diff --git a/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js b/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
index d7388d318abeee2285024c57a877e585fac82d87..0c618cf415c7c736798fc10a71a7cf0188021928 100644
--- a/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
+++ b/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
@@ -316,11 +316,10 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
if ((slave.behavioralFlaw !== "hates men" && V.PC.title === 1) || (slave.behavioralFlaw !== "hates women" && V.PC.title === 0)) {
r.push(`${He} keeps stealing glances at your face, probably wrestling with ${his} feelings about your age. Eventually ${he} seems to relax and accept it, with a certain <span class="hotpink">obvious thrill</span> at ${his} own willingness towards an older`);
if (V.PC.title === 1) {
- r.push(`man`);
+ r.push(`man.`);
} else {
- r.push(`lady`);
+ r.push(`lady.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
slave.devotion += 4;
}
}
@@ -2154,11 +2153,8 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
} else {
r.push(`womb`);
}
- r.push(`and ovaries are extracted`);
- if (canSee(slave)) {
- r.push(`before ${his} eyes`);
- }
- r.push(`.`);
+ r.push(`and ovaries are extracted${canSee(slave)?`before ${his} eyes`:``}.`);
+
if (slave.fetish === "pregnancy" && slave.pregKnown === 1) {
if ((slave.preg > slave.pregData.normalBirth / 1.6) && (canSee(slave))) {
r.push(`${He} watches ${his} exposed womb with absolute terror in ${his} eyes. A small handprint bulges against the organ; ${he} sobs once before ${his} mind <span class="red">shatters at the sight.</span>`);
@@ -2209,11 +2205,7 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
if (slave.scrotum > 0) {
r.push(`face-down with ${his}`);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`leg`);
- if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
- r.push(`spread.`);
+ r.push(`${hasBothLegs(slave) ? `legs`:`leg`} spread.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles exposed.`);
}
@@ -2497,11 +2489,10 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
}
r.push(`You take ${him} with care, enjoying ${his} body`);
if (slave.devotion > 20 || slave.trust < -20) {
- r.push(`and doing your best to give ${him} pleasure, too`);
+ r.push(`and doing your best to give ${him} pleasure, too.`);
} else {
- r.push(`without hurting ${him}`);
+ r.push(`without hurting ${him}.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
if (V.PC.dick !== 0) {
r.push(`You empty your balls inside ${him}, thrusting in as far as you can go`);
} else {
@@ -2692,19 +2683,13 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
} else {
r.push(`You cuff ${his}`);
if (hasAnyArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`wrist`);
- if (hasBothArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(wrists);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
r.push(`and`);
}
}
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`ankle`);
- if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(ankles);
}
r.push(`and secure ${his} struggling, screeching body to the couch next to your desk with ${his} legs spread.`);
}
@@ -2716,19 +2701,13 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
} else {
r.push(`You cuff ${his}`);
if (hasAnyArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`wrist`);
- if (hasBothArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(wrists);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
r.push(`and`);
}
}
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`ankle`);
- if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(ankles);
}
r.push(`and secure ${his} unresisting body to the couch next to your desk with ${his} legs spread.`);
}
@@ -2753,19 +2732,13 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
} else {
r.push(`You cuff ${his}`);
if (hasAnyArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`wrist`);
- if (hasBothArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(wrists);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
r.push(`and`);
}
}
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`ankle`);
- if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(ankles);
}
r.push(`and secure ${his} struggling, screeching body to the couch next to your desk so that ${he}'s straddling the back of the couch with ${his} butt sticking out.`);
}
@@ -2800,19 +2773,13 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
} else {
r.push(`You cuff ${his}`);
if (hasAnyArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`wrist`);
- if (hasBothArms(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(wrists);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
r.push(`and`);
}
}
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`ankle`);
- if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
- }
+ r.push(ankles);
}
r.push(`and secure ${his} unresisting body to the couch next to your desk so that ${he}'s straddling the back of the couch with ${his} butt sticking out.`);
}
@@ -3007,11 +2974,8 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
} else {
r.push(`its tip`);
}
- r.push(`up ${his} used pussy. ${He}'s unsure of ${himself}, but you keep ${him} nice and relaxed. After several minutes of gentle loving, ${he}'s nothing but a satisfied puddle in your arms. ${He} believes that ${he} can <span class="mediumaquamarine">trust</span> you won't harm ${him} or ${his} child`);
- if (slave.pregType > 1) {
- r.push(`ren`);
- }
- r.push(`.`);
+ r.push(`up ${his} used pussy. ${He}'s unsure of ${himself}, but you keep ${him} nice and relaxed. After several minutes of gentle loving, ${he}'s nothing but a satisfied puddle in your arms. ${He} believes that ${he} can <span class="mediumaquamarine">trust</span> you won't harm ${him} or ${his} ${(slave.pregType === 1)?`child`:`children`}.`);
+
slave.trust += 5;
r.push(VCheck.Vaginal());
if (slave.fetish === "none" && jsRandom(1, 100) > 60) {
@@ -3045,19 +3009,17 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave) {
r.push(`continuing your work with your other hand.You quickly focus your fiddling on ${his} ${slave.nipples} nipples, the stimulation`);
if (slave.nipples === "fuckable") {
if (slave.devotion > 20) {
- r.push(`quickly engorging them around your fingers`);
+ r.push(`quickly engorging them around your fingers.`);
} else {
- r.push(`slowly engorging them around your fingers despite ${his} feelings`);
+ r.push(`slowly engorging them around your fingers despite ${his} feelings.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
} else {
r.push(`bringing them`);
if (slave.devotion > 20) {
- r.push(`quickly erect`);
+ r.push(`quickly erect.`);
} else {
- r.push(`slowly erect despite ${his} feelings`);
+ r.push(`slowly erect despite ${his} feelings.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
}
if (slave.devotion > 20) {
if (slave.fetish === "boobs") {