diff --git a/Changelog.txt b/Changelog.txt
index 986c9fcc64406364fc60d62e49bfcac74551d003..c6f0b45dff890a690e86f2d198209ffffe679460 100644
--- a/Changelog.txt
+++ b/Changelog.txt
@@ -2637,7 +2637,7 @@ Pregmod
387
-tweaked saGuardsYou to actually count facility heads the BG has trained when it comes to counting successors
- -your BG nows considers servants and your harem in her count
+ -your BG now considers servants and your harem in her count
-a race now no longer can be both superior and inferior
-slaves can now die of age as young as 50 should they be in bad condition, conversely, healthy slaves live longer
-reordered full royal court enslavement to circumvent a possible ghost in the machine situation
diff --git a/js/003-data/gameVariableData.js b/js/003-data/gameVariableData.js
index 5adca97260bf5a469582f0fd12893f9ff5dab438..c798b21f32bf958172411f094295c9529e3dd99b 100644
--- a/js/003-data/gameVariableData.js
+++ b/js/003-data/gameVariableData.js
@@ -1468,6 +1468,7 @@ App.Data.resetOnNGPlus = {
("...cure for lactose intolerance, for which he was awarded the International Association of Pastoralist..."),
("...from the Free Cities have become increasingly common clientele for the black market..."),
("...a risky gamble on the three-hour-long hardcore sex scene, but the box office figures for just..."),
+ ("...claiming that even tourists to the Free Cities were at risk of sexual enslavement..."),
],
};
diff --git a/src/events/RESS/obedientBitchy.js b/src/events/RESS/obedientBitchy.js
index 0160fea00722763a3cf6946f1456587863eb6e55..556716dd4b764f2acc9ce283e4197b056f7a09b4 100644
--- a/src/events/RESS/obedientBitchy.js
+++ b/src/events/RESS/obedientBitchy.js
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ App.Events.RESSObedientBitchy = class RESSObedientBitchy extends App.Events.Base
if (canStand(eventSlave)) {
t.push(`another slave.`);
} else {
- t.push(`${her} aide.`);
+ t.push(`${his} aide.`);
}
t.push(`Anger flashes in the businesswoman's eyes.`);
diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
index e264cac9de0d7eced671a266a69b51f3baff3aea..03d0ebafe5d0b7e7e0a074575a1d41d0fb2c7ef6 100644
--- a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
+++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
@@ -1194,7 +1194,7 @@
<<goto "Commit Starting Girl">>
<</link>>
<span class="note">
- This will apply your @@.springgreen;career bonus@@ to her:
+ This will apply your @@.springgreen;career bonus@@ to $him:
<<if $PC.career == "capitalist">>
one free level of @@.cyan;prostitution skill.@@
<<elseif $PC.career == "mercenary">>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
index 9cdc8a8314e91d2d1c2a5bf2dd8d39548ffee2db..21f3b5aa98a5bdc31a006b08ca9369252020d978 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
@@ -44,8 +44,7 @@ You look up from your desk as the locked door to your office unseals, and a doze
<br>
"You are no longer worthy of being a part of our society. You know you can't be allowed to spread any information. But we are not merciless; one of our members has taken an interest in having you as her pet. You may choose to lose your mind, and service her until she tires of you, or gamble for your life and serve her anyway. Now decide."
<</if>>
-<br>
-<br>
+<br><br>
<<if _pregSurrender == 0>>
<<set $finalChoice = "final stand">>
The choice is simple — you will not be a slave.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw b/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw
index ea9b894e75fdd5dd715e418272ed3ed1e0d3ea14..064e55fd31b18b3205a2c791e58eccbe81a0671d 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
<</if>>
//The Utopian Orphanage is where all slaves dream of being raised. Its business model is to offer intelligent, well educated girls just past their majority. The girls are treated exceptionally well and have no sexual education or experience.
-
-<br><br>The Utopian Orphanage offers a fresh graduate for inspection. The interview takes place in the girl's private room, where she showcases her education and witts.
+<br><br>
+The Utopian Orphanage offers a fresh graduate for inspection. The interview takes place in the girl's private room, where she showcases her education and wits.
<<set _marketResult = generateMarketSlave("TUO")>>
<<set $activeSlave = _marketResult.slave>>
@@ -22,7 +22,8 @@
<</if>>
<<if $slavesSeen > $slaveMarketLimit>><<set _slaveCost += Math.trunc(_slaveCost*(($slavesSeen-$slaveMarketLimit)*0.1))>><</if>>
-<br><br>The price is <<print cashFormat(_slaveCost)>>.<<if $slavesSeen > $slaveMarketLimit>> You have cast such a wide net for slaves this week that it is becoming more expensive to find more for sale. Your reputation helps determine your reach within the slave market.<</if>>
+<br><br>
+The price is <<print cashFormat(_slaveCost)>>.<<if $slavesSeen > $slaveMarketLimit>> You have cast such a wide net for slaves this week that it is becoming more expensive to find more for sale. Your reputation helps determine your reach within the slave market.<</if>>
<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
<<buyingFromSchoolControls $TUO "slave" "slaves">>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
index f31639af2f0d47012a95a55545ffb72c9fa9fb8b..0def925db931455880fd08c9d2ebcacdb4718906 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
@@ -2157,7 +2157,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for $him to wake up.
