">>
<<else>>
+<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
-<<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is an incredible producer of cum. She's producing in volumes that would have been unthinkable in the days when it was illegal to restrain a slave so that she could have every drop of her ejaculate milked out by a machine. A nascent slave stock organization will be holding a public livestock show tomorrow, and since they're aware you're experimenting with cockmilking, they've sent you an invitation to enter an especially productive slave to be judged.
+<<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is an incredible producer of cum. $He's producing in volumes that would have been unthinkable in the days when it was illegal to restrain a slave so that $he could have every drop of $his ejaculate milked out by a machine. A nascent slave stock organization will be holding a public livestock show tomorrow, and since they're aware you're experimenting with cockmilking, they've sent you an invitation to enter an especially productive slave to be judged.
<br><br>
-This is a rare opportunity. The idea of cockmilking is new and understandably fascinating to many, so the livestock show is likely to draw some serious press. Were $activeSlave.slaveName to win, she would probably be remembered for a long time as a special slave.
+This is a rare opportunity. The idea of cockmilking is new and understandably fascinating to many, so the livestock show is likely to draw some serious press. Were $activeSlave.slaveName to win, $he would probably be remembered for a long time as a special slave.
<br><br>
<span id="result">
-<<link "Fairly enter her in the livestock show">>
+<<link "Fairly enter $him in the livestock show">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 90>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, but her massive junk wins the day. Against all odds she is named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as cock stock of the highest pedigree. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, but $his massive junk wins the day. Against all odds $he is named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as cock stock of the highest pedigree. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
<<set $rep += 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She is remembered for winning best in show as a cockmilker.">>
@@ -31,7 +32,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of cockmilking is new and understandably fa
<</replace>>
<<else>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, and it is fatal to her chances of winning. Though her junk is easily the most impressive on display, another stock owner who was more open-handed with the judges took best in show. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's nuts anyway; as you are her owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, and it is fatal to $his chances of winning. Though $his junk is easily the most impressive on display, another stock owner who was more open-handed with the judges took best in show. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's nuts anyway; as you are $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
<<set $rep += 100>>
<</replace>>
<</if>>
@@ -40,7 +41,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of cockmilking is new and understandably fa
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 50>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look her over. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as cock stock of the highest pedigree. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look $him over. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as cock stock of the highest pedigree. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
<<set $cash -= 5000>>
<<set $rep += 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
@@ -50,7 +51,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of cockmilking is new and understandably fa
<</replace>>
<<else>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look her over, but others look disapprovingly at them; it seems some of your competitors also forwarded money to the committee. After furious wrangling, $activeSlave.slaveName loses to another milker. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's balls anyway; as you are her owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look $him over, but others look disapprovingly at them; it seems some of your competitors also forwarded money to the committee. After furious wrangling, $activeSlave.slaveName loses to another milker. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's balls anyway; as you are $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
<<set $cash -= 5000>>
<<set $rep += 100>>
<</replace>>
@@ -60,7 +61,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of cockmilking is new and understandably fa
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 10>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. After she's put through her paces, the most unfortunate series of accidents somehow befalls her fellow cows. One is taken ill, another seems drugged, and someone seems to have slipped a finger of raw ginger up another's urethra, making her whine and squeal when cockmilked. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as cock stock of the highest pedigree. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly cockmilked. After $he's put through $his paces, the most unfortunate series of accidents somehow befalls $his fellow cows. One is taken ill, another seems drugged, and someone seems to have slipped a finger of raw ginger up another's urethra, making them whine and squeal when cockmilked. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as cock stock of the highest pedigree. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
<<set $cash -= 10000>>
<<set $rep += 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryCow.tw b/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryCow.tw
index 2aacc1319de..78cef928c3e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryCow.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryCow.tw
@@ -7,22 +7,23 @@
<<goto "RIE Eligibility Check">>
<<else>>
+<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
-<<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is an incredible producer of milk. She's lactating in volumes that would have been unthinkable in the days when drug treatments were limited by consent. A nascent slave dairy trade organization will be holding a public stock show tomorrow, and since they're aware you keep cows, they've sent you an invitation to enter stock to be judged.
