From d00876a68b596293e0a3b0d2e66bd0b555fb846a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ny11 <Ny11>
Date: Mon, 4 Feb 2019 15:05:32 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Some text and typo fixes, including a typo that broke display
of the 'sport shorts and a t-shirt' clothes when using vector art
---
src/SpecialForce/TrickShotNight.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 4 ++--
src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw | 4 ++--
src/uncategorized/rePokerNight.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/wardrobeUse.tw | 2 +-
5 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/SpecialForce/TrickShotNight.tw b/src/SpecialForce/TrickShotNight.tw
index 6d8b0387e1f..0339ea21afd 100644
--- a/src/SpecialForce/TrickShotNight.tw
+++ b/src/SpecialForce/TrickShotNight.tw
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Despite your direct elevator, interaction with the majority of your security for
<br><<link "Attend the trick shot night">>
<<replace "#result">> <<set $PC.warfare += 1>>
- You instruct to $assistantName to inform $SF.Lower that you will be attending their trick shot night, and after settling your affairs in the penthouse you head down to the firebase. The atmosphere in the firebase is casual, especially in comparison to the usual situations you meet them, though your security force still maintain some measure of decorum towards you as their employer. Eventually, you settle in at the table with a handful of $SF.Lower officers and cash in your @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(500000)>>@@ into bullets. All that remains is to decide your strategy for the night.
+ You instruct $assistantName to inform $SF.Lower that you will be attending their trick shot night, and after settling your affairs in the penthouse you head down to the firebase. The atmosphere in the firebase is casual, especially in comparison to the usual situations you meet them, though your security force still maintain some measure of decorum towards you as their employer. Eventually, you settle in at the table with a handful of $SF.Lower officers and cash in your @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(500000)>>@@ into bullets. All that remains is to decide your strategy for the night.
<br><br> <span id="bountyresult">
<<link "Play it safe">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index 530dfe30644..0188a4b60c5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -16543,7 +16543,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
<<case "bonded love">>
-<<link "tell $him $he's a good slave">>
+<<link "Tell $him $he's a good slave">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
Without turning your head, you tell $him $he's a very good slave. $He laughs happily<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>, though of course this is silent<<else>> throatily<</if>>, $his warm breath gusting against your ear. It took confidence for $him to come in here and tell $him $he loved you, and $he @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts you more@@ for responding this way. $He plants a light kiss on your cheek and walks quickly out of your office, hurrying to go about $his day's business, but careful to strut $his stuff for you on $his way out.
@@ -16585,7 +16585,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
-<br><<link "tell $him you love $him too">>
+<br><<link "Tell $him you love $him too">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
You turn towards $him and direct the full weight of your gaze into $his eyes. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$His eyelids flicker with the shock of the shared look<<else>>$His eyes may not be capable of sight, but $he can feel your gaze<</if>>, so close, but $he bears it, biting $his lower lip. Then you kiss $him. The released tension is too much for $him, and $he moans, slumping against you a little as you kiss $him like a lover. $He's so lost in it that when you break the kiss, $his mouth stays slightly open and pursues yours slightly, hungry for more. You place a finger against $his moist lips, making $him wait a moment, and tell $him that you love $him too. $He makes <<if $activeSlave.voice == 0>>a quiet moaning sound, deep in $his useless throat,<<else>>an almost animal sound, somewhere between a sob and a moan,<</if>> and as you withdraw your finger, $he kisses you back. $He knows $he has a job to do today, and it's waiting for $him, so when you give $him no indication that you'd like $him to stay, $he withdraws, keeping $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> on yours, doing $his best to @@.hotpink;make love to you@@ with $his gaze.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw b/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
