Minor pronoun fixes

src/uncategorized/REresistantmotherdaughter.tw

@@ -26,13 +26,13 @@
 <<set $slaves[$i].clothes = _clothesTemp>>
 <<set $slaves[$j].clothes = _clothesTemp2>>
 
-$slaves[$i].slaveName and $his _mother2 are both having trouble getting acclimated to your ownership, with their obedience suffering as a result. Though neither of them have done anything particular egregious lately, their combined list of minor transgressions is reaching a point where rendering punishment on the two would not be seen as unfair. By happenstance they come before you for inspection one after the other. Though they certainly <<if canSee($slaves[$i]) && canSee($slaves[$j])>>see each other naked frequently around<<else>>are frequently naked around each other in<</if>> the penthouse, neither seems particularly comfortable around the other when nudity is involved. While you finish $slaves[$i].slaveName's inspection, $his _mother2 fidgets uneasily even while trying to mimic the posture and appearance of an obedient slave. It occurs to you that the current situation presents an opportunity to do //something// about this resistant $mother-_mother2 pair.
+$slaves[$i].slaveName and $his _daughter2 are both having trouble getting acclimated to your ownership, with their obedience suffering as a result. Though neither of them have done anything particular egregious lately, their combined list of minor transgressions is reaching a point where rendering punishment on the two would not be seen as unfair. By happenstance they come before you for inspection one after the other. Though they certainly <<if canSee($slaves[$i]) && canSee($slaves[$j])>>see each other naked frequently around<<else>>are frequently naked around each other in<</if>> the penthouse, neither seems particularly comfortable around the other when nudity is involved. While you finish $slaves[$i].slaveName's inspection, $his _daughter2 fidgets uneasily even while trying to mimic the posture and appearance of an obedient slave. It occurs to you that the current situation presents an opportunity to do //something// about this resistant $mother-_daughter2 pair.
 
 <br><br>
 <span id="result">
 <br><<link "Spend the evening gently acclimating them to your ownership">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	Though neither of the two vehemently protests your decision to have them both join you in bed, furtive uneasy glances are exchanged between the two. Since they're already naked, they clamber onto your bed before you and reluctantly kneel facing each other, leaving enough space between them for you<<if canSee($slaves[$i]) && canSee($slaves[$j])>> and for them to avert their eyes to avoid the other's nakedness<</if>>. They clearly assume you would start by using one of them, so they're quite taken aback when you remain standing at the edge of the bed and suggest that $slaves[$i].slaveName play with $his _mother2. $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly flounders a little as _his2 $mother's <<if hasBothArms($slaves[$i])>>hands roam<<elseif hasAnyArms($slaves[$i])>>hand roams<</if>> about _his2 body, but does not reel back from the intimate touching. In time you instruct $slaves[$j].slaveName to pleasure _his2 $mother, but still decline to join the incestuous union unfolding on your sheets. You extend the foreplay for hours, bringing both $mother and _mother2 to such a state of naked arousal that they begin grinding against each other uninhibitedly. They are both so desperate for release that they do not object when you finally decide to join them, instead eagerly moving to include you in their coupling. What started with $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly kneeling unmoving while _his2 $mother sucked _his2 nipples ends with $slaves[$j].slaveName <<if hasAllLimbs($slaves[$j])>>on all fours<<else>>bent over<</if>> getting fucked by you while orally pleasuring $slaves[$i].slaveName. You gaze over at $slaves[$i].slaveName and $he moans and licks $his lips enticingly back at you as $slaves[$j].slaveName moans into $his fuckhole.
+	Though neither of the two vehemently protests your decision to have them both join you in bed, furtive uneasy glances are exchanged between the two. Since they're already naked, they clamber onto your bed before you and reluctantly kneel facing each other, leaving enough space between them for you<<if canSee($slaves[$i]) && canSee($slaves[$j])>> and for them to avert their eyes to avoid the other's nakedness<</if>>. They clearly assume you would start by using one of them, so they're quite taken aback when you remain standing at the edge of the bed and suggest that $slaves[$i].slaveName play with $his _daughter2. $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly flounders a little as _his2 $mother's <<if hasBothArms($slaves[$i])>>hands roam<<elseif hasAnyArms($slaves[$i])>>hand roams<</if>> about _his2 body, but does not reel back from the intimate touching. In time you instruct $slaves[$j].slaveName to pleasure _his2 $mother, but still decline to join the incestuous union unfolding on your sheets. You extend the foreplay for hours, bringing both $mother and _daughter2 to such a state of naked arousal that they begin grinding against each other uninhibitedly. They are both so desperate for release that they do not object when you finally decide to join them, instead eagerly moving to include you in their coupling. What started with $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly kneeling unmoving while _his2 $mother sucked _his2 nipples ends with $slaves[$j].slaveName <<if hasAllLimbs($slaves[$j])>>on all fours<<else>>bent over<</if>> getting fucked by you while orally pleasuring $slaves[$i].slaveName. You gaze over at $slaves[$i].slaveName and $he moans and licks $his lips enticingly back at you as $slaves[$j].slaveName moans into $his fuckhole.
 	@@.mediumaquamarine;They have both become more trusting of you.@@
 
