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src/facilities/arcade/arcadeFramework.js

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.ArcadeJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.FacilitySi
 	canEmploy(slave) {
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 		if (slave.indentureRestrictions > 0) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s indenture forbids arcade service`)
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s indenture forbids arcade service.`)
 		}
 		return r;
 	}

src/facilities/brothel/brothelFramework.js

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.MadamJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.ManagingJob
 	canEmploy(slave) {
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 		if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant < -50) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} must be more intellegent or educated.`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not intelligent enough to be the Madam.`);
 		}
 		return r;
 	}

src/facilities/cellblock/cellblockFramework.js

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.CellblockJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.Facilit
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 
 		if ((slave.devotion > -20 || slave.trust < -20) && (slave.devotion >= -50 || slave.trust < -50)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is sufficiently broken in so that the cellblock would have no effect`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not defiant enough for ${this.facility.name} to have an effect.`);
 		}
 
 		return r;

src/facilities/clinic/clinicFramework.js

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.ClinicPatientJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.Fac
 			(V.Nurse === 0 || ((slave.chem <= 15 || this.facility.upgrade("Filters") !== 1) &&
 				(V.bellyImplants !== 1 || slave.bellyImplant <= -1) &&
 				(slave.pregKnown !== 1 || (this.facility.option("SpeedGestation") <= 0 && slave.pregControl !== "speed up")) && (slave.pregAdaptation * 1000 >= slave.bellyPreg && slave.preg <= slave.pregData.normalBirth / 1.33)))) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} cannot benefit from the clinic`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} cannot benefit from ${this.facility.name}.`);
 		}
 
 		return r;

src/facilities/club/clubFramework.js

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.ClubDJJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.ManagingJo
 	canEmploy(slave) {
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 		if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant < -50) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} must be more intellegent or educated.`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not intelligent enough to DJ.`);
 		}
 		return r;
 	}

src/facilities/dairy/dairyFramework.js

@@ -42,27 +42,27 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.DairyCowJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.Facility
 			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s indenture allows only free range milking.`);
 		}
 		if (slave.breedingMark === 1 && V.propOutcome === 1 && V.dairyRestraintsSetting > 0) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} may only be a free range cow`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} may only be a free range cow.`);
 		}
 		if ((V.dairyPregSetting > 0) && ((slave.bellyImplant !== -1) || (slave.broodmother !== 0))) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s womb cannot accommodate current machine settings`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s womb cannot accommodate current machine settings.`);
 		}
 
 		if ((slave.amp !== 1) && (this.facility.option("RestraintsUpgrade") !== 1) &&
 			!App.Entity.Facilities.Job._isBrokenEnough(slave, 20, -50, -20, -50)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} must be obedient in order to be milked at ${this.facility.name}`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} must be obedient in order to be milked at ${this.facility.name}.`);
 		}
 
 		if ((slave.lactation === 0) && (slave.balls === 0) && ((V.dairySlimMaintainUpgrade !== 1 && V.dairySlimMaintain <= 0) || (slave.boobs <= 300 && slave.balls !== 0 && V.dairyImplantsSetting !== 1) || V.dairyImplantsSetting === 2)) {
 			if ((V.dairySlimMaintainUpgrade === 1 && V.dairySlimMaintain === 1) || (V.dairyImplantsSetting === 2) || (slave.boobs <= 300 && slave.balls > 0 && (V.dairyImplantsSetting === 0 || V.dairyImplantsSetting === 3))) {
-				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not lactating ` + ((V.seeDicks > 0) ? 'or producing semen ' : '') + `and ${this.facility.name}'s current settings forbid the automatic implantation of lactation inducing drugs or manual stimulation to induce it, so she cannot be a cow`);
+				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not lactating ` + ((V.seeDicks > 0) ? 'or producing semen ' : '') + `and ${this.facility.name}'s current settings forbid the automatic implantation of lactation inducing drugs or manual stimulation to induce it, and thus cannot be a cow.`);
 			} else {
-				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not lactating ` + ((V.seeDicks > 0) ? 'or producing semen ' : '') + 'and cannot be a cow');
+				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not lactating ` + ((V.seeDicks > 0) ? 'or producing semen ' : '') + 'and cannot be a cow.');
 			}
 		} else if ((V.dairyStimulatorsSetting >= 2) && (slave.anus <= 2) && (V.dairyPrepUpgrade !== 1)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s anus cannot accommodate current machine settings`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s anus cannot accommodate current machine settings.`);
 		} else if ((V.dairyPregSetting >= 2) && (slave.vagina <= 2) && (slave.ovaries !== 0) && (V.dairyPrepUpgrade !== 1)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s vagina cannot accommodate current machine settings`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName}'s vagina cannot accommodate current machine settings.`);
 		}
 
 		return r;
@@ -79,8 +79,8 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.Dairy = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.Facility {
 
 	get hasFreeSpace() {
 		const V = State.variables;
-		const _dairySeed = V.bioreactorsXY + V.bioreactorsXX + V.bioreactorsHerm + V.bioreactorsBarren;
-		return this.capacity > this.hostedSlaves + _dairySeed;
+		const dairySeed = V.bioreactorsXY + V.bioreactorsXX + V.bioreactorsHerm + V.bioreactorsBarren;
+		return this.capacity > this.hostedSlaves + dairySeed;
 	}
 }
 

src/facilities/masterSuite/masterSuiteFramework.js

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ App.Data.Facilities.masterSuite = {
 	}
 }
 
