fSuckle: Various fixes and text refinements

src/npc/interaction/FSuckle.tw

@@ -112,10 +112,10 @@ You <<if _mood == 2>>demand<<else>>beckon<</if>> <<= getSlave($AS).slaveName>> t
 	<<else>>
 		dripping with excess milk and resting on $his legs, the very spot you plan to make your own, but it will take finesse.
 	<</if>>
-	You lift up $his hefty breasts and <<if $PC.belly >= 10000>>gently lower yourself<<else>>lay<</if>> down on $his lap,
+	You lift up $his hefty breasts and <<if $PC.belly >= 10000>>gently lower yourself<<else>>lie<</if>> down on $his lap,
 	<<if getSlave($AS).belly >= 30000>>
 		<<if getSlave($AS).bellyPreg > 1000>>
-			getting familiar with $his huge life swollen baby bump and
+			getting familiar with $his huge life-swollen baby bump and
 		<<else>>
 			getting familiar with $his hugely swollen belly and
 		<</if>>
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ You <<if _mood == 2>>demand<<else>>beckon<</if>> <<= getSlave($AS).slaveName>> t
 	You <<if _mood == 1>>caress<<elseif _mood == 2>>hungrily eye<<else>>eye<</if>> $his <<= getSlave($AS).nipples>> nipples,
 	<<if getSlave($AS).nipples == "puffy">>
 		<<if _mood == 2>>
-			gripping the nipple with your hand and squeezing hard enough to force out a spurt of milk. A flurry of kicks tells you that you are to take one of those swollen and dripping beauties and have a drink.
+			gripping the nipple with your hand and squeezing hard enough to force out a spurt of milk. A flurry of kicks tells you that you are to take one of those swollen, dripping beauties and have a drink.
 		<<else>>
 			swollen and dripping with excess milk and calling on your instincts to suckle on them.
 		<</if>>
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ You <<if _mood == 2>>demand<<else>>beckon<</if>> <<= getSlave($AS).slaveName>> t
 	$his thigh,
 	<<if getSlave($AS).belly >= 30000>>
 		<<if getSlave($AS).bellyPreg > 1000>>
-			the huge life swollen orb that is $his middle brushing you and
+			the huge life-swollen orb that is $his middle brushing you and
 		<<else>>
 			the hugely swollen orb that is $his middle brushing you and
 		<</if>>
@@ -258,16 +258,16 @@ You <<if _mood == 2>>demand<<else>>beckon<</if>> <<= getSlave($AS).slaveName>> t
 	<<elseif getSlave($AS).weight > 95>>
 		getting familiar with $his fat belly as
 	<</if>>
-	$his over-productive bosoms drip sweet cream on your face<<if getSlave($AS).nipples == "inverted">>, the milk waiting to be sucked from the tight inverted holes above you<</if>><<if $PC.belly >= 10000>> and your belly brushing the undersides of $his tits<</if>>. You
+	$his over-productive bosoms dripping sweet cream on your face<<if getSlave($AS).nipples == "inverted">>, the milk waiting to be sucked from the tight inverted holes above you<</if>><<if $PC.belly >= 10000>> and your belly brushing the undersides of $his tits<</if>>. You
 	<<if _mood == 2>>
 		order $him to deal with <<if $PC.dick != 0>>the erect monster pressing uncomfortably against the underside of your belly<<else>>the needy hole leaking all over your floor<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		<<if _mood == 2>>invite<<else>>instruct<</if>> $him to use $his hand to appease the ever evident arousal between your legs.
+		instruct $him to use $his hand to appease the evident arousal between your legs.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if getSlave($AS).fetish == "mindbroken">>
 		$He obeys without question and mechanically begins to <<if $PC.dick != 0>>jerk you off<<else>>finger you<</if>>.
 	<<elseif getSlave($AS).devotion >= -20 || getSlave($AS).trust < -20>>
-		<<if $PC.dick != 0>>Though $he believes it would be better for you to use $his other slew of pleasurable orifices, $he does not question your decision<<else>>$He happily sets to work on your clit<</if>>.
+		<<if $PC.dick != 0>>Though $he believes it would be better for you to use another of $his slew of pleasurable orifices, $he does not question your decision<<else>>$He happily sets to work on your clit<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
 		Though $he furrows $his brow, $he decides it's better to get it over with quickly and in $his hand rather than any other hole or in worse circumstances. <<= getSlave($AS).slaveName>> begins to <<if $PC.dick != 0>>tug at your hardened penis<<else>>stroke your quivering pussy as best as $he can<</if>>, hoping this doesn't take too long.
 	<</if>>
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ Milk continues to spill into your mouth as you suckle away at the
 <<elseif getSlave($AS).nipples == "inverted" || getSlave($AS).nipples == "partially inverted">>
 	erect hardness,
 <<elseif getSlave($AS).nipples == "fuckable">>
-	at the milky slit,
+	milky slit,
 <<else>>
 	hardness,
 <</if>>
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ $his other breast<<if $PC.dick != 0>><<if $PC.balls >= 10>> and backflowing hard
 <<elseif _mood == 1>>
 	You cuddle up against $him, holding close to $him as you snooze off your milky meal.
 	<<if getSlave($AS).fetish == "mindbroken">>
-		$He struggles in discomfort at your pregnancy weight pinning $him down until $he manages to rouse your child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> and get you to move.
+		$He struggles in discomfort at your pregnant weight pinning $him down until $he manages to rouse your child<<if $PC.pregType > 1>>ren<</if>> and get you to move.
 	<<elseif getSlave($AS).devotion > 20 && getSlave($AS).trust > 20>>
 		$He holds you close, gently caressing your head and pregnancy as you rest it off.
 	<<elseif getSlave($AS).trust < -20>>
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ $his other breast<<if $PC.dick != 0>><<if $PC.balls >= 10>> and backflowing hard
 	<<elseif getSlave($AS).devotion < -20>>
 		$He groans at the weight leaning against $him and begrudgingly rests $his arm atop your pregnant bulge.
 		<<if $PC.pregSource == getSlave($AS).ID>>
-			$He takes a moment to appreciate the size of your stomach, knowing $he was the one that seeded you. $He admires $his work with pride.
+			$He takes a moment to appreciate the size of your belly, knowing $he was the one that seeded you. $He admires $his work with pride.
 		<<else>>
 			$He knows $he has little choice but to put up with it.
 		<</if>>