diff --git a/devNotes/twine JS.txt b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
index f4f5fcf33d89bd870e9dc774010ceda34bf35329..0e8bd36320609428c6107e4398c5246ff0be6f6e 100644
--- a/devNotes/twine JS.txt
+++ b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
@@ -8309,9 +8309,9 @@ window.SlaveTitle = function SlaveTitle(slave) {
if (slave.boobs > 4000 && slave.lactation > 0) {
if (slave.physicalAge < 13) {
- r = r + " calf";
+ r = r + " calf ";
} else {
- r = r + " cow";
+ r = r + " cow ";
}
} else if (slave.lactation > 0) {
r = "milky " + r;
@@ -22483,53 +22483,53 @@ window.SlaveSummaryUncached = (function(){
return;
} else if (slave.intelligenceImplant >= 30) {
if (intelligence >= 130) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Genius.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Genius${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 95) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 50) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 15) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -15) {
- r += `Average intelligence, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}`;
+ r += `Average intelligence, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.`;
} else if (intelligence >= -50) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -95) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
}
} else if (slave.intelligenceImplant >= 15) {
if (intelligence > 95) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 50) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 15) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -15) {
- r += `Average intelligence, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}`;
+ r += `Average intelligence, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.`;
} else if (intelligence >= -50) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -95) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
}
} else {
if (intelligence > 95) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 50) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 15) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -15) {
- r += `Average intelligence.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}`;
+ r += `Average intelligence${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.`;
} else if (intelligence >= -50) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Slow.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Slow${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -95) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
}
}
r += " ";
diff --git a/src/js/assayJS.tw b/src/js/assayJS.tw
index 55e22e927c79f7496744a5c409eb5bb51fafa2d5..b4cef778239114ada50c33681821ed4cc8484e85 100644
--- a/src/js/assayJS.tw
+++ b/src/js/assayJS.tw
@@ -1211,9 +1211,9 @@ window.SlaveTitle = function SlaveTitle(slave) {
if (slave.boobs > 4000 && slave.lactation > 0) {
if (slave.physicalAge < 13) {
- r = r + " calf";
+ r = r + " calf ";
} else {
- r = r + " cow";
+ r = r + " cow ";
}
} else if (slave.lactation > 0) {
r = "milky " + r;
diff --git a/src/js/slaveSummaryWidgets.tw b/src/js/slaveSummaryWidgets.tw
index 8b1df32141709f46608cbcc92282664cf3b5b223..0bf2907d0528146c2e8e09ff554baa3dacae29cb 100644
--- a/src/js/slaveSummaryWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/js/slaveSummaryWidgets.tw
@@ -2662,53 +2662,53 @@ window.SlaveSummaryUncached = (function(){
return;
} else if (slave.intelligenceImplant >= 30) {
if (intelligence >= 130) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Genius.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Genius${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 95) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 50) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 15) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -15) {
- r += `Average intelligence, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}`;
+ r += `Average intelligence, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.`;
} else if (intelligence >= -50) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -95) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, well educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, well educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
}
} else if (slave.intelligenceImplant >= 15) {
if (intelligence > 95) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 50) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 15) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -15) {
- r += `Average intelligence, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}`;
+ r += `Average intelligence, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.`;
} else if (intelligence >= -50) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Slow, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -95) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, educated.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic, educated${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
}
} else {
if (intelligence > 95) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Brilliant${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 50) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Very smart${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence > 15) {
- r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="deepskyblue">Smart${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -15) {
- r += `Average intelligence.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}`;
+ r += `Average intelligence${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.`;
} else if (intelligence >= -50) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Slow.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Slow${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else if (intelligence >= -95) {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Very slow${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
} else {
- r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic.${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}</span>`;
+ r += `<span class="orangered">Moronic${V.summaryStats ? `[${slave.intelligence+slave.intelligenceImplant}]` : ''}.</span>`;
}
}
r += " ";
diff --git a/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw b/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw
index 634210fec08b0aed7418ed15b89322b68fd7aaf5..78fddcf93417cc9acbf15feb0bb27e8ff33ba8f0 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/sePlayerBirth.tw
@@ -75,30 +75,36 @@ While sitting at your desk planning your day, @@.lime;your water breaks,@@ thoro
<</if>>
<br><br>
<<if $PC.belly < 100000>>
- <<if $Concubine != 0>><<set _concubinePresent = 1>><</if>>
+ <<if $Concubine != 0>><<set _concubinePresent = 1>><<setLocalPronouns $Concubine 2>><</if>>
After what feels like a mile run, you finally waddle into your destination finding
<<if $Nurse != 0>>
- @@.pink;$Nurse.slaveName@@ waiting for you with everything she needs to be a capable midwife to you.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ wraps her arms around you from behind, letting you know she'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Nurse>>
+ @@.pink;$Nurse.slaveName@@ waiting for you with everything $he needs to be a capable midwife to you.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ wraps _his2 arms around you from behind, letting you know _he2'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
<<elseif $Bodyguard != 0>>
- @@.pink;$Bodyguard.slaveName@@ waiting for you. Ever since she realized she was protecting for <<if $PC.pregType > 1>>many<<else>>two<</if>>, she made sure to hone her skills as a midwife to make sure she could protect you and your unborn child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> from any dangers.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ wraps her arms around you from behind, letting you know she'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Bodyguard>>
+ @@.pink;$Bodyguard.slaveName@@ waiting for you. Ever since $he realized $he was protecting for <<if $PC.pregType > 1>>many<<else>>two<</if>>, $he made sure to hone $his skills as a midwife to make sure $he could protect you and your unborn child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> from any dangers.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ wraps _his2 arms around you from behind, letting you know _he2'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
<<elseif $HeadGirl != 0>>
- @@.pink;$HeadGirl.slaveName@@ is waiting for you. She promises to do everything she can to help you.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ wraps her arms around you from behind, letting you know she'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $HeadGirl>>
+ @@.pink;$HeadGirl.slaveName@@ is waiting for you. $He promises to do everything $he can to help you.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ wraps _his2 arms around you from behind, letting you know _he2'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
<<elseif _concubinePresent == 1>>
- @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ is waiting for you. She believes, if anything, that she could at least comfort you while you give birth.
