From f3ede0714e446a8cfee8e6a54d7873e135b06fab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: lowercase-donkey <lowercasedonkey@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 24 Mar 2019 00:50:46 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] starting girls

---
 src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw | 92 +++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 46 insertions(+), 46 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
index 2a4cb9d62b2..7daf8168e41 100644
--- a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
+++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
@@ -185,72 +185,72 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__
 	<<if $PC.career == "capitalist">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "To solidify an investment in hermaphrodite self-fertility, you took part in a test successful test trial. Nine months later your daughter was born.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "Sometimes it pays off to use your body in business deals, and other times you end up burdened with child. She is the result of the latter.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "To seal a business deal, a client asked you to knock her up. She is the end result of that fling.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You acquired her in the last stages of your career as a successful venture capitalist.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a famous corporate logo tattooed on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "mercenary">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "Drugs and alcohol can be a potent mix; the night that followed it can sometimes be hard to remember. Needless to say, once your belly began swelling with her, you had to temporarily switch to a desk job for your mercenary group.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "Drugs and alcohol can be a potent mix; the night that followed it can sometimes be hard to remember. Needless to say, once your belly began swelling with her, you had to temporarily switch to a desk job for your mercenary group.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "A trip to a brothel after a mission resulted in an unexpected surprise years later.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You acquired her in the last stages of your career as a noted private military contractor.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "slaver">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You never thought you would be capable of impregnating yourself, but years of pleasuring yourself with yourself after missions managed to create her.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a private military company's coat of arms on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "A fresh capture once overpowered you and had his way with you. You kept her as a painful reminder to never lower your guard again.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your tiny slaving emblem tattooed behind her left ear.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your tiny slaving emblem tattooed behind $his left ear.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "Your slaving troop kept several girls as fucktoys; you sired her in your favorite.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your tiny slaving emblem tattooed behind her left ear.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your tiny slaving emblem tattooed behind $his left ear.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You enslaved her personally during the last stages of your slaving career.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your tiny slaving emblem tattooed behind her left ear.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your tiny slaving emblem tattooed behind $his left ear.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "engineer">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You sired her in yourself after an arcology owner, impressed by your work, rewarded you with a night you'll never forget.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You conceived her after a male arcology owner, impressed by your work, rewarded you with a night you'll never forget.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You sired her after a female arcology owner, impressed by your work, rewarded you with a night you'll never forget.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You received her as a gift from an arcology owner impressed by your work.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the geometric symbol of your old arcology engineering firm laser tattooed into the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "escort">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "A client paid you a large sum of credits to prove you could literally fuck yourself. She is the result of that lucrative night.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your custom emblem tattooed on her left breast.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your custom emblem tattooed on $his left breast.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of unprotected sex with a client. He paid you quite well to enjoy your body as you grew heavy with his child.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the number of times her father came in you while you were pregnant with her tattooed down her back.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the number of times $his father came in you while you were pregnant with $his tattooed down $his back.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of unprotected sex with a client. Her mother tracked you down years after her birth to force her upon you.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your name angrily tattooed on her right shoulder.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your name angrily tattooed on $his right shoulder.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was a fellow escort you were popular with.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your custom emblem tattooed on her left breast. She got the tattoo after starring in a porno with you.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your custom emblem tattooed on $his left breast. She got the tattoo after starring in a porno with you.">>
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.preg > 0>>
 			<<if $activeSlave.pregSource != -1>>
@@ -260,33 +260,33 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "gang">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of a night of hard drugs and unprotected sex after a big score. It took quite a bit of alcohol to come to terms with drunkenly knocking yourself up.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of a night of hard drugs and unprotected sex after a big score.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was born from one of your sex toys you knocked up.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You captured her during your transition to the arcology">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former gang's sign tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "servant">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "Your late master took pleasure in using his servants in creative ways. He inseminated you with your own sperm, and nine months later, your daughter was born.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on her left breast.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on $his left breast.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants. She spent nine months in your womb, courtesy of your master.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on her left breast.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on $his left breast.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants. Your master permitted you to knock up her mother.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on her left breast.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on $his left breast.">>
 		<<elseif $PC.vagina == 1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants. She helped you give birth to his child.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on her left breast.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on $his left breast.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on her left breast.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your master's brand on $his left breast.">>
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.preg > 0>>
 			<<if $activeSlave.pregSource != -1>>
@@ -296,62 +296,62 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "medicine">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a successful experiment in hermaphrodite self-reproduction.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of her neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of $his neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a botched birth control experiment early in your career.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of her neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of $his neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She is the product of an affair with a cute nurse who assisted you in more ways than one.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of her neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of $his neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You kept her after her owner failed to pay your bill for performing surgery on her.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of her neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of $his neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "celebrity">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a night of partying and a drunken bet. She nearly killed your career.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a night of partying and a torn condom. She nearly killed your career.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a night of partying and a torn condom.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of $his neck.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was one of your groupies during your celebrity career.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of her neck. She got the tattoo when she was still free.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your signature, surrounded by hearts, tattooed on the back of $his neck. She got the tattoo when she was still free.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "wealth">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You bet your body on a sure hand, only to lose. It turns out you could fuck yourself, and not only that, get yourself pregnant.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a losing hand of cards on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a losing hand of cards on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You bet your body on a sure hand, only to lose. Nine months later, your daughter was born.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a losing hand of cards on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a losing hand of cards on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You won a sexual fling with her mother after winning at cards, a gamble that ultimately burdened you.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a poor hand of cards on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a poor hand of cards on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You won her at cards, a memento from your life as one of the idle rich before you became an arcology owner.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a winning hand of cards on the nape of her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has a small tattoo of a winning hand of cards on the nape of $his neck.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $PC.career == "BlackHat">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of a night of hard celebration after a big score under the glow of monitors and the calming hum of 750 RPM fans. It took quite a bit of alcohol to come to terms with drunkenly knocking yourself up.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of an intruder brute forcing your firewall, overloading your pleasure sensors, and allowing a corrupted packet to slip by. With a quick wipe of your RAM and cache with some powerful liquor, you have no idea who planted her in your womb.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was born out of a trade for secure data access. Nine months later, your daughter was born.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<<else>>
 			<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was a case officer you captured after going dark.">>
-			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on her neck.">>
+			<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has your former digital calling card tattooed on $his neck.">>
 		<</if>>
 	<<else>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You won her at cards, a memento from your life as one of the idle rich before you became an arcology owner.">>
-		<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the silhouette of an arcology tattooed on the nape of her neck.">>
+		<<set $activeSlave.customTat = "$He has the silhouette of an arcology tattooed on the nape of $his neck.">>
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
 		<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>
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