index a874a5c45c9..9677c2e60f0 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
@@ -714,13 +714,13 @@
<<case "black">>
<<set $nickname = either("'African'", "'B-Girl'", "'Black'", "'Blackie'", "'Bottom Bitch'", "'Burrhead'", "'Cocoa'", "'Coon'", "'Cotton'", "'Dark'", "'Ebony'", "'Gangsta'", "'His Girl Friday'", "'House Slave'", "'Jungle Bunny'", "'Jungle Fever'", "'Mammy'", "'Miss'", "'Missie'", "'Mulatto'", "'N-Word'", "'Negro'", "'Negroid'", "'Nigga'", "'Nigger'", "'Porch Monkey'", "'Quadroon'", "'Sambo'", "'Sheboon'", "'Spade'", "'Spook'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is black, which is not uncommon given the urban collapse afflicting the first world and the wars raging in Africa. Slaves casually reference race as much as free citizens. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is black, which is not uncommon given the urban collapse afflicting the first world and the wars raging in Africa. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "indo-aryan">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Aryan'", "'Babu'", "'Bhabhi'", "'Bindi'", "'Bollywood'", "'Brown'", "'Chandala'", "'Curry Muncher'", "'Desi'", "'Dothead'", "'Durga'", "'Gyp'", "'Gypsy'", "'Hajji'", "'Indian'", "'Indo-Aryan'", "'Kali Maa'", "'Kama Sutra'", "'Kaur'", "'Mughal'", "'Paki'", "'Sati'", "'Sepoy'", "'Shanti'", "'Sim Sim Salabim'", "'Snake Charmer'", "'Subcontinental'", "'Swami'", "'Tigress'", "'Untouchable'", "'Yoga'", "'Zoroastrian'", "'Zott'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is indo-aryan, which is not uncommon given the poverty in many majority indo-aryan countries, and the near-submersion of some others due to rising sea levels. Slaves casually reference race as much as free citizens. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is indo-aryan, which is not uncommon given the poverty in many majority indo-aryan countries, and the near-submersion of some others due to rising sea levels. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/rePokerNight.tw b/src/uncategorized/rePokerNight.tw
index 585549e2be4..99f4bf5564e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/rePokerNight.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/rePokerNight.tw
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ On a particularly lackadaisical evening, you find yourself alerted to a message
<<link "Attend the poker night">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You instruct to $assistantName to inform your $mercenariesTitle that you will be attending their poker night, and after settling your affairs in the penthouse you head down to the barracks. Unsurprisingly the atmosphere in the barracks is casual, especially in comparison to the high stakes games commonplace in arcology high society, though your mercenaries still maintain some measure of decorum towards you as their employer. Eventually, you settle in at the table with a handful of $mercenariesTitle officers and cash in your <<print cashFormat(5000)>> into chips. All that remains is to decide your strategy for the night.
+ You instruct $assistantName to inform your $mercenariesTitle that you will be attending their poker night, and after settling your affairs in the penthouse you head down to the barracks. Unsurprisingly the atmosphere in the barracks is casual, especially in comparison to the high stakes games commonplace in arcology high society, though your mercenaries still maintain some measure of decorum towards you as their employer. Eventually, you settle in at the table with a handful of $mercenariesTitle officers and cash in your <<print cashFormat(5000)>> into chips. All that remains is to decide your strategy for the night.
<br><br>
<span id="bountyresult">
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/wardrobeUse.tw b/src/uncategorized/wardrobeUse.tw
index f24ba56c5a0..566d68dfbf5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/wardrobeUse.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/wardrobeUse.tw
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ Clothes: ''<span id="clothes">$activeSlave.clothes</span>.''
<</if>>
<<if isItemAccessible("sport shorts and a t-shirt")>>
| <<link "Sport shorts and a t-shirt">>
- <<set $activeSlave.clothes = "sprt shorts and a t-shirt",$activeSlave.choosesOwnClothes = 0>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.clothes = "sport shorts and a t-shirt",$activeSlave.choosesOwnClothes = 0>>
<<replace "#clothes">>$activeSlave.clothes<</replace>>
<<replace "#clothingDescription">><br>//<<ClothingDescription>>//<</replace>>
<</link>>
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