diff --git a/src/interaction/main/walkPast.js b/src/interaction/main/walkPast.js
index e85fb546127330d74acc6418c3f16193ee3f5844..c9e941edc2178fb00bff347c9862adff8d7df1bb 100644
--- a/src/interaction/main/walkPast.js
+++ b/src/interaction/main/walkPast.js
@@ -9162,7 +9162,7 @@ globalThis.walkPast = (function() {
 				t += `${His} black bowtie contrasts with ${his} white collar, drawing the eye towards ${his} neck and face.`;
 				break;
 			case "neck tie":
-				t += `${His} neck tie contrasts with ${his} white collar, drawing the eye towards ${his} neck and face.`;
+				t += `${His} neck tie is a reminder of old world business, although ${his} body is a reminder of the oldest business in the world.`;
 				break;
 			case "ancient Egyptian":
 				t += `${His} wesekh glints richly as ${he} moves, sparkling with opulence and sensuality.`;
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
index 32546257ebb0d91c2985696b4b1c54cad7774939..7263bf0f8be8aca102c60e14991ba052068e8c36 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
@@ -3824,7 +3824,7 @@ $His
 	<<case "bowtie">>
 		$He is wearing the collar from a white formal shirt, and a black bowtie, though these conceal an actual collar that works perfectly well for restraint.
 	<<case "neck tie">>
-		$He is wearing the collar from a white formal shirt, and a neck tie, though these conceal an actual collar that works perfectly well for restraint.
+		$He is wearing a neck tie, though it conceals an actual collar that works perfectly well for restraint.
 	<<case "ancient Egyptian">>
 		$He is wearing a beautiful golden wesekh, a collar that spreads from $his neck out onto both shoulders and down $his front.
 	<<case "cruel retirement counter" "nice retirement counter">>