From ffc0b06e22b26cd5a07870bdae2855651e648ee2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anu <barrychahal@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 10 Oct 2020 02:10:15 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Small birth edits
---
src/js/birth/birth.js | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/js/birth/birth.js b/src/js/birth/birth.js
index f0b4f8f07a5..5352d714081 100644
--- a/src/js/birth/birth.js
+++ b/src/js/birth/birth.js
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ globalThis.birth = function(slave, {birthStorm = false, cSection = false} = {})
if (slave.fetish === "mindbroken") {
r.push(`While getting milked, ${slave.slaveName}'s water breaks.`);
} else if (slave.geneticQuirks.uterineHypersensitivity === 2) {
- r.push(`While getting milked, ${slave.slaveName}'s water breaks, a moment she anxiously waited for${(slave.counter.birthsTotal > 0) ? `no matter how many times it happened before` : ``}.`);
+ r.push(`While getting milked, ${slave.slaveName}'s water breaks, a moment she anxiously awaited${(slave.counter.birthsTotal > 0) ? `, no matter how many times it's happened before` : ``}.`);
} else {
r.push(`While getting milked, ${slave.slaveName}'s water breaks,`);
if (V.dairyPregSetting > 0) {
@@ -1005,7 +1005,7 @@ globalThis.birth = function(slave, {birthStorm = false, cSection = false} = {})
if (slave.fetish === "mindbroken") {
r.push(`${He} shows little interest and continues kneading ${his} breasts. Instinctively ${he} begins to push out ${his} ${babies}. ${He} pays no heed to ${his} ${children} being removed from the milking stall, instead focusing entirely on draining ${his} breasts.`);
} else if (slave.geneticQuirks.uterineHypersensitivity === 2) {
- r.push(`${He} begins to push out ${his} ${babies} orgasming during the whole process. By the time ${he} regains ${his} senses ${his} ${children} have already been removed from the milking stall.`);
+ r.push(`${He} begins to push out ${his} ${babies}, orgasming throughout the whole process. By the time ${he} regains ${his} senses ${his} ${children} have already been removed from the milking stall.`);
} else {
r.push(`${He} begins to push out ${his} ${babies}. ${He} catches`);
if (canSee(slave)) {
--
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