+<<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is an incredible producer of milk. $He's lactating in volumes that would have been unthinkable in the days when drug treatments were limited by consent. A nascent slave dairy trade organization will be holding a public stock show tomorrow, and since they're aware you keep cows, they've sent you an invitation to enter stock to be judged.
<br><br>
-This is a rare opportunity. The idea of human dairy is new and understandably fascinating to many, so the stock show is likely to draw some serious press. Were $activeSlave.slaveName to win, she would probably be remembered for a long time as a special cow.
+This is a rare opportunity. The idea of human dairy is new and understandably fascinating to many, so the stock show is likely to draw some serious press. Were $activeSlave.slaveName to win, $he would probably be remembered for a long time as a special cow.
<br><br>
<span id="result">
-<<link "Fairly enter her in the stock show">>
+<<link "Fairly enter $him in the stock show">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 90>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, but her massive tits win the day. Against all odds she is named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as dairy stock of the highest pedigree. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, but $his massive tits win the day. Against all odds $he is named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as dairy stock of the highest pedigree. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
<<set $rep += 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She is remembered for winning best in show as a dairy cow.">>
@@ -31,7 +32,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of human dairy is new and understandably fa
<</replace>>
<<else>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, and it is fatal to her chances of winning. Though her tits are easily the most impressive on display, another stock owner who was more open-handed with the judges took best in show. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's tits anyway; as you are her owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. It's likely there was some bribery behind the scenes, and it is fatal to $his chances of winning. Though $his tits are easily the most impressive on display, another stock owner who was more open-handed with the judges took best in show. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's tits anyway; as you are $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
<<set $rep += 100>>
<</replace>>
<</if>>
@@ -40,7 +41,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of human dairy is new and understandably fa
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 50>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look her over. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as dairy stock of the highest pedigree. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look $him over. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as dairy stock of the highest pedigree. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
<<set $cash -= 5000>>
<<set $rep += 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
@@ -50,7 +51,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of human dairy is new and understandably fa
<</replace>>
<<else>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look her over, but others look disapprovingly at them; it seems some of your competitors also forwarded money to the committee. After furious wrangling, $activeSlave.slaveName loses to another cow. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's tits anyway; as you are her owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. Several of the judges cannot resist giving you a wink as they look $him over, but others look disapprovingly at them; it seems some of your competitors also forwarded money to the committee. After furious wrangling, $activeSlave.slaveName loses to another cow. The public is impressed with $activeSlave.slaveName's tits anyway; as you are $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;increased@@ a little.
<<set $cash -= 5000>>
<<set $rep += 100>>
<</replace>>
@@ -60,7 +61,7 @@ This is a rare opportunity. The idea of human dairy is new and understandably fa
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<if random(1,100) > 10>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. After she's put through her paces, the most unfortunate series of accidents somehow befalls her fellow cows. One is taken ill, another seems drugged, and someone seems to have slipped a finger of raw ginger up another's ass, making her whine and squeal constantly. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as dairy stock of the highest pedigree. As her owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
+ $activeSlave.slaveName is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. After $he's put through $his paces, the most unfortunate series of accidents somehow befalls $his fellow cows. One is taken ill, another seems drugged, and someone seems to have slipped a finger of raw ginger up another's ass, making them whine and squeal constantly. $activeSlave.slaveName is unsurprisingly named best in show, and will be @@.green;remembered@@ as dairy stock of the highest pedigree. As $his owner, your reputation has @@.green;also increased.@@
<<set $cash -= 10000>>
<<set $rep += 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/recruiterWorkaround.tw b/src/uncategorized/recruiterWorkaround.tw
index 04d089f201b..351f2cbe1ea 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/recruiterWorkaround.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/recruiterWorkaround.tw
@@ -10,4 +10,3 @@
<</if>>
<<goto "Main">>
-
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw b/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw
index 1e5f034108c..a09852c7331 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
<<set $nextLink = "RIE Eligibility Check">>
<<if ($REM == 1)>>
- <<set $REM = either("revel", "antislavery terrorism", "tainted drugs", "new free city", "speculation", "medical breakthrough")>>
+ <<set $REM = either("antislavery terrorism", "medical breakthrough", "new free city", "revel", "speculation", "tainted drugs")>>
<<else>>
- <<set $REM = either("bankruptcy", "refugee boat", "arcology change", "war", "empty prisons", "unemployment")>>
+ <<set $REM = either("arcology change", "bankruptcy", "empty prisons", "refugee boat", "unemployment", "war")>>
