diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw index ca749be01035e989ce12357d192c24c2ba2c6226..e2b94fa2529fe499e9615013b7dcbf1ac271ed89 100644 --- a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw +++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__ <</if>> <<elseif $PC.career == "engineer">> <<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>> - <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You sired her in yourself after a arcology owner, impressed by your work, rewarded you with a night you'll never forget.">> + <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You sired her in yourself after an arcology owner, impressed by your work, rewarded you with a night you'll never forget.">> <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "She has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of her neck.">> <<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>> <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You conceived her after a male arcology owner, impressed by your work, rewarded you with a night you'll never forget.">> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw index 1d3d11147bc9788173c4a16ad3c0cb42f164b921..336c4bff65c906387555d4ee19fed3b2a8ad1196 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw @@ -3598,7 +3598,7 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that she'll be trained to address t <br><<link "Carry her outside">> <<replace "#name">>$activeSlave.slaveName<</replace>> <<replace "#result">> - You scoop her up, eliciting whimpers of joy at the impending relief, and carefully secure her with a few straps so she can serve as your living cocksleeve. She's attached to the front of your torso<<if $activeSlave.preg > 20>>, her pregnancy jutting out in front of you,<</if>> with your cock up inside her, and the gentle motion of your member as you walk outside brings her to climax within a few steps. You take your time and stroll around the nicer levels of the arcology, admiring the views and <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>showing $activeSlave.slaveName the sights she now requires assistance to see<<else>>explaining the sights as $activeSlave.slaveName soaks in the sounds and smells she now requires assistance to experience<</if>>. @@.hotpink;She has become more devoted to you.@@ The sight of you walking around with a living fucktoy on your cock @@.green;certainly cements your reputation as a an arcology owner who has everything.@@ + You scoop her up, eliciting whimpers of joy at the impending relief, and carefully secure her with a few straps so she can serve as your living cocksleeve. She's attached to the front of your torso<<if $activeSlave.preg > 20>>, her pregnancy jutting out in front of you,<</if>> with your cock up inside her, and the gentle motion of your member as you walk outside brings her to climax within a few steps. You take your time and stroll around the nicer levels of the arcology, admiring the views and <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>showing $activeSlave.slaveName the sights she now requires assistance to see<<else>>explaining the sights as $activeSlave.slaveName soaks in the sounds and smells she now requires assistance to experience<</if>>. @@.hotpink;She has become more devoted to you.@@ The sight of you walking around with a living fucktoy on your cock @@.green;certainly cements your reputation as an arcology owner who has everything.@@ <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>> <<set $rep += 100>> <<set $activeSlave.analCount += 1>> @@ -6998,7 +6998,7 @@ She's obviously @@.mediumaquamarine;becoming more comfortable@@ playing the part <<if $activeSlave.height < 35>> <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>lying on her back as $activeSlave.slaveName gently thrusts into her, legs locked around her waist. $activeSlave.slaveName enjoys running her hands over the fairy's pregnant belly as she leans in to suckle on the fairy's breasts. Below this, the slave herself is thrusting into a 'realistic' tiny fairy doll, the pregnant belly swelling a little larger with every ejaculation.<<else>>legs tied to one another as they scissor gently, covered in sexual fluids from the waist down. $activeSlave.slaveName enjoys rubbing and kissing the pregnant belly from time to time. Below this, the slave herself is grinding away between a 'realistic' tiny fairy doll's legs.<</if>> <<else>> - cradling her belly as she's being eaten out by an avatar of $activeSlave.slaveName, who is being double penetrated by a a couple of vines. Below this, the slave herself is performing oral on a 'realistic' tiny fairy doll pussy while being penetrated by two flexible dildos. They're an ejaculating model, and it's filled her so completely that each thrust sends a gush of fake cum down her legs to join the puddle on the floor. + cradling her belly as she's being eaten out by an avatar of $activeSlave.slaveName, who is being double penetrated by a couple of vines. Below this, the slave herself is performing oral on a 'realistic' tiny fairy doll pussy while being penetrated by two flexible dildos. They're an ejaculating model, and it's filled her so completely that each thrust sends a gush of fake cum down her legs to join the puddle on the floor. <<set $activeSlave.oralCount += 1>> <<set $oralTotal += 1>> <<if $activeSlave.vagina > 0>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/fMarry.tw b/src/uncategorized/fMarry.tw index a5dafb504fb52c5ba27a1accf5db68ac57038a8c..d5735b4bc06dcf869946c5179347b09126865e4a 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/fMarry.