-App.Entity.Facilities.MasterSuiteGuckToyJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.FacilitySingleJob {
+App.Entity.Facilities.MasterSuiteFuckToyJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.FacilitySingleJob {
 	/**
 	 * @param {App.Entity.SlaveState} slave
 	 * @returns {string[]}
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.MasterSuiteGuckToyJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilitie
 	canEmploy(slave) {
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 		if (!App.Entity.Facilities.Job._isBrokenEnough(slave, 20, -51, -21, -50)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not sufficiently broken for the master suite`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not sufficiently broken for ${this.facility.name}.`);
 		}
 
 		return r;
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.ConcubineJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.Managin
 	canEmploy(slave) {
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 		if (slave.amp === 1) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't be your concubine because ${slave.object} is an amputee.`)
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't as your Concubine without limbs.`)
 		}
 		return r;
 	}
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.ConcubineJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.Managin
 App.Entity.facilities.masterSuite = new App.Entity.Facilities.Facility(
 	App.Data.Facilities.masterSuite,
 	{
-		fucktoy: new App.Entity.Facilities.MasterSuiteGuckToyJob()
+		fucktoy: new App.Entity.Facilities.MasterSuiteFuckToyJob()
 	},
 	new App.Entity.Facilities.ConcubineJob()
 );

src/facilities/penthouse/penthouseFramework.js

@@ -89,14 +89,14 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.PenthouseJobs = {
 		canEmploy(slave) {
 			let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 			if (slave.intelligenceImplant >= 15) {
-				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} already has a basic education`);
+				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} already has a basic education.`);
 			}
 			if (!App.Entity.Facilities.Job._isBrokenEnough(slave, -20, -50, -20, -51)) {
-				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is too resistant to learn`);
+				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is too resistant to learn.`);
 			}
 
 			if (slave.fetish === "mindbroken") {
-				r.push(`${capFirstChar(slave.possessive)} mind is fundamentally broken and can't learn`);
+				r.push(`${capFirstChar(slave.possessive)} mind is fundamentally broken and can't learn.`);
 			}
 			return r;
 		}
@@ -110,10 +110,10 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.PenthouseJobs = {
 			}
 
 			if (!canWalk(slave)) {
-				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't work as a servant because ${slave.object} can't walk`);
+				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't walk and would be unable to properly clean.`);
 			}
 			if (!canSee(slave)) {
-				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't work as a servant because ${slave.object} is blind`);
+				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is blind and would be unable to properly clean.`);
 			}
 
 			return r;
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.PenthouseJobs = {
 			let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 
 			if ((slave.lactation <= 0) && (slave.balls <= 0)) {
-				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not lactating` + ((State.variables.seeDicks > 0) ? ' or producing semen' : ''));
+				r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not lactating` + ((State.variables.seeDicks > 0) ? ' or producing semen.' : '.'));
 			}
 			return r;
 		}

src/facilities/schoolroom/schoolroomFramework.js

@@ -34,14 +34,14 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.SchoolroomStudentJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 
 		if (!App.Entity.Facilities.Job._isBrokenEnough(slave, -20, -50, -20, -51)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is too resistant to learn`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is too resistant to learn.`);
 		}
 
 		const maxSkill = 10 + this.facility.upgrade("Skills") * 20; // maximal skill value the scholl can teach
 		if ((slave.intelligenceImplant >= 30) && (slave.voice === 0 || slave.accent + this.facility.upgrade("Language") <= 2) &&
 			(slave.skill.oral > maxSkill) && (slave.skill.whoring > maxSkill) && (slave.skill.entertainment > maxSkill) &&
 			(slave.skill.anal > maxSkill) && ((slave.vagina < 0) || (slave.skill.vaginal > maxSkill))) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} already has a basic education`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} has nothing left to learn.`);
 		}
 
 		return r;

src/facilities/servantsQuarters/servantsQuartersFramework.js

@@ -37,10 +37,10 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.ServantsQuartersServantJob = class extends App.Entity.Faci
 			r.push(App.Entity.Facilities.Job._stdBreakageMessage(slave));
 		}
 		if (!window.canWalk(slave)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't work as a servant because ${slave.pronoun} can't walk`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't walk and would be unable to properly clean.`);
 		}
 		if (!canSee(slave)) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can't work as a servant because ${slave.pronoun} is blind`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is blind and would be unable to properly clean.`);
 		}
 		return r;
 	}
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.ServantsQuartersStewardessJob = class extends App.Entity.F
 	canEmploy(slave) {
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 		if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant < -50) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} must be more intellegent or educated.`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is not intellegent enough.`);
 		}
 		return r;
 	}

src/facilities/spa/spaFramework.js

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ App.Entity.Facilities.SpaAssigneeJob = class extends App.Entity.Facilities.Facil
 		let r = super.canEmploy(slave);
 
 		if (((slave.devotion < -20 && slave.fetish !== "mindbroken") || (slave.health >= 20 && slave.trust > 60 && slave.devotion > 60 && slave.fetish !== "mindbroken" && slave.sexualFlaw === "none" && slave.behavioralFlaw === "none"))) {
-			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} can not benefit from spa procedures`);
+			r.push(`${slave.slaveName} will not benefit from time at ${this.facility.name}.`);
 		}
 
 		return r;