+ @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ is waiting for you. _He2 believes, if anything, that _he2 could at least comfort you while you give birth.
<<else>>
it quite empty. At least $assistantName knows where you are should anything go wrong.
<</if>>
<<else>>
- <<if $Concubine != 0>><<if !canWalk($Concubine)>><<set _concubinePresent = 2>><<else>><<set _concubinePresent = 1>><</if>><</if>>
+ <<if $Concubine != 0>><<setLocalPronouns $Concubine 2>><<if !canWalk($Concubine)>><<set _concubinePresent = 2>><<else>><<set _concubinePresent = 1>><</if>><</if>>
You barely make it half-way down the hall before you feel the first of your many children drop into position at the entrance to your birth canal. You try to keep going, but as it forces its way through your pelvis, spreading it wider, you're forced to the ground. Fortunately the penthouse is littered with supply rooms and closets, so you drag your laboring body into the nearest one instead. $assistantName discretely directs
<<if $Nurse != 0>>
- @@.pink;$Nurse.slaveName@@ to you with everything she'll need to deliver your children.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ bursts in after her and circles around behind you before wrapping her arms around your contraction wracked middle. She'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Nurse>>
+ @@.pink;$Nurse.slaveName@@ to you with everything $he'll need to deliver your children.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ bursts in after $him and circles around behind you before wrapping _his2 arms around your contraction wracked middle. _He2'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
<<elseif $Bodyguard != 0>>
- @@.pink;$Bodyguard.slaveName@@ to your location. Ever since she realized she was protecting for not only you, but the lives your bear too, she made sure to hone her skills as a midwife to make sure she could protect you and your unborn children from any dangers. She apologizes profusely for not being there when you needed her most; she wanted to make sure everything was ready for your arrival.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ bursts in after her and circles around behind you before wrapping her arms around your contraction wracked middle. She'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Bodyguard>>
+ @@.pink;$Bodyguard.slaveName@@ to your location. Ever since $he realized $he was protecting for not only you, but the lives you bear too, $he made sure to hone $his skills as a midwife to make sure $he could protect you and your unborn children from any dangers. $He apologizes profusely for not being there when you needed $him most; $he wanted to make sure everything was ready for your arrival.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ bursts in after $him and circles around behind you before wrapping _his2 arms around your contraction wracked middle. _He2'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
<<elseif $HeadGirl != 0>>
- @@.pink;$HeadGirl.slaveName@@ to your location. She promises to do everything she can to help you.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ bursts in after her and circles around behind you before wrapping her arms around your contraction wracked middle. She'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $HeadGirl>>
+ @@.pink;$HeadGirl.slaveName@@ to your location. $He promises to do everything $he can to help you.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ bursts in after $him and circles around behind you before wrapping _his2 arms around your contraction wracked middle. _He2'll be here to comfort you while you labor.<</if>>
<<elseif _concubinePresent == 1>>
- @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ to your location. She believes, if anything, that she could at least comfort you while you give birth.
+ @@.pink;$Concubine.slaveName@@ to your location. _He2 believes, if anything, that _he2 could at least comfort you while you give birth.
<<else>>
a camera on the room you crawled into. At least $assistantName knows where you are should anything go wrong.
<</if>>
@@ -108,7 +114,8 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
<<if $badBirth > random(1,100)>> /* shits going wrong */
<<set $babyGender = Math.floor(Math.random()*100) < $seeDicks ? 2 : 1>>
<<if $Nurse != 0>>
- You keep pushing and pushing, but your child is not coming out.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> $Concubine.slaveName shifts to massaging your gravid middle<<if canTalk($Concubine)>>, while whispering words of encouragement into your ear<</if>>. Until $Nurse.slaveName shoos her away so she can take over and get this baby out of you.<</if>> $Nurse.slaveName was prepared for this possibility, adjusts your position and timings, and before long is holding your @@.lime;new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@ in her arms.