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/fMarry.tw @@ -130,9 +130,9 @@ Despite her devotion and trust, she is still a slave, and probably knows that he <<elseif $assistantAppearance == "imp">> Her avatar claps its hands together, emitting a burst of darkness. <<elseif $assistantAppearance == "witch">> - Her avatar pulls out its spellbook a attemps a spell to bind you two; she manages to conjure a large ring arouned her, pinning her arms to her sides. + Her avatar pulls out its spellbook and attempts a spell to bind you two; she manages to conjure a large ring around her, pinning her arms to her sides. <<elseif $assistantAppearance == "ERROR_1606_APPEARANCE_FILE_CORRUPT">> - Her avatar splits open to reveal a number of tentacles and wraps the around each other. + Her avatar splits open to reveal a number of tentacles and wraps them around each other. <<else>> Her symbol flashes. <</if>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/matchmaking.tw b/src/uncategorized/matchmaking.tw index bb874e605e5900047bd911cdd5e35ed8d6061372..86ff7c2bcfb83b9950ef3eb2b621cb989db2063c 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/matchmaking.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/matchmaking.tw @@ -157,9 +157,9 @@ Despite her devotion and trust, she is still a slave, and probably knows that he <<elseif $assistantAppearance == "imp">> Her avatar claps its hands together, emitting a burst of darkness. <<elseif $assistantAppearance == "witch">> - Her avatar pulls out its spellbook a attemps a spell to bind you two; she manages to conjure a large ring arouned her, pinning her arms to her sides. + Her avatar pulls out its spellbook and attempts a spell to bind you two; she manages to conjure a large ring around her, pinning her arms to her sides. <<elseif $assistantAppearance == "ERROR_1606_APPEARANCE_FILE_CORRUPT">> - Her avatar splits open to reveal a number of tentacles and wraps the around each other. + Her avatar splits open to reveal a number of tentacles and wraps them around each other. <<else>> Her symbol flashes. <</if>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw b/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw index c8e33c35aabbd38f8b7e7157e19d91ad2fdac062..33095ea42e80c6509437bb5c78e92aba380e9ad6 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw @@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ She's a cute little <<if $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist != "unset">>$arcologies[0] <<if $assistantFSOptions>> <<switch $assistantFSAppearance>> <<case "paternalist">> - She is currently wearing a long, conservative skirt and a a pretty white blouse complete with gaps for her wings. She is positively radiant. + She is currently wearing a long, conservative skirt and a pretty white blouse complete with gaps for her wings. She is positively radiant. <<case "degradationist">> She is wearing black eyeliner and lipstick while using a thin black ribbon to protect her modesty. It's pretty obvious she has a stud through her left nipple. <<case "roman revivalist">> @@ -1372,9 +1372,9 @@ She's a cute little <<if $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist != "unset">>$arcologies[0] <<elseif $minimumSlaveAge <= 7>> She's a cute shota with ball-filled shorts and a huge erection sneaking up her shirt. <<elseif $minimumSlaveAge <= 13>> - She's a attractive teenager with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. + She's an attractive teenager with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. <<else>> - She's a attractive young adult with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. + She's an attractive young adult with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. <</if>> <<case "slimness enthusiast">> She has recently slimmed her body down; everywhere but her proportionally huge cock, that is. @@ -1517,9 +1517,9 @@ She's a cute little <<if $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist != "unset">>$arcologies[0] <<elseif $minimumSlaveAge <= 7>> She's a cute shota with ball-filled shorts and a huge erection sneaking up her shirt. <<elseif $minimumSlaveAge <= 13>> - She's a attractive teenager with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. + She's an attractive teenager with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. <<else>> - SShe's a attractive young adult with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. + SShe's an attractive young adult with an immodest bulge running down her pantleg. <</if>> <<case "slimness enthusiast">> <<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiastLaw == 1>> /* remove me after succubus is complete */ diff --git a/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw b/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw index 924146078e27693fd3360b2486dd719819cbf52c..d3076e6656c9cb7009f63a64205e8625c9877b56 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ $servantsQuartersNameCaps <</if>> <<if $servantMilkers == 1>> - <br>Since servants spend most of their time in the penthouse, any who are lactating will use the ubiquitous milkers + <br>Since servants spend most of their time in the penthouse, any who are lactating will use the ubiquitous milkers. <</if>> <br><br> diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw index e767f7ece00d61813f25dc3039e8fee2cc254f03..a01517fd7589c7f779651077082c3184c8c2fb51 100644 --- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw +++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw @@ -3246,7 +3246,7 @@ $pronounCap's got a $possessiveCap awe-inspiring<<if $seeCircumcision == 1>>, <<if $activeSlave.foreskin > 0>>uncut<<else>>circumcised<</if>><</if>> penis is around 60cm long, <<else>> - $pronounCap has a awe-inspiring<<if $seeCircumcision == 1>>, <<if $activeSlave.foreskin > 0>>uncut<<else>>circumcised<</if>><</if>> + $pronounCap has an awe-inspiring<<if $seeCircumcision == 1>>, <<if $activeSlave.foreskin > 0>>uncut<<else>>circumcised<</if>><</if>> penis, <</if>> a true masterpiece of modern growth hormone treatment, <<case 9>> diff --git a/src/utility/miscWidgets.tw b/src/utility/miscWidgets.tw index 592221ba7c7f9f47774e12d34e8e05ef35eaf312..bb3582d068568228882e1ca2e5ab04ddd72825c4 100644 --- a/src/utility/miscWidgets.tw +++ b/src/utility/miscWidgets.tw @@ -1159,7 +1159,7 @@ <</if>> <<elseif $args[0].analSkill <= 60>> <<if $args[0].analSkill+$skillIncrease > 60>> - @@.green;$pronounCap is now a anal sex expert,@@ and knows how to use her sphincter to please. + @@.green;$pronounCap is now an anal sex expert,@@ and knows how to use her sphincter to please. <</if>> <<elseif $args[0].analSkill < 100>> <<if $args[0].analSkill+$skillIncrease >= 100>>