<</if>>
<<if $assistant > 0>>
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ Your <<if $marketAssistantAnnounced>>market<<else>>personal<</if>> assistant's s
<<set $menialDemandFactor = Math.clamp($menialDemandFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "speculation">>
- The Free Cities are almost totally unregulated. Prices and interest rates can spike and plummet with speeds not seen since the South Seas Bubble, and for the most silly or corrupt of reasons. Today, it's the latter. A massive attempt to rig the slave market was uncovered this morning. Ultimately, the culprits were caught and much of the damage reversed, but confidence in the marketplace has been shaken. Many great slave vendors are holding onto their stock until they're sure the water's calm again. It's a sellers' market out there; projections show the price of slaves rising as much as ten percent in the short term. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
+ The Free Cities are almost totally unregulated. Prices and interest rates can spike and plummet with speeds not seen since the South Sea Bubble, and for the most silly or corrupt of reasons. Today, it's the latter. A massive attempt to rig the slave market was uncovered this morning. Ultimately, the culprits were caught and much of the damage reversed, but confidence in the marketplace has been shaken. Many great slave vendors are holding onto their stock until they're sure the water's calm again. It's a sellers' market out there; projections show the price of slaves rising as much as ten percent in the short term. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
<<set $menialSupplyFactor -= 20000>>
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
index 205335989d7..33be15a6ebc 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ $His $activeSlave.faceShape face is
<</if>>
<<if ($cyberMod == 1) && ($stockpile.ocularImplant > 0) && ($activeSlave.origEye != "implant")>>
<<if ($activeSlave.eyes != -3)>> <</if>>
- | [[Give her ocular implants|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.origEye = "implant", $stockpile.ocularImplant--,$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 20,$surgeryType = "ocular implant"]]
+ | [["Give " + $him + " ocular implants"|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.origEye = "implant", $stockpile.ocularImplant--,$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 20,$surgeryType = "ocular implant"]]
<</if>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ $His $activeSlave.faceShape face is
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<if ($cyberMod == 1) && ($stockpile.cochlearImplant > 0) && ($activeSlave.earImplant != 1)>>
- | [[Give her cochlear implants|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.earImplant = 1, $stockpile.cochlearImplant--,$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 20,$surgeryType = "cochlear implant"]]
+ | [["Give " + $him + " cochlear implants"|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.earImplant = 1, $stockpile.cochlearImplant--,$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 20,$surgeryType = "cochlear implant"]]
<</if>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -337,32 +337,32 @@ $He has
<br><br>
-Work on her chest:
+Work on $his chest:
<br>
$His
<<if $activeSlave.boobs < 300>><<print either("androgynous", "flat")>> chest is barely there.
<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 400>><<print either("pointy", "tiny")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc chest only fills an A-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 500>><<print either("perky", "small")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "boobs", "bosom")>> would fill a B-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 650>><<print either("healthy", "curved")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "boobs", "bust", "bosom")>> would fill a C-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 800>><<print either("big", "sizable")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "boobs", "bust", "bosom")>> would fill a D-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1000>><<print either("large", "big")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "boobs", "bust", "bosom")>> would fill a DD-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1200>><<print either("proud", "hefty")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders", "boobs")>> would fill an F-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1400>><<print either("hefty", "huge")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill a G-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1600>><<print either("massive", "huge")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an H-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1800>><<print either("enormous", "massive")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an I-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2050>><<print either("titanic", "enormous")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill a J-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2300>><<print either("stupendous", "titanic")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill a K-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2600>><<print either("magnificent", "stupendous")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an L-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2900>><<print either("tremendous", "magnificent")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an M-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 3250>><<print either("awe-inspiring", "tremendous")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an N-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 3600>><<print either("absurd", "awe-inspiring")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an O-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 3950>><<print either("disproportionate", "attention-grabbing")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill a P-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 4300>><<print either("shocking", "massive")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill a Q-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 4700>><<print either("unreal", "jaw-dropping")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an R-cup.
- <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 5100>><<print either("tremendous", "astounding")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> would fill an S-cup.