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Nurse>>
+ You keep pushing and pushing, but your child is not coming out.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> $Concubine.slaveName shifts to massaging your gravid middle<<if canTalk($Concubine)>>, while whispering words of encouragement into your ear<</if>>. Until $Nurse.slaveName shoos _him2 away so $he can take over and get this baby out of you.<</if>> $Nurse.slaveName was prepared for this possibility, adjusts your position and timings, and before long is holding your @@.lime;new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@ in $his arms.
<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>
But you aren't even close to done; your taut dome of a belly still houses another seven infants. You moan as the next child begins its decent; you'll be at this for awhile. If $Nurse.slaveName weren't here, you and your children would likely have perished.
<<elseif $PC.pregType > 4>>
@@ -121,10 +128,11 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
But you aren't done; your rounded belly still houses another infant. You moan as they begin their decent; if $Nurse.slaveName weren't here, you and your children would likely have perished.
<</if>>
<<elseif $Bodyguard != 0>>
- You keep pushing and pushing, but your child is not coming out.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> $Concubine.slaveName shifts to massaging your gravid middle<<if canTalk($Concubine)>>, while whispering words of encouragement into your ear<</if>>. She begins to worry as her lover weakens in front of her. $Bodyguard.slaveName quickly pulls her away from you, fearing the worst.<</if>> $Bodyguard.slaveName read about this possibility and tries everything she can to coax your child out. As time passes, she notices your consciousness begin to fade as exhaustion kicks in. Fearing for your lives, and desperate to save you, she draws her sword from its sheath, hands unsteady from what she is about to do. Carefully, she slits your lower abdomen, allowing your baby-<<if $PC.pregType < 3>>filled<<elseif $PC.pregType < 5>>stuffed<<elseif $PC.pregType > 8>>packed<<else>>bursting<</if>> womb to pop out through the incision. Doing her best, she cuts open your uterus, pulls your child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> from you and severs the umbilical cord<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>s all at once<</if>>.
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Bodyguard>>
+ You keep pushing and pushing, but your child is not coming out.<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> $Concubine.slaveName shifts to massaging your gravid middle<<if canTalk($Concubine)>>, while whispering words of encouragement into your ear<</if>>. _He2 begins to worry as _his2 lover weakens in front of _him2. $Bodyguard.slaveName quickly pulls _him2 away from you, fearing the worst.<</if>> $Bodyguard.slaveName read about this possibility and tries everything $he can to coax your child out. As time passes, $he notices your consciousness begin to fade as exhaustion kicks in. Fearing for your lives, and desperate to save you, $he draws $his sword from its sheath, hands unsteady from what $he is about to do. Carefully, $he slits your lower abdomen, allowing your baby-<<if $PC.pregType < 3>>filled<<elseif $PC.pregType < 5>>stuffed<<elseif $PC.pregType > 8>>packed<<else>>bursting<</if>> womb to pop out through the incision. Doing $his best, $he cuts open your uterus, pulls your child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> from you and severs the umbilical cord<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>s all at once<</if>>.
<br>
<br>
- You awake some time later in the remote surgery, your stomach extremely sore; you quickly realize you're no longer round with child. As you try to rise, $Bodyguard.slaveName stops you; she hefts you into a bridal carry and takes you to a recovery room, before gently placing you into a warm bed, tucking you in, and hurrying out of the room. Before you can call out, she returns carrying
+ You awake some time later in the remote surgery, your stomach extremely sore; you quickly realize you're no longer round with child. As you try to rise, $Bodyguard.slaveName stops you; $he hefts you into a bridal carry and takes you to a recovery room, before gently placing you into a warm bed, tucking you in, and hurrying out of the room. Before you can call out, $he returns carrying
<<switch _curBabies>>
<<case 1>>
@@.lime;your baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@
@@ -143,34 +151,35 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
<<case 8>>
a big bassinet containing @@.lime;your newborn octuplets@@
<</switch>>
- in her arms.
+ in $his arms.
<<elseif $HeadGirl != 0>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $HeadGirl>>
You keep pushing and pushing, but your child is not coming out.
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
- $Concubine.slaveName shifts to massaging your gravid middle<<if canTalk($Concubine)>>, while whispering words of encouragement into your ear<</if>>. She begins to worry as her lover weakens in front of her. $HeadGirl.slaveName quickly pulls her to her feet and orders her to help her carry you to the remote surgery<<if !canWalk($Concubine)>>; in her rush, she completely forgot <<if tooBigBreasts($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's breasts have her pinned to the bed<<elseif tooBigBelly($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's pregnancy renders her immobile<<elseif tooBigDick($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName can't walk with a dick that big<<elseif tooBigButt($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's butt pins her to the bed<<elseif tooBigBalls($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's balls act as a giant anchor<<elseif tooFatSlave($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName is so fat, the bed is her home now<<else>>$Concubine.slaveName can't walk<</if>><</if>>.