<<case "tiny">>
$He's a little depressed by @@.orange;how tiny they've become.@@
<<case "puffy">>
- $He giggle a little at the sight of how @@.lime;puffy they are.@@
+ $He giggles a little at the sight of how @@.lime;puffy they are.@@
<<case "huge">>
$He gasps at the sight of the @@.lime;two towering protrusions@@ jutting out from $his breasts.
<<case "partially inverted">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index 4340b937543903e9e88b394418f49515e765e565..7a11e5d7e24b3b0383ee023b502a7969a13448da 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -3398,7 +3398,7 @@ Eventually, $his duties satisfactorily completed, $he comes before your desk to
As another long week draws to a close, <<= App.UI.slaveDescriptionDialog($activeSlave)>> happens to <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 10000>>waddle<<else>>walk<</if>> past your office toward bed. There's nothing inherently abnormal about $his actions, but you do notice as $he steps past the doorway that an expression of worry and concern adorns $his $activeSlave.skin face. When you call $him into your office, $his face visibly brightens up in an attempt to conceal $his obvious distress as $he comes before you. Notably, although $he stands still and patiently awaits further orders, you notice $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>never manages to meet your eyes<<else>>keeps $his sightless eyes downcast<</if>>. When you ask $him what's troubling $him, $his face plainly falls.
<br><br>
<<if $PC.mother != $activeSlave.ID && $PC.father != $activeSlave.ID>>
- "<<Master>>, you're <<s>>o young," $he <<say>>s penitently before smiling shyly in an attempt to insert some levity into $his confession. "It'<<s>> ju<<s>>t that I'm old enough to be your mother, <<Master>>. It'<<s>> a little weird, i<<s>>n't it?"
+ "<<Master>>, you're <<s>>o young," $he <<say>>s penitently before smiling shyly in an attempt to insert some levity into $his confession. "It'<<s>> ju<<s>>t that I'm old enough to be your $mother, <<Master>>. It'<<s>> a little weird, i<<s>>n't it?"
<<else>>
"<<Master>>, you're <<s>>o <<if $PC.title == 1>>hand<<s>>ome<<else>>beautiful<</if>>," $he <<say>>s penitently before smiling shyly in an attempt to insert some levity into $his confession. "It'<<s>> ju<<s>>t that you've become <<s>>o attractive <<s>>in<<c>>e
<<if $PC.mother == $activeSlave.ID>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw b/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw
index 24ab62403191e767c821aadebb293aa8494e06a8..87f444edb073ad7badfa77c137a09ffa2bdbe0f7 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw
@@ -730,7 +730,7 @@ Time is short, but you are well placed to acquire some choice slaves. With an ad
<<if $seeDicks > 0>>
prince and princess, clad in chains and bound face to face in a forced embrace, the Queen, who is resigned to _his3 fate,
<<else>>
- princess and her mother, clad in chains and bound face to face in a forced embrace,
+ princess and $his mother, clad in chains and bound face to face in a forced embrace,
<</if>>
and a gaggle of terrified court ladies.
<br><br>
@@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ Time is short, but you are well placed to acquire some choice slaves. With an ad
<<if $seeDicks > 0>>
prince and princess, clad in chains and bound face to face in a forced embrace, the Queen, who is resigned to _his3 fate,
<<else>>
- princess and her mother, clad in chains and bound face to face in a forced embrace,
+ princess and $his mother, clad in chains and bound face to face in a forced embrace,
<</if>>
and a gaggle of terrified court ladies and as much loot as they could carry.
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
index 964d3e7d5535da5da3ed91bfa2d8571e5d6ab4ed..65722262b1a38b8d454ff3f4440f30650d1867a8 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
@@ -1624,7 +1624,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
<<set $hostage.skill.anal = 100>>
<<set $hostage.skill.vaginal = 100>>
<<set $hostage.skill.whoring = 100>>
- sealing a business deal for $his owner. Buy the end of the meeting, the client is thoroughly exhausted from $his skill 'negotiations' and eager to listen to the terms entrusted to $him.
+ sealing a business deal for $his owner. Buy the end of the meeting, the client is thoroughly exhausted from $his skill for 'negotiations' and eager to listen to the terms entrusted to $him.