- <<elseif ($activeSlave.amp == 1)>><<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> fill out an enormous custom bra; $his tits dominate $his entire frame.
- <<else>><<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("tits", "breasts", "mammaries", "udders")>> fill out an enormous custom bra; $his tits dominate $his entire frame.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 500>><<print either("perky", "small")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("boobs", "bosom", "breasts", "tits")>> would fill a B-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 650>><<print either("curved", "healthy")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("boobs", "bosom", "breasts", "bust", "tits")>> would fill a C-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 800>><<print either("big", "sizable")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("boobs", "bosom", "breasts", "bust", "tits")>> would fill a D-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1000>><<print either("big", "large")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("boobs", "bosom", "breasts", "bust", "tits")>> would fill a DD-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1200>><<print either("hefty", "proud")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("boobs", "breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an F-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1400>><<print either("hefty", "huge")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill a G-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1600>><<print either("huge", "massive")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an H-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 1800>><<print either("enormous", "massive")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an I-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2050>><<print either("enormous", "titanic")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill a J-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2300>><<print either("stupendous", "titanic")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill a K-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2600>><<print either("magnificent", "stupendous")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an L-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 2900>><<print either("magnificent", "tremendous")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an M-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 3250>><<print either("awe-inspiring", "tremendous")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an N-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 3600>><<print either("absurd", "awe-inspiring")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an O-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 3950>><<print either("attention-grabbing", "disproportionate")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill a P-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 4300>><<print either("massive", "shocking")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill a Q-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 4700>><<print either("jaw-dropping", "unreal")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an R-cup.
+ <<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 5100>><<print either("astounding", "tremendous")>>, <<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> would fill an S-cup.
+ <<elseif ($activeSlave.amp == 1)>><<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> fill out an enormous custom bra; $his tits dominate $his entire frame.
+ <<else>><<print $activeSlave.boobs>>cc <<print either("breasts", "mammaries", "tits", "udders")>> fill out an enormous custom bra; $his tits dominate $his entire frame.
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.boobsImplant > 600>>
$He has <<print $activeSlave.boobsImplant>>cc fillable breast implants.
@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@ Work on her chest:
<br><br>
-Work on her midriff:
+Work on $his midriff:
<<if $activeSlave.indentureRestrictions >= 2 && $activeSlave.weight > 30>>
<br>
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ waist.
<</if>>
<<if ($activeSlave.waist >= -95) && ($activeSlave.waist < -75) && ($seeExtreme == 1)>>
<<if $activeSlave.indentureRestrictions < 1 && ($activeSlave.breedingMark != 1 || $propOutcome == 0)>>
- [[Remove ribs to severely narrow her waist|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.waist = -100,$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 40,$surgeryType = "ribs"]]
+ [["Remove ribs to severely narrow " + $his + " waist"|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.waist = -100,$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 40,$surgeryType = "ribs"]]
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@ $He's
<br><br>
-Work on her butt:
+Work on $his butt:
<br>
$He's got a
<<if $activeSlave.butt <= 1>>flat and <<print either("skinny", "slim", "taut")>> ass.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/storyCaption.tw b/src/uncategorized/storyCaption.tw
index bec3fe24c95..ed6547568bb 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/storyCaption.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/storyCaption.tw
@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@
<<else>>
<br><span id="manageArcology"><<link "Manage Arcology">><<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = _Pass>><<goto "Manage Arcology">><</link>></span> @@.cyan;[C]@@
<br><span id="managePenthouse"><<link "Manage Penthouse">><<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = _Pass>><<goto "Manage Penthouse">><</link>></span> @@.cyan;[P]@@
- <br><span id="manageEconomy"><<link "Manage Economy">><<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = _Pass>><<goto "Manage Economy">><</link>></span>@@.cyan;[N]@@
+ <br><span id="manageEconomy"><<link "Manage Economy">><<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = _Pass>><<goto "Manage Economy">><</link>></span> @@.cyan;[N]@@
<br><span id="managePerson"><<link "Manage Personal Affairs">><<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = _Pass>><<goto "Manage Personal Affairs">><</link>></span> @@.cyan;[X]@@
<<if $secExp == 1>>
<<if $propHub == 1>>
--
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