+ $Concubine.slaveName shifts to massaging your gravid middle<<if canTalk($Concubine)>>, while whispering words of encouragement into your ear<</if>>. _He2 begins to worry as _his2 lover weakens in front of _him2. $HeadGirl.slaveName quickly pulls _him2 to _his2 feet and orders _him2 to help $him carry you to the remote surgery<<if !canWalk($Concubine)>>; in $his rush, $he completely forgot <<if tooBigBreasts($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's breasts have _him2 pinned to the bed<<elseif tooBigBelly($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's pregnancy renders _him2 immobile<<elseif tooBigDick($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName can't walk with a dick that big<<elseif tooBigButt($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's butt pins _him2 to the bed<<elseif tooBigBalls($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName's balls act as a giant anchor<<elseif tooFatSlave($Concubine)>>$Concubine.slaveName is so fat, the bed is _his2 home now<<else>>$Concubine.slaveName can't walk<</if>><</if>>.
<<else>>
$HeadGirl.slaveName notices your distress and carries you to the remote surgery<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, a daunting task given your extreme gravidity<</if>>.
<</if>>
<br>
<br>
- You awake some time later in a recovery room<<if _concubinePresent > 0>>, $Concubine.slaveName beside you<</if>>, your stomach extremely sore; a quick glance at the prominent scar tells you everything you need to know. Seeing you're awake, $HeadGirl.slaveName catches your attention. In her arms
+ You awake some time later in a recovery room<<if _concubinePresent > 0>>, $Concubine.slaveName beside you<</if>>, your stomach extremely sore; a quick glance at the prominent scar tells you everything you need to know. Seeing you're awake, $HeadGirl.slaveName catches your attention. In $his arms
<<switch _curBabies>>
<<case 1>>
- is @@.lime;your baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from her breast,<</if>>
+ is @@.lime;your baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from $his breast,<</if>>
<<case 2>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn twins@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from her breasts,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn twins@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>happily nursing from $his breasts,<</if>>
<<case 3>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn triplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for her milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn triplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 4>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn quadruplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for her milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn quadruplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 5>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn quintuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for her milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn quintuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 6>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn sextuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for her milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn sextuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 7>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn septuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for her milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn septuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<<case 8>>
- are @@.lime;your newborn octuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for her milky nipples,<</if>>
+ are @@.lime;your newborn octuplets@@, <<if $HeadGirl.lactation > 0>>vying for $his milky nipples,<</if>>
<</switch>>
alive and well.
<<elseif _concubinePresent == 1>>
@@ -180,37 +189,37 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
You awake some time later in a recovery room, your stomach extremely sore; a quick glance at the prominent scar tells you everything you need to know. A content sigh comes from beside you; $Concubine.slaveName is snuggled next to you, snoozing with
<<switch _curBabies>>
<<case 1>>
- @@.lime;your baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your child has managed to free one of $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and is eagerly suckling from her milky nipple.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your child has managed to free one of $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and is eagerly suckling from _his2 milky nipple.<</if>>
<<case 2>>
- @@.lime;your newborn twins@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your newborn twins@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
<<case 3>>
- @@.lime;your newborn triplets@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your newborn triplets@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
<<case 4>>
- @@.lime;your newborn quadruplets@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your newborn quadruplets@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
<<case 5>>
- @@.lime;your newborn quintuplets@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your newborn quintuplets@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
<<case 6>>
- @@.lime;your newborn sextuplets@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your newborn sextuplets@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
<<case 7>>
- @@.lime;your newborn septuplets@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your newborn septuplets@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
<<case 8>>
- @@.lime;your newborn octuplets@@ in her arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
+ @@.lime;your newborn octuplets@@ in _his2 arms.<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>> Your children have managed to free $Concubine.slaveName's breasts and are eagerly suckling from their milky nipples.<</if>>
<</switch>>
<<if !canWalk($Concubine)>>
<<if tooBigBreasts($Concubine)>>
- You don't know how she managed to get you here when her breasts prevent her from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the pair a gentle caress as thanks.
+ You don't know how _he2 managed to get you here when _his2 breasts prevent _him2 from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the pair a gentle caress as thanks.
<<elseif tooBigBelly($Concubine)>>
- You don't know how she managed to get you here when she's so gravid she can't walk<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the taut dome a gentle caress as thanks.
+ You don't know how _he2 managed to get you here when _he2's so gravid _he2 can't walk<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the taut dome a gentle caress as thanks.
<<elseif tooBigDick($Concubine)>>
- You don't know how she managed to get you here when her dick prevents her from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the serpent a gentle caress as thanks.
+ You don't know how _he2 managed to get you here when _his2 dick prevents _him2 from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the serpent a gentle caress as thanks.
