diff --git a/src/events/RE/reLegendaryCow.js b/src/events/RE/reLegendaryCow.js index 63fcd865fbe95594d646e67827d711a925a2c6ac..6833c9e028903e62e920af71952a13e0bd9c159c 100644 --- a/src/events/RE/reLegendaryCow.js +++ b/src/events/RE/reLegendaryCow.js @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ App.Events.RELegendaryCow = class RELegendaryCow extends App.Events.BaseEvent { id: slave.ID }); } else { - r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. You are surprised to see that the judging committee has been changed at the last minute. They choose another cow as best in show. There are persistent <span class="reputation inc">rumors</span> after the show that there was an absolute massacre of firings at the dairy organization headquarters the night before the show after it was discovered that someone, widely thought to be you, had been corrupting the judges.`); + r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is shown in public, closely inspected by the judging committee, and then publicly milked. You are surprised to see that the judging committee has been changed at the last minute. They choose another cow as best in show. There are persistent <span class="reputation dec">rumors</span> after the show that there was an absolute massacre of firings at the dairy organization headquarters the night before the show after it was discovered that someone, widely thought to be you, had been corrupting the judges.`); repX(-100, "event", slave); } App.Events.addParagraph(frag, r); diff --git a/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js b/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js index b88b01ba877301d44fd4b097cd3e143b5f7c7495..66c1ef5bfffeea9a9471481c9c35bc04f53aeaad 100644 --- a/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js +++ b/src/events/REFI/reBoobslut.js @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ App.Events.REFIBoobslut = class REFIBoobslut extends App.Events.BaseEvent { } else { t.push("over,"); } - t.push(`take some of ${his2} creamy, ${subSlave.milkFlavor === "none" ? `` : `${subSlave.milkFlavor} flavored `}milk straight from the source. Every time you do, ${he2} shudders convulsively,`); + t.push(`take some of ${his2} creamy${subSlave.milkFlavor === "none" ? `` : `, ${subSlave.milkFlavor}-flavored`} milk straight from the source. Every time you do, ${he2} shudders convulsively,`); if (canTalk(subSlave)) { t.push(`giving little mewling whimpers.`); } else { diff --git a/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js b/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js index d97dbd197b937f10b61d7d2b28b1514bb5d9c0a6..b5b9ab70760afedb44d9df2846cd18ff211ce034 100644 --- a/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js +++ b/src/events/RESS/review/araAra.js @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ App.Events.RESSAraAra = class RESSAraAra extends App.Events.BaseEvent { const r = new SpacedTextAccumulator(node); r.push(`Passing by the kitchen in the morning, you take a moment to listen to the low hum of your slaves chatting as they`); - if (V.feeder !== 0) { + if (V.cockFeeder !== 0) { r.push(`wait their turn at the phallic feeders.`); } else { r.push(`drink their breakfasts.`); diff --git a/src/js/birth/birth.js b/src/js/birth/birth.js index 6b1e0a6d32525275f2d926ac292f15593d5e1e77..56a71b0dac496923d8eb3a381f9b182b0c89bde3 100644 --- a/src/js/birth/birth.js +++ b/src/js/birth/birth.js @@ -3671,7 +3671,7 @@ globalThis.birth = function(slave, {birthStorm = false, cSection = false, artRen case Job.MADAM: if (random(1, 20) > suddenBirth) { - r.push(`${He} heads to a private room in the back of the club accompanied by an influential patron. ${He} settles ${himself} onto his lap and begins working on birthing ${firstText} baby,`); + r.push(`${He} heads to a private room in the back of the brothel accompanied by an influential patron. ${He} settles ${himself} onto his lap and begins working on birthing ${firstText} baby,`); if (slave.geneticQuirks.uterineHypersensitivity === 2) { r.push(`convulsing with orgasms in the process and`); } diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/career.js b/src/npc/descriptions/career.js index 10bad3191c3110ff96f8f46fd2de91b5c5409db4..3a5484431ba439d27586c2671d1f6fbaed1c4c68 100644 --- a/src/npc/descriptions/career.js +++ b/src/npc/descriptions/career.js @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ App.Desc.career = function(slave) { } else if (App.Data.Careers.General.grateful.includes(slave.career)) { r.push(`${career}, so ${he} can remember what it's like`); if (slave.career === "prisoner") { - r.push(`no one looking out for you.`); + r.push(`with no one looking out for you.`); } else { r.push(`to have the freedom to starve.`); } diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js index f137577b74691cd35006d4a6d480a4caee0f3398..3f684b220b40568a22f387efad2afae1b3904f2c 100644 --- a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js +++ b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js @@ -1610,7 +1610,7 @@ App.Desc.geneticQuirkAssessment = function(slave) { } else if (slave.dick > 0) { r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, though it is unlikely to naturally grow any larger than it currently is.`); } else { - r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, or would, if ${he} had one.`); + r.push(`${He} is predisposed to having an enormous dick, or would be, if ${he} had one.`); } } else if (slave.geneticQuirks.wellHung === 1 && V.geneticMappingUpgrade >= 2) { r.push(`${He} is a carrier of a gene that causes enhanced penile development.`);