fixed grammar

src/events/intro/pcExperienceIntro.tw

@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ You're a relative unknown in the Free Cities, but it's clear you're already acco
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 <br>[[Idle wealth|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "wealth"]]
-<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//Start with extra money<<if $showSecExp == 1>>, but you will find harder to maintain authority, but upgrades in the propaganda hub will be cheaper<</if>>. Your starting slaves will have two free levels of sex skills available.//
+<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//Start with extra money<<if $showSecExp == 1>>. You will find harder to maintain authority, but upgrades in the propaganda hub will be cheaper<</if>>. Your starting slaves will have two free levels of sex skills available.//
 <br>[[Venture capitalism|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "capitalist"]]
 <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//You will be more effective at business pursuits<<if $showSecExp == 1>> and upgrades in the propaganda hub will be cheaper<</if>>. Your starting slaves will have a free level of prostitution skill available.//
 <br>[[Private military work|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "mercenary"]]
-<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//You retain mercenary contacts<<if $showSecExp == 1>> and your security skills will make it easier to keep the arcology safe<<else>> and security skills. Plus upgrades in the security HQ will be cheaper<</if>>. Your starting slaves will have free trust available.//
+<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//You retain mercenary contacts<<if $showSecExp == 1>> and your security skills will make it easier to keep the arcology safe. Plus upgrades in the security HQ will be cheaper<<else>> and security skills.<</if>>. Your starting slaves will have free trust available.//
 <br>[[Slaving|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "slaver"]]
 <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;//Your slave breaking experience will be useful<<if $showSecExp == 1>> and authority will be easier to maintain. Plus upgrades in the security HQ will be cheaper<</if>>. Your starting slaves will have free devotion available.//
 <br>[[Arcology engineering|PC Rumor Intro][$PC.career = "engineer"]]