<<elseif tooBigButt($Concubine)>>
- You don't know how she managed to get you here when her ass prevent her from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the jiggling giant a gentle caress as thanks.
+ You don't know how _he2 managed to get you here when _his2 ass prevent _him2 from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the jiggling giant a gentle caress as thanks.
<<elseif tooBigBalls($Concubine)>>
- You don't know how she managed to get you here when her balls prevent her from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the pair a gentle caress as thanks. She returns the kindness with a shudder and a large wetspot forming over her crotch.
+ You don't know how _he2 managed to get you here when _his2 balls prevent _him2 from walking<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give the pair a gentle caress as thanks. _He returns the kindness with a shudder and a large wetspot forming over _his2 crotch.
<<elseif tooFatSlave($Concubine)>>
- You don't know how she managed to get you here when she's so fat she can't walk<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give her soft body a gentle caress as thanks.
+ You don't know how _he2 managed to get you here when _he2's so fat _he2 can't walk<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you give _his2 soft body a gentle caress as thanks.
<<else>>
- You don't know how she managed to get you here, since she can't walk<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you're thankful either way.
+ You don't know how _he2 managed to get you here, since _he2 can't walk<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>, especially with how heavy your pregnancy was<</if>>, but you're thankful either way.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
@@ -221,6 +230,7 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
<<else>>
<<set $babyGender = Math.floor(Math.random()*100) < $seeDicks ? 2 : 1>>
<<if $Nurse != 0>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Nurse>>
Under $Nurse.slaveName's guidance, childbirth is a breeze for you.
<<if $PC.pregType == 1>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>> Or it would have been, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Nurse.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>><</if>> $Nurse.slaveName cuts the cord, swaddles your child, and hands you @@.lime;your new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>.@@
@@ -275,61 +285,62 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
$Nurse.slaveName cuts the cords, swaddles your children, and hands you @@.lime;your new twins.@@
<</if>>
<<elseif $Bodyguard != 0>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Bodyguard>>
With $Bodyguard.slaveName watching over you, you feel safe enough to let your guard down and focus on giving birth. Once you are relaxed, you feel your child begin to inch down your birth canal. Before long you've completed the job without any trouble.
<<if $PC.pregType == 1>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>>
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cord with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cord with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>.@@
<<elseif $PC.pregType == 8>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>> But it isn't over; before you've even had a chance to come down from your climax, the next infant slips into your birth canal and immediately pushes you back over the edge. In minutes, after eight children and eight intense orgasms, you're barely conscious, nearly panicking $Bodyguard.slaveName. $Concubine.slaveName slides in behind you to snuggle with you as you return to your senses.
<<else>>
With one out, you realize you still have seven more to go. You moan as the next child begins its decent; you'll be at this for awhile. With $Bodyguard.slaveName around, you feel completely safe.
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new octuplets.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new octuplets.@@
<<elseif $PC.pregType == 7>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>> But it isn't over; before you've even had a chance to come down from your climax, the next infant slips into your birth canal and immediately pushes you back over the edge. In minutes, after seven children and seven intense orgasms, you're barely conscious, nearly panicking $Bodyguard.slaveName. $Concubine.slaveName slides in behind you to snuggle with you as you return to your senses.
<<else>>
With one out, you realize you still have six more to go. You moan as the next child begins its decent; you'll be at this for awhile. With $Bodyguard.slaveName around, you feel completely safe.
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new septuplets.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new septuplets.@@
<<elseif $PC.pregType == 6>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>> But it isn't over; before you've even had a chance to come down from your climax, the next infant slips into your birth canal and immediately pushes you back over the edge. In minutes, after six children and six intense orgasms, you're barely conscious, nearly panicking $Bodyguard.slaveName. $Concubine.slaveName slides in behind you to snuggle with you as you return to your senses.
<<else>>
With one out, you realize you still have five more to go. You moan as the next child begins its decent; you'll be at this for awhile. With $Bodyguard.slaveName around, you feel completely safe.
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new sextuplets.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new sextuplets.@@
<<elseif $PC.pregType == 5>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>> But it isn't over; before you've even had a chance to come down from your climax, the next infant slips into your birth canal and immediately pushes you back over the edge. In minutes, after five children and five intense orgasms, you're barely conscious, nearly panicking $Bodyguard.slaveName. $Concubine.slaveName slides in behind you to snuggle with you as you return to your senses.
<<else>>
With one out, you realize your taut dome of a belly still houses four more. You moan as the next child begins its decent; you'll be at this for awhile. With $Bodyguard.slaveName around, you feel completely safe.
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new quintuplets.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new quintuplets.@@
<<elseif $PC.pregType == 4>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>> But it isn't over; before you've even had a chance to come down from your climax, the next infant slips into your birth canal, followed immediately by the next two, and immediately pushes you back over the edge. $Concubine.slaveName slides in behind you to snuggle with you as you return to your senses after such an intense orgasm.
