diff --git a/src/events/RESS/PAFlirting.js b/src/events/RESS/PAFlirting.js index 547d0875276ef98e6de2e6a5c7b491cc4519ab08..8f185233721644a92218c9c52d58a432dddd8462 100644 --- a/src/events/RESS/PAFlirting.js +++ b/src/events/RESS/PAFlirting.js @@ -342,7 +342,7 @@ App.Events.RESSPAFlirting = class RESSPAFlirting extends App.Events.BaseEvent { if (eventSlave.bellyPreg >= 1500) { r.push(`${belly} pregnant belly is growing ever more full of children.`); } else if (eventSlave.belly >= 1500) { - r.push(`${belly} belly is growing ever larger and kicks begin to dot its surface.`); + r.push(`${belly} belly is growing ever larger as kicks begin to dot its surface.`); } else { r.push(`belly is becoming distended.`); } diff --git a/src/events/intro/acquisition.js b/src/events/intro/acquisition.js index 9a59c6ba9643b1d2ee35900987fabd81ba9a31ba..3cc6a9d75866bdae07086d9b95f18aef9ec71397 100644 --- a/src/events/intro/acquisition.js +++ b/src/events/intro/acquisition.js @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ App.Intro.acquisition = function() { r.push(`Their personal slaves were all Fuckdolls, slaves who have been permanently encased in advanced latex suits and converted into living sex toys. Several of them are still here.`); break; case "FSAssetExpansionist": - r.push(`They kept a collection of bejeweled boobs for company, but they focused on breast expansion to the exclusion the slaves' emotional training. Several of them are still here.`); + r.push(`They kept a collection of bejeweled boobs for company, but they focused on breast expansion to the exclusion of the slaves' emotional training. Several of them are still here.`); break; case "FSSlimnessEnthusiast": r.push(`They kept a harem of slim, pretty girls, and treated them very well. Several of them are still here. They should be very trusting of a new owner.`); diff --git a/src/npc/interaction/passage/matchmaking.js b/src/npc/interaction/passage/matchmaking.js index fd94da123ca3adade9c6b0a54773539f67ca56f3..1a9d0b5475b351a991e3b8d5a275c05124913c60 100644 --- a/src/npc/interaction/passage/matchmaking.js +++ b/src/npc/interaction/passage/matchmaking.js @@ -107,19 +107,19 @@ App.Interact.matchmaking = function(slave) { } else if (subSlave.fetish === "buttslut" && slave.fetish === "dom") { r.push(`${slave.slaveName} likes fucking other girls, so once ${subSlave.slaveName} asks ${him} to just do it to ${his2} ass all the time, they're both happy.`); } else if (slave.fetish === "boobs" && subSlave.boobs > 4000) { - r.push(`${slave.slaveName} fetishized breasts so much that ${he} thinks ${subSlave.slaveName}'s udders are one of the sexiest things ${he}'s ever seen.`); + r.push(`${slave.slaveName} fetishizes breasts so much that ${he} thinks ${subSlave.slaveName}'s udders are two of the sexiest things ${he}'s ever seen.`); } else if (subSlave.fetish === "boobs" && slave.boobs > 4000) { - r.push(`${subSlave.slaveName} fetishized breasts so much that ${he2} thinks ${slave.slaveName}'s udders are one of the sexiest things ${he2}'s ever seen.`); + r.push(`${subSlave.slaveName} fetishizes breasts so much that ${he2} thinks ${slave.slaveName}'s udders are two of the sexiest things ${he2}'s ever seen.`); } else if ((slave.fetish === "pregnancy" && subSlave.fetish === "pregnancy") && subSlave.bellyPreg >= 300000 && slave.bellyPreg >= 300000) { - r.push(`${slave.slaveName} and ${subSlave.slaveName} are both enormously laden with children, much to the other's delight. They can't wait to explore each other's baby-filled middles.`); + r.push(`${slave.slaveName} and ${subSlave.slaveName} are both enormously laden with children, much to their delight. They can't wait to explore each other's baby-filled middles.`); } else if ((slave.fetish === "pregnancy" && subSlave.fetish === "pregnancy") && subSlave.preg > subSlave.pregData.normalBirth/2 && slave.preg > slave.pregData.normalBirth/2) { - r.push(`${slave.slaveName} and ${subSlave.slaveName} are both heavily pregnant, much to the other's delight.`); + r.push(`${slave.slaveName} and ${subSlave.slaveName} are both heavily pregnant, much to each other's delight.`); } else if ((subSlave.fetish === "pregnancy") && slave.bellyPreg >= 300000) { r.push(`${subSlave.slaveName} fetishizes pregnant bellies so much that ${he2} is awestruck by ${slave.slaveName}'s enormous, baby-filled middle.`); } else if ((slave.fetish === "pregnancy") && subSlave.bellyPreg >= 300000) { r.push(`${slave.slaveName} fetishizes pregnant bellies so much that ${he} is awestruck by ${subSlave.slaveName}'s enormous, baby-filled middle.`); } else if ((subSlave.fetish === "pregnancy") && slave.preg > slave.pregData.normalBirth/2) { - r.push(`${subSlave.slaveName} fetishizes pregnant bellies so much that ${he2} thinks ${slave.slaveName} gravid middle is one of the sexiest things ${he2}'s ever seen.`); + r.push(`${subSlave.slaveName} fetishizes pregnant bellies so much that ${he2} thinks ${slave.slaveName}'s gravid middle is one of the sexiest things ${he2}'s ever seen.`); } else if ((slave.fetish === "pregnancy") && subSlave.preg > subSlave.pregData.normalBirth/2) { r.push(`${slave.slaveName} fetishizes pregnant bellies so much that ${he} thinks ${subSlave.slaveName}'s gravid middle is one of the sexiest things ${he}'s ever seen.`); } else if ((slave.fetish === "pregnancy" && subSlave.fetish === "pregnancy") && subSlave.bellyPreg >= 100 && slave.bellyPreg >= 100) {