diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw b/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw index 05d93808d4d32dc8fa3965ed188fb48ff402f4e9..3771de5f502d9687384e7ba541d02b65d215e6f9 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw @@ -1740,7 +1740,7 @@ Every push, every desperate contraction must be agonizing to her. Fortunately yo <<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMinAge = $fertilityAge>> <<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 22>> <<include "Generate XX Slave">> - <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You helped her free her from a POW camp after her country abandoned, leaving her deeply indebted to you.">> + <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You helped her free her from a POW camp after being abandoned by her country, leaving her deeply indebted to you.">> <<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(0,20)>> <<set $activeSlave.trust = random(0,20)>> <<set $activeSlave.health = -80>> @@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ Every push, every desperate contraction must be agonizing to her. Fortunately yo <<set $activeSlave.age = $PC.actualAge+14>> <<include "Generate XX Slave">> - <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You helped her free her from a POW camp after her country abandoned, leaving her deeply indebted to you.">> + <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You helped her free her from a POW camp after being abandoned by her country, leaving her deeply indebted to you.">> <<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(0,20)>> <<set $activeSlave.trust = random(0,20)>> <<set $activeSlave.health = -80>> @@ -1784,7 +1784,7 @@ Every push, every desperate contraction must be agonizing to her. Fortunately yo <<set $activeSlave.age = $PC.actualAge+14>> <<include "Generate XY Slave">> - <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You helped her free her from a POW camp after her country abandoned, leaving her deeply indebted to you.">> + <<set $activeSlave.origin = "You helped her free her from a POW camp after being abandoned by her country, leaving her deeply indebted to you.">> <<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(0,20)>> <<set $activeSlave.trust = random(0,20)>> <<set $activeSlave.health = -80>> @@ -1840,12 +1840,12 @@ Every push, every desperate contraction must be agonizing to her. Fortunately yo <<set $cash -= $contractCost>> <<replace "#result">> <<switch $recruit>> - <<case "Lost mother">> - With your order recived your mother is quickly black bagged and brought to your penthouse. - <<case "Lost father">> - With your order recived your father is quickly black bagged and brought to your penthouse. - <<case "Held POW">> - With your order recived the POW is quickly black bagged and brought to your penthouse. + <<case "lost mother">> + With your order received your mother is quickly black bagged and brought to your penthouse. + <<case "lost father">> + With your order received your father is quickly black bagged and brought to your penthouse. + <<case "held POW">> + With your order received the POW is quickly black bagged and brought to your penthouse. <<case "female recruit">> You complete the legalities and biometric scanning quickly and without fuss. $activeSlave.slaveName bounces nervously on her heels. Finally she works up her courage and asks, <<if $HeadGirl.clothes != "no clothing">>"Can I have <<if $HeadGirl.clothes == "choosing her own clothes">>a cute outfit<<else>>$HeadGirl.clothes<</if>> like $HeadGirl.slaveName?"<<else>>"Can I work with $HeadGirl.slaveName?"<</if>> Your sternly tell her to call you <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Master<<else>>Mistress<</if>>, to ask questions only with permission, and to strip. She looks at $HeadGirl.slaveName, but $HeadGirl.slaveName returns her look with no compassion at all and tells her to do what you say. Looking suddenly fearful, $activeSlave.slaveName strips. Once your inspection of her body reaches her anus, she becomes suddenly nervous. "A-am I going to have t-to do butt stuff, <<Master>>?" <<case "male recruit">> @@ -1972,12 +1972,12 @@ Every push, every desperate contraction must be agonizing to her. Fortunately yo <<set $cash += $slaveCost>> <<replace "#result">> <<switch $recruit>> - <<case "Lost mother">> - With your order recived your mother is quickly black bagged and sent to your bidder. - <<case "Lost father">> - With your order recived your father is quickly black bagged and sent to your bidder. - <<case "Held POW">> - With your order recived the POW is quickly black bagged and sent to your bidder. + <<case "lost mother">> + With your order received your mother is quickly black bagged and sent to your bidder. + <<case "lost father">> + With your order received your father is quickly black bagged and sent to your bidder. + <<case "held POW">> + With your order received the POW is quickly black bagged and sent to your bidder. <<case "female recruit">> You complete the legalities and biometric scanning quickly and without fuss. $activeSlave.slaveName bounces nervously on her heels. Finally she works up her courage and asks, <<if $HeadGirl.clothes != "no clothing">>"Can I have <<if $HeadGirl.clothes == "choosing her own clothes">>a cute outfit<<else>>$HeadGirl.clothes<</if>> like $HeadGirl.slaveName?"<<else>>"Can I work with $HeadGirl.slaveName?"<</if>> Your answer appears in the form of a purchasing agent, here to take her away. As he restrains the disbelieving girl, you tell her she's been purchased by a brothel, so she's going to be fucked about 70,000 times before she gets to be too old and is retired, so she can be sure she won't be bored. She releases a wail of utter despair, quickly cut off by a sturdy bag being fastened over her head. <<case "male recruit">>