<<else>>
With one out, you realize your swollen belly still houses three more. You moan as the next child begins its decent; with $Bodyguard.slaveName around, you feel completely safe.
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new quadruplets.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new quadruplets.@@
<<elseif $PC.pregType == 3>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>> But it isn't over; before you've even had a chance to come down from your climax, the next infant slips into your birth canal, followed immediately by the last, and immediately pushes you back over the edge. $Concubine.slaveName slides in behind you to snuggle with you as you return to your senses after such an intense orgasm.
<<else>>
With one out, you realize your swollen belly still houses another pair. You moan as the next child begins its decent; with $Bodyguard.slaveName around, you feel completely safe.
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new triplets.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new triplets.@@
<<elseif $PC.pregType == 2>>
<<if _concubinePresent == 1>>
Or it would have, had $Concubine.slaveName not driven you to an intense orgasm right as your child entered the world.<<if $PC.balls > 1>> An orgasm that resulted in $Concubine.slaveName, $Bodyguard.slaveName, and your newborn getting sprayed with cum.<</if>> But it isn't over; before you've even had a chance to come down from your climax, the next infant slips into your birth canal and immediately pushes you back over the edge. $Concubine.slaveName slides in behind you to snuggle with you as you return to your senses after such an intense orgasm.
<<else>>
With one out, you realize your rounded belly still houses another. You moan as they begin their decent; with $Bodyguard.slaveName around, you feel completely safe.
<</if>>
- $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with her blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new twins.@@
+ $Bodyguard.slaveName cuts the cords with $his blade, and hands you @@.lime;your new twins.@@
<</if>>
<<elseif $HeadGirl != 0>>
With $HeadGirl.slaveName waiting with everything you need, childbirth goes by without a hitch.
@@ -386,7 +397,7 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
$HeadGirl.slaveName cuts the cords, swaddles your children, and hands you @@.lime;your new twins.@@
<</if>>
<<elseif _concubinePresent == 1>>
- $Concubine.slaveName alternates between calming your nerves and driving your to orgasm. It works fairly well, as your child rapidly enters the world alongside a particularly powerful climax. You reach down and draw @@.lime;your new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@ into your arms, while $Concubine.slaveName shifts to eagerly "clean" your crotch with her tongue.<<if $PC.pregType > 1>> Her over-stimulation of you quickly has her licking the crowning head of your second child. She diligently works you over until all of your children are born, making sure you are thoroughly exhausted; both from the birth and from her ministrations.<<if canPenetrate($Concubine) && canImpreg($PC, $Concubine)>> $Concubine.slaveName eyes your spread pussy hungrily as her erection bobs with anticipation. But you're too tired right now and she realizes it.<</if>> She helps gather your child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> to your<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>>, and her, <</if>>breasts with the hope that you'll reward her when you recover.<</if>>
+ $Concubine.slaveName alternates between calming your nerves and driving your to orgasm. It works fairly well, as your child rapidly enters the world alongside a particularly powerful climax. You reach down and draw @@.lime;your new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@ into your arms, while $Concubine.slaveName shifts to eagerly "clean" your crotch with _his2 tongue.<<if $PC.pregType > 1>> _His2 over-stimulation of you quickly has _him2 licking the crowning head of your second child. _He2 diligently works you over until all of your children are born, making sure you are thoroughly exhausted; both from the birth and from _his2 ministrations.<<if canPenetrate($Concubine) && canImpreg($PC, $Concubine)>> $Concubine.slaveName eyes your spread pussy hungrily as _his2 erection bobs with anticipation. But you're too tired right now and _he2 realizes it.<</if>> _He2 helps gather your child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> to your<<if $Concubine.lactation > 0>>, and _his2, <</if>>breasts with the hope that you'll reward _him2 when you recover.<</if>>
<<else>>
You keep pushing and pushing, your child slowly working its way from your body. With the last of your strength, you bear down, freeing your child from your body at last. Panting, you gather @@.lime;your new baby <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>@@ <<if $PC.pregType > 1>>as another contraction ushers your next child into your birth canal<<else>>and drift off into a much deserved rest<</if>>.
<<if $PC.pregType == 8>>
@@ -431,9 +442,9 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
Your little <<if $babyGender == 1>>girl<<else>>boy<</if>>
<<if $PC.pregSource == -6>>
- looks exactly like you, in fact, the resemblance seems uncanny. Since she has the exact same genetics as you, she'll likely look almost identical to you when she's your age.
+ looks exactly like you, in fact, the resemblance seems uncanny. Since <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>> has the exact same genetics as you, <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>>'ll likely look almost identical to you when <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>>'s your age.
<<elseif _PCDegree == 4>>
- looks just like you; she will likely grow up to closely resemble yourself.
+ looks just like you; <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>> will likely grow up to closely resemble yourself.
<<elseif $activeSlave.eyeColor == $PC.eyeColor>>
has your lovely $PC.eyeColor eyes.