 	<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 4, $slaves[$j].trust += 4, $slaves[$i].counter.oral += 1, $slaves[$j].counter.oral += 1, $oralTotal += 2>>
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ $slaves[$i].slaveName and $his _mother2 are both having trouble getting acclimat
 <</link>>
 <br><<link "Make an example of the $mother">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You give them orders of devastating simplicity: You are going to assrape $slaves[$i].slaveName and if $his _mother2 offers even the most token of resistance, you'll punish $slaves[$i].slaveName. They're stunned, but you shake them out of their shock by grabbing $slaves[$i].slaveName by the arm<<if $PC.dick == 0>>,donning a strap-on<</if>> and shoving $him over your desk. $slaves[$j].slaveName flinches visibly as you enter _his2 $mother's ass in one brutal stroke, for which you stain _his2 $mother's asscheeks a rosy red with a torrent of harsh spanks. $slaves[$i].slaveName takes the rough anal pounding with only quiet sobbing and the occasional whimper of pain, but $his _mother2 can't bear to <<if canSee($slaves[$j])>>see<<elseif canHear($slaves[$j])>>hear<<else>>have<</if>> $slaves[$i].slaveName in such duress and breaks _his2 short-lived silence to beg for mercy. When you step away from $slaves[$i].slaveName, $slaves[$j].slaveName lets out a sigh of relief, but _his2 expression soon turns to horror and revulsion when you return to mount _his2 $mother with a lash in hand.
+	You give them orders of devastating simplicity: You are going to assrape $slaves[$i].slaveName and if $his _daughter2 offers even the most token of resistance, you'll punish $slaves[$i].slaveName. They're stunned, but you shake them out of their shock by grabbing $slaves[$i].slaveName by the arm<<if $PC.dick == 0>>,donning a strap-on<</if>> and shoving $him over your desk. $slaves[$j].slaveName flinches visibly as you enter _his2 $mother's ass in one brutal stroke, for which you stain _his2 $mother's asscheeks a rosy red with a torrent of harsh spanks. $slaves[$i].slaveName takes the rough anal pounding with only quiet sobbing and the occasional whimper of pain, but $his _daughter2 can't bear to <<if canSee($slaves[$j])>>see<<elseif canHear($slaves[$j])>>hear<<else>>have<</if>> $slaves[$i].slaveName in such duress and breaks _his2 short-lived silence to beg for mercy. When you step away from $slaves[$i].slaveName, $slaves[$j].slaveName lets out a sigh of relief, but _his2 expression soon turns to horror and revulsion when you return to mount _his2 $mother with a lash in hand.
 	<br><br>
 	When you eventually finish your merciless assrape of $slaves[$i].slaveName, $his body is covered in bruises, marks, and handprints. A testament to $slaves[$j].slaveName's inability to keep _his2 silence as you brutalized _his2 $mother. You leave your office wordlessly to attend to other matters, while behind you $slaves[$j].slaveName gazes <<if canSee($slaves[$j])>>forlornly<<else>>blindly<</if>> at the gibbering mess you have reduced _his2 $mother to.
 	Your severe punishment of _his2 $mother has encouraged $slaves[$j].slaveName to @@.gold;fear you.@@ $slaves[$i].slaveName has been fucked into @@.hotpink;submission@@ but your savage treatment has caused $him to @@.red;hate buttsex.@@

src/uncategorized/reDevotedMotherDaughter.tw

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ $slaves[$i].slaveName and $his _daughter2 $slaves[$j].slaveName are both good sl
 <</link>>
 <br><<link "Get them started and then keep them at it in your office">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You give them orders of devastating simplicity: they are to repair to the couch in your office and are to take turns getting each other off until such time as you tell them otherwise. They're momentarily stunned, but $slaves[$i].slaveName takes the lead and draws $his _mother2 over to the couch<<if hasAnyArms($slaves[$i]) && hasAnyArms($slaves[$j])>> by the hand<</if>>. They're both accomplished sex slaves and obey orders well, so they are quite successful in the little game, if a bit mechanical. For the rest of the day, interviewees come and go and are treated to the sight of the two of them having subdued sex on the couch. Showing off one's slaves for business interlocutors is a common Free Cities practice, but more than one perceptive person figures out what the resemblance between the two slaves and the age gap between them really means. Of course, all those who figure it out are impressed by your sheer decadence.
+	You give them orders of devastating simplicity: they are to repair to the couch in your office and are to take turns getting each other off until such time as you tell them otherwise. They're momentarily stunned, but $slaves[$i].slaveName takes the lead and draws $his _daughter2 over to the couch<<if hasAnyArms($slaves[$i]) && hasAnyArms($slaves[$j])>> by the hand<</if>>. They're both accomplished sex slaves and obey orders well, so they are quite successful in the little game, if a bit mechanical. For the rest of the day, interviewees come and go and are treated to the sight of the two of them having subdued sex on the couch. Showing off one's slaves for business interlocutors is a common Free Cities practice, but more than one perceptive person figures out what the resemblance between the two slaves and the age gap between them really means. Of course, all those who figure it out are impressed by your sheer decadence.
 	@@.green;Your reputation has increased considerably.@@
 	<<run repX(2500, "event", $slaves[$i])>>
 	<<run repX(2500, "event", $slaves[$j])>>