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Update swimming.twee 

(Unless there's particular rules about grammar I'm missing, changed boy's and girl's to boys' and girls' changing rooms. Fixed a typo Lessen -> Lesson either way.)
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<<if $swimmingattended is 1>>
You enter the swimming pool room.
<br><br>
The lessen has just ended. A few stragglers are still on their way to the changing rooms. Mason is gathering up towels that have been left behind.
The lesson has just ended. A few stragglers are still on their way to the changing rooms. Mason is gathering up towels that have been left behind.
<br><br>
<<if random(1,1000) is 1>>
Outside, someone is farting in the general direction of their enemies. They must be French.
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<if $exposed lte 0>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's Changing Room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' Changing Room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><</link>>
<<elseif $exposed gte 1>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Grab some towels and enter the boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Grab some towels and enter the boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><<towelup>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<pass 2>><<towelup>><</link>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
<<include "School Swimming Late">>
......@@ -169,9 +169,9 @@
<br>
<</if>>
<br>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br><br>
<</if>>
......@@ -187,9 +187,9 @@
<br><br>
<<detention 1>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<<else>>
<<npc Mason>><<person1>>
......@@ -212,9 +212,9 @@
<<exhibitionclassroom>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<</if>>
......@@ -439,9 +439,9 @@ You speak in a low voice, so only the teacher will hear you.
<<if _alreadyWearing>>
<<link [[Next|Swimming Lesson]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<else>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<</if>>
......@@ -516,9 +516,9 @@ You speak in a low voice, so only the teacher will hear you.
Embarrassed, you apologise and leave.
<br><br>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
:: Swimming Classroom Mock
......@@ -532,9 +532,9 @@ Mason also blushes. "I-I'll pretend I didn't hear that." <<He>> points to the ch
<<gdelinquency>>
<br><br>
<<detention 1>><<npcincr Mason love -1>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<endevent>><</link>>
<br>
:: School Pool Nude
......@@ -638,14 +638,14 @@ You manage to get beneath the flimsy protection of the water, but not before the
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<if $exposed lte 0>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's Changing Room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br><br>
<<elseif $exposed gte 1>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<br>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<else>>
......@@ -729,14 +729,14 @@ Mason seems displeased by your choice of activity.
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<if $exposed lte 0>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's Changing Room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br><br>
<<elseif $exposed gte 1>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<br>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<else>>
......@@ -791,14 +791,14 @@ Mason seems displeased by your choice of activity.
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<if $exposed lte 0>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's Changing Room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br><br>
<<elseif $exposed gte 1>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<br>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<else>>
......@@ -860,14 +860,14 @@ Mason seems displeased by your choice of activity.
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<if $exposed lte 0>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boy's Changing Room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<maleicon>><<link [[Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girl's Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<<femaleicon>><<link [[Girls' Changing Room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><</link>>
<br><br>
<<elseif $exposed gte 1>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the boy's changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the Boys' changing room|School Boy Changing Room]]>><<towelupm>><</link>>
<br>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girl's changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<<link [[Grab some towels and enter the girls' changing room|School Girl Changing Room]]>><<towelup>><</link>>
<br><br>
<</if>>
<<else>>
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