<<elseif _PCDegree > 0>>
@@ -489,9 +500,9 @@ You arrange yourself to give birth, relaxing until your body urges you to begin
<<if _identicalChildGen == 1>>
looks exactly like the previous; they're identical twins.
<<elseif $PC.pregSource == -6>>
- looks exactly like you<<if _p == 0>>, in fact, the resemblance seems uncanny. Since she has the exact same genetics as you, she'll likely look almost identical to you when she's your age<</if>>. Every one of your children look this way; it's kind of hard to tell them apart.
+ looks exactly like you<<if _p == 0>>, in fact, the resemblance seems uncanny. Since <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>> has the exact same genetics as you, <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>>'ll likely look almost identical to you when <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>>'s your age<</if>>. Every one of your children look this way; it's kind of hard to tell them apart.
<<elseif _PCDegree == 4>>
- looks just like you; she will likely grow up to closely resemble yourself.
+ looks just like you; <<if $babyGender == 1>>she<<else>>he<</if>> will likely grow up to closely resemble yourself.
<<elseif $activeSlave.eyeColor == $PC.eyeColor>>
has your lovely $PC.eyeColor eyes.
<<elseif _PCDegree > 0>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/slaveOnSlaveFeedingWorkAround.tw b/src/pregmod/slaveOnSlaveFeedingWorkAround.tw
index f381ceaffe5f2c3475747903becfe9b3d5f68a76..ce2f9ae112078d610d3ce12acd98159024e2dc40 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/slaveOnSlaveFeedingWorkAround.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/slaveOnSlaveFeedingWorkAround.tw
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<</if>>
<</for>>
-//$activeSlave.slaveName is prepped to drink her fill; now you must select a slave capable of producing the required amount of milk or ejaculate.//
+//$activeSlave.slaveName is prepped to drink $his fill; now you must select a slave capable of producing the required amount of milk or ejaculate.//
<br><br><br>
@@ -142,5 +142,5 @@ __4 Liters__
//You have no slaves capable of producing eight liters of cum.//
<</if>>
<<else>>
- Due to her pregnancy, she is incapable of keeping down more than two liters of cum.
+ Due to $his pregnancy, $he is incapable of keeping down more than two liters of cum.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
index 2fcb131c9305d97d37011cfb98ee0bd9d1b7e366..4c96181f0f2e885df174de885ad94c59c144efee 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
@@ -219,23 +219,23 @@ Of all the wonders present, the thing that catches your eye the most is a shady
<<if $ImplantProductionUpgrade == 1>>
<<if $surgeryUpgrade == 1>>
<<if $cash >= 20000>>
- [[Purchase materials about broodmother's implant firmware hack|The Black Market][$cash -= 20000, $PGHack = 1, _dump = $merchantIllegalWares.delete("PGHack")]] //@@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>.@@//
+ [[Purchase documents about the broodmother implant firmware hack|The Black Market][$cash -= 20000, $PGHack = 1, _dump = $merchantIllegalWares.delete("PGHack")]] //@@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>.@@//
<<else>>
- You cannot afford the asking price of @@.red;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>@@ for a broodmoter's implant firmware data.
+ You cannot afford the asking price of @@.red;<<print cashFormat(20000)>>@@ for the broodmoter implant firmware data.
<</if>>
- "I might have something for you, if intersted. Some time ago one illegal hacker manage to crack firmware of broodmother implant and found how to manipulate it through radio chanal that normally used for monitoring. In first place his work is about to make revenge of one arcology owner who loved concubine have this implant, but this plan failed as it can't be make hidden - to send something in implant you need to be very close to it. In a fact, you need a special actuator inserted in the vagina up to the cervix. And you need to do it in remote surgery, in case of some problems, to stop and revert unwelcome start of birthing process. But anyway, hack is exist, and if applied as required it can interfere with original logic of implant, forcing it to release more then one ova every week. Originally hacker make it about dozen, but after we tweaked his initial code, now it will be just two or three ova. You will get all needed data and schematic for autosurgery upgrade, but you need to make and install it by your own."
+ "I might have something for you, if interested. Some time ago a hacker manage to crack the firmware of the publicly available broodmother implant and found how to manipulate it through the radio channel normally used for monitoring. His goal was to take revenge on a arcology owner who's loved concubine had this implant, but this plan failed as he couldn't hide his hacking attempt - to send something to the implant you need to be very close to it. In a fact, you need a special actuator inserted up to the cervix, which just so happens to be included in this deal. And it is very much advised to use it in a surgical suite, in case of complications, such as the sudden activation of the birthing process. But anyway, the hack, if applied appropriately, can interfere with original logic of the implant, forcing it to release more than one ova every week. Originally, the hacker made it about dozen, but after we tweaked his initial code, now it will be just two or three ova. You will get all the needed data and schematics for the autosurgery upgrade, but you will need to make and install it on your own."
<<else>>
- The autosurgery lacks the needed actuators, so you can't install hack complex before it will been upgraded.
+ The autosurgery lacks the needed actuators, so applying the broodmother implant hack complex is impossible.
