femaleRecruit tinkering & miscellaneous fixes

Closes #3606 (closed)

In femaleRecruit, fixed pronouns and spelling, made sure this loose party girl was fairly slutty and didn't have a few contradictory flaws, and gave her one of the standard hairstyles instead of a custom one with the same idea.

In other files, fixed some pronouns and spacing, and fixed some possible orphaned sentence fragments in longChildDescription by standardizing it with longSlave's format.