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Hyphenation, proofreading, and Preg Inventor deaf/blindness

Merged Anu requested to merge Anu/fc-pregmod:anu-fixes into pregmod-master

Hyphenated a bunch more phrases, mostly "x-focused" and a number of slave titles. I'm not entirely settled on the slave titles - some titles wind up looking much better, like Womb-filling titan versus Womb filling titan, but I think the longer ones might end up harder to parse and less clean-looking, like Pregnant colossal-assed huge-titted teen hourglass cow broodmother versus Pregnant colossal assed huge titted teen hourglass cow broodmother. Would appreciate input on that.

Reworked a bit of RE Preg Inventor Showoff to not have a blind slave glance over her shoulder, then saw a few other logical oddities. However, RE Preg Inventor Invite has canSee as an actorPrerequisite, so it seems reasonable to just add canSee(slave) as an eventPrerequisite to the other Preg Inventor events and thus not have to worry about writing blind variants on the text. As a matter of fact, there's a canSee()/else text variant in the Invite event itself, which will absolutely never be seen due to the actor prereq. Would also appreciate input here.

The smaller stuff: Fixed a misplaced period in the Encyclopedia, and replaced many missing instances of "let" in newSlaveIntro that must have been the result of a bad find-&-replace at some point, like let $him=>${him}.

Edited by Anu

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