<<case "Slave Professionalism">>
<<set $hostage.intelligenceImplant = 0>>
<<set $hostage.intelligence = -100>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saRules.tw b/src/uncategorized/saRules.tw
index be87a0c0cecd73d8132238b7632c794a20dff4f5..f85ad7c653189e084325ce10f3d5a5b13d03f356 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saRules.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saRules.tw
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
<<saRulesMasturbationDrugEffects>>
<<else>> /* hasNonassignmentSex is true */
<<if (!App.Utils.hasFamilySex($slaves[$i]) && _release.slaves === 0)>>
- /* no family and no other slaves, so release must be coming from her partner */
+ /* no family and no other slaves, so release comes from her partner */
finds frequent sexual release with $his <<= relationshipTerm($slaves[$i])>> @@.lightgreen;<<= getSlave($slaves[$i].relationshipTarget).slaveName>>,@@ which $he is @@.mediumaquamarine;thankful for.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].trust++, $slaves[$i].need -= 20>> /* TODO: probably should be based on BOTH slaves' need, leaving the less needy partner slightly frustrated */
<<saRulesPartnerDrugEffects>>
@@ -1738,7 +1738,7 @@
<</if>>
<<elseif (!App.Utils.hasNonassignmentSex($slaves[$i]) && _release.masturbation === 1)>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].devotion < 80)>>
- is a little disappointed that $he's limited to $his <<if !hasAnyArms($slaves[$i])>>imagination<<else>>hand<<if hasBothArms($slaves[$i])>>s<</if>><</if>> and toys, especially with her prisoners available to her, but @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts you know what's best for $him.@@
+ is a little disappointed that $he's limited to $his <<if !hasAnyArms($slaves[$i])>>imagination<<else>>hand<<if hasBothArms($slaves[$i])>>s<</if>><</if>> and toys, especially with $his prisoners available to $him, but @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts you know what's best for $him.@@
<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1, $slaves[$i].need = 0>>
<<else>>
@@.mediumaquamarine;trusts your judgment@@ that only $he really knows how to pleasure
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/scheduledEvent.tw b/src/uncategorized/scheduledEvent.tw
index 38cadbed2828240f27d28a34f78366533cd2e474..bf11ac36f855d87c5ec551a4ca2a0cc8f957941b 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/scheduledEvent.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/scheduledEvent.tw
@@ -48,6 +48,8 @@
<<set $fcnn.push("...claimed the sanctions constituted as an act of war...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...nuclear weapons development program, drawing harsh criticism from international observers...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...simply don't have the money to adequately respond to a natural disaster of this...")>>
+ <<set $fcnn.push("...representatives announced their withdrawal from the international organization...")>>
+ <<set $fcnn.push("...special report on the depopulation and abandonment of rural areas worldwide, as natural...")>>
<<elseif $week == 50>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...tested a thermonuclear device of some five megatons last night...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...heavy fighting for the third week in the capital city of...")>>
@@ -60,6 +62,7 @@
<<set $fcnn.push("...was assassinated in his home in the nation's capital, alongside his entire...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...forces opened fire on crowds of protesters, killing and wounding...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...declared the insurgency officially defeated, despite reports of widespread violence...")>>
+ <<set $fcnn.push("...suspended national elections until further notice, in a move that is seen as yet another authoritarian...")>>
<<elseif $week == 70>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...second low-order nuclear detonation in the city of...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...total societal collapse induced by rising sea levels declared today in...")>>
@@ -71,6 +74,7 @@
<<set $fcnn.push("...invasive plant growth epidemic contested by persistent droughts in eastern...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...Daughters of Liberty claimed responsibility for the attack...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...mass suicide of the cult members, who believed that current events were prophesied...")>>
+ <<set $fcnn.push("...genocide is a strong term, but there's simply no other way to describe...")>>
<<elseif $week == 90>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...have enslaved the entire legislature, their leader personally sexually assaulting...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...confirmed that the arcologies were subject to a nuclear detonation, but...")>>
@@ -79,6 +83,7 @@
<<set $fcnn.push("...deadliest in the nation's history, was allegedly committed by the Daughters of Liberty...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...famine so devastating that confirmed reports of cannibalism are now...")>>
<<set $fcnn.push("...dozens upon dozens of mass graves in what were once city parks...")>>
+ <<set $fcnn.push("...evidence of a planned slave uprising, executed all of their arcology's several thousand...")>>
<</if>>
<<if $secExpEnabled == 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw b/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw
index 0007e6b30a74a330ead71c95a2d5f4ee14e0c042..e2b4591cc95328920e58b5e12c95c073a220e694 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ __Bids Received__
<br>''<<print cashFormat(_Price)>>'' from a citizen who likes his slaves young and slender.
<<set _NewOwner = 1>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.visualAge > 40) && ($activeSlave.weight > 10) && (random(1,100) > 80)>>
- <br>''<<print cashFormat(_Price)>>'' from a citizen who likes her slaves mature and motherly.
+ <br>''<<print cashFormat(_Price)>>'' from a citizen who likes her slaves mature and <<= $mother>>ly.
<<set _NewOwner = 1>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.dick > 3) && canAchieveErection($activeSlave) && (random(1,100) > 80)>>
<br>''<<print cashFormat(_Price)>>'' from a citizen who likes fat cocks.