From f9544e79496e5485a1e3c33c884eedb76b7f6883 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: hexall <hexall90.gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 9 Sep 2017 23:43:31 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Further refinement of the report phrasing

---
 src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw b/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw
index e9bd2b38eb8..7920c9b91bd 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saDrugs.tw
@@ -393,12 +393,12 @@
 	<</if>>
 	/*health*/
 	<<if $slaves[$i].health > 80>>
-		$possessiveCap perfect health greatly helps growth. 
+		$possessiveCap perfect health greatly supports $possessive body's growth.
 		<<set _growth += 0.2>>
 	<<elseif $slaves[$i].health > -20>>
-		$possessiveCap health helps $possessive growth. 
+		$possessiveCap health supports $possessive body's growth.
 	<<else>>
-		$possessiveCap poor health hinders growth. 
+		$possessiveCap poor health hinders growth.
 		<<set _growth-->>
 	<</if>>
 	/*if growth was accomplished*/
@@ -456,11 +456,11 @@
 		<</if>>
 		/*health issues*/
 		<<if _growth == 5>>
-			$possessive growth is so extreme that $possessive body can barely keep up, @@.red;severely damaging $possessive health@@.
+			$possessiveCap growth is so extreme that $possessive body can barely keep up, @@.red;severely damaging $possessive health@@.
 			<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 20>>
 		<</if>>
 		<<if random(1,10) == 1 && _growth != 5>>
-			the stimulants stressed $slaves[$i].slaveName's body more than expected, @@.red;damaging $possessive health@@.
+			The stimulants stressed $slaves[$i].slaveName's body more than expected, causing @@.red;harm to $possessive health@@.
 			<<set $slaves[$i].health -= 10>>
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $slaves[$i].physicalAge > $maxGrowthAge>>
-- 
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