From eedd3fbc363c010b05ff5051d77900efafed7842 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Anu <anulithic@gmail.com> Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2022 19:11:02 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Minor proofreading --- src/events/RE/reShelterInspection.js | 2 +- src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/events/RE/reShelterInspection.js b/src/events/RE/reShelterInspection.js index 7e05c7ea0c3..709782727e7 100644 --- a/src/events/RE/reShelterInspection.js +++ b/src/events/RE/reShelterInspection.js @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ App.Events.REShelterInspection = class REShelterInspection extends App.Events.Ba r.push(`${HisA} avatar is visibly twitching in a very unnatural way.`); break; case "goddess": - r.push(`${HisA} avatar crosses ${hisA} arms over ${hisA} chest(barely) and makes a face like ${heA} wants to scold someone.`); + r.push(`${HisA} avatar crosses ${hisA} arms over ${hisA} chest (barely) and makes a face like ${heA} wants to scold someone.`); break; case "schoolgirl": r.push(`${HisA} avatar throws a little school ${girlA} fit, sticking out ${hisA} tongue and blowing a raspberry.`); diff --git a/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js b/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js index da668dc6330..556c7577db0 100644 --- a/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js +++ b/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ App.Events.RESSGorging = class RESSGorging extends App.Events.BaseEvent { eventSlave.devotion += 2; } if (V.arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence !== "unset") { - r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glaces down at" : `runs a hand over`} his glutted belly, imagining how people will <span class = "devotion inc">admire</span> the constantly expanding figure you're giving ${him}.`); + r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glances down at" : `runs a hand over`} his glutted belly, imagining how people will <span class = "devotion inc">admire</span> the constantly expanding figure you're giving ${him}.`); eventSlave.devotion += 2; } else if (V.arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast !== "unset") { r.push(`However, ${he} quickly realizes what ${he} has done to ${his} body, and the bliss on ${his} face is quickly replaced by <span class = "devotion dec">disdain</span> as ${he} rationalizes that it's your fault that society will now judge ${him} over ${his} bloated figure.`); @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ App.Events.RESSGorging = class RESSGorging extends App.Events.BaseEvent { r.push(`${eventSlave.slaveName} awakes and struggles to push ${himself} upright, weighed down by so much food, only to knock a mop to the floor. ${He} groans at the mess ${he} has to clean up, but ${his} defiance has been tempered slightly by you showing ${him} ${his} proper place in the penthouse hierarchy.`); if (V.arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence !== "unset") { - r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glaces down at" : `runs a hand over`} his glutted belly, understanding that you only let ${him} keep eating because <span class = "devotion inc">this is how you want ${him} to look.</span>`); + r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glances down at" : `runs a hand over`} his glutted belly, understanding that you only let ${him} keep eating because <span class = "devotion inc">this is how you want ${him} to look.</span>`); eventSlave.devotion += 2; } else if (V.arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast !== "unset") { r.push(`However, ${he} quickly realizes what ${he} has done to ${his} body, and whatever submission to you ${he} developed is quickly replaced by <span class = "devotion dec">newfound hate</span> as ${he} rationalizes that it's your fault that society will now judge ${him} over ${his} bloated figure.`); -- GitLab From f30918321fc82f7522041f0f0e68f52d599a349f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Anu <anulithic@gmail.com> Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2022 19:15:39 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Correct attraction gains --- src/endWeek/saLongTermMentalEffects.js | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/endWeek/saLongTermMentalEffects.js b/src/endWeek/saLongTermMentalEffects.js index 7e5df5ac31a..25081270e11 100644 --- a/src/endWeek/saLongTermMentalEffects.js +++ b/src/endWeek/saLongTermMentalEffects.js @@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.longTermMentalEffects = function saLongTermMentalEffects(sla if (slave.energy >= 40) { if (slave.counter.penetrative > 0) { t.push(`Getting to fuck another girl is rare and special, and ${he} <span class="positive">starts to value getting to have sex with women.</span>`); - slave.attrXY += 3; + slave.attrXX += 3; } } } @@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.longTermMentalEffects = function saLongTermMentalEffects(sla if (slave.energy >= 60) { if (slave.counter.penetrative > 0) { t.push(`<span class="positive">${His} indifference to women</span> is worn down on the special occasions that ${he}'s allowed to stick ${his} dick in one.`); - slave.attrXY += 3; + slave.attrXX += 3; } } } @@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.longTermMentalEffects = function saLongTermMentalEffects(sla if (slave.energy >= 80) { if (slave.counter.penetrative > 0) { t.push(`${He} cherishes the special occasions on which ${he} gets to cum inside a girl, <span class="positive">building ${his} appetite for women.</span>`); - slave.attrXY += 3; + slave.attrXX += 3; } } } -- GitLab From 4a31f15fa5b65ab937628e30286727e045d0dcd6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Anu <anulithic@gmail.com> Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2022 19:18:48 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Consistent ternary punctuation --- src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js b/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js index 556c7577db0..da6a3ee4644 100644 --- a/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js +++ b/src/events/RESS/review/gorging.js @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ App.Events.RESSGorging = class RESSGorging extends App.Events.BaseEvent { eventSlave.devotion += 2; } if (V.arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence !== "unset") { - r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glances down at" : `runs a hand over`} his glutted belly, imagining how people will <span class = "devotion inc">admire</span> the constantly expanding figure you're giving ${him}.`); + r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glances down at" : "runs a hand over"} his glutted belly, imagining how people will <span class = "devotion inc">admire</span> the constantly expanding figure you're giving ${him}.`); eventSlave.devotion += 2; } else if (V.arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast !== "unset") { r.push(`However, ${he} quickly realizes what ${he} has done to ${his} body, and the bliss on ${his} face is quickly replaced by <span class = "devotion dec">disdain</span> as ${he} rationalizes that it's your fault that society will now judge ${him} over ${his} bloated figure.`); @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ App.Events.RESSGorging = class RESSGorging extends App.Events.BaseEvent { r.push(`${eventSlave.slaveName} awakes and struggles to push ${himself} upright, weighed down by so much food, only to knock a mop to the floor. ${He} groans at the mess ${he} has to clean up, but ${his} defiance has been tempered slightly by you showing ${him} ${his} proper place in the penthouse hierarchy.`); if (V.arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence !== "unset") { - r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glances down at" : `runs a hand over`} his glutted belly, understanding that you only let ${him} keep eating because <span class = "devotion inc">this is how you want ${him} to look.</span>`); + r.push(`${He} ${canSee(eventSlave) ? "glances down at" : "runs a hand over"} his glutted belly, understanding that you only let ${him} keep eating because <span class = "devotion inc">this is how you want ${him} to look.</span>`); eventSlave.devotion += 2; } else if (V.arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast !== "unset") { r.push(`However, ${he} quickly realizes what ${he} has done to ${his} body, and whatever submission to you ${he} developed is quickly replaced by <span class = "devotion dec">newfound hate</span> as ${he} rationalizes that it's your fault that society will now judge ${him} over ${his} bloated figure.`); -- GitLab