<</if>>
<<else>>
You lack the facilities needed to produce something this complex, so production of broodmother implant hack complex is out of your reach.
<</if>>
<<else>>
- You have no interest in research to support pregnancy.
+ You have no interest in research that involves pregnancy.
<<set _dump = $merchantIllegalWares.delete("PGHack")>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
- You already possess broodmother's implant hack.
+ You already possess the broodmother implant hack.
<<set _dump = $merchantIllegalWares.delete("PGHack")>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/dispensary.tw b/src/uncategorized/dispensary.tw
index 4309884ea282127980852ac2e597095f02666b45..39b48faa6c834093932e8b7334daa79fa2449a10 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/dispensary.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/dispensary.tw
@@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ Implant Production
<br>
<</if>>
<<if $PGHack == 1>>
- The remote surgery upgraded, allowing to hack firmware of pregnancy generator implant.
+ The tools required to hack the firmware of basic pregnancy generator implants have been produced by the fabricator for use in the remote surgery.
<br>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
index ef723dc08adfc5680a80610dc27ae1a9b2611fd1..8a4e51c68fed1116fecdc75a96ddf866c787bcea 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
@@ -894,10 +894,10 @@ Work on her sex:
$He is pregnant right now, so $his broodmother implant can't be safely extracted.
<<if $activeSlave.broodmother == 1 && $activeSlave.broodmotherFetuses == 1>> /*hack can be applied only one time, for type 1 broodmothers, and only if implant already present*/
<br>
- [[Apply hack on pregnancy generator|Surgery Degradation][$cash -= $surgeryCost,$activeSlave.pregControl = "none",$activeSlave.health -= 1,$surgeryType = "preg1hack"]] //This will do a trick in the generator ova release logic, forcing it to release more than one ova every week. This is untested override, and can cause severe health problems.//
+ [[Hack the pregnancy generator|Surgery Degradation][$cash -= $surgeryCost,$activeSlave.pregControl = "none",$activeSlave.health -= 1,$surgeryType = "preg1hack"]] //This will trick the generator ova release logic, forcing it to release more than one ova each week. This is an untested override and can cause severe health problems.//
<<elseif $activeSlave.broodmother == 1 && $activeSlave.broodmotherFetuses > 1>>
<br>
- Firmware of $his implant already hacked.
+ The implant firmware has already been adjusted.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
index 684ad40e51895ac5a8433761872d6a99bf396d25..e65dfcab0ca477e421bfd7e987091f286743d903 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
@@ -484,25 +484,24 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
<</if>>
<<case "preg1hack">>
- The implant hack process is brief, with inserting actuator in the vagina leave $him @@.red;nothing more than minor health effects.@@ $He leaves the surgery without any specific feeling, but $he knows that something done to $his implant.
+ The hacking process is brief, being little more than inserting the actuator in $his vagina, and leaves $him with @@.red;nothing more than minor health effects@@ from the altered implant funcitons. $He leaves the surgery without any specific feeling, but $he knows that something done to $his implant.
<<set $activeSlave.broodmotherFetuses = either(2,2,2,2,3,3,4)>> /*My testing show that 2 or 3 relatively safe for generic adult slave with effective curvatives or clinic, 4 - high risk of bursting. So there is a catch with it.*/
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
/*nothing*/
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60) && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1)>>
- $He is @@.hotpink; filled with joy@@ about being even more swollen with life and gleefully rubs $his soon to be more huge belly. $He's so pleased that $he now @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts@@ your plans for $his body. As with all surgery @@.d;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+ $He is @@.hotpink; filled with joy@@ about being even more swollen with life and gleefully rubs $his soon to be larger belly. $He's so pleased that $he now @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts@@ your plans for $his body. As with all surgery @@.d;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4, $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
- $He's @@.hotpink;grateful@@ that you think $his offspring are valuable, but a little fear about how $his body will catch up with hacked implant.
+ $He's @@.hotpink;grateful@@ that you think $his offspring are valuable, but is little afraid about how $his body will catch up with $his hacked implant.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 2>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 2>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
$He understands the realities of $his life as a slave, so even this isn't much of a shock. $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body and how big $he will get.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
<<else>>
- $He does not understand the realities of $his life as a slave at a core level, so $he's @@.mediumorchid;terrified and angry@@ that you not just have forced $him to be a broodmother but also mess with implant, not thinking about $his safety. $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body and $his even more rapidly filling womb.
+ $He does not understand the realities of $his life as a slave at a core level, so $he's @@.mediumorchid;terrified and angry@@ that you not just have forced $him to be a broodmother but also messed with the implant, not thinking about $his safety. $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body and $his even more rapidly filling womb.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 15, $activeSlave.devotion -= 15>>
<</if>>
- As with all process @@.yellow;$his health has been not affected.@@
<<case "pregRemove">>
$He leaves the surgery with a certain soreness and minor pain in $his lower abdomen, $he knows that $his days as broodmother are finished.